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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 cont..... soon pliz 👏 👏
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plz continue as soon as possable!!!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!
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👏 lovely story plezzzzzz continue
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hey guys here it is:

Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago
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Episode 3:





New Characters Introduced:
Kavya (Played by Eijaz Khan) - Angad's best friend, mature, has a girlfriend, caring and basically is a nice guy.

Angili (Played by Natasha) - Kripa's best friend, Kavya's girlfriend, immature, bratty, dopey, acts like a child but is a sweet girl.



Continuing:



In Kripa's Hotel Room:
As Kripa shared the same room as her best friend Angili, she helped her get ready for the disco (Kripa punked her hair up). Once both of them were ready, they went to call the rest of the girls and they all went to the disco together.


In Angad's Hotel Room:
Even Angad shared the same room with his best friend Kavya. Once they got ready, they also went to call all the guys and went to the disco together.


At Ihe Disco:
Another reason why Angad and Kripa were always together was because both of their best friends were dating each other (Kavya and Angili). So as soon as the guys and the girls came to the disco, they went to the dance floor together and danced to 'Nach Baliye' from the film Bunty aur Babli. Angad, Kripa, Kavya and Angili were left behind.
Kavya: "C'mon Angili, lets dance?"
Angili: "No Kavya, how about if my sandal breaks."
Kavya: "Well, who said we're going to dance like buffalo's?"
Angili: "Shut up Kavya, forget it…I'm not going to dance at all now!"
Kavya: "Yes you are!"
Kavya quickly picked Angili up and took her to the dance floor. Angad and Kripa started to laugh but then there was silence between the two. Angad tried to think of a conversation for him and Kripa because they looked like idiots just standing, doing nothing. But Angad couldn't think of anything to they both stood there, looking at everyone else dance.


On The Dance Floor: The Plan
While Kavya and Angili were dancing, Kavya looked at Angad and Kripa (like I said: everyone loved Angad and Kripa's 'Jodi', so this was what happened).
Kavya: "Hey Angili, look there (he pointed at Angad and Kripa).
Angili (as she was the dopey one): "So? We see them everyday, what about them?"
Kavya: "You're so stupid Angili, what I'm trying to say is that Angad and Kripa are the only ones not dancing."
Angili: "So?"
Kavya (sighs): "So, we will have to do something."
Angili: "Like?"
Kavya: "Like get them to dance… alone… on this dance floor. Look, I'll tell you: I will tell the DJ to play a special song for Angad and Kripa and I'll tell him to ask them to dance on the dance floor. Good idea?"
Angili (screams): "Brilliant idea!!!"
Kavya: "Sssshhh, c'mon get in action."
Angili (excited): "O.k. c'mon!"
After saying this, Angili went up to Angad and Kripa. Kavya went to the DJ and told him about the plan and told him what song to play.


Once 'Nach Baliye' Had Finished:
The DJ asked everyone to clear the dance floor and to please be quiet. He said that there was a special song for these two special people.
Everyone including Angad and Kripa were confused as to who was the 'special' song for.
Suddenly the DJ called out Angad and Kripa's name and told them to come on the dance floor and dance together. Angad and Kripa refused to do so, but then Angili dragged them to the dance floor and went back to where she was standing. Kavya came and stood next to her and asked her if she wanted a drink. Angili said she would want a drink so Kavya went and bought himself and Angili a glass of Coke.
Angili: "I've got a feeling that something big is going to happen tonight."
Kavya: "What do you mean?"
Angili: "I don't know, now shut up and watch Angad and Kripa dance."
Kavya rolled his eyes and then looked at Angad and Kripa.


On The Dance Floor: The Dance Starts
Angad and Kripa just stood in the middle of the dance floor doing nothing. Suddenly the song started. The song was 'Tinka Tinka' from the film Karam (a slow, romantic song). Angad put his hand out gesturing for a dance. Kripa put her hand on top of his and they both started to dance. Everyone was watching them.


Off The Dance Floor:
Angili started sobbing while watching Angad and Kripa and said to Kavya the Angad and Kripa was such a cute couple. Kavya quickly got a tissue out of his pocket and gave it to Angili to wipe her FAKE tears!


On The Dance Floor:
While the song was playing, Angad kept moving Kripa towards him.


Off The Dance Floor:
Arpita saw what was happening and she went up to Kavya with her big bar of chocolate (she always ate chocolate, that's why she was so fat). She cried to Kavya saying that she thought Angad loved her and Arpita hugged Kavya.
Kavya thought he was going to suffocate with that big beast squeaking him, but he was thankful to Angili because she pushed Arpita off him and told her to stay away from her boyfriend (Kavya). Arpita just got up and start eating her chocolate again and walked away. Kavya thanked Angili and she said it was o.k. and then she kissed him on his cheek. Then they both started watching Angad and Kripa dance again.


Back On The Dance Floor:
Angad and Kripa were still dancing. As the song played and Angad was moving Kripa closer and closer to him, sooner or later they were so close to each other that they could hear each other's heart beat. They both looked deep into each other's eyes. Their faces came closer and closer. Suddenly the song finished and everyone started to clap at Angad and Kripa for their lovely performance. But Angad and Kripa were still in their dancing positions. They kept looking deep into each other's eyes when Angad went really, really close to Kripa and kissed her… ON HER LIPS… in front of everyone. Kripa kissed him back. Everyone was shocked. Angili dropped and broke her glass of Coke and Arpita dropped her bar of chocolate.
Angili: "OH MY GOD!!!"
Kavya: "WHAT THE..."
Everyone (whispering to each other): "What the crap is happening?!!"
Angad and Kripa were still kissing but then slowly aparted their lips.





Hope You Liked It

Veronica



Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg....that was a BIIIIIIIIIIIIG twist!! 😲
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37

wht happen...didnt u like it???

😭😭😭

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Posted: 19 years ago
#38

😕

Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
that was good!!! please cont soon!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
continue soon. That was really goood.

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