FF ..In His Heart (DMG)#2 Part 32 Pg 74 (7/1)

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Shania

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH

OMG...i can imagine ridz nd armi'z face reaction wen dey c muski...lol

well dey hav alot of explainin 2 do na?

lov da scnez b/w armi nd ridz...tooooooo sweeet...cute..

nd josh iz a darling...luv da lil dude jr armaan

i think armiz his role model...lol...armaan. shud behave frm now...lolzz

thnx 4 da pm

continu real soon

luv ya...bless

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Mona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

wow amezing update.....full of romace.....what was that in the end....why did muski yell? i cant wait for more...thankc 4 the pm.....continue very sooon...

❤️MONA

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pickytg

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

hey vinz...

yayy for yur new thread!! keep tem comin!! :D

luved AR scene..tey were adorable!! =)

update soon....muskaanz gonna be thrilled ain't she?? loL!!

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Simone

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

congo for ur new thread!

and cute part!

josh is so cute! and so is ARMAAN! haahhaha

wow muskaan's dramatic entry... at the end! nice! cant wait to read more!

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gia.khan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

omg awesome part! loved it! wat a cliff hanger though! thanks for the pm :D .. will look forward to the next part

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lakshmi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

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u noe wot, ammy says is rite.. weneva he wants 2 spend tym wid basket.. sum1 cumz n disturbz.. n here josh..(btwn is josh ammy's son. frm d prev marriage..) wen ridz said dat dey luk similar dis was d 1st reaction dat came across.. n d cliffhanger...
luvd it loads.. n btwn congooo 4 d new thread...
thnxx, 4 d pm.. update soon

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princess4120

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

AWWWW what an lovely part.. AR romance was just soooooo cute.. hai.. sweet.. josh is so oblivous.. cuz he is too focused on his girl.. hehe.. and aww.. love the way armaan talks about minnie too.. damn adorable.. HAHA!! MUSKI saw.. OMG!! man man .. cant wait to read her reaction.. what will happen.. what will she say.. what will they explain about their relationship.. AHHHH!!! i hope you update soon!! please..

thanks for the pm!

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Jodubai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Congrajulations on the new thread, you deserved every bit of it......you are so good at this whole FF writing....

Loved this part, there is so much cutness (if there is such a word) to AR's romance, they are just so adorable......romancing infront of little Josh, that was nice as well , the last bit of Ridz comparing Arman to Josh was too good, but now we are stuck with this clifffhanger.....

so do continue soon

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..Mira..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Awww vini babe i'm sooooooooooo sorry to hear abt your fan fic being copied!! We all know that instant messaging was your hard work and that your the amazing writer behind it...i'm sure that girl got enough comments to make her realize that she CAN"T steal your work!! Smile hun =]
Anyways coming to this part:
I loved the kiss scene..and actually i'd completely forgotten that josh had gone away to get ice cream..haha i'm so bad..forgetting abt cute adorable kids...lolz
Armaan and ridz convos are amazing..it seems like they're both really free with each other now..and i lvoed how they were both constantly teasing each other!!
Now i'm not soo sure if muski saw them kissing..cuz u nvr know with her..she could be freaking out abt something else!! haha i love muskaan
I loved this part soo much vini..seriously you know how to keep ppl hooked to your fan fic..=]
thanks soooo much for the pm
luv you
mira
p.s. congrats on your second thread!!!

Edited by Gotta_luv_KYPH - 16 years ago