AR FF~Set Ablaze~ part-14 page-110 28/07

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#291

krati....tht was great..but m such a dumbo i swear..i think i commented on yur fic couple days bck..but id nt read d entire thin...lol weni read tis 1 iw as like m nt sure where tis is cumin frm...!!
ohh well...tht was nice...u turn huge turns wit ridz....awesome!!
i kinda didn tlke dt room scene btn john n ridz...ovb!!but it was needed i guess!!
nevethrless...u did tht in an hour...it was was fab!! absolutely!

busy gurl!! luved d update!! =)

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maryam

@mar-

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#292

grt part really good

pls continue sooon

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mohini_agarwal

@mohini_agarwal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#293

thanks for the pm and great update. please continue soon and pm me when you do so.

love,

mona :]

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Qwerty123rty

@Qwerty123rty

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: mar-
grt part really good
pls continue sooon

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes
wow!! brilliant! look forward to another part soon!=D

Originally posted by: angullgrl91
gr8 part! cont soon :)

Originally posted by: rhama2
it was a cute part
with the childhood of armaan and ridz being described
it was so sweet😛
then that guy intervening was like the twist
then our hero removes the crap out of him just like in films
and the ******* john waitin to spend the night with her
and our ridz finally realized to leave him
great
ur story is moving ahead with great ideas

thanks for the pm

love:
aishwarya

Thanks a lot guys am really glad u people liked it.

Edited by krati.mehra - 16 years ago

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Kinza

@xxlibragurlxx

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#295

Great part Krati...wish she hurries up and falls in love with armman soon....john's such a jerk his wife's pregnant and he's lusting after another girl...cont soon...

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#296

Hi Krati

Loving the little side twist and all...actually im loving this ff...as ur progressing and all.... We can see that John and India will be haunting Riddhima in the up coming parts...

Lovin the pace and flow

Love Kat

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#297

Wowwwwwww Krati i mean i remain stunned with each update girl!! The way ur taking this........its just stunning!! Absolutely outstanding, highly appluadable girl!! The way she reacted with the references from past cropping up....the scared Ridz......and Armaan reacting to the moment!! Brilliant.

Her childhood....that was some thing beyond excellence, i mean the portrayal, it shows how her character developed over the years, her bonding with Dai jaan......Krati am at loss of words!!

And then Armaan...again childhood painted outstandingly......way to go!! u deserve a standing ovation girl!!!

Finally John, hmm i feel this is gonna haunt the way mercilessly she ruined him. srsly loving the pace, the flow!! U r some great talent. Waiting for more girl!!

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Hina

@hinz

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#298

hey Krati

been meaning to read this ff for a while now

just read the intro

i must say it was a fresh new concept

and the description of Riddhima,the passionate actor

was awsome,hopefully i'll get to read more soon

love

Hina

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Aishwarya

@Aishwarya..

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#299

it was a cute part
with the childhood of armaan and ridz being described
it was so sweet😛
then that guy intervening was like the twist
then our hero removes the crap out of him just like in films
and the ******* john waitin to spend the night with her
and our ridz finally realized to leave him
great
ur story is moving ahead with great ideas

thanks for the pm

love:
aishwarya

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Qwerty123rty

@Qwerty123rty

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: jia..
Wowwwwwww Krati i mean i remain stunned with each update girl!! The way ur taking this........its just stunning!! Absolutely outstanding, highly appluadable girl!! The way she reacted with the references from past cropping up....the scared Ridz......and Armaan reacting to the moment!! Brilliant.

Her childhood....that was some thing beyond excellence, i mean the portrayal, it shows how her character developed over the years, her bonding with Dai jaan......Krati am at loss of words!!

And then Armaan...again childhood painted outstandingly......way to go!! u deserve a standing ovation girl!!!

Finally John, hmm i feel this is gonna haunt the way mercilessly she ruined him. srsly loving the pace, the flow!! U r some great talent. Waiting for more girl!!

Thanks a lot Jia. Am reallyyyy glad you liked the part because i was sort of disappointed reading d comments coz everyone here wanting AR romance....but ur comment as usual cheered me up😃. thanks a lot for that....love you so much nd now its your turn to be updating and m waiting....

Originally posted by: hinanaziri
hey Krati

been meaning to read this ff for a while now

just read the intro

i must say it was a fresh new concept

and the description of Riddhima,the passionate actor

was awsome,hopefully i'll get to read more soon

love

Hina

Thanks a lot. M really glad that you liked the intro and hopefully you'll like the rest of it as well.

Originally posted by: xxlibragurlxx
Great part Krati...wish she hurries up and falls in love with armman soon....john's such a jerk his wife's pregnant and he's lusting after another girl...cont soon...

Thanks so much. haha...hurry up...hehehe....i'll start with that soon....hopefully in the next part.

Not just lusting he's done it.

Originally posted by: Catwoman

Hi Krati

Loving the little side twist and all...actually im loving this ff...as ur progressing and all.... We can see that John and India will be haunting Riddhima in the up coming parts...

Lovin the pace and flow

Love Kat

Thanks so much. Am really happy that you liked it. India wiill def be haunting her but John will be dealt with in the next part....