~*~*~FATINY~*~*~(RN/RM FF)Ud- PAge 146--9/1/2010 - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago

@jkhiste
thnx a lot !!..😊.

@suhana
thnx!!.....muskaan's stry will be revealed later dear!😉!...nd sry cldnt inform dis tym...

@soumya
thnx!!......well we cldnt possibly have r-n or r-m all the tym.....the point is i was tryn to lay the foundation......one of rahul nd naina who have to be shwn as gud frnds and raj entering the academy.....nyway sry that u dint njoy....i m sure you will njoy in the next uds.😊

@prerna
thnx!!...thnx for understanding also prerna.....hmm sheetal....you'l noe bout her....thoda suspense rehney doon!!😃

@bhavini
thnx yaar!!..i will!😊!

@watch rajeev..
hahaha!!...pata chalega....sheetal ke barey main bahut hi jald....tab tak sochte raho!!.....thnku dear...me much btr nw!!1😛

@anshu
thnxx a lot......sheetal...koi bhi ho sakti hain...lets see.....thnx for ur concern....much btr nw!!😛

@mahak
waqt nahi mila...tabyat kharab thi.......dint inform nybody!!..😕

@stella
thnx a lot!!😊

@lipi
thnku dear!.😉....

@sam
thnx!!....haaan sheetal...u'll noe soon dear!!..😊

@vvdn
thnx a lot!!....and sry theres wasnt ny rn here....it'll cme soon!!...
a lil thing..if i rmmbr correctly is ur name neetu??...i really cant rmmbr...😊

@dazzlin glory
thnx a lot!!......yes indeed the whole idea of dis ud was to show the bondin btwn rahul nd naina......sheetal ka bahut jald pata chalega.......muskaan has sme problem with her brother....woh bhi pata chalega....my health is much better now thnx for the concern...😃

@shaina
thnx!!.....haha...haan rahul to sim aur balance ki pichee padh gaya.....the whole idea was to show that rahul nd naina are bcmin gud frnds....glad u liked it.....uffo bechari sheetal....kyun gusaa ho rahi hoon....pata chalega bahut jald...arrey kis ladki ko raj cute nahi lagega.....rahul is indeed very sweet!!😃😃

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Thnx guys for all de replies....and d concern...
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Posted: 16 years ago
sorry for late replying
actually my pc was not working
update was awesome,superb
get well soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
PART-6
"THE TRUTH REVEALED"
It was the weekend!!

And Naina was expecting Raj!!

On saturday...Naina was in the kitchen trying to prepare something....when the door bell rang!!

She went to get the door..rahul was already there...huggin raj!!

Raj saw Naina

Raj-Hey!!

Naina-Hey..kaise hoon

Raj-Gud!

They stood some 10 metres apart!

Rahul-Guys...itne door se heloo!!.....I mean pass aoo na...hug him kiss him!! 😆😆

Naina and Raj--Rahul!!!!!🤢🤢

Rahul-Okok sorry!!

They settled down!

Raj-Rahul tumhe sab sach batana hain...warna tum toh humari jaan khaogey!!😉

Rahul-Toh batao na budyy!...ya phir yeh bhi higlhy confidential hian!!😆

Raj-Rahul...acha suno!!

Raj-Rahul kya tumhe kabhi navin ke yaad aatti hian??

Rahul became serious....he looked at Naina

Raj-Uski taraf mat dekho....mere sawal ka jawab doon!!

Rahul-Aati hian Raj..😕

Raj-Kya tumhe Naina mein aisa kuch nazzar nahi atta...jo navin mein tha!

Rahul was confused!!

Rahul-Well..kya yeh navin ki koi long lost girlfriend hain??....mere tum loggon se milney ke pehle??😕

Raj wanted to kill Rahul

Naina-Girlfriend??😲

Raj-Ahh naina...ruko thoda....rahul!!..(he said angrily)😡😡

Rahul-Kya hua??

Raj-Uffo.....yeh naina hain...navin ke behen naina!!

Rahul ki duniya khum gayyii

Rahul-Navin ke behen!!🤢

Raj-Haan Rahul...yahi sach hain....mein iska saath de rahha hoon...navin ko innocent prove karney mein!!

Naina smiled...Raj was truly awesome......it was she who was helping...she was the second person...but raj preffered to say...that he was helping her!..

Rahul-Raj..main uss din se navin ke behen ke saath tha...aur mein

Raj-Rahul...tumhe bhi humari madda karni hogi!!

Rahul-Raj mein tum loggon ke saath hoon...yeh bulne ke toh zarrorat nahi!!😃

Raj smiled

Raj-Thanx!...I hope tujhe yahan iskey honey par koi problem nahi!!

Rahul-Ofcourse not!...ab toh bilkul nahi.,...lekin Raj meri chintah kuch aur hain

Raj-Kya?

Rahul-Ek hafte se....mein sara din iske saath hoon...lekin yeh raat ko akeli hian....i mean jab mein duty par jata hoon....raat ko shes alone...raj tu toh janta hain..its not safe!..😕

Raj understood

Naina-Raj iski batton mein mat aao.....toh kya hua...aggar mein akeli hoon...koi bachi hoon kya😆

Rahul-Bachi hoti toh chalta!😉!.

Naina smiled

Raj-Main kuch karta hoon Rahul...

Rahul-Raj mujhe koi problem nahi hian!...but its the point of her security!!

They were silent!!

Rahul-Idea!...Bas yeh kuch din bita loon.....agle mahine...ill change to day duty!!...😊

Raj-Aisa ho sakta hain??

RAhul-Ofcourse!!

Raj-Toh phir tu night mein kyun karta hain

Rahul-Ahh wahan par "pay" zyada hoti hain !!

Raj-Toh phir to day mein kyun??

Rahul-Shut up Raj...thode kamm milengey na....i'll manage!....baaap ka bahut paisa pada hain...kabhi toh istemall karna hoga na!!

Rahul winked at Raj😉

Raj knew that rahul will slog but not touch that money of his father....he wanted to be independent!!

Raj-nahi rahul.....tu aisa kuch nahi karega!...Mein kuch karta hoon!!

Rahul-Chupbey!!....bas yeh 4 din aur hi toh hain.....mein kuch bandoabs karta hoon...kisi friend ko bulata hoon...kuch bhi karke...you dont worry...naina ke safety ka mein dhyan rakhonga!!

RAj hugged him

Raj-Thanx bhut chota word hain....thnx a lot RAhul!!

Rahul-Raj..its perfctly ok!!

While this conv was taking place..Naina disappeared!!

Raj-Naina kahan gayyi??


Raj looked into the room and all around..he found her sitting in the adjoining terrace of the house...he walked up there..

Raj-Naina tum yahan?...kya hua sab theekh hain na?

Naina wiped her tears and turned around!

Naina-Haan...all's fine!!

RAj sat down beside her

Raj-Tum ro kyun rahi thi?

Naina-Main nahi toh

Raj-Naina...mujhse toh jhoth mat bolo...kya hua

Naina-Bas Raj soch rahi thi ki meri wajah se kitna sab..i mean...rahul ko apni job mein changes...tum kma se yahan attey hoon...i am such a problem

Raj-Naina pagal mat bano!!...

Naina-Raj I am sorry..

And Naina was sobbing!!😭😭

Raj had not seen this side of her..

He really dint knoe what to do!!....

He was confused

Raj-Naina please...rona band karo...dekho koi problem nahi hian ok....

Naina placed her head on his chest!!....

Raj slowly placed his hands on her shoulders consoling her

Raj-Sab theekh ho jayega Naina...dont worry!!...

Naina-Raj...I miss bhaiya....unki bahut yaad aa rahi hain!!...I miss him!!

Raj-Naina...I miss him too!!..

Naina sobed harder into Raj's chest!!

Naina-Mujhe mere bhaiya wapas chahiye..

Raj's eyes filled up!!...

Raj-Mein kya karron Naina.....Navin ko mein nahi laa sakta.....

Naina suddenly realized what exactly was happening...her head on raj's chest....his one hand on her shoulder and the other makin its way to her waist...shit!!

She moved away!!....

Raj also felt uncomfortable!!..

Naina-I am sorry...😭

Raj remained silent and looked away!!..

Rahul stood at the door...not wanting to see them or hear their conversation...but he happened to....his eyes which were filled with tears a minute ago....had all vanished...he was actually laughing at these two!!..

HE made his way into his room!!....

Naina slowly got up and went back into the house....leaving raj alone there!!...

A already confused soul...with some more confusions!!
Naina was still sobbing in her room....what was she doing....she had made raj her pet!!...whenever she wished she clunged to him and cried........what exactly was she doing....spoiling the proper decent respectful relationship that they shared!!...



Jus then Rahul entered!!

Rahul-Naina...

Naina dint say a word...rahul sat down beside her!!

Rahul-you knoe ab mujhe pata chala ke why we clicked instantly!!...tum akhir navin ke behen hoon....navin mein aur Raj...we were very close in college days...phir in dono ne army join kar li!!....aur mein reh gaya idhar....but jo rishta mera navin ke saath tha...you knoe navin was a gem....aur tum navin ke behen....its the same connection......

Naina was still silent!!

Rahul-Ok baba..I understand...its weird for you....aur woh ulti khopdi raj is making it even more weird!!...dekho naina......

Rahul-Dekho Naina is its about the hug phir bhool jao!...woh Raj pagal hain....he made you feel so akward

Naina looked at him with raised eyebrows..

Rahul-Mera koi irada nahi tha...but uh i was passing by and i jus happened to see it....

Naina-Main kya karoo??...I dunno Raj kya soch raha hoga......

Rahul-Ohh god...yeh Raj kaisa aadmi hain...dekho naina...tum bas dukhi thi...aur tumhe apna dukh kisi se batna tha.......woh raj he sahi!...aggar main wahhan hota toh tum mujhe hug karti!!..😊

Rahul tried to make the situation lighter!!

Rahul-Ah kash..main wahan hota!!😛😛

Rahul said jokingly!

Naina smiled!!

Rahul-chalo tum muskurayyie toh sahi!!

Naina-Pata nahi...I feel like an alien on earth...main kya kar rahi hoon i dunno...agey kya karna hain i dunno.......i really donno......aur is waqt i dunno raj mere barrey mein kya soch raha hoga...i mean he'll think i am that kinda girl...uss din hotel mein bhi i jus clunged to him....he mus be cursing me..

Rahul-No Naina.....DOnt worry....Raj tumharee barrey mien aisa kuch nahi soch raha hoga...woh toh khud mein hi galti dhundh raha hoga!!

Naina-I dunno

Rahul-Tum hoo badi confused soul!!

Naina-I knoe!!

They both laughed

Rahul-Ok abb yeh rona dhona bandh karo...lunch khanee bahar chaltein hain..

Naina-Hmmm...mein 5 minute me tayyar hoti hoon

Rahul smiled and left
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That was the next part.....a few r-n scenes as well....dunt wry guys ders loads more cmin up...and d r-m fans....hmmm wait wait....you guys hv smthin as well in store!!
hope this part was more intrstin that the previous one!!
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Tina!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Dear
Read the update ..It was pretty emotional 😭😭😭as well as hilarious too..😆..Two poles apart emotions in one single update...Too gud👏..
Loved the scene where Raj reveals the truth abt Naina
This scene was pretty funny"
Raj-Rahul kya tumhe kabhi navin ke yaad aatti hian??

Rahul became serious....he looked at Naina

Raj-Uski taraf mat dekho....mere sawal ka jawab doon!!

Rahul-Aati hian Raj..😕

Raj-Kya tumhe Naina mein aisa kuch nazzar nahi atta...jo navin mein tha!

Rahul was confused!!

Rahul-Well..kya yeh navin ki koi long lost girlfriend hain??....mere tum loggon se milney ke pehle??😕

Raj wanted to kill Rahul

Naina-Girlfriend??😲

ha ha...
Den when Rahul said that bacchi hoti to it wud have been much better..It was indeed funny..😆
Naina hugged Raj coz she was emotionally very disturbed...But why thse two r so much confused abt their feelings...???????? 😉
Do update soon
Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
update was fabulous
i hope u r fine now
update soon......
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Posted: 16 years ago

really can't wait 4 the update. ya u should bring muskaan to stay at rahul's because she can kick butt if something happens at night since she in army. 😆😆😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

hmmm so now rahul knows as well and i guess muski will too soon, anyway cnt wait fr te nxt part👏

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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj aur Naina itne door se hi kar rahe hai toh Rahul is teasing Naina to go and hug and kiss Raj!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Raj ne Rahul se puccha kya Naina mein kuch nazar nahi aata jo Navin mein tha toh Rahul is joking!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Rahul is shocked to hear that Naina is Navin's sister!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Naina is right!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj is truly awesome!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He said he is helping Naina when it is the other way around!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rahul is now ready to help them!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats very nice of him!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Now Rahul and Raj are worried about Naina's security!!!😛 😛 😛 😛After all they leave her alone at night!!!!

Rahul even offered to work in the day even though the pay will be less!!!😛 😛 😛 😛He is so nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is sad ke uski wajah se sabko itni problems ho rahi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Poor her!!!!

Naina is crying in Raj's arms and Raj is comforting her!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

But the they realised and broke off!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Magar unhe dekh ke Rahul has raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Naina is confused ki woh kar kya rahi hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Jab chahe she clings to him and cries!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

At least Rahul made Naina feel better!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He said kaash woh waha hota!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Rahul is right Raj Naina ke baare mein nahi soch raha hoga balki khud mein hi galatiyan dhundh raha hoga!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

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A gr8 update Tina..Liked ti..UD soon Hope u r fine now....
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Rahul-Ok baba..I understand...its weird for you....aur woh ulti khopdi raj is making it even more weird!!...dekho naina......

Rahul-Dekho Naina is its about the hug phir bhool jao!...woh Raj pagal hain....he made you feel so akward

Naina looked at him with raised eyebrows..

Rahul-Mera koi irada nahi tha...but uh i was passing by and i jus happened to see it....

Rahul-Ok baba..I understand...its weird for you....aur woh ulti khopdi raj is making it even more weird!!...dekho naina......

Naina-Main kya karoo??...I dunno Raj kya soch raha hoga......

Rahul-Ohh god...yeh Raj kaisa aadmi hain...dekho naina...tum bas dukhi thi...aur tumhe apna dukh kisi se batna tha.......woh raj he sahi!...aggar main wahhan hota toh tum mujhe hug karti!!..😊

Rahul tried to make the situation lighter!!

Rahul-Ah kash..main wahan hota!!😛😛
Superb update dear👏👏
Naina bhi bilkul buddhu hai jo ho gaya itna us ko sochne ki kya jaroorat hai.
Raj bhi na khud bhi itna ajeeb behave karege to koi bhi kya sochega?😕😕
Rahul-Well..kya yeh navin ki koi long lost girlfriend hain??....mere tum loggon se milney ke pehle??😕

Raj wanted to kill Rahul

Naina-Girlfriend??😲

Raj-Ahh naina...ruko thoda....rahul!!..(he said angrily)😡😡
Rahul-Ohh god...yeh Raj kaisa aadmi hain...dekho naina...tum bas dukhi thi...aur tumhe apna dukh kisi se batna tha.......woh raj he sahi!...aggar main wahhan hota toh tum mujhe hug karti!!..😊

Rahul tried to make the situation lighter!!

Rahul-Ah kash..main wahan hota!!
😛😛
These were the nice funny lines in ur fic which lighten the mood yaar really.😆😆
Vaise mujhe nahi pata tha abhi tak ki Rahul itna bhi caring ho sakta hai yaar.😉😉
He is so sweet.😊😊
Paise ki khatir doste thode chodega na.😃😃
update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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