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Posted: 19 years ago
Episode 7:



Continued:




...Their bedroom door knocked (yes, someone was at their bedroom door step). Angad and Kripa quickly got into their senses and realized what they were doing. The person at the door knocked again.
Kripa: "Kaun hai?"
Dadi: "Beta main hoon. Quickly come downstairs...everyone's waiting for you."
Kripa: "O.k. Dadi."
After saying this, Dadi went downstairs. Angad and Kripa were the only ones upstairs. Kripa looked at Angad and was about to leave when Angad pulled her back.
Kripa: "Angad choro mujhe!"
Angad never said anything.
Kripa: "I said leave me, we need to go downstairs...you better leave me now or..."
Kripa couldn't finish off her sentence. Angad came closer and closer to Kripa.
Angad (in a soft voice):"Kripa..."
Kripa (replied back to him in a soft and sweet voice):"Kya?"
Angad (in a sweet voice): Kripa main tumse..."
Kripa (confused):"Mujhe se kya?"
Angad pushed Kripa right away from him and said is a cheeky and angry was: "Nothing!!! I just wanted to say to you that next time make sure that your sari strings are always open."
Kripa (in an angry voice):"What...are you nuts....and plus why would I want to do that."
Angad (in a really naughty, yet cheeky way):"so that I can... (He started sniggering)."
Kripa: "You're sick."
Kripa just left the room.
Angad: "Yo Kripa...I was only joking (he start laughing again as Kripa left the room).
(Important notice: Angad hasn't fallen in love with Kripa at the moment nor has Kripa fallen in love with him. Angad was just messing around with Kripa...just to piss her off).


Downstairs in the Khanna house:
The party was still going on at the Khanna's house. Kripa came down the stairs. She went straight to Dadi to ask her about why she had called her and Angad down for.
Kripa: "Dadi, kya huwa?"
Dadi: "Kuch nahin beta, it's time for you to have a special dance together."
As Dadi said this Angad came down and overheard Dadi and Kripa's conversation.
Kripa looked at Angad as he came down the stairs and they both remembered the time they danced together in Goa (when they kissed).
Kripa to Dadi: "No Dadi, I'm tired. Sorry..."
Angad came down and interrupted Kripa.
Angad: "C'mon Kripa, it's just a dance...cant you even do a little dance for Dadi."
Dadi: "Yes Kripa. Angad's right. Now c'mon...dance."
Angad nudged Kripa and whispered in her ear that she rather dance with him or Dadi's slap might be on her face (remember Dadi had a slapping problem).Kripa sighed. Kripa agreed to dance with Angad.


Angad and Kripa on the dance floor:
As Angad and Kripa went on the dance floor and started to dance, Kripa gave Angad the evils.
Kripa: "What was the point Angad??? Urgh, I hate you so much!"
Angad: "Hey, remember we are meant to be pretending to be a happy and married couple. By the way, you should consider yourself lucky because you got to dance with me...Angad...the man every girl would want to dance with."
Kripa: "Yeah bullshit and you also should consider yourself lucky because every guy would want to dance with me!!!"
Angad: "Gawwwwwwwwwd...you're so up yourself...you irritate me so much."
Kripa: "Whatever, I should be the one saying that: you irritate me!!! You annoying idiot!"
As Kripa and Angad said this, they got so angry with each other that they even stop dancing. They both went off the dance floor.


After the party:
After a few hours, the party had finished and everyone went home. The Sharma family stayed back for a little while. Kripa took Simmone to Angad's room. Prithvi and Angad stayed downstairs watching football (typical guys).


In Angad's room:
When Kripa took Simmone to her 'NEW' bedroom, she sat down and started talking to her.
Kripa: "Simone I can't tell you how annoying Angad is. He keep's his room messy, his clothes everywhere, his attitude stinks and he..."
Simone interrupted Kripa.
Simone: "KRIPA!!! Since I've come here, the only person you are talking about is Angad. What's wrong with you?"
Kripa went quiet.
Simone (smiles): Look Kripa, it's just ONE MONTH...the whole world cant change in ONE SILLY MONTH!!! And by the time this one month is over, I'm sure you'll be used to: the messiness, the stinky attitude and Angad."
When Simone mentioned Angad, Kripa got angry and chased Simmone all around the bedroom. Simone was about to run out of the room when she bumped into Angad who was with Prithvi at the door. Simone and Kripa stopped running. They both went quiet as they saw Angad. These were one of Angad's mood swings:
Angad to Simone: "Who said you could come into my bedroom!"
Prithvi interrupted Angad: "Angad, forget it dude."
Angad to Prithvi: "No Prithvi...who the hell gave Simmone the permission to come into MY room?"
Simone to Angad: "Hey Angad, I'm sorry. You don't need to get all hyper about it!"
Angad (furiously):"SHUT UP...who told you to speak (he pointed to the door)."
Simone looked at Angad. Angad looked back at her. Kripa got angry and moved Simmone aside and had a go at Angad.
Kripa (angrily): NO ANGAD...you shut up. Don't tell my sister to shut up. And by the way, this is my bedroom for a month as well. I can bring whoever I want to this room, (Kripa pointed her finger in Angad's face) and YOU can't do anything about it!!!"
Angad: "Oh really?"
Kripa: "Yes!!!"
Prithvi and Simone looked at each other and were very confused to at Angad was about to do.
Angad and Kripa were looked right at each other! They never even blinked once.
Then all of a sudden, Angad picked Kripa up in his arms and took her out of the bedroom.
Kripa: "Angad, let go of me."
Angad: "Haha I told you I could get anyone out of my room."
Kripa: "No you did not!"
Angad: "Well now I did."
Simmone and Prithvi started laughing. Angad put Kripa down and went back to his room.


Back in Angad's room:
As Angad came back in his room, he started to laugh as well. As Angad came in the room, him and Prithvi gave a hi-5 to each other (clapped each other's hands together in the air). Angad apologized to Simone and told her that he was just messing around with her. Simone was o.k. with it.
Kripa came in the room as well. She was still angry with Angad. Suddenly, Suryban called Simone and told her that they were going home and asked her to come downstairs. Hearing her dad, Simmone said bye to Angad and Kripa and went down, Prithvi followed his love (Simone) downstairs.


Angad and Kripa's room: (after Sharma's had gone home)
Kripa sat at her desk as started taking all her jewelry off. Angad sat on his bed. Suddenly he got a phone call. It was...KAVYA!!!
Angad: "Hello?"
Kavya: "Hey dude, it's me!"
Angad (relieved): "Yo man, how have you been?"
Kripa was listening to kavya and Angad's conversation.
Kavya: "Forget that, guess what?"
Angad: "What?"
Kavya: "I'm getting engaged to Angili."
Angad: "What??? Congrats dude."
Kavya: "You can't just say that. You even have to come to my engagement party...it's in two days. Sorry I couldn't tell you before, but I happened so quickly!"
Angad: "It's o.k., anyway I'll be there."
Kavya: "Hey Angad, Angili here is saying to bring Kripa along with you...she cant contact Kripa at the moment so I think that's why she's telling you to pick her up from her house and bring her to our party. O.k.?"
Kavya never knew about Angad and Kripa (their marriage).
Angad: "o.k. I and Kripa will be there."
As Angad put the phone down, Kripa asked as to what kavya was saying to him. Angad told her that he was getting engaged to Angili and he has invited him...and her (Kripa). Kripa was so happy for Angili. She couldn't believe it. Angad told Kripa to relax as it was just an engagement.
Angad: "Kripa chill, it's just an engagement."
Kripa: "whatever Angad... what do you know about marriage and responsibilities."
Angad: "You're saying it as if your experienced and have been married to about 200 men, and I do know about responsibilities...your my responsibility and a very annoying one."
Kripa: "Oh shut up Angad!"
Saying this Kripa lay down on her bed and went to sleep. After a little while Angad went to sleep as well... next to Kripa!




Hope you liked it
Veronica

P.S
Don't you think I have a bit too many parties...but guys I'm telling you: in this party you will see a different side to Kripa!!!




Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: vallanki

nice part veonica do we have to wait till another fri? anyway can u clarify wht the sari string? is it blouse's? 😊



yes..u got da answer!😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 i love fighting of kripa-angad ................. 👏 ...............now wait for next friday ....GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey that was really nice ...but i just hate waiting for a week .
Veronica4eva thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
u neva know...u might b lucky dis time...i'm thinking of posting it a bit earlier!i dnt know!
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey cant u write next part coz friday is long wayyyyyyyyyy plzzzzzz 😊 😊 😊

(dont mind)
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Posted: 19 years ago
awh its so good....cant wait till friday 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
veronica i just read ur entire fic and it;s awesome
pls continue
im dying 4 friday
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Posted: 19 years ago
Great job you have to continue soon!!!!!!1 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
great job 👏 👏 please cont. soon 😃

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