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Episode 14:



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Kripa: "Ouch! That hurt."
Angad: "Get off me!"
Kripa looked at Angad and gave him an evil look.
Kripa: "Help me up then."
Angad picked Kripa off him. As soon as Angad took Kripa off him, Kripa started to playfully hit him.
Kripa: "Why were you annoying me downstairs?"
Angad: "leave me you tramp! You should be thankful to me because I saved your arse."
Kripa: "What the crap are you on about. You were trying to stir thing up!"
Angad: "No I wasn't actually! Before you came downstairs, I told Dadi and mum to forget whatever happened. They were really angry with you!"
Kripa (surprised that Angad backed her up): "Really? I'm sorry."
Angad (cheeky way):"Yeah you better be sorry."
As Angad said this, Kripa hit him. Suddenly, Naina called Kripa downstairs.
Kripa (stopped hitting Angad): "Oh shit, I have to go down, mums calling me."
Angad: "No! Forget about going."
Saying this Angad grab hold of Kripa who was still on top of him, on the floor.
Kripa: "ANGAD. LEAVE ME NOW!!! Or I'll kick you where it really hurts."
Angad: "Oh shit (he let go of Kripa). O.k. if that is the case then go."
Kripa (in a posh way): thank you doggy."
Angad: "WHAT!"
Kripa started laughing and quickly got off Angad and ran downstairs to see why Naina was calling her.
As Kripa walked out the bedroom, Angad looked at her and smiled.


Downstairs in Khanna house:
When Kripa came downstairs, Naina was with Dadi and Prithvi. They had their suitcases with them.
Kripa: "Mum, where are you guys going?"
Naina: "Me, Prithvi and you're Dadi are going Delhi to meet you're uncle Afsal (Dilip's brother)."
Kripa: "But why?"
Prithvi: "We heard that he's brought a new house, I don't know why mum wants me to go with her. It's going to be so boring."
When Prithvi said this, Naina and Dadi playfully hit him on his shoulder.
Kripa started laughing at what Prithvi had said.
Dadi (to Prithvi): "Beta, Afsal would like it so much if you came as well. Angad can't go because he needs to spend some time with his new wife."
As Dadi said this to Prithvi, they both looked at kripa thinking that it will be better if Prithvi did go.
Kripa looked at them and fake smiled; really she was getting annoyed with acting like Angad's so called wife.
Naina:" Anyway beta, we're going now, we will be back in 2 weeks."
Kripa (shocked):"TWO WEEKS!"
Dadi: "Yes, why is that o.k.?"
Kripa (calming down): "Yes it's o.k."
Naina, Dadi and Prithvi (together): "Bye Kripa."
Prithvi: "Yo kripa, say bye to Angad on my behalf for me please?"
Kripa: "O.k. Prithvi."
Naina, Dadi and Prithvi left the Khanna house.
As soon as they left, kripa went in the kitchen to make herself some breakfast (as she didn't have breakfast). When she went in the kitchen, she put two toasts in the toaster for herself. After a little while, Angad came downstairs. He noticed that nobody was there. He went in the kitchen and was relieved that kripa was at least there.
Angad: "Where is everyone?"
Kripa:" They've gone to Delhi to meet uncle Afsal. They will be back in TWO WEEKS, can you believe it?"
Angad: "WHAT!? It is going to be so boring with you."
Kripa: "What did you think, I would love it here with YOU?!"
Angad: "Well yeah."
Kripa: "Whatever, anyway what do you want for breakfast? Or have you already had?"
Angad: "No thanks, I've already ate. Shall I help you?"
Saying this, Angad walked up to kripa.
Kripa: "Yeah thanks get the margarine out for me from the fridge please."
As Angad was going to get the margarine, Kripa's toasts were ready. She went to take her toasts out when she accidentally burned herself on her arm whilst taking out her toasts from the toaster.
Kripa (screamed loud): AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH. OUCH THAT HURT!!!"
Angad (running to kripa): "What happened?"
Kripa:" I just burned myself."
Angad: "Oh my god. You're so silly. Come with me, I'll put some face cream on it, it will go better."
Kripa: "You fool. How will it go better with FACE CREAM?"
Angad: "Shut up! Just come with me."
Angad was holding Kripa's arm really carefully and took her to the living room.


In the living room:
Angad made kripa sit on the sofa as he got the cream. Angad got the face cream and sat on the floor in front of kripa and started massaging the cream on her arm.
Angad: "See, now it will get better."
Kripa: "No it won't Angad. It really hurts."
Angad: "Shut up! Stop complaining!"
Kripa went quiet and looked at Angad as he was putting the cream on her arm. Angad started to talk about the time when he hurt himself when he was little. When Angad was talking about his funny incident, kripa started to laugh. Angad also laughed with her. All of a sudden, Angad stopped massaging Kripa's arm. He looked at kripa. Kripa stopped laughing. Angad and kripa both looked into each others eyes. Angad put Kripa's hands into his. They went closer and closer to each other. Suddenly, they clock rang. It was 12:00pm. Angad and kripa snapped out.
Angad (trying to avoid what just happened):"Erm, it's done. (Angad sat up) next time be careful o.k.?"
Kripa (smiling):"O.k."
Angad walked off with the face cream. Kripa looked at Angad and a million dollar smile shot her face. She started to feel for Angad.


Hope you like it
Veronica



Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part 👏 👏 👏

to pyar shuru hone laga.... 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 part... continue soon with longer parts...

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Posted: 19 years ago
please continue that was awesome you are tooooo goooooooooooooooooooooooooooood please continue in super speed kyunki ab aur intezaar nahi hota

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