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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

hehe... thanks guyys for replying... i have written the first 10 parts at least, so i can easily post them up... but kya karen?? i hardly have any time on my hands.... but anyways... since today is a public holiday for me here in singapore, i will post a few parts up, along with the character list... but mind u, the first few parts will be short, and no armaan will be there... he will probably enter after the 10th part, but from then on, the story will focus on ridz and armaan... sorry if i have kept u waiting for long...

first part will be up in 5 mins... the second part will be up, along with the character list in abt 3.5 hours... till then enjoy...

thanks for replying and comenting, and sorry to keep ya all waiting...

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Part 1

Tring-tring goes the doorbell, as a girl rushes down the staircase in a penthouse apartment. The girl is wearing a beautiful white and black evening gown.

The doorbell rings again, and the girl gets kind of irritated.
"Aa rahi hoon baba! Itna impatient hone ki koi zaroorat nahin hai. Tum toh dus minute pehle aaye ho, aur vaise bhi auraton ko taiyaar hone mein waqt lag jata hai."

The girl opens the door, and contrary to the person who was continuously ringing the doorbell, she is not surprised to see him, whereas he has his mouth gaping open at the sight of her. He looks her down, then slowly moves up. He looks at her high heels... her dress again... her creamy, clear skin on her hands... up her arms... her neck, almost bear except for a thin necklace with a pendant... the chin, lips, cheeks, lips again... her nose, her eyes, in which he can be drowned, and remain there forever, and finally her face...

*** writer's note: the images i wanted to put here are not working, there's smth wrong with them, so i guess i'll have to try again later, since i already tried now, abt 3 times... so plz wait patiently until then... thanks***

"Wow! Amazingly beautiful!"

(Shilpa) "Kuch nayi baat bataao Kannav."

Kannav (the guy): I Love You! Main tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon Riddhima.

Riddhima: Yeh bhi mujhe pata hai. Aur I Love You too. Aur nayi baat nahin hai?

Kannav: Dinner pe chalte hain, phir batata hoon. It's a surprise.

Riddhima: Ooh! Accha. Toh jaldi chalte hain. I cant wait to find out what it is.

Kannav: Tum bhi na?!!!

Riddhima: Kya main bhi na? Ab jaldi chalo na. Der nahin ho rahi hai?

Kannav: Okay. Fine. Ab chale. Lekin usse pehle...

Riddhima: Usse pehle kya?!

Kannav: Kiss...

Riddhima: No ways...

Kannav: Please... De do na?!!

Riddhima: Nahin!

Kannav: Please!

Riddhima: No!

Kannav: Please!

Kannav makes a cute puppy face that Riddhima cannot even resist. So she kisses him, as she smiles, and she blushes. Finally, they show Kannav's face.

Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 16 years ago

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CrazyChatterbox

@CrazyChatterbox

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

heyy friends... sorry, but there will be a slight problem and delay in posting out the next few parts... probably by a few hours, but confirmed, before 10, the character list and part 2 will be up and if i have time to, then part 3 too...

hope ya all enjoy till then...

happy waiting, and sry for the delay...

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Aimee

@Wild.Aimee

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Hey its a completely different and interesting concept dear...👏 Armaan cant speak. Really its very tempting to read.

I will comment again once i read it 😃

Edited by Wild.Aimee - 16 years ago

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Aimee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Hey the first part was interesting dear. 😊

Ok now what could be Kannav's surprise? mmmmm i dont know. I will prefer to wait for it. 😃

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

~~~ Characters ~~~

Riddhima Khanna (the main character of the ff, a doctor, who after getting her degree, goes for internship at the village where armaan and his family stay) - Shilpa Anand

Anjali Khanna (Ridz's elder sister, she shares close relationship with her)- Sunaina Gulia

Shashank and Padma Khanna (ridz's dad and mom, they love her a lot, but still seem to be hiding some secret from her)- Monish Behl and Sakshi Tanwar

Armaan Mallik (the other main character of the ff, he'd dumb i.e. cannot talk, but his other senses are working perfectly, he loves to play cricket and sometimes dance too, he has been home schooled, and has only 2 friends - his sister and Atul)- Karan Singh Grover

Kritikaa Mallik (armaan's little sis, pyaar se he calls her kritz or minnie, she's one of the few who can understand anything and everything her bhaiyya says, and likes to follow him wherever he goes)- Swini Khara

Anuraag and Prerna Mallik (armaan's parents)- Cezzanne Khan and Shweta Tiwari

Atul Sharma (an orphan who has been staying with armaan and his family since his parents died, is very close to armaan, they are of the same age) - Pankit Thakker

Kannav Sharma (Riddhima's fiance, loves her a lot)- Aksshat Gupta

Kavi Sharma (kannav's dad)- Kanwaljit Singh

Nisha and Natasha Godbole (identical twins, Riddhima's best friends, Nisha is a doctor while Natasha is a hotel manager) - Dimple Jhangiani

*** other characters may be added on later ***

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

heyy guyys...

hope ya all liked the first part, and the character intro... keep on reading...

and sry, i have no time to post the parts as i still hv to find the proper images, and my dad is back, shouting at me to go to bed...

yeah, yeah...

so, anyways, since i have all the parts written, but still hv to find the images, i will do tt tmr, before 7 in the evening, singapore time... which is like 4.30 in india...

so plz dont get angry at me... i will post the parts tmr, PINKY PROMISE this time... and if i dont do by tmr, u can hound me until i do, and as a punishment, i will post 3 more extra parts on friday... LOLz

anyways... those of u hu read, thanks and continue 2 read... hope ya all enjoy...

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prerna

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Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

hey
cool ff
nice concept
keep pmin me when u update n ya
update soon

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

omg ⭐️thats awesome😊😉 really a mind bowing😊😳 too gud😉 yaar ur superb😊 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

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