AR FF - UNWANTED note on pg 17

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Sana

@sana20n

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: cool_pisces
Hi Sana
Wow, ur ff sounds cool

Looking forward to it

thanx 4 lykin it... wasnt sure whetha ne1 wud lyke it!!!

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Sana

@sana20n

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg
AWSUM PART DEAR........
LUKIN 4WD 2 DE NXT PART

HOPE U CONT SOON

LT ME NO WN U CONT

ASHU

thank u... hope d nxt part wud b put 2 stand!!!

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Samira

@mishti4maan

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

OOH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!sounds so cute!!!!!!!!!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!!!!

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360913

Suspended

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

wow dat woz quick first part woz amazing, bless her shez getting no peace at home or uni but gess now dat armaan is here she will be just fine in his care. im curious as to why rahul and vicky wont leave her alone iz it because she looks lyk a geek im oly comin up wid dis assumption as you havent described her yet. do continue soon.

luv iram

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Sana

@sana20n

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: rani 19
wow dat woz quick first part woz amazing, bless her shez getting no peace at home or uni but gess now dat armaan is here she will be just fine in his care. im curious as to why rahul and vicky wont leave her alone iz it because she looks lyk a geek im oly comin up wid dis assumption as you havent described her yet. do continue soon.
luv iram

glad u liked it.. u will soon find out y rahul n vivek bug riddhima... n no its dat shes a geek!!

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Luv d flow of events..even though its d beginn u were able 2 put the background so easily!!

grt goin!!

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Sonal

@swt.smileee

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

wow!!

this ff sounds awesum...

luv de concept...

continue super soon..

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Robin

@Robin_M

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

sounds really good so far! please continue soon!

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Aimee

@Wild.Aimee

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Hey Sana 😊

This is interesting. I liked the intro a lot. So Shashank had a biter relationship with his father. 😕 And wow, Riddhima have the same trait as her father "Returning Late" 😃.

Hmm... now whats up with our Old man, why does he hate his own family, or we can say, he SHOWS that he hates them? 'Mystery'... i guess its the Male ego...

Oh Gosh, so Rahul and Vivek are sly people.😡 But atleast Riddhima got saved by Armaan. Good. I liked their first meeting. Simple and practical but yet very sweet. 😳

Anyways, i will wait for the next part.

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

really an awesome⭐️ so sweet😊😉 and touching one😭😭😳 so rahul and vivek r friends😡 but armaan is their to save ridhima😊😛😉 plz continue it soon😊

"har nazar ko ek nazar ki talas hai,
har dil me chupa ek ehsas ha,
aapse dosti yu hi nahi ki hamne,
kya kare hamari pasand hi kuch khass hai..."

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