Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)'The Concluding Part' pg. 99

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Prerna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#441

that was really good

now almost everything is cleard

plz continue soon

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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#442

emotional ud tha yaar...!!! 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

thodi khusi thoda ghum...!!! khusi is baat ki k raj aur vishu k shaadi ki mystery clear ho gayi...!!! 😊

lekin ghum is baat ka hai ki ek galat-faimi ki wajah se vishu ko apni jaan deni padi...!!! aur raj-naina dono vishu ki maut ka zimmedar khud ko samajhte hain...!!!

khaas kar k raj ki situation baht hi pain-full hai...!! vo na thik se apni pyar ko pa saka.aur na hi vishu k liye kuch kar saka...!!! hala ki in sab me raj-naina-vaishali kisi ka bhi kusur nahin hai...!!! 😲

mujhe lagta hai...jis ladki ne phone uthaya tha...vo Reetu hogi...!!! itne ghatiya kaam to sirf usi ki hi duty hai...!!!😡

naina ka gussa apni jagah par sahi tha...!!! par use bhi samajhna chahiye ki raj abhi kis halat me hai...!!! 😊

aur sayad vishu ki hi wajah se raj ne naina se shaadi toh kar liya...lekin vo vishu ko nahin bhul paya...!!! kyoun ki vo khud ko us k maut ka wajah manta hai...!!!😕

very nice ud dear...!!!😊

cont soon.😊

aur haan...apna khayal rakhna...!!!😊

Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago

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varshita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#443

Good ud sweety.
Raj k aur Vaishali k rishte k baare me dheere dheere saara sach saamne aa raha hai. Finally Vishal ki help se Vaishali ko hospital me admitt bhi kara diya gaya aur fir bhi Raj ki hi chinta lagi thi Vishu ko ki vo khush rahe us ladki se shaadi kar k jis se vo pyaar karta hai.
Raj ka behavior justified tha apni wife k liye n i really liked ur portraying emotions nicely. Well done sweety this was just perfect. Mujhe Vishu par taras aa raha tha aur us se bhi jyada dard Raj ko is gum me dekhne ka hai.
Finally Naina aa gayi aur us ko pata chal gaya ki Vishu ki maut ho gayi hai aur vo is ka jimmedaar Raj ko samajh rahi hai. Fir bhi us ne Raj k ghar ko theek kiya that was nice.
ud soon dear don't take much time.

Edited by varshita - 16 years ago

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 16 years ago

#444

gr8 updt n very dramatic as well as emotional one too......

awesome dialogues too

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Yasmin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#445

first of all i have commented on the other Update, so do check it out ..

Now coming to this update it was really sad ... Raj poori tarha se toot gayya .. Man i feel sorry for him, i know he Never loved Vish and Never will, but it does hurt alot when you start believing that some died because of you ...

anyways i feel sory for Raj's Mom aswell, she did try to get Naina and Raj married but i'm sure it was the stupid Ritu who picked up the phone instead of Naina's Mom ... that stupid ***** hate her ..

anyways Naina bhi all sad wad .. she loved her sister alot, isn't that the reason why she let Raj and Vish get married .. but yeh kya can't believe that she thought Raj uss ki di ki maut ka zimmedar hain, atleast she found out she was wrong ..

But what did she see, that she's all shocked at the end ...

anyways

Take care di ..

Yashu

Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 16 years ago

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Pinka

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Posted: 16 years ago

#446

mahak yaar
itni sad update di tune
RAj to puri trah se tutu gaya yaar
vo to shayd imagine bhi nahin ker skat tha ki vaishu k sang aisa hoga
aur ab vo aisa soch raha hai ki ye uski vajh se hua
aur vaishu ki akhri khwaish ne to use zindagi se aaur dur ker diya
uski khwaish raj ko zindagi dene ki thi per ab shayd hi vo zindagi ka matalb yaad rakh paye...
sase chodte hue vo uski khushiya bhi chod gayi...
shayd yahi vajh ki aaj bhi use vaishu ka dard naina k pass ane nahin deta...
aur use dina kya hua tha shadi k didn kisne baat suni use ph pe kon hai vo ladki jisne in tin zindagi ki zindagi badal di...
kahin vo witch[ nam yaad naahin sorry] jiski vajh se RN ka break up hua
jo bhi ho iska harjana vaishu ko apni mot se chukana pada
naina jo RAj ko uski di ki mot ka karan samjhti hai uski halat dekh ker hairana hai
per ab bhi ye saaf nahin ki inki shadi kaasie hui....
and aur kya ye kaareeb honge kabhi
tu jaldi update kerna plz

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Nisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#447

A very emotional update…

Finally hume pata chal gaya ki vaishali uar raj ke beech kya hua tha….vaishali ki maut kaise hui thi.

Sirf ek misunderstanding ki wajah se vaishali ne apni jaan de di aur baki sab ki zindagi bikhar gayi.Raj aur naina dono hi apne aap ko vaishali ka gunehgar mante hai.

Raj apne app ko abhi tak is baat ke lia maaf nahi kar paya..uska dard sabse zyada tha kyunki who na to naina ke saath apne pyar ko nibha paya aur nahi vaishali ke lia kuch kar paya..uski to haar dono taraf se hui thi…upar se naina jab lauti toh usne bhi raj ko hi doshi tehraya..us waqt naina ka gussa apni jagah sahi tha.

Par in sab mein raj, naina ya vaishali ka koi kasur nahi tha…whp kaun tha jisne us din phone utha ya tha…usi ki wajah se yeh sari galaf femi hui thi..

Raj ne naina se shadi to kar li par who abhi bhi khud ko vaishali ki maut ke liye maaf nahi kar paya hai..

I hope that now with alekh and neelu's help…raj aur naina ki relationship improve hogi.

please continue soon

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desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#448

yaar pata nahi last page open nahi ho raha hai to shayad reply ko edit na kar paaon.😔

nice ud.😊 Raj k liye bahut dukh hua. Aakhir us ne koi aise galti to nahi ki hai na ki us ko aise saza mile.😭 Uper se Naina bhi abhi us ko galat samajh rahi hai. 😒

Raj ko aisa dhakka laga hai ki vo ab kuch nahi bolta hai. Bhagwaan kare sab jaldi se sab theek ho jaaye.

Phir bhi Naina ne Raj ka ghar theek kiya, ye ek positive cheej bhi show kar raha hai. Naina ne lekin aisa kya dekha jis ko dekh k vo shock ho gayi thi.😕