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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz cont' soon......... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veronica4eva

ooooooooooo da next part is coming tomorrow..jus wait n watch...it will b quite boring but the part after dat will change da lives of angad n kripa...btw thank u sooooooooooooo much maryam n every1!!!!! awwww ur so sweet!

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veronica

veronica u r sweet ur self😳😛

i cant wait for tomorow to read the next part😊its getting more n more intersting👏cont soooooooooooooooooooon sweety😊

lob 😳

maryam😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: nottyangel

veronica u r sweet ur self😳😛

i cant wait for tomorow to read the next part😊its getting more n more intersting👏cont soooooooooooooooooooon sweety😊

lob 😳

maryam😳

guys..i've jus finished typing it up....so it will be up now!!

Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Episode 4:


New character introduced:
Dadi: Very important character (you will get to know her in the next episode).



Continued:



After the kiss:
Everyone was so shocked that they couldn't even say a word. Kripa and Angad slowly opened their eyes. They both looked at each other. All of a sudden Kripa realised what she did and straight away she pushed Angad away from herself and they both couldn't believe what they had just did.
Angad and Kripa (together): Eeeewwww
They both looked around them. Everyone's eyes were glued on them. Kripa and Angad made a face as if they were going to puke any second.
Kripa ran out of the disco nudging and moving anyone who came in front of her.
Angad was the only one on the dance floor. He looked at Kavya and gave him a fake laugh and also ran out of the disco.


Once Angad and Kripa had left the disco:
Everyone in the disco start talking about what had just happen between Angad and Kripa. Angili turned around to Kavya and punched him on his arm.
Kavya: "What the crap…meine kya kiya?"
Angili "I know this was your and Angad's plan just to insult my best friend Kripa!!!"
Kavya: "What? Believe me, I never knew about the kiss, and by the way Kripa kissed Angad back."
Angili (stopped hitting him): "Yeah, that's true… WHAT'S GOING ON BETWEEN THEM TWO???"
Saying this, Angili walked out of the disco. After a little time, everyone also left the disco.


After the disco: In Kripa's hotel room
Kripa ran into her room. She closed the door behind her. She kept on having flashbacks of the kiss. Kripa went into the bathroom and quickly splashed her face with water. The kiss came in her head again. She felt so sick, she even start brushing her teeth.
When Kripa came out of the bathroom, she saw Angili had come back from the disco. Kripa didn't know where to hide her face. But then Angili asked her about what was between her and Angad.
Angili: "Kripa whatever happened in the disco… (She was interrupted)...
Kripa: "Look Angili. I don't want to talk about this topic, please. I don't know what had got into me… (She couldn't finish her sentence, as she was speechless).
Angili: "Kripa, if there is anything between you and Angad then tell me!"
Kripa (shouting): "NO WAY! And even if there was, what has that got to do with you. This is my life. Mind your own business."
Saying this Kripa folded her arms and turned the other way.
Angili was really hurt by Kripa's words, she ran out of their hotel room crying. Kripa slammed the door behind her. All of a sudden, Kripa realised at what she had said to Angili... she felt what she had said was wrong and Kripa thought of going to say sorry to Angili when the door knocked.


Once Angili had left the hotel room: Angad entered
When Kripa opened the door, she was shocked to find it was none other than Angad at the doorstep. Kripa tried to shut the door but couldn't because Angad had already came in. He quickly shut the door.
Kripa: "Ye kya batamizi hai?"
Angad: "Kripa… whatever happened in the disco, please don't tell mom and dad."
Kripa: "First off- this was meant to be my line, secondly- whatever happened between me and you…well I don't know what that was, and thirdly- are you stupid or something, why would I tell uncle and aunty (Angad's mum and dad) when if my mum and dad find out... then I'm dead!!!"
Angad: "Yeah, I know and me. Plus it might ruin our parent's friendship. So it's best if we stay shut!"
Kripa: "True, you're absolutely right…hey what am I saying? GET OUT OF MY ROOM NOW!!!"
Angad: "O.K., O.K…. miss bossy boots. By the way, your kiss was really (Angad pulled a naughty face)….
Kripa (angrily): STUT UP and get out of my room!"
Just when Angad was about to leave the room, Kripa's mobile rang. So when she was on the phone, Angad stayed back for a little while.
Kripa: "Hello."
Gayathri (angrily): "Kripa, come home now… you and Angad!"
Kripa: "But mum…"
Gayathri: "NOW!!!"
Gayathri put the phone down. So did Kripa. Kripa looked at Angad and told him that her mum was telling me and you to come home… now.
Kripa: "Oh shit Angad; do you this they've found out?"
Angad "Don't be so stupid Kripa. How could they find out??? Think positive for once! Anyway you get your bags ready; I'll be waiting for you outside the hotel."
Once Angad and Kripa got their luggage ready, they got into a taxi they had stopped and drove back to Mumbai. Both of them left a letter behind and said it was urgent so they had to go back home tonight, Kripa also wrote an apology letter to Angili saying she was sorry for what she said to her earlier on.
On the way to Mumbai, Angad and Kripa didn't even say a word to each other.

In Mumbai:
When they got to Mumbai, The taxi driver first dropped off Kripa to her house. Just when the driver was about to leave with Angad, Gayathri and Naina called him from the window sill and told him to come in with Kripa. So Angad paid the driver, got out of the taxi and stood next to Kripa at the doorstep of her house. When they rang the doorbell, an old woman opened the door. Angad and Kripa's faces lit up, both got surprised looks on their face and said: "DADI!!!"



Hope you liked it
Veronica

P.S
Next episode will bring an even bigger twist in the lives of Angad and Kripa…they will live differently in the next episode and even act completely different to each other.

Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Veronica,
I love ur fanfic.....its too good(loved the kissing scene 😳 ) 👏......keep going!
Plz try 2 continue fast 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome stroy plezzzzzzzzzzzz continue 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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IMPORTANT NOTICE:
AS THIS WEEK IS EID AND I WILL BE CELEBRATING IT... I WONT HAVE ANYTIME TO CONTINUE IT THIS WEEK...SO YOU GUYS WILL HAVE TO WAIT ANOTHER WEEK...BUT I PROMISE IT WILL B WORTH THE WAITING FOR!

😃 KEEP SMILING!
Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
hey veronica its was too good ..but its too bad got to wait for a week but as you say i am sure its worth a wait !
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Posted: 19 years ago
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exactly priya......i totally agree wid u...a week!omg i cant wait till then 😆


luv u guys 🤗

i luv u angad/zaib

pari
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
o.k o.k guys...as u cnt wait a week..i'll post da next part 4 u......it's my eid present 4 u!!!!!! 😃 😆

Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago

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