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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Finally tu bach gayi marne se.๐Ÿ˜‰ Accha kiya ki update kar diya varna mujh se bura koi nahi hota aur ye to tu bhi acche se jaanti hai. ๐Ÿ˜†
Thank god mai bach gayi sahi time pe varna na jaane kya hota mera ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Accha tha ye update.๐Ÿ‘ Ye Abhi ne bhi Ritu se training li hai kya galat time pe logon ko disturb karne ki? ๐Ÿ˜ก Jab RN busy the mere to kya jaroorat thi to beech me phone kar k koodne ki? ๐Ÿ˜ก
Kya kar sakte hain, dono hi sir dard ban gaye hain Raj ki zindagi k liye ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

Kitne acche se chida raha tha Raj Naina ko aur baap re Naina kitne jealous hoti hai.๐Ÿ˜‰ Bilkul meri tarah ki hai Naina nature wise.๐Ÿ˜› Raj bhi jaan moojh kar Ritu ka naam leta hai us k saamne. ๐Ÿ˜†
Sach me hum gals itna jealous hoti hain ki poocho mat. Naina k muh se jalan me apne liye pyaar barasta dekh kar Raj ko accha lagta hai na ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

Abhi ab Shalu ko line maarega kya?๐Ÿ˜ฒ Jo saath le jaana chahta hai us ko aur sahi kaha Raj ne adat nahi badli hai us ki abhi tak.๐Ÿ˜ก
Koi milega to na le jaayega. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Us ko aaj tak koi mila hi kahan? ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Shalu ki help se cadets ko permission bhi mil gaya ab to
. Mujhe lagta hai Raj ki party k liye ab koi kasar nahi chodenge ye.๐Ÿ˜‰ I liked the idea of welcoming new facility.
Hona bhi chahiye aakhir Naina k alawa bhi new log aayein hain aur jab tak ye jaane ki koshish nahi karenge un ko to pata kaise chalega ki kaun accha hai aur kaun bura? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Arjun and Arohi ka vo scene kaafi accha tha saath me KMH 2 ka track song bhi.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ Us ki to bolti hi bund ho gayi na Arohi ko saari me dekh kar. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Aisa hi haal hona tha in ladkon ka ladkiyon ko dekh kar.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ Thanks i love that track song of both KMH 1 and 2

Par pehle kitna chidha raha tha vo us ko.๐Ÿ˜”
๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” Yahan Raj ki bhi halat kam kharab nahi hai Naina ko dekh kar. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
Super hot jo lag rahi hai Naina ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Pls yaar is baar jaldi chahiye update.



Thanks love for comment ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

Hiii Vertika

superb upd
mindblowing
fantastic
do cont. soon
thanx for d pm
Love
Deepa



Hello Deepa and thanks for reply ๐Ÿค—
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita25

Hey dear good update. ๐Ÿ‘
thanks yaar ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Raj aur Naina k beech kabhi na kabhi koi na koi aa hi jaata hai last time Dr. Mishra aur is baar Abhimanyu jee ka phone aa gaya.๐Ÿ˜ก
Sab k sab aise hain ki bus kabab me haddi banana jaante hain. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Pata hai kitna irritate karta hai ye insaan mujhe?๐Ÿ˜ก Is ki kismat acchi hai ki ye Rajveer ka dost hai varna abhi tak maine is ka kaam tamaam kar diya hota.๐Ÿ˜†
Chod yaar tu apna bp mat high kar is k peeche ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Chalo koi baat nahi Arjun hai na yahan mood theek karne k liye.๐Ÿ˜‰ Arjun to Arohi ko dekh k ek dum fida ho gaya saari me.๐Ÿ˜ณ
Har baar pichli baar se jyada fida ho jaata hai vo. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Yahan cadets bahut khush hain jo un ko permission mil gayi hai party k liye but i agree with Shalu and Alekh ki un ko new officers ka bhi welcome karna chahiye.
Sab ka equally welcome hona chahiye na ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

Try to update soon the fic this time.



Thanks Arpu dear ๐Ÿ˜
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesooome..

superb.
fab.
wonderful.
loved the upd.
thanx for the pm.



Hey Preeti thanks a lot dear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Nice part

thanks Nisha ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Abhi and Raj are happy to meet each other, and Abhi complains that Raj had not informed him about their marriage.

Kya jarorat thi vahan bhi hum hum kar k sab ko paka deta ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Cadets gets excited upon receiving permission form BC to hold the party. They wanted to do something special for favorite teacher. Raj is deeply touched when his cadets come to invite him for the party. Raj is very found of his cadets while they too love and respect him

Vo sab Raj aur Naina k liye hi to kar rahe hain na ye sab aur sach me Raj hai hi aisa ki us k liye ye sab kiya jaaye. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Raj enjoys teasing naina, seeing her jealous whenever he mentions Ritu's name. He knows that naina loves him very much and this makes it very difficult to control his passion and love for her.

Jaan moojh kar karta hai vo ye sab, kyounki us ko Naina k aise reactions dekh kar accha lagta hai. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Raj is lost in naina's beauty on seeing her dressed in the saree.

yeah ab pata nahi aage kya karega? ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

Continue soon



Thanks a lot Nisha for comment ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ridhz21

Hey dear ๐Ÿค—

Wonderful ff ๐Ÿ‘
read it in one go loved it
pls do add me to ur pm list



Hey darling thanks and will do that for sure ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

nice part

thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

abhi...raj ko uss ke shadi ke liye ched raha tha...!!! raj bichara kuch keh bhi nahi pa raha tha...!!! phir uss kambakhat abhi ko nandini ki baat chedne ki kya jarurat thi...stupid...humesha raj ke smile ke piche pada rehta hai...!!! jab bhi raj achhe mood me hota hai tabhi use yeh bakwas karni hoti hai...
Aakhir vo Abhi hai na kabhi bhi kuch bhi sensible baatein kahan kar sakta hai vo, ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ humesha faltoo k kaam karta rehta hai. Us ka naam hi wrong number rakh dete hain. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
khair...nandini toh raj ke past life se judi hui thi...isiliye raj thoda sa tension ho gaya...par abhi toh uss ki life me naina hai na...aur voh use baht chahta bhi hai...isiliye mujhe koi tension nahi hai...
Hogi bhi nahi,๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† pata nahi Raj k saath kaisa rishta tha Nandini ka but ab to us ka future aur present sab kuch Naina hai na aur vo humesha us k saath rahegi. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
arjun arohi ke scene mast the...dono ki halki halki takraar maza aata hai...!!! BC bhi badal gaya hai...party kar ke liye jo permission de di...!!! aur raj bhi apne fav cadets se kafi khush hai...
Sab us ki khushi k liye hi to kiya jaa raha hai na aur BC kaise nahi maante aakhir manane bhi to Doc Shalini gayi thi. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

raj ko pata hai naina ko kaise naraz karna hai...!!! RITU...ka naam le kar use naraz karta rehta hai...aur jab voh naraz ho jati hai toh raj ko bhi pata hota hai ke use kaise manana hai...
Sab se acche se pata hai aur kabhi bhi vo apne Raj se ek pal k liye naraj kaise reh sakti hain na. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

par her baar ki tarah iss baar bhi dono ke romance me tragedy ki entry hoti hai...!!! iss baar tragedy...phone ka ring tha...
Us ka bhi reason vo wrong number Abhi tha. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Arjun aur Raj dono hi saree scene me phanshe...ha ha ha...
Bechare, ab kya hoga un ka? ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

ab next ud kab hoga...iss saal ya tujhe do-teen aur saal lagenge...



Ho jaayega itna lamba intezaar nahi karna padega. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Thanks Priya dear for comment.
๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hi vertika !!

Superrrbbb update yaar !
Thanks Mana

So Abhi is teasing Raj...
Abhi me abhi kuch akal baaki hai na

Raj and Naina are so much in love !
Ye to sahi hai ki RN are in love

He very well knows how to turn Naina jealous...
Is se hi to fayda hota hi hai us ka.

Arjun and Arohi scenes were also nice...

update soon.



Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

Nice part Vertika...Raj teasing Naina in the name of Ritu is funny...she always gets jealous๐Ÿ˜†...not realizing he is teasing her...
kuch dino baad jab samjhegi na tab Raj ki halat dekhne waali hogi.๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Raj just do that to know how much she loves him. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

so a party is on its way...great...now who can be the spy Raj is looking for...there are so many new people around...AA's scene was cute๐Ÿ˜ƒ
you will get to know about that very soon. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š



Thanks Esha for commenting on my this fic. ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

Part 22

Nice romantic scene btwn Raj-Naina in the beginning...but of course interrupted by who else but Doctor Mishra!!
Thanks yaar,๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š kabab me haddi ban ne ka bahut shauk hai us ko. ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

Anyways...its a lil disturbing for me to knw that Abhi knws abt Raj killing Navin, ye idiot kahin apna muh na khol de Naina ke saamne!! And again, Nandini wali baat kehke usne phir se pareshan kar diya Raj ko...ye Abhi koi sahi kaam nahi kar sakta kya? Hehe...chalo...abhi se uss par nahi barsungi...lets see wat all he does on future!!
Tabhi to maine us ka naam wrong number rakha hai na, kuch sahi karega to number right nahi ho jaayega wrong se. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Naveen k baare me Naina ko pata chalega jaldi hi. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

Meanwhile Arjuhi scene was nice...and loved the Naina-Arohi scene as well...hehe. And at the end of that...Raj ka kehna "I love this sweet baby"...aww...that was really sweet!!
hehehehe, Raj ki vajah se kahin hum sab ko dibities na ho jaaye ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

And next, girls were bringing on their sweet complaints to Raj...when Ritu took the opportunity to poison Naina's mind...huh. But of course she trusts Raj...but there is still that Navin thing hanging in btwn...๐Ÿ˜•
Ritu k pass time hi itna free hai ki kuch bhi ho sakta hai yahan. Ritu bus ab apne ulte din gin ne start karein. ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

Khair...am moving on to the next part now. This was however a very interesting & enjoyable part for me. ๐Ÿ˜Š
thanks a lot dear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ




Thank u so much Sumi
๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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