Teri Bandagi AR ff upd pg 38 part 14 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for all the lovely comments guys
here's the next part
part 5
after working hard all day without any breaks thanks to Dr keerti,
muskaan, anjali and riddhima are sitting in the cafeteria
anjali: arey yeh ladko ki gang kaha gayi
muskaan: chado ji !! sanu ki !! achha hua ki yaha pyaar nahi hai aab hum beth kar araam se riddhima aur armaan ki baare main baat kar sakte hai 😉 *nudging anjali*
riddhima almost chokes on her coffee
R: kya !!
Anjali : ha ridz hume yeh to batao ki itni din chori chupe tumne aur armaan ne humse yeh baat kaise chupai
Muskaan: pehle tu hume yeh bata ki armaan ne tujhe propose kaise kia vaise in ladko, ko toh koi romance atta hi nahi, phir bhi tu pata na armaan ne propose kase kia
riddhima's cheeks have turned red because she is blushing so much only she knew how romanticly armaan had proposed to her that day
r: errmm....
Angie: ridzie tu sharma kyu rahi hai, bata na
just the armaan, rahul and atul come in to the cafeteria
Atul: hi anjali, hi muskaan, hi ridzi, ... arre ridzi kya hua tumhe tumhare gaal itni laal kyu hai
muskaan: oye atul chup karna dekha bechari ridzi ko aur bhi sharam aah rahi hai
Rahul: *sitting down on a chair next to muskaan* oye kyu aisa kya keh dia tum logo ne
riddhima gives a look that could kill to muskaan, but muskaan chose to ignore it
* armaan sits down on a chair next to riddhima*
muskaan: hum riddhima se yeh puch rahe the ki armaan ne usse officially propose kaise kia
armaan : *a little embarassed but gives riddhima a cheeky grin* oh !!
anjali : dekho na armaan ridzi toh hume kuch nahi bata rahi issliye tum hume act karke dikha do na plzz
muskaan: ha yaar dikha dena
riddhima is blushing uncontrollably now muskaan and anjali had put her in a fix.
Armaan: looks directly at riddhima and says dikha du
riddhima gets up to leave when suddenly someone holds her duppata from the back * obviously she knew who this was*
armaan turns riddhima around so that she is facing him, he then bends down on his knees
atul : wow soo romantic
rahul, muskaan, anjali : shhhhh!!!!
everyone at the cafeteria has stopped what they are doing and are staring at armaan and riddhima
armaan is staring lovingly into riddhima's eyes
riddhima is blushing like hell,
armaan: basket tum mere zindagi ki voh pehli ladki ho jisse maine dosti bhi ki aur pyaar bhi, tumne hi mujhe pyaar ka matlam sikhaya *ridz has tears forming in her eyes now * tumahri saamne voh insaan hai jo iss duniya main tumhe sab se zyada chahta hi * ridz cant control her tears now* main tumhari saath aapni zindagi ki har din guzar na chahta hu, tumhe har khushi de na chahta hu, i need u in my life riddhima ..... kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi ? he takes hold of her hands and kisses them , riddhima shocks him further by bending down and kissing his forehead they both have tears in their eyes now and then they hug ... they had forgotten that they were in the cafeteria with everyone around them ....
muskaan: oye rahul dekh, seek kuch armaan se tu inki tarah romantic kyu nahi ho sakta * she gets up and leaves with a flustered look on her face with rahul behind her
Rahul : arrey muskaan sun tho
atul : *staring at anjali with a half day dreamy look* anjali main bhi tumhe aisi hi propose karunga
anjali : huh !!! gets up and leaves
A -R still hugging. 😳
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thats it guys will update some other time in the week now
what do u think
-aishah
Edited by aishah02 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
guys koi toh reply karo -was it not good
-aishah
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey....it was wonderful...plz update soon....and can u pm me wen u update?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: dmgluver01

hey....it was wonderful...plz update soon....and can u pm me wen u update?

thanks for liking it .. i'll pm u when i update 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice plz do pm me when u update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari0706

nice plz do pm me when u update

thanks a lot i'll surely pm u when i update 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
what do i think???

Its just wwwwwoooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!😍😍

u write so well and its soooooooo romantic yaar.

PLeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez PM me when u update next. I just cant wait!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey i came across ur FF 2day itself..!!

its mesmerizing i must say..!!

Keep up d gud work..😊
Continue soon..!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi aishah
thks for the pm dear
sooooooooooooooo cute and sweet part yaar
it was soooo romatic yaar
update soooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya
Edited by saridena - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
thanks for all the lovely comments guys .. these really mean a lot me .. and they are really appreciated i will try to update sometime soon
luv
aishah

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