The Destiny updated pg. 145 part 23 - Page 75

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

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a lovely and a fabulous update

well written....

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thanks Shona for liking the update. 😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: arpita25

Read two more parts of the fic n really it's the best fic u wrote.

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Raj ne har jagah kitne samajhdaari dikhai hai na. Reception me Naina ko dekh k us ki aakhein to jaise chipak hi gayi thi us se aur sab us ko is k liye kitna tease kar rahe the.

Pyaar ho gaya hai janaab ko na, aur un ko khud bhi kahabar nahi hai. 😉 😉 😉

Perfect song selection for the situation.

thanks dear 😊 😊 😊

Neha ko bhi Kunal mil gaya hai, par jab vo us ko like karti hai to accept karne me kya problem hai us ko? But Kunal bhi manwaa k rahega.

May b kuch aur bhi soch rahi ho vo na is baare me.

Raj ka Naina ko bahon me carry kar k room tak le jaane vaal scene mujhe Veer Jaara ka yaad aa gaya.

Haan kaafi had tak hum Raj ne SRK dekhte hain na. 😉 😉 😉
Thanks dear for replying 😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIIIIIIIII VERTIKA HOW R U?
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MINDBLOWING
LOVELY
TOOOOOOO GOOOOOD
ROMANTIC
PAR RAJ KAISE UTHAYEGA
NAINA KO MUJE JAANAA HAIN
PLZ UD KARO JALDI SE
LOVE
DEEPA

Hello Deepa, i am fine.

Thanks for replying dear 😉 😉 😉

Originally posted by: danish1

beautiful update .

please contnue😃 😃 👏

thanks Danish 😳 😳 😳

First of all guys thank u for ur support and thanks for having faith in me.🤗🤗🤗
Aap sab ki hi vajah se aaj meri is fic k bhi 100 pages poore ho gaye hain aur is k liye mai kitne khush hoon mai sach me wods me nahi bata sakti aap ko.
I hope ki aage bhi aap sab ka pyaar n trust milta rahe. 😍😍😍
Thanks for making me a theek thaak writer. 😉 😉 😉
Ek cheej aur aage aap logon k paitence ko mai jyada test nahi karoongi aur regularly ud karne ki koshish karoongi. 😆 😆 😆

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Hello guys here comes the update aur aage k comments ka reply mai kal de doongi.

Part 18:-

Raj Naina k paas gaya aur bahut paas. Us ne Naina k chehre par se us k baalon ko theek kiya. Us ki najar Naina k nighty k buttons par gayi jis k top k do buttons khule hue the shayad sote time Naina ne dhyaan nahi diya hoga. Raj bus yu hi dekhta raha Naina k us hisse ko. Her delicate body part was visible from it. Raj was mesmerized and he was loosing his control on him.

He bent on her n lay a soft kiss on her forehead. Naina thoda sa hili par fir so gayi. Raj ne phir ek pyaara sa peck diya us k lips par aur fir us ko dekha to Naina smile kar rahi thi.

"Accha tareeka hai na." she said whispering in his ears.

"Hmmmmmm" he just whispered in her ears.

(Par Naina bhi na kammal hai pata nahi itne neend aati kyoun hai is ko.)

Now Raj move downwards n kissed her neck. Naina felt butterflies in her stomach.She liked this touch and loved the feel. She was shivering with the ecstasy of the feel of being a women who is been loved by his man only. Raj was unable to stop him, He doesn't know himself what is making him weak when he saw Naina like this. Raj kissed her nape n he slipped the inner strings of her nighty n started kissing her bare shoulders.

"Veer", Naina whispered softly.

"Kya hai?" he asked still kissing her.

"No." she said requesting but still in her heart she didn't want her Veer to stop.

"Nahi Naina, ab mai aur nahi ruk sakta." He said.

Naina was amazed by his sudden behavior. "No Raj pls." Naina was also turning on by his each kiss on her bare shoulders. She held the collar of his night suit tightly as she was now unable to control herself too, Raj passion and his kisses were making her crazy.

Idhar Raj bhi apne aap ko rok nahi paa raha tha Naina ko kiss karne se. Pata nahi kyoun ek k baad ek kiss kiye jaa raha tha aur vo chahta tha ki vo Naina se bus yuhin hi pyaar karta rahe.

"Veer,"

"Hmmm,"

"koi aa jaayega." She whispered.

"Aane do." He answered.

"Subah ho chuki hai na." she whispered.

"To kya? Apni biwi ko pyaar karne k liye mujhe time dekhna padega." He replied which made Naina smile.

Suddenly Raj realized what he just said and what the hell is he doing with Naina without knowing about her opinion. He left her immediately and he turned his face with a guilt in his eyes. Naina was again surprised by his sudden action. He could hardly say that "I am sorry Naina."

Naina couldn't see that guilt in his eyes, "its ok Veer."

"Nahi Naina, I know mai galat tha mujhe pehle tumhara opinion jaana chahiye na ki kyat um abhi is k liye''''.."

"Shhhhhh," she placed her finger on his lips.

"Kitna sochte hain aap?"

Raj gave her again a sadden look, "Naina mai aisa''." He was left incomplete.

"I know nahi karna chahte the na." she said.

Raj nodded his head."Pata nahi kaise apne aap par kaboo nahi rakh paaya Naina, aur na jaane tum kya soch rahi hogi ab mere bare me."

Naina smiled, "Aisa kuch nahi hai Veer, aap ki hi galti nahi hai kahin mai bhi kamjor pad gayi thi." Her voice lowered.

Raj looked at her face, he felt again guilty, "Once again I am sorry Naina." He said.

"Ab is k baad no more sorries haan." Naina said, "Veer mai aap ki patni hoon to itna hak to hai hi aap ko mujh par. Bus ye alag baat hai ki shayad mai abhi is k liye ready nahi thi." She said a bit assuringly to Raj.

Raj smiled at her understanding behavior 'samajhne lagi ho Naina tum mujhe acche se shayad, isiliye mujhe ye ehsaas nahi dilana chahti ki maine galat kiya hai.'

Tabhi darwaaje par jor se knock hue jis se Raj aur Naina dono ek pal k liye surprise ho gaye. Raj samajh gaya ki vahar maa ya phir Neha hi hongi to us ne Naina ko ishara kiya relax hone ka, "Relax Naina varna agar hum ko kisi ne aise dekh liya to sochega ki hum pati patni ho k itna weired behave kyoun kar rahe hain." And he left to open the door smiling.

Yahan Naina pata nahi kya kya soch kar sharmaaye jaa rahi thi ki Raj k touch me aisa kya tha jo vo Raj ko mana bhi nahi kar paayi. Us ko aisa kyoun lag raha tha ki shayad Raj ka chuna us ko kahin na kahin accha laga hai isiliye vo apne aap ko rok bhi nahi paa rahi thi. Kuch bhi ho aakhir Raj us ka pati hai aur us ka hak hai us par aur us k jism par bhi.

Raj ne darwaaja khola to saamne maa thin, "Beta Naina uth gayi?" she asked.

"Haan maa kab ki." Raj said.

Naina ne suna ki maa bula rahi hain to vo uth k gayi. "Haan maa kahiye." She bent n touched her feet.

"Dhudho nahao puto falo." She blessed her.

Naina blushed but Raj couln't understood y.

"Beta abhi Sharma ji k ghar se un ki maid aayi thi kehne ki aaj shaam ko un ki bahu ki godbharai hai to unhone hum ko bulaya hai vahan." Raj's mom told.

"Kitne baje jaana hai maa?" she asked.

"Shaam ko 4 baje, to mai kehne aayi thi ki mai jaanti hoon tu abhi tak dukhi hai to mai Neha ko le k vahan chali jaaongi."

"Theek hai maa." Naina said thinking once again about his dad's incident.

"Vaise maa mujhe ek baat poochni thi aap se." Raj asked.

"Bol."

"Maa ye kuch der pehle aap ne Naina ko ek aashirvaad diya is ka matlab kya hota hai?" Raj asked with confused face.

Naina smiled n move inside.

"Tu bhi na, ab kam se kam jaldi se mujhe dadi bana bus is ka aashirvaad diya hai maine Naina ko." Raj's mom teased him.

"Par maa aap dadi pote ki banana chahti hain ya poti ki koi advice denge." Raj asked his mom naughtily.

His mom pulled his ears n said, "Jis ki tu bana de."

"Are maa itne jor se kaan kyoun pakda hai? Mai to mazak kar raha tha chodo na pls." Raj requested.

"Tu na humesha baccha hi rahega." His mom kissed his forehead.

"Maa aap k liye to vaise bhi mai baccha hi rahoonga par ek baat batao kitne pote ya potiyan chahiye aap ko." He asked naughtily again.

"Ruk abhi batai hoon tujhe, besharam." His mom was about to hit him when he left outside.

Naina was listening it all, she smiled only at this convo. When Raj turned he found her smiling, he thought a plan in his mind. To change Naina's mood and lighten the situation he went close to Naina who was arranging the pillow covers.

"So, maa ne to kuch bataya nahi ki un ko kis ki dadi ban na hai pehle, tum hi kuch idea do na."

"Veer aap bhi na, kaise baatein karte hain." She blushed.

"Are lo, is me itna sharmaane waali kya baat hai? Aaj nahi to kal kabhi to hona hi hai na ye?"

"To jaroori hai ki hum is bare me koi baat karein?"

"Haan bilkul, u know baat karne se hi duniya ki jyadatar problems solve hoti hain."

She shot a look,"Mujhe bhi pata hai; par ye koi aise problem nahi hai samjhe aap."

"Dekho Naina, baat ko samajhne ki koshish karo abhi se well planned hoga sab to aage chal kar kisi bhi tarah ki confusion nahi hogi." He was in full mood to tease Naina.

"Kaise confusion honi hai vaise bhi?" she asked without looking at him doing something.

He went to her and holding her shoulders he turned her to him and said looking in her eyes,"Vo ye madam, ki baad me tum bolo mujhe beta chahiye aur mai kahoon mujhe beti chahiye; ya phir tum kaho mujhe beti chahiye aur mai kuch to pehle se problems solve ho jaayein to jyada better hota hai na." he winked to which Naina blushed once again.

She started thinking something.

"Kya hua, kya sochne lagi?" he asked.

"Vo to vaise bhi nahi pata chalega tab tak jab tak vo is duniya me nahi aayega na ki kis ki khwahish poori hoti hai." Now it was her turn to wink.

Raj smiled at her presence of mind but he was not ready to give up this session soon, "To kuch karein is bare me?"he asked naughtily.

Naina got confused, "Kya karein matlab?"

Raj hit his head showing how frustrated he was, "Are bhai makaan banane k liye jameen to leni padegi na?"

Naina got more confused, "jameen, kaise jameen?"

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"Kya kal raat me tum mere room me aaye the?" she asked him rounding her eyes.

"Haan kyoun? Vaise bhi vahan koi no entry ka board to dikha nahi mujhe." He teased him back.

"Bahut besharam insaaan ho tum. Kisi bhi ladki k room me aise aadhi raat me ghusne ka kya matlab?" she was fuming now.

"Oh sweet heart itna gussa kyoun karti ho? Vaise bhi tum itne hot ho aur agar aise hi itna gussa karti rahi na to aur hot ho jaaogi."

"Kunal tum aaj k baad mujh se baat mat karna." Saying this she was about to leave when he caught her hand n pinned her in wall.

"Aur bhi bahut kuch dekha maine jo maine tum ko nahi bataya." Kunal was looking in her beautiful eyes.

"Aur kya dekha tum ne?" Neha asked as her voice was going week.

"Maine dekha ki ek pagal se buddhu se ladki jis se mai sab se jyada pyaar karta hoon vo bhi mujh se bahut pyaar karti hai. Bus kehna nahi chati hai. Pata nahi kyoun?"

"Aur?" she asked as if she is lost in his charm.

"Maine dekha ki us k legs bahut hot hain, us ki body bahut hot hai. Jab vo soti hai na to khawabon me mujhe dekh kar bahut smile karti hai. Aur tab vo bilkul ek pari jaise lagti hai."

"Aur".

"Aur maine dekha ki vo itne khoobsurat hai na ki jee chahta hao bus us ko aise hi dekhta rahoon. Kabhi kabhi to jee karta hai us ko apni bahon me le kar itna pyaar karoon ki vo khud ko hi bhool jaaye humesha k liye."

"Aur?"

"Aur maine ye dekha ki jo Neha hai na abhi tak itne masoom hai ki bacchon jaise teddy le k soti hai." He teased her.

"Kya??????????" she was shocked.

Kunal hasne laga kyounki vo jaanta tha ki ye sach kisi ko pata nahi hai aur Neha irritated thi kyounki vo jaanti thi ki agar ye baat kisi ko pata chali to sab us ka kitna mazak banayenge.

"Haan aur mai soch raha tha ki ab agar tum teddy ki jagah replace kar k mujhe try kar k dekho to kaisa rahega?"

Ab Neha k pass koi jawab nahi tha ki kya kahe vo.

"Bolo na."

"Kyoun boloon ab to mai kabhi kuch bhi nahi boloongi." Ye keh kar Neha chali gayi vahan se.

"Bologi jaaneman tum aur bahut jaldi. Mujhe kehalwaana bhi padega kyounki meri leaves khatam hone k pehle tumhara haan kehna bahut jaroori hai mere liye." Kunal soch raha tha.

"Kis ka haan kehna jaroori hai Kunal?" kisi ne poocha aur jab Kunal ne peeche palat k dekha to Raj khada tha.

"Haan''.nahi'''.haan vo mera matlab mere boss ka." Kisi tarah se Kunal ne baat ko samhaalte hue kaha.He thanked god that Raj k aane se pehle hi Neha vahan se chali gayi varna vo Raj ko kya batata apne aur Neha k bare me.

"Achanak boss kahan se aa gaya?" Raj asked confusingly.

"Are vo mere boss ka phone aaya tha na aur vo vapas bula rahe the mujhe to maine un ko bola ki abhi tum sab ko meri jyada jaroorat hai mai kaise aa sakta hoon."

"It's ok Kunal agar tumhara jaana itna hi jaroori hai to hum tum ko nahi rokenge."he reasoned.

"Oh'.nahi Raj aisa nahi hai. Maine boss ko samjha diya hai aur vo maan bhi gaye hain." He added quickly.

"Oh tab theek hai."

Here Neha was in her room when she was remembering the events which took place few minutes later. She was smiling and blushing. 'Pata nahi kyoun mai Kunal k saamne kuch keh nahi paa rahi hoon jab ki mai bhi jaanti hoon ki mai us k liye kya feel karti hoon.' She smiled at her thought.

"Kuch bhi ho Kunal k jaane se pehle mujhe us se ek baar to kehna hi hoga ki I love him." She said to herself.

"Oho to ye baat hai jo humari Neha jee aaj kal itna blush kar rahi hain na?"

She turned n found Naina in front of her smiling at her. She blushed more n said, "Bhabhi aap yahan kab aayi?"

very nice update vertika !!!👏

Update was very good

Hi Vertika