Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)'The Concluding Part' pg. 99

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Posted: 16 years ago

#561

HIII VARTIKA HOW R U ?
UD WAS
TOOOOO GOOOOOD
MINDBLOWING
AWESOMEEEEEEEEE
BEAUTIFUL
RAJ NAINA KE SCENES BAHUT HI AACHE THE
WAITING FOR NEXT PART
JALDI KARNA KAHA HO AAJKAL

LOVE
DEEPA

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#562

Wonderful update.Too good.

Now continue soon dear.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 16 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 16 years ago

#563

Its good to see that raj naina ko apnana chahta hai...and he is even started making an attempt. The was between his mind and heart has come to an end and he has realised that he loves naina very much.

The flashback was very nice...Naina relaised that it was due to her misunderstanding that all of this had happended. It was very brave of her to decide that she will make raj happy by marring him.

Raj uske aur naina ki shaadi ki baat sunkar gussa hota hai...which is understandable...but naina's determination aur koshish ke aage raj yeh shaadi ke liye maan jata hai

please continue soon

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Rituka

@rituka7

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Posted: 16 years ago

#564

damn cool
awesome
superb
update soon
waiting for next update soon

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sanjana25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#565

yeh dey finally kissed so cool plz contd soon and thanx for the pm

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Yasmin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#566

"haan tum !" 😳 how romantic is that line .. kash he said it for me ☺️☺️

Anyways Brilliant Update Di, from the Kiss to the flash back .. it was delicious ☺️

Now i feel that everythings gonna go good, Raj and Naina will become one again and this time because they want to and nhot because they have too 😳 hopefully this time round koi haddi na aa jaye bich main 😕 specially that Ritu 🤢 pehle bhi uske vajhe se kitna kuch ho gaya 😡 btw why didn't Naina tell Raj about what Ritu did 😕

Oh yes before i forget, i love how Naina is so Stubborn, the way she's constantly behind Rajveer, even if he's rude 😳😆 she's so sweet .. she really does love her Veer doesn't she 😳 and Veer, i feel so sorry for him .. he's always loved Naina, but because of the Guilt he can't accept her .. thank god he never loved Vish 😃 that makes me so much happier .. i know that Vish and Naina look alike but i still hate Vish, and yes i know she's dead and was really nice 😕 but still she .. although unknowingly became the fasad ka jhad that's why i don't like her ...

Continue soon Di , Loved this Update 😳

Take Care 🤗

yasmin

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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#567

sab se pahle...is MOTI k muh me keede...us k muh me dhul... 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

idiot ne achhe khaase romantic scene ka kabada kar diya...😡!!! is ki aqal kya ghaas charne gayi thi...😡!!! agar malkin...malik ko bulane jaye aur wapas hi na aaye toh do hi matlab hota hai na...😃 😆!!! pahla yeh ki ya toh malkin ne malik ka khun kar diya ya malik ne malkin ka khum kar diya😆 😆 😆...aur dushra option yeh hai ki...shayad voh kisi khaas kaam me busy hain...😉 😉 😉!!! ab pahlewala scene toh ho nahin sakta... 😆 😆 😆obviously dushrewala scene ki jyada fit baithta hai na...!!! tabhi is ullu de patthe ko chillana tha...!!!😡

vaiseeeeeeeeeeee... itne dino baad raj k dil ne mere dil ki baat kah di...ki us ne us tym me jo kuch bhi kiya tha...voh bilkul sahi tha...😉 😉 😉!!! mera dil bhi bilkul yahi kah raha hai...😛 😛 😛!!! chalo...raj ne kadam toh badhya...😃 😃 😃!!! ab toh use baht kuch karna hai...😉 😉 😉!!! oye... dushre meanings se mat soch😆 😆 😆...mere kahne ka matlab hai ki...abhi raj ko naina se yeh bhi toh kahna hai ki voh us se kitna pyar karta hai...😳 😳 😳!!! tabhi toh sare bandhan tod kar un dono ka pyar aage badhega...aur hum sab seeti marenge...!!!😛 😛 😛

flashback was nyc...😃!!! naina ko jaise hi pata chala ki yeh sab misunderstanding ki wajah se hui hai toh us ne bhi pakka iraada bana liya ki voh raj ki zindagi me khushiyan la kar hi rahegi...😃 😃 😃!!! mujhe sab se jyada achha laga naina ka raj ko directly kahna...😃 😃 😃!!! raj toh pahle gussa hua...jo ki jayaj tha...par...phir use naina k samne jhukna hi pada...!!!😃 😃 😃

alekh bhi soch me hai ki kis insaan ki wajah se teen logon ki zindagiyaan barbaad ho gayi...!!! arre yaar...alekh apna baht smart banda hai toh voh us main villian ko dhudh bhi lega aur sab k samne us ka bhanda bhi phod dalega...!!!😃 😃 😃

beautiful ud(sirf MOTI wale part ko chod kar😡)....!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

cont soon.

Edited by Lion_Priya - 16 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 16 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: vvdn
Hey really nice update..
thanks Namita tumhare hi vajah se aaj ye fic chal rahi hai. 😊 😊 😊

Rahul is indeed a best friend whatever he said to Raj is right n Raj bhi uska asar ho raha hai...
ab kab tak asar nahi hoga, kabhi na kabhi to hoga hi. 😉 😉 😉

accha hai! aur Alekh sahab shart jit gaye😛 n m happy ki Raj ki galatfahmi bhi dur ho gayi...
RN hain par fb bhi hai kyounki vo jaroori bhi hai 😛 😛 😛. Aise shartein vo jeeta hi kare to accha hi hai. 😉 😉 😉

m really looking forward for next update..so plzzzzzzzzz update asap n this time only RN no Alekh ok....waiting for update.
u got it n next update will b in 10 days 😉 😉 😉

thanks a lot dear 😉 😉 😉

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 16 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: pritib0
hiii vertika.....
the ud was...........
awesoooome............
superb......
gr8.....
excellent....
just too good............
do cont.soon.........

thanks Preeti dear 😊 😊 😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#570

Originally posted by: arpita25
I read it's one more update.
Raj aur Naina k beech me koi relation nahi bana hai abhi tak par Raj ab shak kyoun kar raha hai Alekh k liye Naina pe? Specially vo phone vaala scene bahut funny tha jahan Naina aur Alekh baat kar rahe the. Mujhe poora vishwas hai ki jaroor ye call Raj ne kiya tha check karne k liye. Ek husband ho k apni biwi ko Karwachauth pe saari nahi dilwa sakta hai vo.

Naina abhi bhi Vishu ko yaad kar k roti hai to Alekh sahara deta hai us ko.

Thanks for reading it. 😊 😊 😊
Raj k liye itna asaan nahi hai us k saath jo bhi hua hai us ko bhool paana aur Naina ki koshishon me kahin kami nahi hai bus baat ehsaas karne ki hai aur purane ehsaas vapas laane ki hai jo jaldi hi aa jaayenge. 😛 😛 😛 Haan sach hai ki Raj ne check karne k liye phone kiya tha kyounki vo insecure feel kar raha hai ab Naina ko le k.😆 😆 😆
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