AR FF - UNWANTED note on pg 17

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Tanasha

@tanasha1993

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Great FF sana

wonder why shashank is like that?

hopefully ridzy wont be affected badly by such a behaviour from her dad

and armaan will def be her knight in shining armour;D

love

tanasha

DO cont soon;D

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swetha

@bary

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

i really like the story line and please pm me so that i could catch it up regularly.

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

hey sana
i liked ur concept n part 1
it was quite cool
sorry for short comments
running out of time now
plz pm me when u update

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Sana

@sana20n

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: prernawaghray
hey sana
i liked ur concept n part 1
it was quite cool
sorry for short comments
running out of time now
plz pm me when u update

thanx 4 likin it... ive jus sent u a pm... part 2 is up!!!

luv sana

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Bissu

@Bissu

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

great Part sana!

gosh Shashank and his evilness. when will it end.

loved how armaan is already struck by her. looking forward to their interactions in the forthcoming parts! 😊

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Sana

@sana20n

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Bissu
great Part sana!
gosh Shashank and his evilness. when will it end.

loved how armaan is already struck by her. looking forward to their interactions in the forthcoming parts! 😊

i wnt give away d story, in regards 2 shashank, like dey say "old habits die hard"....

unfortunately, as 4 armaan, he's lyka special appearance... bt dnt wori... as d story progresses.... u'll see mre ov him n hw d story shapes up!!!!

wasnt soo sure bout dis part... found it a lil borin... but it had its importance, in one way or d otha... which u'll undastand later 😉

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ashu

@ashluvdmg

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

wy 2 gud...

superb part but a short part

rite long parts da

waitin 4 de nxt part

thx a ton 4 de pm

luv u lts

ashu

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soumya

@saridena

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

nice parts

i didnot understand one thing

why shanky is treating his daughter the same way he got treat when he was small?????

update sooooooooooooooon

👏

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Aimee

@Wild.Aimee

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Hi Sana 😊

Aww dont get disheartened dear. I liked it and i promise i will always be there with you. And of course i did commented on part 1 as well. Just have some patience. More people will be joining us here in your FF. All the best.

Now about this part... i am happy that AR met, very much unlike my FF, where i am still struggling with the ideas😆.

And yes you are right, this part was short, but yet very cute. I liked that scene where Riddhima called up Padma to tell her about her meeting with Armaan, so much like me. Even i cant live without telling anything to my Mum...😃 Pet mein koi baat hazam hi nahi hoti...😆

i will wait for the next part as well.

Keep it up...👍🏼