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Vanita

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Posted: 19 years ago

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OMG!! That was good!!!!

I cant believe i forgot to read it on Friday!!!!!!!!..

i just remembered right now!!!! Oops!!!!! I bet u when friday comes i wont even remember!! 😕 😕

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Nausheen Khan

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Posted: 19 years ago

#292

hey guys, i jus wrote up my fan fic n i'm sure you'll like it....hopefully!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

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nutan

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Posted: 19 years ago

#293

hey plzzzz cont fast i cant waittt

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Posted: 19 years ago

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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon. 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago

#295

cant wait till the next part continue soon just cant wait till the next part comes

love this fan fic

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Vanita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#296

2 more days!!!

i say that now and when friday comes i will forget to read!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago

#297

1 more day to go cant wait till friday

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Nausheen Khan

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Episode 13:

Continue:

In the morning when Kripa woke up, she felt quite dizzy. Angad had just had a bath and came out in a white t-shirt and blue denim jeans on (girls, I can imagine him and boy does he look fit or what). Angad looked in the mirror and started combing his hair. Kripa looked at him in the mirror. Angad took a little glimpse of her and started laughing to himself.
Kripa: "What are you laughing at?"
Angad: "Nothing. It's just that- you're dead."
Kripa (worried): "What! Why? What have I done?"
Angad: "You will find that out when you go down today...Kripa, you're so dead!"
Saying this Angad continued combing his hair. Kripa got really worried and wanted to find out what she was in digs. She got out of her bed and ran into the bathroom. She quickly washed her face and brushed her teeth. When Kripa came out, she saw that Angad wasn't there (he had gone downstairs). Kripa quickly changed her clothes and went downstairs.

Downstairs in Khanna house:
As Kripa came down the stairs, she was really worried about what Angad had said to her. When Kripa came down, she saw that everyone was already at the breakfast table, having breakfast. Kripa walked up to the breakfast table.
Kripa: "Kya huwa, nobody called me for breakfast."
Dadi (moodily): "Hum aise logo ke saath kathe nahin hai."
Kripa (sulking): "Kyon? What did I do?"
Angad: "Very bad Kripa!"
Naina: "Ye tum humse pooch rahe ho. I can't believe you Kripa. I never expected this from you."
Angad: "Very bad Kripa".
Kripa (angry but nearly in tears):" Oh shut up Angad!!! At least tell me... meine kya kiya?"
Angad: "Kal raath...remember something?"
Kripa: "No! What happen last night?"
Dadi (burst out laughing): "NOTHING KRIPA!!! aaawww mera bacha. Don't worry. We are not angry with you."
Naina (also laughing): Kal raath tum nashe mein thi and Dadi told me how you were acting."
Kripa (relieved):"oh thank god. I'm sorry if I did anything stupid."
Dadi: "It's o.k. beta."
Kripa started to smile.
Angad: "Mum, aap ko yaad nahin? (turning to Kripa) very bad Kripa!"
Saying this Angad started laughing really loud. Kripa got angry at Angad because he kept on saying "very bad Kripa" for no reason and that was irritating her.
Kripa started hitting Angad. Angad tried to protect himself and ran upstairs in their room. Kripa ran after him. Dadi and Naina started laughing at them.

In Angad and Kripa's bedroom:
As soon as Angad ran into the room, he locked the door behind him. Kripa ran upstairs. She tried opening the door.
Kripa: "Angad, open the door or I will break it!"
Angad: "I will love to see you try."
Kripa tried really hard to open the door but was unable. As Kripa was still trying, and opened the door and Kripa fall right in, on top of Angad!

Hope you like it
Veronica

p.s
I was thinking of a weeks leap! What do you guys think?

Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago