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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ~~ashi~~

Hahahaha!!!! - i cud see u had fun

hehehe..... Somehow i feel Naina is just toooo desperate to.... u know what!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - hmmm oh no i guess we'll have to change the way she is projected then.

Raj, just do it!!! either the girl will die of longing or vl be forced to think tht u ....well, cant!!! πŸ˜† - hehehehe i've been getting this response from many as they all have been started doubting our poor Raj. Lagta hai ab kuch jaldi karna hee parega.

do not take this in thr wrong way, i made this comment in good jest! :D - i know i never mind anything

and.... ul think im crazy! i liked the way tht horrible woman Sonia was made a fool of but i did not like the way Raj laughed at her - ohhh thats a first. Well he just cant help it coz it really was funny.

tht is what R2 would do but not Raj - hmmm perhaps R2 Raj pe kuch ziada haawee horaha hai

PS- Im definitely not Sonia's fan πŸ˜† - oh i know as nobody is.


update soon πŸ˜ƒ


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Posted: 16 years ago
@vvdn- thanks and dont worry dont be scared Raj hain na πŸ˜†

that's y m toooooo scaredπŸ˜‰ pata nahi kab kya kar jaye !πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Yeh he's back and well right now in the form of a ghost which im sure wud be fun

ya m sure too n m waiting for fun so dear now it's ur duty to do arrangment .sooooooooo Update !!!


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Posted: 16 years ago
This time extremely sorry for being late again ....as my PC was giving trouble...
Nice title of this part actually the appropriate one...nice selection
He couldn't catch him ohhhh....who was he??
Lovely love making scene though incomplete but always brings a smile......I wonder everytime how he controls his urge? he has full control over his nerves....another speciality....
Ohhooo babes honey.....Raj beta Nainaji ne sunn liya na toh aapka bharta bana daalegi....so watch out
Haha poor raj a horrified sonia instead of beautiful naina....bechara...
So YUDI is backkkkkkkkkkkkkk...................hmm Raj ka another full proof plan....but he acted really well in front of his babes.....
You know awra I love horror movies n stories so when u'll be done with this fiction mere liye ek vampire ki story likhogi plss.....u narrated the horror scene really well...simply superb!!
Hmm but in this part no mention of abhi's name?lets see what's gonna come up in the next update....do inform me...bye tc
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Posted: 16 years ago

hello arwa, awesome update as usual....none of ur updates r less dan awesome.....yudi d zombie was very funny..i mean i was all laughing wid tears wen he scared R2......shud hv guessed dat yudi had to be back anyhow but u r unpredictable n dats d beauty of this fic......now pls dont take too much time n put up d next part asap....

love,

dhara....
Edited by crackpots86 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: diya7000

This time extremely sorry for being late again ....as my PC was giving trouble...- its okay i understand

Nice title of this part actually the appropriate one...nice selection - thanks a lot
He couldn't catch him ohhhh....who was he?? - hmmm the mystery continues.
Lovely love making scene though incomplete but always brings a smile......I wonder everytime how he controls his urge? he has full control over his nerves....another speciality.... - yeh u cud say that as for a man its really hard. Lets see how much longer he can resist it
Ohhooo babes honey.....Raj beta Nainaji ne sunn liya na toh aapka bharta bana daalegi....so watch out -hehehhee kahi baar bana chuki hai

Haha poor raj a horrified sonia instead of beautiful naina....bechara... - ab kya kare hamesha phas jaata hai
So YUDI is backkkkkkkkkkkkkk...................hmm Raj ka another full proof plan....but he acted really well in front of his babes..... - yeh well he is best in acting now isnt he
You know awra I love horror movies n stories so when u'll be done with this fiction mere liye ek vampire ki story likhogi plss.....u narrated the horror scene really well...simply superb!! - he we think alike. Hmmm sure ill defintiely try and write one for u
Hmm but in this part no mention of abhi's name?lets see what's gonna come up in the next update....do inform me...bye tc - yeh he wasnt there but we'll see him soon. Sure will do when the next one is done


Originally posted by: crackpots86

hello arwa, awesome update as usual....none of ur updates r less dan awesome.....yudi d zombie was very funny..i mean i was all laughing wid tears wen he scared R2......shud hv guessed dat yudi had to be back anyhow but u r unpredictable n dats d beauty of this fic......now pls dont take too much time n put up d next part asap....

love,

dhara....



thanks alot Dhara.

im glad u had fun reading this fic although it was meant to be scary hehehehe but it turned into a comedy.

hmmm yeh he had to be back and the unpredictability of this fic makes it what it is right now.


Edited by arwa72 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!!

The guy is trying to trick Raj and Raj is trying the same thing!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊

Bhaagte bhaagte bhi usne phone uthaya and I guess it was his girlfriend calling!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Bhaag raha hai woh usne suna phir bhi sawal pe sawal pooche jaa rahi hai!!!!

No wonder he got irritated and shut the phone!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj ne bhi mauke ka accha fayda uthaya and caught that guy!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌGood for him!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar kuch bolne se pehle hi woh bhaag gaya!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”O no!!!!

Naina kitni pareshaan ho rahi hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Poor her!!!!! Usse pata hai that things like this always happen in their lives but still!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina went and hugged him!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiii!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️And she was wiping her tears too!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj ne prepare kiya tha magar Naina ne had also prepared dishes and set up the table with candels!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina said she had made all his favourite food and on asking said jab dil se dil ki rah hoti hai toh aapne aap pata chal jata hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Haan woh toh hai!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊She is his wife toh usse toh sab kuch pata hoga hi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina usse pehle niwala khilane gayi!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Haaiii!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

But Raj is again teasing her!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Pehle toh samjhi nahi magar phir naraz ho gayi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Raj bhi naa!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Now he held her hand and licked off her finger and says its delicious!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Ab mana raha hai aur usse khila raha hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Ab Naina almost rone lagi but held them back!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Raj is really wonderful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

They are feeding each other with teasing here and there!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›How romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj uski mehendi dekhke kehta hai ke aaj sach much uski dulhaan lag rahi hai and he kissed her palms!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj kehta hai ke accha hai pheeka nahi huya warna woh mar hee jaata!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina put her hand over his mouth!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj kehta hai if he found out his love is not enough for her then he would have died!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Haaaiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He is alive because of her love and she too!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Their love is really beyond words and beyond description!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Naina ko lagta hai Raj ko uski mehendi mein apna naam nahi milega but he said Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhwat ne bahut se codes decode kiye hai toh ismein kya hai!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kya confidence hai!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊He had found it in the first instance but he is teasing her by not finding it!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›He is so cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj kehta hai uske naam aur kaha hoga siwai Naina ke dil pe aur yeh toh usne bahut pehle se likh diya tha toh usse dhundhne ki kya zaroorat hai!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Haaaiii!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina is teasing Raj!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†When he saw her lips covered in chocolate he got aroused and kissed her!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It was so romantic and passionate!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He said that was more fun than eating off the tub!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He is impossible but he has an answer to that as well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Naina wants him to take her but he said now is not the right time!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Even though he has a hard time controlling his male urges!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj wants that when he makes love to her he showers her with all the love he has for her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He loves her so much!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

But Raj always wants to wait for the right time!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ish baar jeet sirf unki hogi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Bhargav toh uske boss ko bhi mat dene ke chakkar mein hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Aur yeh kaunse safe ki baat kar raha hai??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Raj ko ek latch mila and he found that teh bookcase moves!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Seems like there is a secret door there and something is hidden!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Sonia's windows mysteriously kept opening and she saw Yudi!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲But Yudi is dead!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Sonia is really terrified!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊But I think its someone trying to scare Sonia!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Well its either that Yudi is back or someone is dressed as Yudi to scare her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh Sonia ki wajah se Raj was not able to steal the documents from Bhargav's safe!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Sonia is just clutching onto Jai for help!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Raj just wants to get rid of her but by the time she left Bhargav had returned!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Damn!!!!

Sonia needed R2 right now!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Jab dekho she wants him!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Raj changed into R2 and went to meet Naina!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He was climbing up but that scream made him loose his balance and he fell!!!!! Poor him!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

This Sonia is just clinging to him and Raj wants to go!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Raj is surprised to hear about Yudi!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Sonia saw Yudi again and then Raj also saw him!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Its Yudi's zombie and he wants to kill them!!!!!

Raj and Sonia are just running for their lives and then Raj told her to separate!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Sonia came to part where obviously no one comes and wheer she had never been before and she is trapped!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Yudi tried to kill Sonia and she was just terrified and running for her life and finally passed out!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

This was spooky but also hilarious!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣Obviously it was not a real zombie but I loved seeing scared and running for her life!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Who was the man laughing over her??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Was it Abhimanyu or Raj??😊 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!! - thanks very much

The guy is trying to trick Raj and Raj is trying the same thing!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 - two of a kind

Bhaagte bhaagte bhi usne phone uthaya and I guess it was his girlfriend calling!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - yes ur right

Bhaag raha hai woh usne suna phir bhi sawal pe sawal pooche jaa rahi hai!!!! - well women sometimes can be dumb

No wonder he got irritated and shut the phone!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - anyone wud

Raj ne bhi mauke ka accha fayda uthaya and caught that guy!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌGood for him!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 - well he is the clever one here

Magar kuch bolne se pehle hi woh bhaag gaya!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”O no!!!! - too bad

Naina kitni pareshaan ho rahi hai!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Poor her!!!!! Usse pata hai that things like this always happen in their lives but still!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - ab wo kya kare she is a wife right then and thats it

Naina went and hugged him!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiii!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️And she was wiping her tears too!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 - she was too scared

Raj ne prepare kiya tha magar Naina ne had also prepared dishes and set up the table with candels!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - yep it was very sweet of her to think abt making him happy this time

Naina said she had made all his favourite food and on asking said jab dil se dil ki rah hoti hai toh aapne aap pata chal jata hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Haan woh toh hai!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊She is his wife toh usse toh sab kuch pata hoga hi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yep on dono ka dil ka rishta hai.

Naina usse pehle niwala khilane gayi!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Haaiii!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - just like a typical wife

But Raj is again teasing her!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Pehle toh samjhi nahi magar phir naraz ho gayi!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Raj bhi naa!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - he just loves it to kya kare aadat se majboor

Now he held her hand and licked off her finger and says its delicious!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Ab mana raha hai aur usse khila raha hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - well he does have his ways of making her feel the way he wants her to

Ab Naina almost rone lagi but held them back!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Raj is really wonderful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - he surely is

They are feeding each other with teasing here and there!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›How romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - they are the most romantic couple

Raj uski mehendi dekhke kehta hai ke aaj sach much uski dulhaan lag rahi hai and he kissed her palms!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - yeh baat sirf Raj hee keh sakta hai

Raj kehta hai ke accha hai pheeka nahi huya warna woh mar hee jaata!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina put her hand over his mouth!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj kehta hai if he found out his love is not enough for her then he would have died!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Haaaiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - he is just showing how much he loves her

He is alive because of her love and she too!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Their love is really beyond words and beyond description!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ - yep u cud say something like that

Naina ko lagta hai Raj ko uski mehendi mein apna naam nahi milega but he said Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhwat ne bahut se codes decode kiye hai toh ismein kya hai!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - phirse he began khud kee shaikhee per Raj pe bohat suit karta hai which im sure u agree too

Kya confidence hai!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊He had found it in the first instance but he is teasing her by not finding it!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›He is so cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - very cute.

Raj kehta hai uske naam aur kaha hoga siwai Naina ke dil pe aur yeh toh usne bahut pehle se likh diya tha toh usse dhundhne ki kya zaroorat hai!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Haaaiii!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - ab isse zida kisee ko kya chaheeye u tell me. Raj is just amazing isnt he

Naina is teasing Raj!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†When he saw her lips covered in chocolate he got aroused and kissed her!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - he surely has his ways of enjoying.

It was so romantic and passionate!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - thanks

He said that was more fun than eating off the tub!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He is impossible but he has an answer to that as well!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - as i said he has his own ways of enjoying and yeh he has an answer for everything thats why he is what he is.

Naina wants him to take her but he said now is not the right time!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Even though he has a hard time controlling his male urges!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - oh yeh u'll be surprised how hard it is for him

Raj wants that when he makes love to her he showers her with all the love he has for her!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️He loves her so much!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ - yeh he loves her a lot that it cant be measured

But Raj always wants to wait for the right time!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - yep he sure does for her sake

Ish baar jeet sirf unki hogi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ - isme koi shak nahi

Bhargav toh uske boss ko bhi mat dene ke chakkar mein hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Aur yeh kaunse safe ki baat kar raha hai??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - well he is just a whole and soul evil man and the safe where the trigger info is.

Raj ko ek latch mila and he found that teh bookcase moves!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Seems like there is a secret door there and something is hidden!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - yep finally he found something

Sonia's windows mysteriously kept opening and she saw Yudi!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲But Yudi is dead!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• - perhaps she is dreaming

Sonia is really terrified!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊But I think its someone trying to scare Sonia!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 - she really is and yeh perhaps someone is or its the real thing

Well its either that Yudi is back or someone is dressed as Yudi to scare her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 - interesting specualtion lets see what happens.

Yeh Sonia ki wajah se Raj was not able to steal the documents from Bhargav's safe!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 - ab iskee bhi hamesha ghalat timing hoti hai

Sonia is just clutching onto Jai for help!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Raj just wants to get rid of her but by the time she left Bhargav had returned!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’Damn!!!! - yeh poor Jai he couldnt finish his job ad it was Sonia's fault

Sonia needed R2 right now!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Jab dekho she wants him!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ - ek chipkoo jo ban chukee hai

Raj changed into R2 and went to meet Naina!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›So sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 - aakhir or kaha jaaehga

He was climbing up but that scream made him loose his balance and he fell!!!!! Poor him!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” - yeh poor him looks like it isnt his good time right now

This Sonia is just clinging to him and Raj wants to go!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Raj is surprised to hear about Yudi!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 - it did cum as a shock for him too

Sonia saw Yudi again and then Raj also saw him!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Its Yudi's zombie and he wants to kill them!!!!! - yeh he's back with a vengeance

Raj and Sonia are just running for their lives and then Raj told her to separate!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 - i cud see u got the joke to it.

Sonia came to part where obviously no one comes and wheer she had never been before and she is trapped!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - just like in a typcal horror novel

Yudi tried to kill Sonia and she was just terrified and running for her life and finally passed out!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 - aakhir ose behosh to hona hee tha either out of fear or by Yudi

This was spooky but also hilarious!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣Obviously it was not a real zombie but I loved seeing scared and running for her life!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† - thanks, i'm glad u enjoyed urself. Hmm so u think he is not really dead, okay lets see how far true that is. I'm sure u did enjoye seeing Sonia run around like that.

Who was the man laughing over her??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Was it Abhimanyu or Raj??😊 😊 😊 😊 - aha so u cant guess everything now can u. Well you'll surely find out soon.



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when will u ud arwa??????????????????????????????
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guys i have a problem with my comp so wont be able to do it till tuesday or wednesday im afraid.

sorry for keeping u waiting.
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will u be updating today arwa?????????

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