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Posted: 19 years ago
i'm so sry...i didnt feel well...but 2day i'm better!
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Episode 6:



Continuing:




After the talk with Naina and Gayathri, Angad and Kripa had to leave for Angad's house as Dadi was insisting on going home. Kripa quickly said goodbye to her family and left with and his family.


In Khanna house:
As soon as Angad and Kripa were about to step into the Khanna house, Dadi stopped the.
Dadi: "Wait; first let me do your pooja. All newly brides have to have a proper 'suhagath'(entry blessings) to their in-laws house once they get married."
Angad and Kripa: "O.K. Dadi."
So Dadi got the pooja tray and did Angad and Kripa's proper marriage pooja. After Dadi did that she told Angad and Kripa to go upstairs in their room because they looked tied and they would have to be fresh for tonight's party. Kripa wasn't sure that she would feel comfortable in sleeping in the same room as the guy she hated the most. But she had to because she didn't want Dadi to find out the truth. So Kripa and Angad went upstairs in Angad's room.


In Angad's room:
As Angad and Kripa walked into the room, Angad gave a dirty look at Kripa and Kripa gave the dirties back to him. Kripa shrugged her shoulder and went to the bed. She put her bag onto the bed and start unpacking her clothes (c'mon she was going to stay with Angad for 1 month). As she opened Angad's wardrobe she was shocked to a pile of clothes shoved in his closet: all messy, the clothes not folded and some junk in the wardrobe as well.
Kripa: "Oh my god, what is this Angad? Now that I have to pretend to be your wife do I even have to sort out your junk?"
Angad: "Haha...yes you do my sweetums!"
Kripa: "Whatever...and by the way, I'm NOT your 'sweetums'!
Angad (sarcastically): "Soz Kripa."
Kripa didn't like mess so she cleared Angad's entire wardrobe out, folded his clothes (Angad helped her do this) and piled them neatly next to her clothes in Angad's wardrobe.
Angad: "Phew. Thank god that's over."
Kripa: "Excuse me...your acting as if you did all this work."
Angad: "But I did."
Kripa: "Yeah like one thing... your so irritating, anyway I feel tired, where do I sleep?"
Angad: "Of course on my bed!"
Kripa: "What? No way am I sleeping on your bed."
Angad: "O.k. then sleep on the sofa."
Angad jumped on his bed and tried to make Kripa jealous. Kripa got pissed off with him and said to him that it is only a month so she won't mind sleeping on his bed (what could she have done, she was really tied). Angad pulled a cheeky smile. After some time and Kripa went to sleep...ON THE SAME BED!!! They were far apart. Angad was at one end of the bed and Kripa was at the other.


Party time at the Khanna house:
It was round about 7:00pm when Kripa woke up. She saw Angad beside her sleeping. She woke him up and told him to get ready for the party. Angad quickly got up to have a bath. After some time he came out so that Kripa could have a bath as well. Angad wore a black suit (ooooo he looks so fit how I'm imagining him). After he got ready he went downstairs and saw that he party had already started. After some time, Kripa also had a bath and got out of the bathroom in her black sari with black beautifully designed beads on it, she realized that she couldn't close her blouse's string from the back. She called Naina. When Naina came upstairs she helped Kripa close her top (don't worry, she wasn't topless). After tieing Kripa's strings of her sari, Naina and Kripa went downstairs to the party. Kripa took Dadi's arshirwaad (blessings). Dadi was really happy that Angad and Kripa had gotten married. Later it was time to cut the cake. Angad and Kripa had to cut the cake together. Everyone clapped as they fed each other and the members of the family the cake.


During the party:
Kripa was with Naina and was talking with her friends. Naina's friends said that she had an excellent chose for Kripa being her daughter-in-law. Naina and Kripa knew the truth but still put a fake smile on. Angad was with Dilip's friends and they were having a laugh. Suddenly Angad looked at Kripa and realized that her sari's strings were open (Naina didn't tie them properly). He tried calling Kripa. But she couldn't hear him. Later on when Kripa was alone, Angad slowly went beside her and whispered in her ear that her sari strings were open from the back. Kripa was shocked and at the same time embarrassed. Kripa looked at Angad and quickly ran in her bedroom.


In Angad and Kripa's room:
As Kripa ran into the room, she quickly shut the door but forgot to lock it. She tried to tie up the string of her sari but she couldn't reach. All of a sudden, Angad opened the bedroom door (without knocking) and locked it behind him. Kripa quickly turned around to face Angad. Angad slowly slowly walked towards Kripa. Kripa just looked at him. He got Kripa against the wall. He slowly put his hand around her waist and up her back. Suddenly Kripa realized that Angad was trying to help her close her strings of her sari. Kripa looked up at Angad. Kripa put her arms slowly around Angad so it would be easier to tie up the string. Angad tied her strings of her sari. Then slowly Angad and Kripa a parted. They were still in the hugging position. Angad and Kripa were looking deep into each other's eyes. They went closer and closer. All of a sudden...


Hope you liked it
Veronica

p.s.
you will get to find out what happened in the next part.

Edited by Veronica4eva - 19 years ago
angadkripafan thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
i m sure that someone has entered the room 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey that was really cute ...but i am sure can't wait till next friday.
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Posted: 19 years ago
too good...just make the parts longer plsss!
neha9 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
nooooooooooooo you cant make you wait all the way till next friday, plzzzzzz one more part??? 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: neha9

nooooooooooooo you cant make you wait all the way till next friday, plzzzzzz one more part??? 😆

yeah please ..i seriously can't wait till next friday ..!

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Posted: 19 years ago
awsum part.. but we have to wait till friday! u'r jokiing right? 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part veonica do we have to wait till another fri? anyway can u clarify wht the sari string? is it blouse's? 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
very nice part 😳😳😳
please continue soon

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