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Mona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

nice part........keep itup.........thankc 4 the pm......

❤️MONA

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Natasha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Nahhiiii!, you can't do this jia!! This cannot happen, I noe I noe the love is true, just taken for granted, omg Nahhiii!

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Robin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

oh my good! she was pregnant and he hit her?!!? he killed their baby! im sooo pissed at armaan right now! after sleeping with her he should have treated her better. instead ignored her and chose his career over her, not giving a damn about her! poor girl is "torn"

by the way, wonderful choice of song, it described riddhimas state of emotions perfectly!

even though the full story isnt out yet, its clear that armaan was the one at fault, ridz was weak and couldnt stand up for herself, but he did the wrong!

im glad u brough rahul and muski into it, wonder how rahul will play apart, since he was the one who told armaan she was preggie.

i really liked this part, it answered a lot of questions, i mean theres still more to be revealed, but they story is unfolding nicely!

great job jia! im so glad u could update so quickly, u rock!

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prerna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

hey jia
thanks for the pm sweety
this was one superb part where almost the whole story is based one
so guess this was the bridging part where the whole story is revealed or the reason for her becoming like that is featured
liked it the way uve written well done dear
but then um feeling sorry for ridz n armi that they have fallen apart
but actually i feel both r at fault
coz she should have questioned him when he was not giving her her space n was not taking out time for her n he was also responsible in a major way though that he was caring more for his career n neglecting her
well that was not the reason why he had brought her o his house naa
too bad yaar
i think they should have sat n talked their heart out so things would have been diff
n then now i dunno what u have in ur mind but plz bring them back together
but what i guess is that RM will be instrumental in bringing them back together
NOTE: now i understood why u threw the baby out of the title coz u killed the baby in ur ff😆
ok now i guess enuf of bhashan
PS: i thought u would update armour but never mind
update that soon thats one exciting one naa i mean full of action its quite cool to read such an ff with ridz the cop lolz
update soon
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saira

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

awesome part jia👏!

it was sad tho😭

cnt w8 for the nxt update😳

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Killer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

oh god...!! man dominating ego.....God sve her... poor ridezz....

Luved it ..!⭐️! keep Riting... 😊

w8ng 4 next part....do rite soon

Maha!😛

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Love the part yaar, especially how you showed both sides of the story I mean both of them made mistakes in the relationship. Armaan by being selfish and ridz cause I think she was so happy to finally have someone of her own that she never stood up to Armaan for fear that he might leave her (at least that's how I read the situation) omg they lost their child?😭 And he hit her? 😡 Ok, that was unforgivable; seriously, he has to suffer for that. I don't approve of men raising their hands on women.

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mahru

@mahi4u

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

hey

congo on da new thread 🥳🥳🥳

grt prt

rellllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy gudddd one👏

cont super soooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru

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gia.khan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Thanks for the pm! loved the part as usuallll!

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Hi Jia,

Thanks forupdating this part....

But what is this?? Arman hitting Ridz, what a typical guy! I thought he was sweet & nice, but if his hitting did kill their baby, than I am completely with Ridz, she ought to hate him, but still Ihave some doubts, this is what I felt intially, when I read

the later part (in the flashback) Aramn apologies to her, for forcing things on her, was sweet too, I felt, he knew, he forced her but felt guilty as well, so he is not all that bad

then again, he not thinking about her career but only his, is also a selfish thinkg to do, its like most men, think, that a women is meant to be at home only, he is asking her why didn't she wake hime up, even asking him to make his breakfast ready, isn't he to help her equally...so atleast show some concern to her..

Poor Ridz couldn't go for the 1st performance of her lyrics too, cos again she thought about Arman & his career

Sometime, I feel that Ridz is at fault as well, she was always dominated by him, be it when she was paired up with Kevin, or get in that habit of him picking & dropping her off home, also, when she was looking for a place to stay , she could have gone somewhere, or even agreed to pay him some rental or something, I mean why can't this girl stand on her own, why does she need Aramn all the time, agree that she loved him & him her, but where is her self respect, her mom left her, she is more of a loner, but that doesn't mean she is helpless or any lesser than anyone, even when he did force upon her to make love, she could have pushed him away...sometime, down the lane, I feel Ridz is also responsible for Arman being so posseseive

there you go, I blamed both of your lead pair, but this is all cos of your fab writing, that you make us think in all these directions...

ps: Your FF is so close to reality, I must say, the way men behave, its sad we are in the 21st century & I still know of men who behave just the way Aramn has behaved in the last part...

do continue too

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