Where The Heart Is...AK (CH.3[A], p. 7) - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

nice concept...lookin forward to read the first part.

Sana

Thanks...hope I dont disappoint you!

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing intro

sounds really intresting
cant wait 2 read the first part

Thank you so much...you won't have to wait long, I'll start typing the part soon.

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

grt concept..really touched me...plz cont. soon

Aww thank you! I will.

Originally posted by: sweet honey

great cncept....cont soon

thanks...i will

Originally posted by: luv1angel

YAY im so happpy another AK ff i just updated SOME THINGS ARE MEANT TO BE so at the bottom i let everyone know that u started a knew one and told them to read it ... lol ... i was so goona read this book cuz im in grade 11 and i have english this semester so this book is one of the ISU books that we could do our essay on but i didnt get it but i waz still gonna read it now ur doing a ff based on it YAY.... im so happpy a new AK ff.... now so much of rambling GOOOD JOB POST THE FIRST PART SOOON ....!!!!!! =D

Ruta<3 ☺️

Hey Ruta! Thank you sooo much for your support, and kindness...it means a lot :) I just picked up that book yesterday, and couldn't put it down...I read it till like 4 am...and all the while I was thinking...Angad and Kripa would be sooooooo good in this story...:) I'll post the first part tonight mostly...keep reading...and I'll comment on ur fanfic in a bit, i see you updated but havent read it yet :)

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

oO..ak fan fic! definitely excited to read it!

Yayyy! thank you so much for reading...I know AK fanfics are like a rarity nowadays :( you really have to DIG through the forum to find them...hope I wont disappoint you with this one !

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

Hey awesome concept! One question: Does that mean they are old in here? Plz pm me when u update.

Thanks! They're not that old..as you probably noticed in the introduction, Kripa left when she was 17...and it's been 16 yrs...so that makes her 33...As for angad, he's the same
age....how can he have a teenaged son at only 33? you'll have to read to find out ;)
Thanks you guys for your sweet comments...I'm typing up the Character Sketch and first chapter right now...:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sorry I haven't been able to finish the first chapter yet, it's partially typed, but still have to finish and edit it, so it'll be posted tomorrow. Meanwhile, here's the character sketch. If anything confuses you, please do ask...I realize there's a lot of characters being thrown in at once....

Character Sketch

Kripa Sharma- Age 33. A marketing expert for a large international firm. She left her hometown of Ann Arbor, MI at the age of 17, heartbroken and hopeless. After her MBA, she settled in Miami, FL. She lives with her fiance Prithvi Bose, and they've cohabitated for around three years. She recently found out that she's pregnant, a news she thought would bring happiness to both her and Prithvi, and finally convince him to get married—something he's been stalling for a long time. However, things don't always turn out as expected, and Prithvi says he needs time to "think". Heartbroken yet again, and with nowhere to go, she returns to the only other place that's familiar to her—her mother's home in Ann Arbor, another thing she's NOT looking forward to.

Angad Khanna- Age 34. A physician who spent the last 13 years in Atlanta establishing his private practice. He came from the "bad part of town", growing up in poorer pockets of society. Had a bad-boy image growing up, but all he wanted to do is become a doctor.Three years ago, he moved back to Ann Arbor, because his father-in-law suffered a major heart attack. He hasn't been able to move back to Atlanta however, much to the chagrin of his wife Mishti and son Prateek. His wife who insisted that they move back to Atlanta eventually grew depressed and started drinking...eventually passing away in a car accident due to drunken driving. The loss of Mishti, the hardship of being a single father to a teenaged son who displays nothing but contempt, and the guilt of hurting his first love have been taking a toll on him. Frustrated, he keeps busy with his father-in-law's private practice.

Prateek Khanna- Aged 16. The only son of Angad and Mishti, basically a good kid at heart, he's been deeply affected by his mother's sudden death, and blames his father for her miserable last days. Like his mother, he too misses Atlanta, and wishes that someday he could return home. His anger makes him act out against Angad, straining the already tense relationship between father and son. His only outlet is his notebook, but that is strictly his private property, and nobody is allowed to even touch it. He doesn't have any friends at his high school in Ann Arbor. No one except for Avantika, who he wishes would leave him alone, and is quite rude to her.

Mishti Khanna (nee Varma)- Now deceased. Angad's wife and the mother of his only child. She hated Ann Arbor even though it was her hometown. She thrived on the Atlanta social circuit, but felt suffocated when their family moved back to Ann Arbor to be with her father. She started drinking, and lost her life due to a drunken driving accident.

Prithvi Bose- Aged 33. An ambitious lawyer that would go to any lengths to be successful. He has one aim in life: to become the most successful lawyer in the country, and is willing to sacrifice whatever it takes to get there, including his fiance and unborn child. He keeps stalling his and Kripa marriage, and is very unhappy to find out that Kripa's pregnant. He asks for "some time to think" when Kripa tells him she's pregnant.

Gayatri Sharma- Kripa's mother. Her and Kripa had always had a strained relationship, and for reasons unknown to only Kripa. Gayatri is a stoic lady, independent yet traditional in her values. Though she and Kripa's now-desceased father separated when Kripa was 12, she never actually divorced him, stating that "they didn't do that back then". Only she knows the real reason for her difficult relationship with her daughter, and trying to keep it to herself has caused much friction between them over the years.

Aaliyah Malhotra- Kripa only other "true" friend from childhood. If it hadn't been for Angad, Aaliyah would've definitely been Kripa's best friend. She understands Kripa more than Kripa would like to think, and was always available to lend Kripa a shoulder to lean on, no matter that Kripa didn't take it. She's married to her high school sweetheart Josh Malhotra and has three children Avantika (14), Siddharth (11) and Sameer (8).

Josh Malhotra- Aaliyah's husband and loving father. Though he's a tough city cop by day, he's a loving and caring husband and father at home, especially to his first-born and only daughter Avantika.

Avantika Malhotra- Aged 14, is a freshman in high school. She's always around Prateek, who she wants to be friends with. Although he's downright rude to her, she brushes off his rudeness, as she understands he's still mourning his mother's death.

Rajesh Varma- Mishti's father, a minor character. He's a physician who suffered a major heart attack 3 years ago, and since has given up practicing full time.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow...awesome character sketch! nd im definitely sure i wont be disappointed by ur fan fic...by wat ive read of ur writing so far..which is only the intro nd char. sketch..lol..u seem like an amazing writer! cant wait for the first part :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey great character sketch..
post first part soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: angullgrl91

wow...awesome character sketch! nd im definitely sure i wont be disappointed by ur fan fic...by wat ive read of ur writing so far..which is only the intro nd char. sketch..lol..u seem like an amazing writer! cant wait for the first part :)

Thank you so much, so sweet of you :) will post the part tomorrow morning latest by 10 am EST.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great introduction...

I'll read ur ff for sure.

do continue soon and if possible for you ; can you PM me once you update it!

Take care,

Priya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great character sketch..
post first part soon..

ty :) i'll post it tmrw...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cheeky_pari

great introduction...

I'll read ur ff for sure.

do continue soon and if possible for you ; can you PM me once you update it!

Take care,

Priya

hey thanks for reading! Sure i'll PM you...no probs :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Okay guys, I've run into a bit of a problem...I'm confused regarding whom to 'cast' as Prateek and Avantika...I was thinking Harshad Chopra as Prateek and Vinny Israni (Urmi from Athva Vachan) as Avantika....do you guys have any suggestions? Remember Prateek is 16 and Avantika is 14...so the actors have to resemble their ages.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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great charachter sketch
pritvi seems like a shrewd charachter because he is willing to leave everything just to be the best.
cant wait 4 kripa to come back

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