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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

i mite as well say me tooooo lol

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Jia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

LMAOOOO ok posted part 11. Pls do leave honest views!!

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KAT

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

hehe sweet me here as well with the rest of the gang

Love Kat😳

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Sania Khan

@ArmiandRidz4eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

hey Jia, part 11 was emotional, greatly written

i hope its all sorted soon

Sania

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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

oki updated my comments piche....😃

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Anita Malik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Great update Jia...It was beautiful!👏

The way you portrayed Armaan and RIddhima's emotions was just way beyond words...I have no words to tell you how heartwarming it all was. You penned down their emotions beautifully!!!!

I loved this few lines..

"I can never forgive you….you killed my baby….and the countless heart burns you have given me….you know Armaan in this relationship it was always you…right from the beginning. You wanted me because you loved me. You steered our life and drove us apart. If it suited you it was fine….or else I was a mere object in the corner of the room. And…."

The most I could do for these beautiful touching lines is give you a 🤗 You totally deserve the compliments sweety!

Oh god, Wht an arrogant jerk Armaan became...i guess his career was more important to him at that moment than Riddhima was. ..He was in his dreamland of hitting it BIG one daay! Man, you made Armaan evil..lol...well not exaclty evil but u know what I mean...lol..he better become the nice armaan again..although that Armaan was very IMPULSIVE! loll

Loved the update Jia...you updated really FAST! YEAH! lol..

Can't wait for the two month gap and the last bit of flashback...

-Anita

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

part 11 was amazing

i cant believe armaan hit ridz and also their baby died poor ridz.i think they should have communicated with each other and these problems may have not occured.

the flash back was really intresting i really felt sorry 4 ridz because she was trying to give armaan everything and also trying to keep him happy but it seems their was a distantce between them.

the song u added was really nice.

👏

Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 16 years ago

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

ahhhh!! it happened..!!

true!!wit such reln...u often tke d other 4 granted..n r so dependant on d other..dt!! wen d bubble bursts...u dnt even hear the burstin sound!!!

i liked it..bt honestly..m gettin a lil annoyed wit tem both!! i dnt lke sad truths of life..i mean dtz hw it shud be..bt!!!! :)

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Taira Rai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Armaan is sooooooooooooo mean.....i hete him....selfish, nasty brute....and he killed their baby....I want to read the next part so update soon

this part was great and the way you potrayed Rudzie's emotions was amazingly flawless. I enjoyed reading every bit of the part...Oh! i wish Riddhima gets loads of success in her career and puts Armaan in his place...

Loved it

Taira

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Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Now that was a masterpiece......i so didn't expect all this

" I killed our baby Riddhima!…..when I came to know that from Rahul…..I felt like killing myself for hitting you "

She was pregnant and he actually hit her...oh my god....the man is really self centered though now he is feeling guilty but i still don't want Riddz to forgive him....he should realise what a jerk he has been..

I loved the flow of emotions and the way you are carrying the story forward....will be desperately waiting for the next part..

Keep it up

Gr8 job

Krati