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Posted: 16 years ago
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guys my new ff
rajveer singh shekhawat is an amr officer he is very calm .now he transfered n nainital
naina singh alluwalia -she is studies in a college .n nainital she is a fun loving girl. she loves her family which consists of her father and mother and dhruv who is her love
dhruv malhotra-is a fun loving guy .loves naina .he is now jobless
ma-n
n-ha ma
ma-beta le tere tiffin
n-ma aaj mujhe thore dar ho sakte ha
papa -kun beta
n-oh papa aaj mere tution classes ha
papa -hmm
p-n chal
n-ok ma bye
p-off n
n-sorry p
p-aaj bare khush nazar aa rahe ha
n-kun na ho aaj shayam ko dhruv se milne jaa rahe hu
p-aacha
n-p main bohot khush hu
n aur p college jaate ha
after college
n-hi dhruv
dhruv-hi n
n-dhruv i missed u do u missed me
dhruv-nahin
n-kya
dhruv-kunki u and me are 1
n-dhruv i love u every much
dhruv-me too jaan
dhruv tries to kiss n
n-no dhruv abhi nahin
dhruv-ok
n-dhru chalo na panipuri khate ha
dhruv-panipuri wow
n aur dhrv panipuri khate ha
n-aah mera muh jhal raha ha
dhruv-ek min
dhruv brings icecream for n
dhruv-le lo jaan
n-aah
n have the icecream
dhruv-ab thik ho
n-ha
n ghar aate ha
sab log dinner karte ha
mrs shekhawat-nahin mujhe kuch nahin sunna ha tujhe ab shaadi karne he hoge
r-ma plz tum toh jaante ho i am very busy right now
mrs s- r tu ab 27 saal ka honebala ha ab nahin karega toh kab karega 50 saal main
r-nahin ma main shaadi jaisa commitment nahin nibha paynga
mrs s-zarur nibha payega
r-ma larki bhi hone chahee shaadi ke liye
mrs s-mainne tere liye larki dekhne ke lie bol diya ha pandit jee ko
r-oh god ma
mrs s-is main oh god kahene kya zarurat ha
r-ma hum kal nainital jaa rahe ha toh pandit jee larki dekh ke kya karenge
mrs s-ohhh
r-ma ab jaldi se sab saman pack karo kunki kal subhe hum nainital jaa rahe ha

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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
sounds interesting
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#3
awesome start...but y naina luvs some1 else???
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Posted: 16 years ago
#4
Too good!!!!!
Naina loves Dhruv!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Aur woh jhoot bolke usse milne jaati hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Thats bad!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒
Raj ki maa ko Raj ki shaadi karwane pe tuli huyi hai magar Raj shaadi karna hi nahi chahta!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Raj ab Nainital aa raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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next day

morning
ma-n aaj shayam ko hum tere bua jee ke ghar jayenge
n-kun ma
ma-are tere bua jee ne hume aaj dinner par invite kiya ha
n-ok ma
p-hi n
n-hi p
p-namaste aunty
ma-kaise ha p
p-thik hu aunty
p-chal n
n-ok ma bye
p aur n college jaate ha
shaliny mam-students u have to do a project work on army life
after college
n-p army life toh hote itne boring ha ke un main kya research karu
p-are mam ne kaha ha toh karna toh parega na
n-off p tu bhi na
p-n ice cream khaege
n-ok
p aur n ice cream kha rahe ha tabhi ek car se ek admi cigaratte phekta ha n ke dress par
n-hey ruk
car rukta ha
a man comes out from the car and ie r
n-yeh kya kiya mere dress kharab kar de
r is mesmerised by n
n-hey hello main tmse baat kar rahe hu
n clicks her finger
r come back to his senses
r-woh main
n-aage se dekh ke cigaratte phekna
n-chal p
p-tu bhi na phoolandevi
r waha par khara hoke has raha ha
r-phoolandevi
ma-r
r-ha ma
r aake car main baithta ha
ma-kitne bar tujhse kaha cigaratte pina bad kar de par tu na
r ke mann main sirf n ke he chehra nazar aa raha tha
n-ma
ma-aa gaye tu
n-ha ma
ma-chal fresh up hoke taiar ho jaa
n fresh up hoke taiar hote ha
ma-chal n
n-ma papa kab aayenge
ma-tere papa waha directl chali jayenge
n aur ma bua jee ke ghar jaate ha
ma-gayatri
g-are bhabhi aaye
ma-kaise ho tum
g-main aache hu
ma-g deep aur jay kaha ha
g-bhabhi deep toh tution gae ha aur ja room main ha
ma-oh
g-n kaise ha tu
n-aache hu bua
n room main jaate ha
n-jay
jay he n
n-kya kar raha tha tu
jay-rock on ke song sun raha tha
n-jay tune rock on film dekhe ha
jay-ha its a rocking film
n-jay i wan to see that film
jay-with whom
n-shut up
jay aur n baithte baate kar rahe ha
papa aate ha
sab log dinner karte ha
deep-n sun humare colony main is saal hume perform karne ka decide kiya ha
n-wow its going to be fun
deep-thik ha toh colony ke program main sirf 1 week ha toh hume kal se practice suru karne hoge
n-ok par hum karenge kya
deep-dance
n-ok par rehersal kaha pe hoge
deep-humare club main
n-ok toh main p ko bhi bol dete hu
deep-ok
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Posted: 16 years ago
#6
that was so good
to Raj ko to Naina ko dekhte hi pyaar ho gaya
love at first sight ahaaa
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#7
Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!
Naina ko army life ke upar ek project karna padega!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Raj ke cigarette phekne se Naina ki dress kharab ho jaati hai!!!! O no!!!😔 😔 😔 😔
Raj toh Naina ko dekhte hi reh jata hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Pooja Naina ko phoolandevi bulati hai toh Raj hasta rehta hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Raj ke ankhon ke saamne toh sirf Naina ka hi chehra aa raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaiiiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Naina apne cousin Jay aur Deep se milti hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Deep ne decide kiya hai ke ish saal perform karegi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#8
update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
waiting i just loved it totally different concept
plzzzzzzz upd a long part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#9
continue soon dear...
It's a great story...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#10

ma-r breakfast kar le

r-ma mujhe headquarter join karna ha
ma-ha breakfast karle
r-off ma tum bhi na
r takes a bread
ma-r jiuce toh pi le
r-off ma
r pita ha
r-bye ma
r office jaata ha
r-may i come n sir
bc-yes
r-sir main hu capt rajveer shekhawat
bc-yes capt
r-sir main yahaan strag aur communication parange cadets ko
bc-ok
r aapne class main jaata ha
r-cadets main aapke communication aur strategy ke teacher capt r shekhawat
r-cadets plz introduce urself
r starts teaching
after class r ghar a raha ha
tabhi shaliny-r
r turns
r-shalin tum aur yahaan
shaliny-ha main
r -tum ahaan kaise
shaliny-r main rahete hu
r-oh
shalin-tum
r-main kma main arm officer hu
shaliny-ohhhhhhh
shaliny-r chalona mere ghar
r-nahin shalin
shalin -plz r chalona mera ghar pass main he ha
r-ok
shaliny-aao r
r-shaliny sudeep kaisa ha
shaliny-pata nahin
r-matlab
shaliny-hum ek saath nahin ha ab
r-oh i am sorry
shaliny-r tumne shaadi ke
r-shaadi are nahin yaar
shaliny-kun tum toh college main sab se handsome larke the
r-kya
shaliny-r coffee
r-ok
shaliny-r mujhe tumse ek favour chaheye
r-ha bolo
shaliny-r mere students ko army life ke uper ek project report banane ha toh agar tum
r-ok shaliny kal tum tumhare students ko army office bej dena
next day
morning
shaliny-students tum logo ko project report ke lie aaj army office jaana hoga
n-ok mam
shaliny cals r
shaliny-hello r
r-ha shaliny
shaliny-r mere students gaye ha tumhare office plz help them
r-ok
n-p
p-ha
n-yahaan sab kitne ajeeb ha na
p-hmm
guard-aap log wait kijie capt r aate hoge
n-kal na mainne border dekhe ha sunny deol ek gun leta ha ar phir
r-toh aapke fa hero sunny deol ha
n turns
r is surprised to see n
n-tummmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ne he mere dress pe us din cigaratte phekke na
r come to sense
r-woh main us din ke liye sorry hu
n-wah sorry bol ke jaise kisi pe upkar kar rahe ho
guard-sir yeh log aae ha
r-ha jaanta hu
r-hi students main hu capt r
n is shocked
n-oh god mar gae eh capt r ha
r sab ko army life ke bare main baata raha ha
n-he bhaagwan maine ka bol diya
r-ok students
n-sir sunee
r-jee
n-i am sorry aap plz shaliny mam ko mat bataega
r-ok
n jaate ha
r ghar aata ha
r-oh she is so beautiful

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