~||Star-Crossed||Shera-Veer FF||~{nte_35} - Page 9

Originally posted by: subha2601

Ur fic is very interesting,loved all d characters specially veer plz continue asap.

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT

wOwO! The most awaited ff finally updated..😛😆awieeee u make me blush from the start yaar..cummon me doesn't tink that mah FF is rilli awaited haan...

wow! The description is fabulous 👏 Lolz! VEER still sleeping.😆..Whoa! the way u described his 'Dream Gurl' Truly Gud..⭐️ Thanxie love..well its like sumtimes u feel haunted even though u hav all materialistic tins wiv u...deep down in a corner of u'r heart...U feel a space..special space at that..empty...n u feel lonely even when u r surrounded by thousands of people.

Lubd the phrase -
the one who wud be His and only His..

Superb!! 👏 awieeeee that's sweet..Well I knew u'd like tis..pehle se hi clear kar diya ki veer ki sirf aur sirf Veer ki..lolz....he ought to be possessive for the riveting beauty..Shudn't he be...😉

Brilliant 👍🏼 Owesum 👍🏼 Superb 👍🏼 DS Olready married and a cute Relationship of Bhabhi and Devar between VEER and Siya..😳 Was relli looking forward for something like this..😃
Lukin forward for More Bhabhi - Devar Scenes 😛 awww..em glad u liked it..buh at the same time..not as many scenes of Veer-Siya..buh will try n inculcate em too...only for u deary..as u seem to like the bhabhi-dewar relationship...

Am shO glad dat dis Siya is having a sweet voice and not that shouting irritating and childish one..😆...Great ! 👏 hehe lolzzzzzz...well I didn't want veer to wake up ready wiv a sword to kill siya..for irritating him while taking his dream gals..sapne u see...😉

OoOo...Dharam so Romantic here and not at all shy ...Hmm y shud he,he's Siya's hubbby..😉 Yh that's what..apni patni se sharam..goddd..toh phir kuch bhi kaise hoga...u see the hubby ought to be a lil not soooooo shy like dharam in mah FF..nahi toh kya sara romance wifey hi karegi..she'd better kick him out of the room...n then...Veer aur bhi leg pulling karta na...😆
If VEER wud hav seen them romanciN' then..😲🤣

Omg ! Nivriti's entry..😲...What a Timing...🤣🤣🤣....Dharam wud be careful Next Tym...🤣 yh he shud be...warna....no time from his wifey..room se bahar kick kardegi..n nivi maa pakad kar bandh degi..pooorrrrr dharam...

Dharam n Sia sprang up..away from each oder?

🤣Lolz...Nivriti twists Dharam's ear...😆...Kewl ! It seems realistic..Relli gr8! 👏 thanx..

Lolz...😆....''Nivriti maa's cuttu nonu'' 😆😆....Mums of our forum wud b Glad to read dat..😳 aawwieee yh..they will...😃

Awwww such a cute and Luvly scene...VEER sleeping on his mother's lap..😍...how cute! 😳 well I still do.😳.I sleep in mom's lap..or dad's or mahak's or nani's or masi's...I still snuggle like a baby when u wanna wake me up from mah kumbhkaran alike sleep🥱...😆

(Nivi caresses his hair thinkin of what'll happen to the gal he marries..)

Lolz...😆😆😆 ! Rofl VEER has answers to all the questions and dat als in a hillarious way..😆yh

Bhabhi tak toh thil hai..par Dharam?!!! ( puts a disbelieving face trying hard not to laugh at D's condition)

🤣 Lolz...VEER neva leaves even a single Chance to tease Dharam..😆...ThaNk God he hasnt seen DS romancing early in the morning else VEER and his teasers..😆😆😆 yh..wund't hav ended u see...bichara dharam wud hav becum a tomato by then...lol

as they were in mid of a goin to be very romantic moment..V pops in

🤣 I Knew....🤣 VEER wud surely do sumthing like that.well its expected from veer na...😆 Lolz! VEER is s confident at this moment...wanna see what will his reaction be after he falls for Shera and then Dharam's turn t tease Him.yh..tab toh..u know he'd be running away from dharam..so that he isn't teased more..n then he'd blush..ya allah..I love seein him blush..he luks jus soooooo...wowiieee..n then shera wud find it so cute..that she won't be able to resist the desire to give him a sloppy kiss right then..or to eat his cheecks up..lol..n veer toh wud go in his romance mood..so dharam wud hav to make a quiet exit..whereby he'd leave being embarrased yet again..lolllzzzz...hehE gOSH...I ended up writin mah thoughts at the very moment.🤣 wO ! Loved dV's conv On Love..😆👏 umm..em seriously glad u liked it..
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Wow Great Descritiptin and an Owesum entry f Shera,..😃 Wow So Gud...She wakes up and prays to Kanha ji..👏😳 yh..jus like me..I wake up to see my hands the first tin..n pray to lord n then sum oder tin...
Wo his baba isnt that bad and quite better than the real one..😉 yess.yesssssssss..true..he is as loving as a father can be..like my shonu pa..I love him more than mah life...

Huh she's having hatred fr Aryavrats...?? 😲😕 Hmmm and love twards Shramiks..😊 Shera and her horse toofan,seems Shera is relli attached to her hrse 😃 yes thats true..

Phew VEER is ready...finally..😆 Lolz! This seems interesting and funny...VEER teasing Dharam is quite known but VEER teasing Siya..😆...Superb! 👏 hehe..I love the bhabhi dewar scenes..

Whats DG? 😕 - Devar G?😕 umm will hav to see yyaar..

Omg...Exactly what was expected frm VEER on hearing about his wifey , his marriage..🤣yh...I kept that in mind..u see..coz..well that's what I too expected..

Whuppieee....VEER is alsO going fr the same Khazaane ki khoj... Huh Is Nivi talking bout her Bahu..? 😳😆 I mean VEER's marriage..😉😆 ummm yh...

Huh Maddy yew frgot to name VEER's horse...😊 Oh soo sowie..will name iyt asap..well u suggest a name for the mare..

Over all MussHt say that it was a Long Update...Thank Yew shO muh fr that...🤗 And such a Great,fantabulus, Brilliant Update...👏...Not even a Single point t Criticize.. awiiieeee yeh toh apka badappan hai ji...u r jus the most shonu badi sis one can hav..n will keep givin such upadtes (even better)..if u want,..

Update the Next Part Asap Hun! 😳 yupp surely deary..will update sn...

Love ya loads shonu baby......t.ccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

Wonderful heavenly fantastic update madhu.. *hugs n kissies to u

aawiiiieee..now that's chooo chweeet of u bhuvi di..I know tis update wasn't wrthwhile..like not that gd..U r bein rilli vry appreciative...

omg such a BEATIFUL first part..

u surpassed the highest of expectations I had of u..that means u had real low expectations from me😭😭..haina...coz I know tis wasn't a gd prt...

omg darling its BEAUTIFUL ! the most beautiful FF... now em blushing..God bhuvi di..

every character of yours is unique and special.. I love ur shera ..yh me too..I jus love her the most of all...

n I soooooooper excited abt khazana khoj.. Yes..yes me too..I toh em gonna update real sn..coz I wanna share my whole imagination..which is quiet wild n passionate wiv u all.....😳😳

update soon n please pm me whn u update dear.. Of course will surely PM u too..personal service is surely available missy...n for u..always missy...

PLEASE PLESAE PLEASE update soon.. I will be eagerly waiting.. Yes will upadte real sn..jus for u deary...

~ your biggest fan, Bhuvi ! awwwww...sumone pinch me..em I seein a dream...

*madz faints*..bhuvi di..id tis true....?????

nyways..it was soooo exaggeratin n..umm..em overwhelmed....thanx a lot..sweetu..U made mah day...

Love ya loads my cutie badi sis....t.ccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Originally posted by: ektay11

its really very nicee lovely part

thank u

plz update soon

Originally posted by: hiri

love your ff madhu dear keep goin

Originally posted by: CutieA

wooowiee....beautiful! i love dthe way u described Veer n Shera...da wonderful relationship btw Veer n Sia...sooo cute!...just 1 question...is Nivi Veer's real mum? it was reali nice seein Shera n Father scens....so cute too...also good to see that they arent selfish either n want to help Shramiks! overall...FABULOUS!!! no precap?

Awiiiieeee thanxie..thanx a lottttt love....em jus way too glad that u liked it....

Originally posted by: itemshera

wow madhu just loved it aawiieeee my deary lil star..thanx...
so sweet to see veer's n sia's reletionship Yes..the bhabhi-dewar relation is real gd..both naughty ones..G8 minds think alike u see...
they are so sweet........a total devar bhabhi reletionship is potrayed so beautifully
n ya does veer always sleeping on starting of the story like kumbhkaran
ok just kidding......it was a beautiful scene aaww.thanx..lol..kya kare he luks cho chweet sleeping like a baby u see...em obsessed for that cuuttttuuu luk..so started off wiv that scene...lol
dharam always finding chances to come near sia.......lol that was so cute n veer teasing them yh typical hubby-wifey material..lol
loved shera n her fathers relation so sweet that their isnt any selfishness n they wanna help shramiks.....yes yes..that's what I wanted to potray..waise bhi I can't take shera in the typical hurting oder people Dakoo role..she's mre like Robin Hood..
n lastly sia teasing veer humari devrani dhundne lolzzzz so funny Lolzzzz jaise ko taisa
overall awesome update
just loved it
do update soon Yh deary will update asap..thanx yet again..
n one more thing no precap plzzz dear precap to de do Ohkk..so precap in much demand...Ohkk..toh hum precap de hi dete hai..will update the precap sn...

Love ya loads my deary lil star......t.ccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Originally posted by: junglli billi

of course i m cutie pi .....always.....................n lov u

Originally posted by: junglli billi

love u dear😉