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Rituka

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

update was awesome

i loved it

update soon

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Tina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

@aarthi
i m gud...hw are you....no probs yaa!!....thnx a lot!!...

@sanjana
thnx a lot!!

@sumaiya
thnx yaar.....muskaan ka kya hoga you will noe soon....hopefully she should!!...lets see

@lipi
thnx!!

@watch rajeev
thnx......okies i'll defi post the characters yaar.......nd tanvi ka i mite not post kyunki woh thoda sa suspense hain...i'l give a detailed explanation soon!!

@soumya
thnx a lot......naina is always worried bout raj.......muski shd sort out evrythn soon!!

@rituka
thnx!!

@prerna
thnx!!.....indeed naina cares for raj..

@sea_nyx
thnx...rahul nd raj are lyk best frnds...and rahul nd naina also wld grow into very gud frnds...

@starsdf
thnx!! no prob at all....i will pm u...i will read ur ff and post my comments sooon...jus give me sme tym..

@Mahak
reserved..lol!!

@suhana
thnxxx!!......yes old frnds back in kma..house on fire!!........muskaan's story will be revealed soon!!......monkeyman has its own story as well....u'l noe soon!!

@shaina
thnx!!....raj ofcourse navin se pyaar karta hain...no doubt.....haan raj shalini ko pehle se janta tha.....muskan ki problem ke barrey main u'l noe soon!!......that "abhi se patni" dialogue is my favourite as well..

@vvdn
no prob yaa!!......thnx!!.....that las scene is my fav too!!.......awee!!....that hotel scene was gud as well........

@anshu
ur welcme..........well dint take ali nd puji..i dunoo why....jus had to drop two people so dropped them.....gunny well he myt be there considerin that hes my fav!!..lets see....ryt now ders nthin btwn rahul nd muski......mayb a lil later u noe!!.....thnx!!

@rituka
i will update soon dear!!

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Sorry for late replies...was unwell for 2 days....much better now...i myt post the next part soon!!..

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Riya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#93

Hello Tina!!!
Thanks a lot for the pm dear!!!!
Now the update was brilliant......
par yeh Muskaan ka chakkar kya hai????

Loved it dear.......
Waiting for the next update
Continue soon.....
Take good care of yourself......

love
Riya.

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Tina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#94

A big sorry to all readers!!...I knoe i havent been updatin...but i am ill and cant sit for long in front of de comp....i tried postin the part but before that the current went offf....so i'll do it 2morow!!...sorry guys!!...please co-operate!!

And also wishin all my readers a very happy and prosperous diwali!!...njoy!!

Edited by cool~~gal - 16 years ago

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parveen kahkashan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#95

awesome plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon this is the first time iam replying do continue soon with long parts

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Tina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#96

PART-5

AT THE ACADEMY!!!

Naina went out!!

Rahul-So kya kaha Raj ne?

Naina-Bas aise hi...theekh pahunch gaya....waise mujhe yahan ka sim chahiye.......kya tum please meri help karoge.....i mean yahan kahan par??.

Rahul-Dont worry.....mein hoon na....mujhe apna dost samjho..we are friends alryt...no please and all that.....kal chaltein hain!!....aaj bilkul mood nahi!!...😕

Naina-Hmm

Rahul-Ab aggar tumhe apna sim mil jayee...toh phir mujhe pata nahi chalega tum kab kab raj se baat karti hoon!!....haha!....youll have some privacy...and my balance will be in place!!😆

Naina laughed!!

Rahul-So doctor!!...

Naina-Ahh...haan doctor hoon....aur specialization psycology mein kiya hain!!

Rahul-Intressting!!

Naina-Aur tum?

Rahul-Uhh raat mein kaam karta hoon....aur kabhi kabhi liktha hoon...journalist!!

Naina-Hmm!!...Intresting!!

They both smiled!!

Rahul-Ahh...Tum Raj ko kab se janti hoon??

Naina-Ahh kaffi salloon se...jab bhi uske holidays hote toh woh ghar aa jata....

Rahul-Toh ab achanak ambala?...ghar chod kar??

Naina-Aisa hi kuch samjh loo!

Rahul-Not bad!...mera dost ladki ko bhaga bhi layee!!😉

Naina-Tumhe seriously lagta hain ki main aur Raj....ek i mean ek item hain??😆😆

Rahul-Ahh pata nahi...chances toh hain...😆😆

Naina-Noo Rahul!!...Yeh sach nahi hain!!....Raj aur main...no man!....no ways!....kya tumhe lagta hain tumhara dost ek ladki ko bhaga ke toh durr ki baat hain....woh kisi ladki ke taraf aankh uthakey bhi dekhta!!....bas flirt karte rehta hain.....on an off....aur woh bhi usee lagta hain ki flirt nahi hain!....he is not for serious relationships!....

itna toh tumhe usee janna chahiye tha!...hum sach mein sirf dost hain....main yahan kisi makzat se aayii hoon...aur bas Raj mera saath de rahah hain!!...dats about it!..

Rahul-Ohh!..I see!!...aur yeh kya makzat hain....well if its not for me to knoe then fine!!

Naina gave an apolegitic smile!!

Rahul-I understand......bahut barr raj ke saath hua hain!...

Naina-Rahul mere is mission me tum bahut important hoon....waqt anne par i sware mein tumhe sab bata dongi!...I need ur help!!

Rahul-hmm...coffe ??

Naina-Yup!...Main banao!!

Rahul-Its ok...main banata hoon!!..

Rahul goes to make coffee...and naina thinks that how fast she clicked with rahul.......in no time..

Rahul came back in 5 mins!!

Naina-Thanx..

Rahul smiled

Naina-So girlfriends??

Rahul-U wish!!

Naina smiled

Rahul-No girlfriendS and no girlfriend also as of now!!...Ek Raj hain...uss par ladkiyaan fida hain...aur woh hain ki.....aur ek main hoon.....i m ready for a relationship but yeh ladkiyaan.....uff...theyr too smart....

Naina-Basically tumhe woh susheel sanskarik etc girl nahi mil rahi

Rahul-Nah!...Mujhe chahiye ek aise ladki jo independent hoon...aur bas mujhse sacha pyar kare...na ki mere paisoon se....Dad ne bahut kuch choda hain mere liye....but i prefer to be independent....yeh bade baap ki bigdi aaulat toh suna hoga...main kabhi aisa nahi banna chahtha tha....i wanted to make name for myself.....Ek bar mera MBA ho jaye..then i m sure ill get a good job!!....day mein!!..

Naina smiled!!

Naina-HMm....tumhe tumhari ladki zaroor milegi!!...

Naina smiled!!

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RAj was setting up stuff in his quarters when Shalini came in

Raj-Haan shalu bolo!!

Shalini-Raj all set...koi maddad

Raj-No thnxx doc!!..

Shalini-ahh that sounds so weird...tum shalu hi bulao!!

Raj-Kyun tum bhi toh mujhe raj bula rahi hoon!!.

Shalini-Oh ..you dunt mind if i still call u RV

Raj-Ofcourse not!!...😉

Shalini-Alright Rv....

Raj smiled

Raj-Itna achha lagta hain

Shalu smiled

Shalu-RV

Raj-Haan

Shalu-Sheetal kaisi hain??

Raj turned around...not wanting to face shalu😕

Raj-Haan theekh hain!.....bahut dino se baat nahi huyi!...uski posting jammu mein mein huyi hain...🤢

Shalu-Hmm!!....

Raj-Aur Muskaan yahan kaisi hian?

Shalu-R.V academy ko chalo ho kar 2 din huyyye hain!!...

Raj-Ohh ok ok sorry sorry!!

Shalu-Yeh batch abhi abhi ayya hain...give them some time!!

RAj-Ok baba!!

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Huda entered the mess and saw Muskaan there....

Huda-Oyye meri Muskaan...tera bhai ab KMA mein aa gayaa!...ab humare romance par tala ki??

Muskaan-Jus shut up!!....Apneyy kam se kam rakkho!..tumse romance karna kisko hain!!😡😡

Huda-Oyee is jaat se har ladki romance karti hain😛

Muskaan-Andhi hogi woh ladki.....now please out of here!!

Aalekh enterd!

Aalekh-Ayye chodh na usko.....yeh teri type ke ladki nahi hain.....tereko ukhadey ke haddi todh degi....durr rahee😆😆

Huda-Oyee kaidi.....tu na kuch mat bol!!........yeh aggar meri type nahi hian...toh kya teri type hain.....andhi bahri aur gongi hogi woh ladki jo tujhse pyar karegi!!..😆😆

Aalekh-Ayye sala!!😡

Aalekh was about to punch huda

Muskaan-Stop it guys!....tum duno ko kabhi bhi koi ladki nahi milegi....you both are losers with a capital L!!😡😡

And Muskaan left!!...

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It was Rajveer's first day at the academy!!...

they arrived yesterday!!...and yesterday was break!!

TOday first day at KMa..

And RAjveer was taking the first class of the first day of the academic year

The first year people came in one by one!!..

Raj-Alright guys....I am Rajveer Singh Shekhawat your teacher for stratergy and communication!!..

Raj-So lets start with an intro....introduce yourself to the class in a unique way!!

Huda stood up first!!

Huda-Myself Amardeep huda!....mummyji ka ladla hoon...yahan ayaa hoon dikhaney apney jalwwein!!

The class burst out into a round of laughter

Raj-ALright Cadet Huda!...be seated!!

Next stood up Yudi

Yudi-Yadhuvansh sahani sir!....

Raj-Cadet I said unique way!...dont you think this is the traditionally weird and boring way!!

Yudi-Thats how I am sir!!...🤢

Raj saw a striking sadness in his voice!!

Raj-Alright cadet!...your excused please be seated!!....i like that as well...😛

Tanvi whispered to Sameera

"He so cute and handsome!...plus hes also so sweet"...

Muskaan heard this and ignored!!..

Aalekh's turn

Aalekh-Sala apun chor apun jail mein honna chahiye lekin hain idhar Kma mein.....aggar aisa karney lagey na sir toh Kma ke jansankhya bahut bad jayegi!...sab koi chori karne lagega!..Muft ka khana muft ka rehna chori ke badleiin mein!...bahut accha idea hain...apun AAlekh sharma!!

Raj laughed😆😆😆

Raj-Baith jao Cadet!

Raj-Ladkiyaan kafii chup chap hain...cmon introduce yourself!!

Tanvi stood up

Tanvi--Hey I am Tanvi!!...Ask me anything and I'll answer!..All i need in return is some love from you!!😉😳

The class was shell shocked!!

Tanvi-Hey hey that was not for you!...Those are the lines of the song I composed!!...😛

the class smiled!..And so did Raj!!

Raj-Thankyou cadet!! please be seated..

Tanvi sat down!

Sameera-Sameera shroff sir!...My passion is to serve my motherland!

Raj smiledd (the killer one)

Raj-I am proud of you cadet😊

At this Tanvi stood up

Tanvi-Sir sir even my passion is to serve my motherland!!😳

Raj smiled...He knew this girl was trying to impres him!!

Raj-I am proud of you too Cadet!!😊

Tanvi blushed!!

Raj smiled!!..These were the typical girls!!...

The others went on!..Raj was wating for Muskaan..

Raj-Are all the cadets done??

Huda-Bada ajeeb banda hain...uski khud ki behen bachi hain!....weird

Huda-Sir woh aapki behen bach gayii hain

Muskaan got pissed off!!..

Raj-Cadet Amardeep Huda...

Huda stood up

Raj-Kma mein koi kisi ka bhai behen nahi hota hain!....aap yeh bilkul bhi nahi sochein ki mein muskaan se alag aur aapse alag koi behave karonga....tum sab mere cadets hoon!!.....So please muskaan bhi mere liye sirf ek cadet hain....meri behen nahi!....training ke waqt par!!..

Huda-Jee sir

Raj-Be seated

Raj-Cadet agar aap apney aap ko introduce kar dengi toh I can continue

Muskaan stood up

Muskaan-I am Cadet Muskaan Singh .....I hate losers....main yahan ek soldier banne ayai hoon aur uske siwa mujhe kisi se bhi kuch bhi nahi chahiye!!(she said looking at aalekh and huda)

Raj-Thankyou cadet.....be seated

Raj noticed the way Muskaan deliberately said jus Muskaan......she wasnt the same Muskaan...jo seena tang ke kehti thi I am Muskaan Singh Shekhawat!!

He was sad...he anyway continued with the class......taught them some basics and left them!!

Raj-Apkka agla class Captain Chauhan ke saath hain...I am sure you will have fun!!...DIsmiss!!

They all left!!..

Muskaan was the last one to leave!

She stopped by his table where he was collecting his books!!

He saw her

Raj-Kya hua?...Kuch kaam tha??

Muskaan nodded her head in the negative!!

Raj-Muskaan..

For the firt time Raj saw her a little confused.....she was sad...there was a tear in her eye....

Raj-Muskaan tu ..

Muskaan-Ahhh..woh I am getting late for the next class..

Raj let her go!!.

Raj was depressed!!..
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Naina was sitting in the room silently!...It was lunch time

Rahul-Naina...naina woh lunch time ho gaya hain

Naina-Uhh haan...

Rahul-Well jab mein akela hota hoon toh yaa toh kuch nahi khata hoon ya kuch bhi bakwas kha leta hoon...ab kya karein??

Naina-Well.....Ahh kuch bakwas khate hain!!😆😆

Rahul-Ohh god...raj ko pata laga na......meri jaan le lega!!...usko khas dost ko khas chezzein pasand hogi!!

Naina smiled

Rahul-Ahh by any chance tumhe kuch aata hain ..I mean cooking and all??😆

Naina gave a weird look!!

Rahul-I knew tum uss type ki laki hi nahi hoon!!😆😆

Naina-Hey hey!!....Khana pakana aata hain.....but not too gud!....aur i need time....aaj ka dinner bana sakti hoon....ek kaam kartein hain...bahar chaltein hain!!..

Rahul-Done..Chalein

Naina-Mein change kar loon??

Rahul-Ok...10 minute....bas rahengey na..tumhari type ke ladki ke liye!...tum lagti nahi hoon woh makeup types!!😆😆

Naina smiled

Naina-Tum ruko mein 5 minute mein atti hoon!!

Rahul smiled!

Naina was out in no time!..Less than 5...SHe jus put on a casual t-shhirt with jeans!...left her hair open!!

Naina-Chalein??

Rahul-Kash sarri ladkiyaan tumhari tarah hoon man!!...crazy gals!...chalo!!

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I am really sorry for the delay guys...but lyk i said i have been ill...i would take about 15 days to recover...but i would try nd post the uds as and wen possible....since its all typed out i have to jus edit and post.....so take care and happy diwali once again!!

Edited by cool~~gal - 16 years ago