My Very Own Rahul & Muskaan Dream - updt pg 55 - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow that was soo good!
totally awesum!!!! luved it

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi guys!!! I am sorry I have not written anymore.

I actually still did not decide how to continue as I have not thought about it yet.
I really really really appreciate all the support to continue the dream/story. 😃
I think I need to daydream for a while and then I will figure it out. 😍
Its difficult writing 2 different things at the same time. Very confusing. 😕
But I will continue this weekend. What else have I got to do now that there are no new episodes??? 😔
Again thank you so much for reading and commenting and supporting.
Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SuhaniSonia

Hi guys!!! I am sorry I have not written anymore.

I actually still did not decide how to continue as I have not thought about it yet.
I really really really appreciate all the support to continue the dream/story. 😃
I think I need to daydream for a while and then I will figure it out. 😍
Its difficult writing 2 different things at the same time. Very confusing. 😕
But I will continue this weekend. What else have I got to do now that there are no new episodes??? 😔
Again thank you so much for reading and commenting and supporting.

awwwww 😲
challo if u dnt havng idea then we ll wait 4 that time 😕
but u shud contribute in WWRM n lonavala dream
as u r RM FAN so support to karni hi the na 😃
so keep sharing whatever u hav
mOonA
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Posted: 16 years ago
you still haven't even given it a thought yet?
please write soon.
i am bored...
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Posted: 16 years ago
i love it thank u for pm excellent👏😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
so nice sonia u started agian so kind of u
👏👏👏
plzzz go on i really liked it 👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
I put together the whole dream part of the story above so its a little more organized because I don't have anything in parts. I am making myself confused.
Ok so I wrote this part which was a previous dream I had had about someone else so I used it here. I am having a hard time trying to think of a long term plan for this story. Any ideas???
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Part 11
Muskaan - RAHUL!!!

She goes running out of the kitchen to look for him. But then thinks if she caught him what would she do. So she stops and walks back towards the main living room to clean up a little. Its very quiet and everyone is still not down yet. She sits down and starts thinking about the tumultuous past 2 days. A slight smile appears on her face while she starts daydreaming about Rahul and how sweet he had been taking care of her when she almost fainted. He actually in a roundabout way said that he loved her.
He wanted to marry her for real. Their kiss... his touch.. Before she knew it she was asleep and lost in her own dreams.

In her dream there she is in a sari dancing around in the desert to the song 'Teri Ore' with Rahul ofcourse. She has a smile on her face as she sleeps.

Rahul wonders what happened to her. He had run out of the kitchen a while back and thought she was right behind him but it had been a good 10 minutes. He went looking for her and finds her pleasantly laying on the couch all cuddled up in a fetal position.

Rahul is sitting right by her watching her sleep for the past 30 minutes or so with no hurry to wake her up. Gazing at her sleeping is enough for him. She would never let him just look at her like this for this long when she was awake.

Muskaan - (sighs/whispers in her sleep) Rahul...
When he heard her speak he moved away slightly and just answered her assuming she was awake. He knows she sometimes talks in her sleep but he wasn't sure this time.

Rahul - Kya hai Muskaan?

No answer from her part and her eyes were still closed.

Muskaan finally speaks again.

Muskaan - (whispers) Teri ore hai rabba..
Dil kho gaya ho gaya kisi ka
Ab raasta mil gaya khushi ka
Aankhon mein hai khwab sa kisi ka
Ab raasta mil gaya khushi ka
Rishta naya rabba, dil chu raha hai
Kheenche mujhe koyi dor teri ore
Teri ore...

Rahul - Haye!

She is so adorable. He could not help himself and he lays back on the couch and hits her. The impact wakes her up immediately.

Muskaan - Rahul? Tum yahan?.. Main yahan?.. Kya.. (confused as to why she is on the couch and why he is lying there on her legs)

He is just staring at her with this mast smile on his face and won't answer her questions so she is waving her hands in his face.

Rahul - Mere bare mein sapne dekh rahi thi? (finally sitting up to face her)

She is shocked. How did he know? How does she always get caught?

Muskaan - Nahin toh.

Rahul - Nahin? Mujhse baatein to khar rahin thi.. Ya aur kohi Rahul ke saath chakar tho nahin chal raha hai?

Muskaan - Umm... tune kya suna?

Rahul - Sab kuch.. aur waise bhi tere yeh sapne maine kahin baar bhi dekhein hai. Ab sapne haqeeqat main badal dein? (taking her injured hand and kissing it)

Muskaan - Hat!.. Sharam nahin aati??? (trying to pull away her hand)

Rahul - Ohh, toh woh aise wale sapne hain?

Muskaan blushes and looks away. Still trying to get her hand away.

Rahul - Ab sharmana kya? Tune haan jo kehdi.

Rahul knows shes embarrassed and gives her some space by not pushing further but still does not let go or move from the couch. After some time...

Muskaan - Rahul?

Rahul - Hmm? (just playing with her hand and kissing it)

Muskaan - Ek baath bathao?

Rahul - Kya?

Muskaan - Yeh sach hain na?

Rahul - Kya sach hai?

Muskaan - Ke hum dono sach mein shaadi karenge?

Rahul - Ofcourse. Kuch shak hai?

Muskaan - Yakeen hi nahin ho raha.. kal tak to hum.. itni jaldi

Rahul - Nahin yeh mat bolo.. kal tak tujhe kuch hua nahin tha. Main to tera kab se diwane ki tara peeche hoon.

Muskaan - Jhoota? Kab se?

Rahul - Umm.. kuch cheh mahine.

Muskaan - Cheh mahine??

Rahul - Pata nahin.. shayad usse pehle bhi.. shayad hamesha

Muskaan - Magar ladte jagadte hum kitna te?

Rahul - Jagadne mein mujhe tere saath bahot maza aatha hai.

Muskaan - Pataya hi nahin..

Rahul - Socha tha tum khud hi samajh jaogi.. par tujh mein to itni kam akal hai yeh maine kabhi socha nahin tha... (smirking)

Muskaan - Kam akal??? (shocked)

Rahul is chuckling.

Muskaan - Agar itni kam akal hai to mujhse baat hi nahin karo.

Rahul - Aee.. mere sona.. naraaz ho gayi?

Muskaan - Naraaz tumne hi to kiya hai.

Rahul - Toh mana bhi main doonga. Aise hi bhol raha tha.. tujhe mujhe chidane mein bhi bohot maza aatha hai.

Muskaan is still naraaz.

Rahul - Abe yaar.. abhi bhi ghussa.. sorry na. Mujhe patha hai.. Main ek baath kehke sab kuch theek kar doonga.

No response.

Rahul - Keh doon?

Muskaan - Jo bhi karna hai tu karle. Mujhe kya?

Rahul - Ok toh phir nahin bholna..

He comes closer and into her ear he whispers 'i.... love.... you'

Muskaan muskura ke sharma jathi hai. Rahul felt so relieved that he said it for the first time and she took it well.

Rahul - Ab sab kuch theek hai ya aur bhi boloon?

Muskaan - Chup...

Rahul is satisfied that she is smiling but then he thinks this is the perfect time to get her to say it back.

Rahul - Mujhse kuch nahin kayegi?

Muskaan is taken aback by that. She did expect him to say it just like that. She was extremely happy though and knew if she said it he would be realy happy as well but it was so hard to get those words out.

Muskaan - Kya?

Rahul - Woh jo maine..

Muskaan - Kya?

Rahul - Nautanki mat kar...

Muskaan - Kya? Mujhe kuch patha nahin hai.. tu kya keh raha hai...

Rahul - Bol na?

Muskaan - Hmm...

Rahul - Ok toh theek hai.. main ja raha hoon (getting upset)

Muskaan grabs his hand.

Muskaan - Woh.. Main tujh..

Priya phir se aajathi hai.

Priya - Kya bulwana chahta hai usse? Nahin bolna Muskaan jo bhi hai. Iski baatein abhi se man ne lagi toh..

Priya sits down next to Muskaan and makes Rahul sit on the other side of her.

Priya - Meri koi company nahin milti. Chal baathein karthe hain...

Rahul (thinking) Yeh kabab mein haddi kahanse aagayi. Itni mushkil se yahan tak pahoncha hoon.

He feels defeated. She is just looking at him whispering sorry from across Priya who is talking
nonstop.


Edited by SuhaniSonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hahah kabab mein hadi...........poor rahul.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey very nice part.............sweet.......... so here what i took this story ...............as they both r in love........they need to get married and go back to sanjeevni .......so next thing to do is get them married and after the function get invloved to in thier regular life in sanjeevni but this time they come back to sanjeevani with love
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww rahul and muskaan are so cute, this was a great update! thanks for the pm.
please continue soon and pm me when you do so.
love,
mona :]

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