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Posted: 19 years ago
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man when will u continue im lookin foward to reading this fanfic
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kaha ho tum pleae continue soon
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plz plz continue the startin is really good!!
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the first part was awesome 👏 plz cont soon
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Originally posted by: angelic shaz

fab
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was a great starting
plz cont fastttt 😆
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love the starting, continue soon.
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Episode 1:





Khanna House: Morning On Monday
Angad came downstairs after getting ready for college. Prithvi, Naina and Dilip were already downstairs eating breakfast at the dinner table. Angad came and sat next to Prithvi on the table. They all start talking; Naina and Dilip told Angad and Prithvi that they've invited the Sharma family for dinner on the weekend. Naina also warned Angad and Prithvi that not to mess around, especially Angad- not to play tricks on Kripa. Angad makes a sad face, as he liked doing that, but agreed. Prithvi was happy as he could spend more time with Simone. After eating, Prithvi and Angad went to college but they first went to collect Kripa and Simone, as Prithvi always wanted Simone to come with him to college.


At Sharma House: Morning
Simone had got ready and went downstairs. She was waiting for Kripa, but Kripa was still doing her makeup. Simone called for her and told her that Angad and Prithvi had come so hurry up. Kripa was still looking for a right lip gloss, so she picked a few and quickly ran downstairs. Simone and Kripa said goodbye to Gayatri and Suryban. They both ran outside, as Angad was sitting in the driver's seat, and Prithvi in the back, Kripa had to sit at the front with Angad and Simone with Prithvi in the back.


In The Car: Going To College:
Prithvi and Simone start talking and Prithvi told Simone about the dinner they were invited to. Simone said that she knew already because her mum had already told her. Kripa overheard this and quickly turned around and said to Simone that how come mum (Gayatri) never told her. Angad interrupted and said to Kripa who would want to tell her something. Kripa turned to Angad and whacked him on his head and told him that she wasn't talking to him and said to him not to butt in next time. Angad got angry and took all of Kripa's lip glosses off her hand and said to her to say sorry or he would throw them out of the window.
Angad: "Say sorry or you're not getting these back and I'll throw them out the window."
Kripa: "You dare, just give them back to me."
Angad: "First say Angad is the best!"
Kripa: "O.k. Angad is the best…now give them to me."
Angad gave the glosses to her and said to her that he can make her say anything. Kripa just ignored him because she knew if she said anything, Angad might do something even worse.
When they were about to arrive at college, Kripa quickly put on one of her baby pink glosses. While she was doing that, Angad turned his head round to her and gave her the dirties.


At College:
As Simone and Prithvi were in the same class as each other and Angad and Kripa were in the same class as each other, they went separate to their class rooms.


The Trips Announcement:
The bell rang and everyone had to go to their classrooms. Kripa went with her friends and Angad went with his friends. When they got there, all of them were surprised that the teacher was already there (normally he was late). They sat down in their seats. Once they settled down, the teacher start talking.
Teacher: "Today pupils, I have got something very important to tell you. As this class had the best exam results, I organised you a trip to Goa for this whole weekend. Don't worry, your not going to work there…I want you all to chill out. O.k. so be ready for this weekend."
Everyone in the classroom: "O.k. sir!"
The teacher left the room and then everyone start talking.
Kripa: "Hey Shalini, are you coming to Goa?"
Shalini (Kripa's friend): "Of course…are you?"
As Kripa was about to answer when she remembered that her family had dinner with the Khanna family on the weekend. She told Shalini that she might not be able to come because Angad's family invited them for dinner on the weekend. Shalini told her that she has to come. Kripa said she will try to ask her parents.
The day went and everyone went home.


At Sharma House:
Kripa told Simone about the trip. Simone said that she will support her in asking mum and dad.


Downstairs In Sharma House:
Suryban was reading the newspaper and Gayathri was getting the dinner table ready. Kripa went up to her dad and also told him about the trip. Suryban wasn't sure at first but then Simone told him that all of her friends are going to go with her. He still wasn't sure… but then Kripa quickly said that Angad was going to be with her so she will be fine (she didn't know why she used Angad's name but it helped). Suryban agreed on her going. Kripa was so happy. Her mum said that she will talk to Naina and tell her that Kripa won't be able to come to the dinner. Kripa ran upstairs and start packing her bags. She also phoned up her friends and told them she was coming.


At Khanna House:
Angad told Prithvi about the trip as well but wasn't sure that his dad will agree on him going because the Sharma's were really good friends of theirs and it would look bad if a member of Khanna family wasn't at the dinner. Prithvi told Angad that he was sure dad would agree. So they both went down and Prithvi told Dilip about the trip. Dilip said he wasn't sure, but all of a sudden Angad spoke and said that Kripa was coming. Dilip and Prithvi looked at Angad and Angad said that you can even ask uncle (Suryban). So Dilip asked Suryban if Kripa was going and he said that she was. Once Dilip talked to Suryban and put the phone down, he agreed on Angad going. Angad was so happy that he even told his mates he was coming. While he was packing his bags, he start thinking why he used Kripa's name for an excuse. But he didn't care…he was just happy that he was going to Goa.


Hope You Liked It
Veronica




Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago
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that was awsome please continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was a suchhhhhh a great partttt
plz cont soon veronicaaa 😆
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