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PART 3

Muskaan gets up with a jerk and moves the hand from her eyes turning to face the person.

Muskaan(surprised): tum...

The person is about to respond when a voice interrupts him.

Voice : yaha ho tum ..kabse dhund rahi hu..

Person : ha wo.. Muski ko yaha baithe dekha to.

Voice : to.to socha ki ab Muski to agayi hai...to Naazneen ka kya kaam..

Person(teasingly): are ha! maine socha.jaan bachi us Bandariya se!

Voice : kya?kya kaha?.

Naazneen gets irritated.the person laughs at her and then moves towards Muskaan, who was all this while only staring at the two of them quietly.

He gives her a light hug which she returns back smiling.

Person : kaisi ho?

Muskaan : thik hu Amaan..aur tum?.wapas kab aye?

Person : aaj subah hi.aur ate hi tumhari yaad agayi.to socha mil hi lu.

Well! the person here is Amaan..Amaan Alavi..Muskaan and Naazneen's friend.the three of them were classmates in college and share a great friendship since then.

And the voice of course was Naazneen's.

Naazneen : oh!.itnt jaldi yaad agayi hamari.

Amaan : tumhari nahi.Muskaan ki.

Naazneen : Amaan tum..

Amaan : ab tum zara apni bak bak band karo to mein Muskaan se baat karu.kyu Muski.

Muskaan only gives him a weak smile.

Amaan notices her expressions and realizes that something is wrong. He gives a questioning look to Naazneen asking her if she knows anthying about this. But Naazneen herself didn't know so she just shrugs her shoulders.

Finally Amaan asks Muskaan..: kya baat hai..itni chup chup kyu ho?

Muskaan :kuch nahi.bas aise hi.tumhara trip kaisa raha?

Amaan : okk..ab ek long business trip adventurous to nahi ho sakta na!(giggles)

Naazneen : bad joke

Amaan : tumse kisne pucha.Muski tum kaise jhel leti ho ise..

Naazneen : jaise tumhe jhelti hai.waise hi.

Amaan : o god!!.Muski ise chodo tum meri baat suno..evening me ek party rakhi hai maine.. For all friends..tum 7 pm tak pohoch jana.

Muskaan : party?par achanak? kis liye?

Amaan : wo mein actually..(he is about to say something when he notices Naazneen signaling him a 'no')

Muskaan : kya hua?bolo..

Amaan is still staring at Naazneen trying to understand her expressions: hmmm.wo.

Naazneen : wo Muski aise hi...bas ek get together.

Muskaan : ok.

Muskaan : Naaz..tumne to kaha tha ki koi badi prob ho gayi hai..kya hua?

Naazneen : are kuch nahi baba.bas is Amaan ka plan tha tumhe surprise dene ka.

Muskaan : oh!aur me aise bhagti bhagti ayi yaha.by the way..tum office jaogi abhi?

Naazneen : ha..kyu tum nahi ja rahi?

Muskaan : me to market ja rahi thi.but..ab to kafi late ho gaya..office hi chalte hai.evening me office se ate hue chale jaenge..

Amaan : matlab tum dono ja rahe ho abhi..?

Muskaan : ha Amaan..kafi kaam pending hai..tum bhi chalo na..abbu se bhi mile kafi din ho gaye tumhe.

Amaan : okk.

Muskaan moves forward towards the car while Amaan pulls back Naazneen.: tumne mujhe roka kyu Muski ko batane se?

Naazneen : are.wo pehle se upset dikh rahi hai..ab tum use batate ki tum India ja rahe ho to wo aur upset nahi ho jati? Nut!

Amaan : are ha!.ye to maine socha hi nahi..

Naazneen : kaise sochte Amaan.. Tumhare paas utni akal kaha..

Amaan : apni stupid baatein band karo aura age badho..she must be waiting for us..

So Amaan and Naazneen follow Muskaan and all of them leave for office...Malik Industries..

They get out of their cars in front of a huge state of the art building..in one of the most posh industrial areas in London. The watchmen takes their cars and they enter inside.

It's a busy office.. workers moving around notice the three of them entering and stop to greet them in between their work, while they move towards Feroz Malik's cabin.

Feroz is busy with some files when Amaan enters inside..Muskaan and Naazneen following him.

Amaan : may I disturb you uncle?

Feroz looks up and is surprised to see Amaan.

Feroz : Amaan beta!(he gets up and Amaan comes and hug him)

Amaan : kaise ho aap uncle?

Feroz(seperating) : bas beta thik hu..tum kaho....wo training ka trip kaisa raha?

Amaan : sab 1st class uncle..aur aap ki tabiyat and all to thik hai na?

Feroz : wo bhi 1st class hai.

They all take seats.

Feroz : acha ab tumhara business training course to khatam hua..batao office kabse join kar rahe ho?

Amaan : me to kal se hi kar du..bas aap appointment letter issue kar de is nacheez ke naam..

Feroz : are beta..tumhe formalities ki kya zarurat..jab jee chahe ajao..

Amaan : ok uncle..me to mazak kar raha tha.. But ha.mujhe yaha ane ki kaafi jaldi hai..(turns to Naazneen and winks..while she gives him an irritated look)

Amaan : ok uncle then..me chalta hu..are ha. sham ko ek party rakhi hai maine..aap bhi aiye na..

Feroz : are nahi beta...you all go and enjoy..shaam tak kafi thak jata hu me.

Amaan :..ok uncle.take care of yourself..me chalta hu.khuda hafis.

Feroz : khuda hafis beta.

He leaves and the rest get to their office work.

The day passes like that. The three of them stay busy in office and Imran in university with his friend Cris. Muskaan gets worried for him and gives him a phone call in the afternoon. He ensures her that everything is going smoothly and that he would return home by evening. So she too stays back in office and returns home by evening with Feroz and Naazneen.

Muskaan and Naazneen on returning home wind up all the house work hurriedly and even keep dinner ready for Imran and Feroz. They then get ready and leave for the party.

The party was in full swing when they reached and Muskaan gets surprised to see most of her college friends there..she was meeting them after such along time. Amaan had arranged a real happening and rocking party..and he sees to it that Muskaan enjoys there forgetting all about the bad mood she had earlier in the day.whatever be the reason for it. And Muskaan was indeed enjoying a lot with all her friends around. It was like college times back for all of them.

Back in Malik Residence'..

Feroz was busy with sum work after dinner when he gets a call. He checks the number on the cell and a smile appears on his face.

Feroz : hello?

Person on the other side: assalam-walaikum bhaijaan..

Feroz : walekum-assalam Rahim..

Rahim. Rahim Malik; is Feroz's younger brother and Naazneen's father, staying in India with his family. Naazneen had shifted to London after completing high school in India and is staying here since then with Feroz.

Rahim : kaise ho aap? Aur bachhe?

Feroz : sab thik hai.. Tum batao. waha sab kaisa hai?

Rahim : thik hi hai bhaijaan.wo Singhanias ke project details mail kiye the maine.mil gaye aap ko?

Feroz : ha mil gaye..aur jald hi contract bhi mil hi jaega..

Rahim : insha allah!.

Feroz : aur sunao.. Kaisa chal raha hai waha sab?.

Rahim : kya sunau bhaijaan...ab aap aur bachhe to waha hai...me aur Farhat to jaise akele hi pad gaye..

(Farhat is his wife)

Feroz : tum kaha rahim.akela to me pad gaya hu..yaha.apno se itni dur pardes me.sare rishtedar bhi to wahi hai...aur tum bhi..

Rahim : to wapas ajaiye na bhaijaan.. Aisha bhabhi ke rehne tak bhi aap kabhi milne ajate the..par unke baad to jaise aap ne mu hi mod liya..

(Aisha was Feroz's wife and Muskaan's mom who is no more now)

Feroz : aisa nahi hai rahim..par ..unke jaane ke baad to sab kuch hi badal gaya.(his eyes get num while saying that..Rahim senses it)

Rahim : ab bohot hua bhaijaan.. ab aap aa hi jaiye..kabse se keh rahe hai ki sab wind up karke araha hu.. Itna waqt ho gaya sunte sunte mujhe..

Feroz : kya batau...tum to jante..ye business ke ups and downs..

Rahim : aap mujhe ye bahane na de..usi business ka ek hissa me yaha India me chalata hu..har cheez ki khabar hai mujhe..

(Both of them are business partners even and Rahim handles the Indian office)

Feroz : thik hai me koshish karunga ki jald se jald yaha ka sab wind up ho jaye..mujhe khud ab yaha nahi rehna.

Rahim : ye thik hai..par tab tak kam se kam bachho ko to bhej dijiye..Naazneen bhi itne waqt se ayi nahi..wahi ki ho kar reh gayi wo to..

Feroz : are use kaise bhej du..usi se to ghar me itni ronak rehti hai..aur agar me kahu to bhi wo nahi manti..kehti hai nahi jana aap sabko chod kar...khas kar Muskaan ko..ab dono saath hi to pale bade hai..ek hi umar ke..

Rahim : to is baar use bhi bhej di jiye na...har baar ye baat bhi kehta hu me..is baar aap teeno ko hi bhej di jiye, Imran ko bhi..

Feroz : bhai Imran to abhi nahi aa sakta..college join kar raha hai na..aur Muskaan ko to ghar aur office se fursat hi nahi...

Rahim : ha bhaijaan..(thinking something).. Par mujhe lagta hai ab aap ko muskaan ko bhej hi dena chahiye...bachpan me hi dekha tha use.aur aakhir use yahi to rehna hai..shaadi ke baad..behtar hoga agar wo yaha ghar par sab ke saath ghul jaye..aur wo dono bhi ek dusre se mil le.samjh le..aap samajh rahe hai na..me..

Feroz(thinking) : ha rahim shayad tum thik hi keh rahe ho..humne jo inke bachpan me tae kiya tha..shayad use nibhane ka waqt agaya hai..tum fikar na karo..is baar me use kisi tarah se bhej hi deta hu..waise aap ka beta hai kaha...itne dino se koi khabar nahi..

Rahim : thik hi hai bhaijaan..filhaal to out of town gaya hai. ek deal ke silsile me..uske liye to bas kaam hi..

Feroz : ha janta hu...usse bhi milna hai..bachpan me hi dekha tha use'ab to bas kabhi kabhi phone par baat ho jati hai.

Rahim : aap aa to jaiye..fir khud hi dekh lena..

Feroz : hhmmm!

Rahim : thik hai bhaijaan.. Ab rakhta hu..apna khayal rakhiyega..

Feroz : ha Rahim.tum bhi..

Rahim : khuda hafis.

Feroz : khuda hafis.(and he disconnects)

Here the party gets over and Muskaan and Naazneen return back home.

Here ends the 3rd part..

Comments are eagerly awaited..

Love,

Sana

Edited by sweetangel_25 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mind blowing part sana
i really liked the way u showed the friendship between amaan and the girls it was really good.
cant wait till muskaan goes to india.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

mind blowing part sana

i really liked the way u showed the friendship between amaan and the girls it was really good.
cant wait till muskaan goes to india.

thanks neha.....keep reading.....there is a surprise waiting in India!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey sana wonderful update.... Excited abt Muskaan goin India.. Cant wait to knw abt the surprise.... Plzz continue soon...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 4

'Kaash dil ki awaaz me itna asar ho jaye.. Ki hum aapko yaad karen aur aapko khabar ho jaye.. Jaise muskurate hai hum aapki yaad par.. Waise hi aapki ankhen bhi num ho jaye.. Chahat to naam hi hai intezaar ka.. Par ye pyaar.. ab mukammal ho jaye.. '

Muskaan puts the pen down. She picks up her diary and brings it close to her face. She stares at what she just wrote there and slowly a beautiful smile appears on her face.

Muskaan: pata nhi tum kaun ho... Kaha ho... Kaise ho... Kya tum mere bare me sochte bhi ho... Jaise me sochti hu.. Har din.. Har pal...

She gets up from the bed and goes to the window.

Muskaan: ye anjana sa rishta kab jud gaya.. kuch pata hi nhi chala... Pata hai to bas itna ki is duniya me.. Is zindagi me.. ek tumhi apne lagte ho.. Jaise mere har pal me.. Khushiyon me.. mushkilon me.. Har wo lamha jaha maine khudko tanha paya hai.. Tum mere saath rahe ho.. Ek khubsurat ehsaas bankar.. Meri himmat bankar...

She blushes slightly... : ....Pyaar bankar...

Muskaan : me bhi na.. (hits her forehead lightly) ... Mujhe to pata bhi nhi ki pyaar kya hota.. Kaisa hota hai.. Aur tum.. Tum to bas ek khwab ho.. Jo pata nhi.. kabhi sach hoga bhi ya nhi... Zindagi me abhi tak itna kuch dekha hai.. Pata nhi kismat ne aage aur kya likha hai...

She is lost in her thoughts playing with her pink dupatta. A voice interrupts her n gets her out of her thoughts.

Voice : Muskaan...

She recognises the voice and her eyes widen... : abbu!

Voice : kaha ho beta?

Muskaan : ji abbu bas ayi.

She quickly picks up the diary from the bed and hides it in her cupboard.

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Feroz: kaha reh gayi thi beta.. Baitho lunch kar lo..

Muskaan: ji abbu..

She goes and joins them for lunch.

Feroz: kal Rahim ka phone aya tha..

Naazneen: abbu ka! Kya kaha kaise hai wo?

Feroz: bohot jaldi yaad ayi unki.. Unhe to laga tum unhe bhool hi gayi..

Naazneen: nahi bade abbu.. Bahot yaad aati hai.. Par..

Feroz(cuts her in btwn): yaad aati hai to mil ao na..

Naazneen doesnt respond. Just quietly stares at Muskaan.

Feroz: ha ha tum dono ki hi baat kar raha hu..

Naazneen(excitedly): kya? Muskaan bhi?

Feroz: ha tum dono hi.. Rahim bahot keh raha tha..

Muskaan: par abbu.. Me kaise..

Feroz: kyu nhi beta.. Waise bhi hume kuch dino me sab kuch wind up karke jana to hai hi.. To tum abhi hi chale jao.. Fir me kuch dino me ajaunga..

Muskaan: Imran?

Feroz: Imran to hostel ja raha hai.. To tum yaha raho ya India me kya fark padta hai.. Wo to hostel me hi rahega na..

Imran: di.. Abbu is right.. Aap jaiye..

Muskaan is still not convinced. She is just sitting there quietly, thinking.

Naazneen: Muski.. Amaan bhi India ja raha hai apne parents ke paas..

Muskaan: Amaan?

Naazneen: ha.. Humne tumhe bataya nhi tha ki tum upset ho jaogi.. Par ab to perfect hai.. Hum sab ja rahe hai to hum sab saath hi rahenge vaha!

Feroz: ye thik hai.. Me aaj hi tickets ka arrangement kar deta hu.. Ok beta?

Muskaan finally gives in.. : ji abbu..

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'Passengers are requested to fasten their seat belts as the flight is ready for take off'

Naazneen: i dont believe we are finally going.

The two of them are finally going to India and are very happy about it.

Muskaan: hhmm.. And i am glad yaha par sab wind up karke ja rahe hai.. Imran bhi settle ho gaya hostel me..

Naazneen: ya.. Kitne kam time me sab hogaya na..

Muskaan: ya.. Ab lets see what India has in store for us..

They smile at each other happily and sit back to enjoy their long flight.

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We move our story to another part of the world..................

-India-

A young man gets out of a Mercendez Benz infront of the Mumbai International Airport. He is wearing a black formal suit with gelled hair. An elegant metal watch and sunglasses are completing his look. He is entering inside the airport when his cell rings. He checks the number of the caller.

Man: aaj to mein mara..

He receives the call.

Man: hello.. Mamma.. Are me to kabse yaha khada hu.. Almost an hour you know.. Lagta hai flight hi delay hogayi..

Man: nahi mamma jhut kyu bolunga.. (bites his tounge lightly)

Man: ha baba dhund raha hu.. Par Naazneen kahi dikh nahi rahi.. Dekhta hu..

Man: ya you dont worry.. Bye.. (and he disconnects)

Just then he feels someone touch him near his knees. He turns around and notices a little baby sitting in a carriage pulling his pants. He smiles at the baby and bends down on his knees....and gently touches the baby's cheeks. The baby too starts to touch his face in return.........his little little fingers move around the young man's face .........and stop at his sunglasses.......And the baby gently pulls them off his face.

And we get to see......... The handsome and adorable............. Rajeev khandelwal......... Playing: Armaan.. Armaan Syed..

He cutely smiles and gives the baby a little kiss on his cheeks.

The baby too smiles back........ and.......... our dear Armaan gets so engrossed in playing with the child that he forgets all about the work he had gone there for!

here ends the 4th part.. Friends i am really sorry for the looonng delay.. Hope you all didnt loose that little interest you had developed for this FF..

would be waiting eagerly for your comments,

Love,

Sana

Edited by sweetangel_25 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi sana...read ur complete ff and its interestin....now Rajeev has entered and its gonna be more interestin...cont very soon...wanna know how RA first meet gonna be....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Sana nice update.. really enjoyed it... Plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice 1 sana👏 liked the way u introduced the hero👍🏼
keep going

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

hi sana...read ur complete ff and its interestin....now Rajeev has entered and its gonna be more interestin...cont very soon...wanna know how RA first meet gonna be....

hey thanks..spvd(dnt know ur name!).......continue reading
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Originally posted by: sweetangel_25

hey thanks..spvd(dnt know ur name!).......continue reading



hey dear...am Deepa......wen u gonna update?

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