AR #1-wen u luk me in d eyes(PART 38-PG 148) 17/6 - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
wow they like each other!!!!!! hope they confess their feelings! continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
waoh👍🏼 its really a nice one⭐️ superb😉 so they both like each other so sweet😊😉 and muskaan message is very interesting😳🤗 plz continue it soon😊😉

"Lafz Aap Do Geet Hum Baneynge
Raste Aap Batao Manzil Tak Hum Pauchege,
Khushi Aap Do Hasi Hum Banaeynge,
Dost Aap Banao,
Dosti Hum Nibheynge."


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Posted: 17 years ago
hey guys!!!
thanx a lot for all ur comments
m reli sorry for not replying to everyone's comments
but m really very greatful to everyone who comment😃
thanx a lot😉
n as for now, enjoy reading!!!!!
love rabu
PART 11

Ridz's room, 6.00 a.m

ridz: di? Di? Di utho mujhe late ho jayega

anji: ha ridz, bas 5 mins

ridz: di plzzz. Utho. Main aapka niche wait kar rahi hu? get up now

anji: ya m getting up

ridz smiles

anji is in the bathroom n ridz is looking at sum files, anji's cell starts ringing

anji: ridz plz mera call receive karoge?

Ridz: (still engrossed in the files) ha di

Ridz picks the call n before she can say hello

Voice: anjali, plz phone mat cut karna. Meri baat ek baar sun toh lo. I promise next time se main tumhe aisa kuch nahi kahunga. Plz anjali plz mujhe maaf kardo. Mujhe pata nahi tha tum mujhe apna itna accha dost manti ho aur main ek pagal hu, I just couldn't c dat. Anjali? Anjali tum sun rahi ho na?

Anji: ridz? Kaun hai?

Ridz: uh? wo?di? ek minute

Ridz was totally shocked as to wat to say. N this guy on the line she didn't know wat to tell him either?

Ridz: hello? Umm ? hi? main riddhima bol rahi hu?may I know ur name?

Voice: (totally embaressed) oh? hi?umm tum riddhima ho?

Ridz: ha

Voice: accha?tum anjali behen ho na?

Ridz: ha? Aur aap?

Voice: main?main?atul?I mean dr. atul joshi

Ridz: accha?actually di bathroom main hai. jab who aati hai main unhe aapko call karne bol dungi

Atul: thanx riddhima?bye

Ridz: ya bye

Anji comes out

Anji: kaun tha ridz?

Ridz: di?who ?dr. atul?

Anji's face flushed: oh

Ridz: di? Koi baat hai jo aap mujhe batana chahti ho?

Anji: (looks at her for sum time) ridz?actually?who atul?.atul mera collegue hai sanjeevani main. I don't think u know him coz tum LA main thi jab usne sanjeevani join kiya tha. Ridz? I always took him as a friend n ntn more but pata nahi wat he started thinking about me? N he proposed me day before yesterday. Maine toh kabhi uske liye aisa kuch feel nahi kiya n?n that's y m avoiding him

Ridz: (she goes ahead n hugs her) di? its ok if u don't feel that way

Anji: ridz. Main kya karu? Mujhe khud bura lag raha hai ke main usse avoid kar rahi hu?

Ridz: di?aap usse aise avoid mat karo?I could feel the desperation in his voice for u to forgive him. Just talk to him di, m sure he will understand?.

Anji: thanx ridz

Ridz: now plz smile di?for me plzzzzzz

Anji: (smiles) chalo. Tum already late ho meri wajah se

Ridz: its ok di?chalo

Anji drops ridz to her hospital n leaves for sanjeevani

She spots atul n goes towards him

(ok guys!!!!! Here's atul for all u AA lovers. Atul is the same cute, funny guy. But a bit more sensible. But loves anji a lottttttt n he proposed her but she denied. ntn to worry its jus coz she has not developed feelings as yet. Tension mat lo, they have to fall in love sooner or later!!!)

Anji: atul?

Atul: h?hi anjali? (bit hesitatant)

Anji: hi, Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai

Atul: anjali m really sorry?.woh..

Anji: atul? in the caf plzzz (much like pleading)

Atul: sure, chalo

Anji n atul leave for the caf n find themselves a table

Atul tries to say sorry again but anji stops him

Anji: atul?wait? lemme speak first (very seriously)?m sorry atul for avoiding u like this but after u said all those things I got so angry that?atul don't get me wrong but I don't have feelings for u nor did I ever had?maine tumhe mera bahot accha dost mana hai n m really sorry if bcoz of my friendship u felt sumthing elsz?

Atul: (a bit tensed) anjali, tum plzz mujhe sorry mat kaho. Sorry toh mujhe bolna chahiye. Anjali galti meri hai ke tumhare friendship ko maine galat way main liya. I promise ab se main tumhara friend banke rahunga aur kuch nahi.

Anji smiles at him

Atul: bas tumhe ek promise karna hoga (still serious)

Anji: (frowning) kya?
atul: agar tumhe meri koi baat buri lagi toh tum mujhe bata dena, plz mujhe aise avoid mat karna

Anji: (smiles) ok atul. I promise?. Friends? (forwarding her hand)

Atul: (smiles wide) friends?.

They both shake hands n atul tries to become normal with her but as we all know its really hard for him to do so??

Anji's room, 10.00 p.m

Anji smiled recalling all her talks with atul, today n the ones which they use to have before. But after her talk with atul today, she couldn't stop thinking about him. His innocence, his humour, all the times he made her laugh n all the times he was by her side. She missed that atul but after all the proposing thing she felt that many things changed n she was definitely not liking it??..

Ridz: "aachoo" di? (ridz is having a bit fever)

Anji: no answer

Ridz: di?? Di? U ok? (getting worried)

Anji: huh ... ha? ha ridz kya hua?
ridz: di, aapko kya hua? "aachoo"

Anji: kuch nahi ridz, bas aise hi atul ke bare main soch rahi thi

Ridz: di? Aapne atul se baat ki?

Anji: ha, baat toh ki? lekin uska behaviour change ho gaya hai

Ridz: di, cumon lets face it who aapse pyaar karta hai. U cannot expect him to become ur friend again overnite can u? give him time m sure he will move on?ok?

Anji: (smiles at her) kitni baadi ho gaye hai tu ridz?

Ridz: diiiii, m still the old ridz, ur lil sis

Anji: maybe? accha tu bata? armaan kaisa hai?

Ridz blushes on hearing his name

Ridz: armaan? Armaan ko kya hona hai? "aachoo" Who theek hi hoga?.

Anji: ridz, maine kaha ke tu badi ho gaye hai par itni bhi badi nahi ke tu mujhse baatein chupaye? mujhe sab pata hai

Ridz: diiiii, plz, aur waise kya pata hai aapko zara main bhi toh sunu?

Anji: yahi ke armaan ka naam sunte hi tu blush karne lagti hu. Aur pata hai jab tu usse phone pe baat karti hai toh sabse jyada khush us time pe lagti hai aur???.

Ridz: bas bas di?. Main samajh gaye ke aapko sab pata hai

Anji: bata na ridz

Ridz: kya?

Anji: yahi ki?do u like him?

Ridz: di? who? "aachoo" (n her cell starts ringing)

Anji: "tch" iss cell ko bhi abhi bajna tha?

Ridz: excuse me di?

Ridz leaves to attend the call. N its none another than ARMAAN

Ridz: hello

Armaan: hi

Ridz: "aachoo" hi armaan

Armaan: (getting worried) kya hua riddhima? Aren't u well?

Ridz: kuch nahi armaan, bas mild fever hai. Ntn to worry about. Tum batao kaise ho?

Armaan: r u sure? (still worried)

Ridz: ya, m sure "aachoo"

Armaan: jaake kisi acche dr. ko dikha ke aao (sarcastically)

Ridz: armaannnn, main bhi ek dr. hu (getting back to her childish anger)

Armaan: really? Toh dr. gupta agar tum dr. hoti toh bimar nahi padhti (smiling wide coz he jus enjoyed her kiddish anger)

Ridz: kyu dr.s insaan nahi hote hai kya jo bimar nahi pad sakte? (still angry)

Armaan: dr.s insaan hote toh hai, but yaha pe tumhari baat chal rahi hai u c!!!! (grinning)

Ridz: tumhara matlab hai ke main?main?insaan nahi hu? (bursting with anger now)

Armaan: nahi??.

Ridz: uggghhh, armaaannn, m gonna kill u?.

Armaan: dekha, baccho ke jaisa behave karna shuru ho gaya na? ? aur mujhe bolti ho ke, armaan main bacchi nahi hu ok? (imitating her)

Ridz: armaan, m not feeling well. I'll talk to u later. Bye

Armaan: (smiles at her kiddish behaviour as she disconnects his call)

Ridz: (samajhta kya hai aapne aap ko? Main insaan nahi hu? Aisa hota hai kya ked r. bimar nahi pad sakte? Aur?.)

*beep* beep*

*one message*

Armaan ? tum insaan nahi ho coz tum ek cute si angel ho. Gudnite n take care. N ha? agar dr. hoti toh apna khayal zaroor rakhti??.. bye, sweet dreams!!!!!

Ridz smiled looking at the SMS n she replied back

Ridz - m sorry armaan, I think tum theek kehte ho, I always act like a kid. Gudnite, u 2 take care

well guys it's a really long part i guess, though not much of AR coz had to bring in atul.... n now plz leave ur comments................
take care😊
Edited by rabiam - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice part plzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey wow yaar intresting yaar atul proposd her nd she bt hmmm wow yaar nd ridz nd angie awwwww lvd their cute tlks sis.tlks lvd it nd arridz heheh ar lv 2 irritate her nd she becme angry heheh awwwwwwww choooo cute yaar ridz blush heheeh wow cnt wait
cont sooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
rabz i so wish 2 see AR in all the parts!!!
plz upd8 soon1
luvd d cuteness!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey rabu!
very cute part
hey!1jst pm me de link da..i wil c de update
u dnt need 2 wry kk
superb [art
hope armi cumes soon
do cont soon
thx a ton 4 de pm
luv u lts
ashu
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey nice update......... so now atul loves anji hopes anji develops some feellings towards him............ & i loved armaan & ridz convo.......... hey plzzzzzzz bring ammy back........
& plzzzzzz do cont soon & thnx 4 da pm & do pm me wen u will cont
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Posted: 17 years ago
waoh👍🏼 so cute⭐️ so atul enter in the story😊😉 and armaan start irritating ridhima😆😆 superb😊🤗 plz continue it soon😊😉

"Lafz Aap Do Geet Hum Baneynge
Raste Aap Batao Manzil Tak Hum Pauchege,
Khushi Aap Do Hasi Hum Banaeynge,
Dost Aap Banao,
Dosti Hum Nibheynge."


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Posted: 17 years ago
hey voowwww...................very nice.........................atul anjali's story is also 222 gud......n armaan immitating her just mind blowing......very sweet dear.............i hope armaan comes bak soon..................................bye...take care..............

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