~* Dil Hi Dil Mein *~ RajeevAmna...Part 7...23/04 - Page 2

sorry friends i know i should have posted the 1st part by now....but i was caught up with sum work.....i ll post tomorrow.....

PART 1

Ek naya din nikla hai.....ek naye suraj, ek nayi subah ke saath.....

London city ka ek chota sa park.....River Thames ke paas..... jaha ye subah apne rang bhikher rahi hai........ped par rehte panchiyo ke pyare se geet.....paas ki nadi......aur uske behte pani ki halki si awaaz......aur wo ehsaas.........jisse koi bhi is subah ki khoobsurati mein kho jaye.....

Par waha baithi ek ladki to apni hi duniya mein khoyi hui thi.....jaise wo is subah ki khoobsurati se zyada uski khamoshi ko mehsoos kar rahi ho......jo use us park ki bahar ki duniya se kahi zyada azeez thi..........is khamoshi mein.......... uske dil ko wo sukoon milta tha....... jo duniya ki bheed mein......shor mein.....gum hojata tha......

Wo bas isi ehsaas me baithi thi..... jab kuch awaaz use uske khayalo ki duniya se bahar le ati hai......

She quickly turns to the tree at her back........ and sees wild fruit like structures falling down on the pebbles nearby. She looks up and notices two squirrels fighting near the pebbles.....

The scene makes her smile.......some hair strands come to fall on her face. She puts them behind her ear.........and we get a glimpse of her face.The red glow on her beautiful face is complementing her red track suit perfectly.

Just then someone calls her from behind........

Person: muskaan....

The girl turns to this side and is none other than Muskaan Malik (aka Amna Shariff)

Muskaan gets up and notices a girl standing at a distance. She goes to the girl.

Muskaan: agyi aap......par itni jaldi?

The girl looks up at muskaan and we see she is the cute and lovely Neha Bamb( playing Nazneen Malik).

Muskaan: tabiyat?

Naazneen: Ha shayad kal gulab jamun thode zyada kha liye....

Muskaan: thode zyada? Mai tumhe yaad dila du ki do me se ek bowl tumne akele hi khatam kar diya tha. Ye thode hote hai naaz?

Naazneen: oho..ab tana mat do...tumhe to pata hai na ki gulab jamuns meri weakness hai......

Muskaan: ha pata hai. Tumhari bohot sari weaknesses me se ek hai. Par naaz......agar aisa hi chalta raha to tumhare weightloss program ka kya hoga!

(she says this giving a fake tense look to naazneen)

Naazneen: are haan.....(her mouth remains wide open thinking of it)

Just then she realizes that muskaan is secretly giggling.

Naazneen: muskaan ki bacchi......(saying this she runs after muskaan to catch her while muskaan runs away to save herself)

The two of them then jog for a while more..... teasing each other......and after a while turn towards their house..

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Their house turns out to be an enormous double storied villa..... with a beautiful garden........alongside a car parking area....where some expensive cars are parked.

They enter inside.......and we see that the inside is even more beautiful than the outside. The interiors are giving the modern look of London........but at the same time reflecting the tradition and culture of Islam....of India......giving an idea about the people living in the house......

Naazneen goes towards the corridor to go to her room while Muskaan moves up the staircase.

Muskaan(looks at her watch):8 baj gaye but am sure....janaab abhi tak uthe nahi hoge...

She goes to a room and knocks. No response. She opens the door and goes in.

Someone is sleeping on the bed inside with a blanket covering him.Muskaan goes to the bed.......and close to the person.......his ear............and......SCREEEAAAMMS!!!!!!!!

Muskaan: good morniiiiinggg!!!!!!

The person moves his blanket suddenly and gets up with a startle!!!

guys this is it for the 1st part......

plz do comment.....

love,

sana

nice begining.😊..... near-perfect start👏, keep it up n keep posting

Part 2:

Muskaan goes to a room and knocks. No response. She opens the door and goes in..

Someone is sleeping on the bed inside with a blanket covering him...Muskaan goes to the bed...and close to the person....his ear.......and......SCREEEAAAMMS!!!!!!!!

Muskaan: good morniiiiinggg!!!!!!

The person moves his blanket suddenly and gets up with a startle!!!

He is kind of in a state of shock...almost out of breath. Muskaan goes and sits by his side laughing heartedly. The person, coming back to his senses, notices Muskaan.

Person(irritated): kya di?..roz subah aise uthana zarori hai??

Muskaan: sorry..par kya karu..mere cute little brother ko is subah se milwane ke liye aisa karma padta hai na.

( this person is Muskaan's younger brother...the one she has been living for....her happiness.. her life..)

The person gives an irritated look to her and turns the other side.

Muskaan: Imran..I am sorry..

He still does'nt respond.

Muskaan: ab thode dino mein to tum college join kar loge..hostel shift ho jaoge..waha tumhe kaun jagaega..apna khayal rakhna khud seekho.itni der tak so rahe ho..abhi to tumhari life shuru hui hai..kitna kuch karma hai kitna kuch banna hai...aur tum ho ki.

Imran(cutting her in between):kar lunga sab kuch di...ab aap subah subah lecture to na de...aur me apna khayal khud kyu rakhu...aap ho na...

Muskaan smiles at his innocence.

Muskaan: ab ye sab chodo aur jaldi se ready hokar neeche ajao breakfast ke liye..university bhi jana hai fir ...admission ke liye.

Imran(now smiling): aap chaliye mein bas abhi aya...(saying this he lies down back on the bed)

Muskaan: Imrannnnn...

Imran( making a pleading face): di plzzz...bas 5 mins...

Muskaan just smiles at him and leaves the room.

She goes to her own room then to freshen up.

After a while she comes down to the breakfast table and notices Naazneen having breakfast hurriedly.

Muskaan : itni jaldi mein kyu kha rahi ho? Kaun si flight miss ho rahi hai? (giggles)

Naazneen: Muski tu bhi na...

Naazneen(khate khate hi bol rahi hai):Ishika ne bulaya hai...koi bohot important kaam hai use.

(Ishika is their college friend)

A woman in her late 30's is serving breakfast there. She put a little more porridge in Naazneen's plate.

Naazneen: are Sulekha aunty bas kijiye...moti ho rahi hu mein.

(Sulekha is a helper in their house. A kind hearted woman, she is quite close to them..like a family member)

Sulekha is about to say something..when she hears a voice from behind..

Person: ha ha dekho kitni moti ho gayi..balloon ban gayi hai!

Everyone turns and notice a person coming down the stairs. He is in his late 40's...wearing a salwar kurta..with a warm smile on his face...

Every one laughs on his statement.

Naazneen(getting embaressed); sach bade abbu?

( the person is Feroz Malik...Muskaan's father and Naazneen's uncle)

Sulekha: ab chup kar tu..aur seedhi tarah khatam kar sab(pointing to her plate)...dieting kar karke dekho kya halat bana li hai apni...

Feroz comes and joins the breakfast table.

Sulekha: bhaijaan ab aap hi dekhiye inhe..(saying this she leaves for the kitchen)

Feroz (to Naazneen): khalo na beta...thoda sa to hai.

Imran,who has seen all this happening while coming down, goes to take the chair next to Naazneen and starts teasing her.

While Naazneen is trying her best to clear her plate, eating forcibly. Muskaan notices this.

Muskaan: Naaz.tumhe to late ho raha than na?

Naazneen realizes this and quickly gets up leaving the food.

Naazneen: are haan...mujhe to jana tha!

She has some water kept nearby quickly and grabs the car keys...

Naazneen: bye everyone!

She rushes out of the house leaving everyone laughing behind.

They continue to have their breakfast then with light chit-chats.

Muskaan gets done with hers and is about to get up when..

Imran: di.aap mujhe Cris ke ghar drop kar dengi....me usi ke saath university chala jaunga...

Muskaan: uske saath? Tum dono kaise manage karoge bacche ho..me bhi chalungi saath mein.

Imran: di plzz... mein manage kar lunga..itna to bada ho gaya hu...aur koi problem hui to aap ko phone kar dunga..

Muskaan: kaha na nahi....

Feroz(interrupting)jaane do Muskaan use...zara use bhi to duniya dekhne do..kab tak pamper karti rahogi...

Muskaan(still not convinced):par abbu...

Feroz:Muskaaannn..

Muskaan(giving in after a lot of thinking): theek hai abbu..

After everyone is done with breakfast Muskaan helps Sulekha to clear the breakfast table.Then goes to her dad's room to get his things ready as he too has to leave for office. Meanwhile Imran goes to his room to get his documents ready.

After a while Muskaan comes down and goes to the living room where her dad is sitting.

Muskaan:abbu..apke kapde nikal diye hai...aur baki apka office bag, cell, wallet sab kuch bed par hai..aur kuch chahiye aapko?

Feroz(smiling at her): nahi beta..aur kuch nahi chahiye...

Muskaan: to fir mein chalti hu...supermarket jana hai groceries lene..aur Imran ko bhi drop kar dungi..

Feroz: ok beta jao....

Imran comes down with his bag.

Imran: chale di?

Muskaan: ha chalo..

Muskaan: khuda-hafis abbu.

Imran: khuda-hafis abbu..

Feroz: khuda-hafis beta..

And both of them leave.

Muskaan drops Imran to his friends place and then heads to the supermarket.

She was on her way when she gets a call. She realizes its from their office and receives it.

Muskaan: hello?

Person: hello..muskaan bete...abhey uncle bol raha hu.

(Abhey Malhotra is their office manager.)

Muskaan:Abhey uncle..boliye..

Abhey: bete wo naye project ke silsiley mein jo meeting rakhni thi wo tum hi attend karogi na? ya Feroz sir?

Muskaan: nahi mein hi karungi..kyu?

Abhey: bete ....investors chahte hai ki meeting isi week ho jaye..bohot insist kar rahe the..

Muskaan: theek hai..aap Sarah se baat karke meeting fix kar dijiye.

(Sarah is her P.A.)

Abhey: bete maine baat karli usse...sirf 29^th ka din free hai tumhara...pura din free hai...

(hearing this statement the glow on her face suddenly disappears.....and she slowly puts the car to a halt.)

She just sits there with the phone in her hand...not responding on the phone.

Abhey:hello..Muskaan....are u there?

She finally gets a hold on herself and speaks.

Muskaan: nahi uncle...us din nahi..

Abhey: par beta Sarah ne bataya ki baki saare din tumhari meetings aur dusre kaam hai...sirf yahi ek din hai..investors ko kya jawab denge..

Muskaan: wo job hi ho..but us din nahi...(saying this she disconnects the call)

She rests her head back on the car seat with the same gloomy look on her face and closes her eyes.

A tear flows down.. then another...as she thinks back of that same day..the 29^th of that month...7 yrs

back..and everything starts flashing in front of her..

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Flashback

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Muskaan: relax mama sab theek ho jaega..abbu doctor se baat kar rahe hai...

She moved the hair strands coming on her mom's face an she sat beside her. Her mother just smiled weakly lying there on the hospital bed.

Mom: kyu dilasa de rahi hai..mujhe pata hai ab kuch nahi ho sakta...waqt bohot kam hai mere paas.

She herself new what her condition was. Cancer had totally take over her. And the doctors had given up.

Muskaan cudnt see her mom like that and she started crying.

Mom( breathing a little heavily): beta...tu mujhse ek waada karegi?

Muskaan(still crying): waada?

Mom:ha..mujhse waada kar...(she puts her hand forward)..ki tu tere abbu aur Imran ka hamesha khayal rakhegi...khush rakhegi..kabhi naaraz nahi karegi unhe..

Muskaan(cudnt take it any more):mama aap ye sab...

Mom(her breaths were getting heavier by every passing minute):

Tu waada kar mujhse...unhe kabhi meri kami ka ehsaas nahi hone degi..

Muskaan(gives her hand in her mom's);ha mama....i promise....

By then her mom's condition had worsened. Muskaan realizes it and runs out to inform her dad who was talking to the doctor in his cabin.

All of them rush to her mom's cabin. The doctor asks the nurse to get some things immediately and he himself goes ahead to check her. He takes her wrist...and is completely shocked. He checks a little more to ensure and then turns to them.

Doctor: I am sorry... she's no more....

Muskaan just stared at the doctor.. and then at her mom...as the words echoed..

Tears were heavily flowing down her eyes now as she sat in the car with her head laid back..as flashes continued to appear..her mom's dead body..and when the men were taking it away for burial..her breaking down on the floor...a 10 yr old Imran crying in her arms .....the days she spent after her mom......the emptiness in the house......in her life.....

Tears continued to flow...and she didn't wipe them even once....

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Just then her cell starts ringing again and she picks it up from the deck. On seeing the number she wipes off her tears. And receives the call.

Muskaan: ha naaz..bol..

Naazneen: muski kahan hai tu?

Muskaan: mein..wo..( recollecting)..supermarket ja rahi thi...(wiping the remains of her tears)

Naazneen:are wo sab chod aur foran Reagents Park pohoch....ek bohot badi problem ho gayi hai...

Muskaan:kyu...kya hua?

Naazneen: wahi par batati hu... bas to jaldi se pohoch..

Muskaan(little tensed): ok...I'll be there in 10 mins...

She keeps her cell side. Then removes some wet tissues and cleans her face thoroughly checking herself in the car mirror. As she didn't want Naazneen to get the slightest hint that she has cried..nor anyone else.

She then starts her car and accelerating it heads towards Reagents Park.

She reached there as soon as she could as she was getting worried for Naazneen. She goes inside and looks for her but Naazneen wasn't there yet. She sits on a bench nearby waiting for her.

A lot of time had passed like that but Naazneen was nowhere in sight.Muskaan gets more worried now.

She was about to dial Naazneen's number when she felt a palm placed on her eyes ,blocking her vision. She gets alerted first..but then breaks into a smile.

Muskaan: naaz ye kya bachpana hai...

The person doesn't respond. Muskaan gets a bad feeling and she touches that hand on her eyes. She realizes it's a male.

She gets up with a jerk and moves the hand from her eyes turning to face the person.

Muskaan(surprised): tum??..

Here ends the 2nd part..........

comments are eargerly awaited.......

love,

sana

Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey Sana nice cute part.....thanks swetha....i am so glad you liked it......i liked the convo between Muskaan n Naaz..... it was cute.... ya they share a cute relationship........Whoz the person under the blanket???? very curious to knw.. keep reading to know......plzz continue soon............😊

Originally posted by: swetha10

Lovely part... Muskaan is so loving n caring.... Sad abt her mom's death..... BUT but whoz this new surprise??? very eager to knw... Gr8 job dear.... Plzz continue....