AR FF~Set Ablaze~ part-14 page-110 28/07

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prerna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#301

hey krati
gr8 as usual
loved it
um running out of time now will comment later

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aravi

@aravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#302

heyyy krati was waiting for dis one yaar!!!!!!!!! still as usual u left me amazed srsly wat a portrayal of characters n loved d way u put forth both AR's past!!!!!! i explains wat dey have grown up to b!!!!!!! i feel daijaan n neena are d two only ppl who noe d "real riddhima " here!!!!!! i mean dey understand her completely n OMG dat guy it was a bit scary !!!!!!

n den d way DJ understood n handled d situation srsly flawless is d word but but but dis john he spells trouble for ridzy i dunno why?????? i dont think he'll b dat easy to handle ..

n armaan as a boy was so notty n cute as alwaz d arrogant brat hehe!!!!!!! n now i feel d trip to india coming up haina???? waiting for d story to unfold here!!!!!!!! u r taking dis wonderfully !!!!!!!!

luv aravi

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Pebblez

@Pebblez

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Posted: 16 years ago

#303

Okay...so i already was a fan of your other ff, and now i am in absolute love with this one. I read it all in one go, its simple FANTASTIC!! You have done a great job in portraying both the characters in gray shades...specially Riddhima...but i personally believe you should show a little positivity in her character too...anyways...would love to read more of AR...than JR hahaha....good going...update soon!! Loads of love...

Kiran

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simran1285

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Posted: 16 years ago

#304

Whoa Krati where do you come up with such stuff, Ridz seems quiet the women!! Not liking John one bit and oh god I wonder how Armi will react when he finds out about Ridz little pleasure games! I hope that kid doesn't cause trouble. So Anji wants Ridz and Armi together, well here's wishing her wish comes true!

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Avanti

@forevercharmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#305

amazing part!!! the part with armis family was cute..and she is seriously going to drive john crazy!! please continue soon!

Avanti

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#306

Hi Krati,

Awesome update, am not sure, if I want to hate Ridz or love her, hate her for obivious reaosn, that she ruins other people's happiness, but then on the other side, when bi talks about her childhood, she seems such a lovely person, also, the way she behaved with Angies was nice too...she & Angie ganging up agianst Arman was nice to read

perhaps this India trip will change it all for her......I want John to get back to his preganent wife!!!

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sonia

@dmg_sonia

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Posted: 16 years ago

#307

hey krati....sorry 4 my late comment....really sorry 4 being late....coming 2 the pt...i loved it...the ridz who is with bi n armaan seem to be so good n nice...totally lovable....n the things which ridz does...to john or 2 any other guy i feel its just her way 2 remove her frustration, haterate things soo its kinda fine but then she should understand its not their fault, in watever happened with her anyway it was good 2 see ridz bonding with angie n ganging up with her against armi, it will be good 4 her future lolz after all angie will be her sister-in-law hehe...secondly i hope that boy doesnt create problems 4 AR...lastly waiting 4 the india tour...thanks 4 the wonderful flawless part

sonu

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Robin

@Robin_M

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Posted: 16 years ago

#308

awsome part krati, looks like ridz past is cathcing up to her! that guy was scary the way he grabed her and said all that! and its good armaan didnt suspect anything! but the truth will eventually come out, she cant run from it forever! and this john, ewwwww what a creep! cheats on his wife and now is trying to own ridz! but i hope she knows whats shes doing, this might land her into unwanted trouble! great part, loved the interaction betweem ridz and dai jaan and with armaans family! continue soon!

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Qwerty123rty

@Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: simran1285

Whoa Krati where do you come up with such stuff, Ridz seems quiet the women!! Not liking John one bit and oh god I wonder how Armi will react when he finds out about Ridz little pleasure games! I hope that kid doesn't cause trouble. So Anji wants Ridz and Armi together, well here's wishing her wish comes true!

All this stuff just flows wen i read your lovely comments and feel encouraged and motivated....😃

Pleasure games!!!...hmmm....lets see how the guy takes it...

Thanks a lot...m so glad you liked the part...

Originally posted by: forevercharmed
amazing part!!! the part with armis family was cute..and she is seriously going to drive john crazy!! please continue soon!

Avanti

Thanks so much Avanti....i am glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Jodubai
Hi Krati,

Awesome update, am not sure, if I want to hate Ridz or love her, hate her for obivious reaosn, that she ruins other people's happiness, but then on the other side, when bi talks about her childhood, she seems such a lovely person, also, the way she behaved with Angies was nice too...she & Angie ganging up agianst Arman was nice to read

perhaps this India trip will change it all for her......I want John to get back to his preganent wife!!!

Thanks a lot Jo. Confused...i know...you'll be able to decided once you are introduced to her past...hopefully....Glad u liked the part...

Originally posted by: dmg_sonia
hey krati....sorry 4 my late comment....really sorry 4 being late....coming 2 the pt...i loved it...the ridz who is with bi n armaan seem to be so good n nice...totally lovable....n the things which ridz does...to john or 2 any other guy i feel its just her way 2 remove her frustration, haterate things soo its kinda fine but then she should understand its not their fault, in watever happened with her anyway it was good 2 see ridz bonding with angie n ganging up with her against armi, it will be good 4 her future lolz after all angie will be her sister-in-law hehe...secondly i hope that boy doesnt create problems 4 AR...lastly waiting 4 the india tour...thanks 4 the wonderful flawless part

sonu

Thanks a lot Sonu...am really glad you liked the part.

Bulls eye....dats wat i hv been trying to explain to ever1 that Riddz does all the bad stuff to just take out her frustration and anger and to inflict the same pain, that she went underwent, on other...happy you understand that...😃 and ya its not their fault but than we tend to stupid things when we are so full of anger and pain....i'll elaborate on the whole thing in the coming parts...

lol...sister-in-law....long way to go...lets see when that happens...that boy...if you mean the guy who came from India...no he won't be much problem...i don't have much planned for him right now at least...

India tour...i know everyone's waiting for that...gonna start that in the nxt part...

Originally posted by: Robin_M
awsome part krati, looks like ridz past is cathcing up to her! that guy was scary the way he grabed her and said all that! and its good armaan didnt suspect anything! but the truth will eventually come out, she cant run from it forever! and this john, ewwwww what a creep! cheats on his wife and now is trying to own ridz! but i hope she knows whats shes doing, this might land her into unwanted trouble! great part, loved the interaction betweem ridz and dai jaan and with armaans family! continue soon!

Thanks sooooo much. Ya....u guys will see her past more clearly wen she goes to India as she'll be once again visiting the old memories and than perhaps you guys will understand her character better.

And John....hmmm....he is under Riddhima's spell here completely...u shud be sympathising with him here but there is going to be a lot more to their story here...you'll see. TROUBLE...thats the major part of the whole FF...hehehe😆.

Glad you liked the whole family scene...though i got bored writing it...i m liking writing evil stuff more than the sweet-romantic scenes😈...

Thanks a lot.

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Qwerty123rty

@Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: armaans*basket*
Okay...so i already was a fan of your other ff, and now i am in absolute love with this one. I read it all in one go, its simple FANTASTIC!! You have done a great job in portraying both the characters in gray shades...specially Riddhima...but i personally believe you should show a little positivity in her character too...anyways...would love to read more of AR...than JR hahaha....good going...update soon!! Loads of love...

Kiran

awww thanks a lot Kiran. Thats so sweet of you. Ya m gonna show more emotions (nicer ones) in the coming parts and hopefully you'll like those...

JR...AR...haha...ya you gonna see only AR and no JR once they are in India...

Thanks a lot

Originally posted by: aravi

heyyy krati was waiting for dis one yaar!!!!!!!!! still as usual u left me amazed srsly wat a portrayal of characters n loved d way u put forth both AR's past!!!!!! i explains wat dey have grown up to b!!!!!!! i feel daijaan n neena are d two only ppl who noe d "real riddhima " here!!!!!! i mean dey understand her completely n OMG dat guy it was a bit scary !!!!!!
n den d way DJ understood n handled d situation srsly flawless is d word but but but dis john he spells trouble for ridzy i dunno why?????? i dont think he'll b dat easy to handle ..

n armaan as a boy was so notty n cute as alwaz d arrogant brat hehe!!!!!!! n now i feel d trip to india coming up haina???? waiting for d story to unfold here!!!!!!!! u r taking dis wonderfully !!!!!!!!
luv aravi

Even i loved writing those scenes about their childhood..ya you are right, Neena and DJ are the only two people who know the real Riddhima. The guy....just trying to get to her past..

John spells troule for Riddz....lets see how??...

Hmmm....yup the trip is coming up...will start with it in the next chapter.

Thanks a lot...