pyaar ya inkaar ff p25 pg41 LAST PART - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: CutieA

wooow...ur FF sound so kuul...it will be intriguin to see who is paird up wid whooo lol...im guessin here so plz dnt mind! ...R.Dharam -R.Sia/Ananya, R.Veer - R.Ananya/Sia....Agni - R.Sawri/R.Sakshi, R.Harsh - R.Bhoomi/Sawri...update soon...xxx

thanks and yeah i dont mind u making guesses as its interesting.
all the pairs are interesting and in some of them there are possibilities.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks to all of you who commented and I'm glad u all are waiting eagerly for this fic to start. I hope i can carrry on entertaining u during the whole fic.
Part 1
The first meeting
Sumaina Mahal
Daasi: Maharani ki jai ho. Maharani yeh sandesh abhi abhi Maharaj ke liye aaya hai
Maharani Nivriti: Lao mujhe dedo (takes the scroll excitedly) Ab tum jaasakti ho
she excitedly reads the message and then leaps with joy
Sumaina Maharaj: Maharani kya huwa aap itna uchal kyu rahee hai
M. Nivi: Are Maharaj itne saalo baad hume nuyoto aaya hai. hum sab ko Ramgarh ke Maharaj ne jashan pe bulaaya hai. Rajkumari Sunaina ke janam din kee khushi me
S.M: Wo to theek hai lekin hum waha kese jaaenge?
M. Nivi: kya matlab kese jaaenge? wese hee jese or rajya jaaenge
S. M: Dusro or humme faraq hai maharani
M. Nivi: koi faraq nahi hai Maharaj. Faraq sirf aapki soch ka hai. Hum bhi raj gharaane ke hee hai or kisee se kam nahi. Warna ye nuyoto hume kyu aata?
S. M: kyu ke Ramgarh ke Maharaj humare aziz dost hai
M. Nivi: jo bhi ho, hum sab jaarahe hai. Are zara sochye kitne saare raj gharaane ke log aaenge waha per or kitne saare rajkumar (eyes light up) hamaree saaree beteeyo ke liye koi na koi milhee jaaehga
S. M: oskee chinta to hame bhi hai maharani lekin hamare rajya kee wajese...
M. Nivi: aisa kuch nahi hoga. Mujhe pata hai ke kya karna hai or kese karna hai. Bus aap mujhpe chore dijye
Rajkumari Ananya's room
Ananya is busy combing her hair looking in the mirror whilst Sia is standing behind her smiling
Ananya: aise kya dekhrahee ho hame
Sia: dekhrahe hai ke kese bino koi sringaar kiye huwe bhi itnee sundar lagrahee ho. Jab karogee to kya hoga
Ananya: ab ziada hame chiraane kee zaroorat nahi kyu ke tumbhi kuch kam nahi
Sia: tumse khoobsurat to koi ho hi nahi sakta. Tumhe dekhkar hame lagraha hai ke aaj raat is jashan me tumhaara sapno ka rajkumar bohat jald aane waala hai
Ananya: or hame lagta hai ke tum kuch ziada hee paagal hogayee ho
just then a loud crash is heard outside and two loud squeals. Both Rajkumaris go out of the room.
Rajkumari Sawri: Bhoomi tumne hamaree gotiya phirse puree ghiraadee
Bhoomi: Tumhaaree nahi hamaree, Hum jaante hai ke raat ko tum hamare kamre me aayee thi or inhe chura legayee
Sawri: hamne aisa kuch nahi kiya, hame hamaree gotiya waapis do
Bhoomi: Nahi denge kyu ke yeh hamaree hai
Sawri: Bhoomi!
Bhoomi: Sawri!
Sawri: Bhoomi!
Bhoomi: Sawri!
Sawri pulls Bhoomi's hair which enrages her and she pushes Sawri back quite hard which makes her crash into one of the daasis who were carrying haldi. It created a mess but the two girls didn't stop. Bhoomi ran awwy showing her tongue to Sawri and Sawri kept chasing Bhoomi because of what she did. In the midst many things broke and it created a havoc. Finally Bhoomi twisted her ankle and fell on the ground and then Sawri came and pulled her ears.
Sawri: Bhoomi hamaree ghotiya hame waapis dedo
Bhoomi: nahi dungee
Sia: Sawri, Bhoomi, yeh sab kya tamasha laga rakha hai? itna saara nuksaan
Sawri: ham kya kare Sia, yeh Bhoomi ne hamaree ghotiya hamse cheenli or pure mahal me phekdee
Bhoomi: hamne aisa kuch nahi kiya, yeh Sawri ne hee hamaree ghotiya churayee hai or yeh bebunyaad ilzaam hum per laga rahee hai
Sawri: jhooth mat bolo Bhoomi
Bhoomi: jhooth hum nahi tum bole rahee ho
Ananya: Ab bus bhi karo, pura ka pura mahal sir pe utha liya hai. Waha jaake humne dekha to saare rasoi ghar kee haalat ulat pulat hogayee hai or phir bahaar bhi saaree daasiya haldi me latpat hai or phir yeh sab yaha tuta phuta hai. Din bhar bus yuhi jhagar tee rehtee ho
M. Nivi: yeh sab shor kis baat ka horaha hai (sees Bhoomi on the floor so panics) Bhoomi! kya huwa tumhe?
sia: Aap ki laadliyo ne phirse naye gul khilaaye hai. Pura mahal sir pe uthaa kar ose barbaad kardiya
Bhoomi: Nahi ma aisa kuch bhi nahi huwa, wo to bus is Sawri ne hee hame dhaka diya or hum girgaye
Sawri: yeh jhooth bole rahee hai, hum ne ise koi dhaka nahi diya. Balke yehi hamaree ghotiya humse cheen ke bhaag rahee thee or phir khud hee girgayee
Bhoomi: wo ghotiya tumhaaree nahi hamaree hai
M. Nivi: Bus ab bohat hochuka. Sawri tumhe Bhoomi ke saath larna nahi chaheeye, wo ek saal choti hai tumse to tumhe oska khayaal rakhna hai. Ab dekho na kitnee chote lagayee ise. Ab yeh sab karna band karo or jo kuch bhi bigaara hai ose theek karo
Sawri: hum kuch nahi karenge, Hum jaarahe hai apne kamre me.
she walks off with a humph.
M. Nivi: bhoomi tum chalo mere saath me os pair pe laip laga detee hu. Bohat dard horaha hoga
Bhoomi: ha ma
both Nivriti and Bhoomi walk off leaving Ananya and Sia.
Ananya: pata nahi yeh dono Sawri or Bhoomi kab bari hongee. Jab dekho koi na koi hungama kartee rehtee hai
Sia: hame bhi wahi chinta hai Ananya. Wese bhi pitaji bohat pareshaan hai or uparse yeh dono onka jina or haraam kartee hai.
Ananya: ab jo bhi hoga dekha jaaehga. chalo ab jaldi se tayaar hojaate hai warna dair hojaaehgee
Sia: hmmm dair to hojaaehgee. aakhir tumhaara koi intezaar jo karaha hai waha
Ananya: Sia tum baaz nahi aaohgee na, lagta hai tumharee aaj khair nahi
Sia: haiii tumhaare haatho marna to kismat waalo ko hee milta hai
(pretends to fall on her and it just makes both of them laugh and then they walk off to their rooms to get ready for the jashan tonight.)
Ramgarh
the mahal is full of people from all the different rajyas and they are mingling in. Maharaj Dhanraj (Sunaina's father) is sitting on his throne with Sunaina by his side and everyone are coming and congratulating both of them. Food and drink is being served in thaalis and golden goblets and everyone are enjoying themselves.
The Sumaina family arrive soon with the Maharaj and Maharani Nivriti followed by their five daughters. Ananya and Sia are standing out from all of them as many eyes have dropped their way. They all walk up to Maharaj Dhanraj and congratulate him and Sunaina and then everyone goes their seperate ways. Sawri and Bhoomi are more interested in eating and drinking so they run off together and Avantika doesn't really want to be here so she finds herself a quiet corner and takes out her writing book. Ananya and Sia stay back with Sunaina
Sia: kaafi bara jashan hai yeh itne saalo ke baad
Sunaina: humne to kaha tha pitaji se ke hame itna bara jashan nahi chaheeye per wo hai ke maane hee nahi. Wese iskee koi or bhi waje hai
Sia: or wo kya hai....
From out of the crowd Nivi was busy chatting away with a group of maharanis.
Maharani of Kishengarg: suna he yaha pe bohat saare jawaan Rajkumar aaye hai aaj.
Nivi: ha, wo to hai aakhir aisee jage pe hee to wo sab milenge
Maharani of Kishengarg: aap ne suna hai ke aaj yeh jashan ek dusree khaas cheez kee wajese bhi huwa hai
Nivi: Acha, wo kya hai? wese to humsab jaante hai per bus yeh jaanaa chahte hai ke aapko pata hai ke nahi.
Maharani of Kishengarg: Suna hai ke Aryanagar ke dono Rajkumar bhi aane waale hai oske liye, ziada tayaari ki gayee hai
back to Sunaina, Ananya and Sia
Sia: acha, per osme itnee khaas baat kya hai
Sunaina: Khaas baat Rajkumar Dharam hai
Just then there are some shrills heard from the crowd and two handsome young rajkumars walk in. One is very jolly, polite and cute whilst the other seems stern, quiet and as if he doesn't really want to be here. Both of them walk in together and Maharaj Dhanraj goes to greet them.
Maharaj Dhanraj: aap dono yaha aaye oske liye shukriya
one of them replied: kesee baate karahai hai Maharaj, shukriya to hame aapse kehna chaheeye ke aap ne hame yaha pe bulaaya.
they continue talking whilst everyone else are observing espcially Sia and group and Nivi and group.
Nivi: kya yahi hai wo dono rajkumar?
Maharani of Kishengarg: ha yahi hai. Rajkumar Dharam or Veer. Ab khaas baat yeh hai ke Rajkumar Veer ke saath Rajkumar Dharam bhi aaye hai jo ke Aryanagar ke hone waale Maharaj hai.
Sia's group
Sia: in me se Veer koun hai or Dharam koun?
Sunaina: wo jo pitaji ke saath baat karahe hai wo Rajkumar Veer hai. Ab Rajkumar Veer ko to sab jaante hai kyu ke wo hai hee aise. Hamesha logo se milte jhulte hai, onkee madad karte hai or upar se ek bohat hee ache kavi bhi hai.
After hearing that Ananya's eyes turn towards Veer and she likes what she sees. His cute smile and the manner of his speaking simply attracts her at first sight.
Nivriti's group...
Maharani of Kishengarg: ab baat hai Rajkumar Dharam kee jo ke Rajkumar Veer ke Paas khare hai. Onhe sab itna nahi jaante kyu ke wo sab logo se itna milte jhulte nahi hai. Ziada tar baat bhi nahi karte per sab se bari or ehem baat to yeh hai ke wo Aryanagar ke hone waale maharaj hai. Saare rajya yaha pe umeed leke aaye hai ke onki rajkumari ka rishta Rajkumar Dharam ya Veer ke saath ho.
Nivi: phir to os maamle me hum sabse aage nikal jaaenge kyu ke hamare paas paanch rajkumariya hai or wo sab bhi laakho me ek. On mese kisee ek to pasand aahee jaaehgee jisse dusri behno ke liye bhi bhaag khul jaaenge
she begins dreaming about all the possibilites and gets excited about it.
Sia and Sunaina....
Ananya: yeh dono rajkumaar to bare ache lagrahe hai khaas karke Rajkumaar Veer
Sia: acha (teasing her) Lagta hai wo aagaya
Ananya: koun?
Sia: wahi tumhaara sapno ka rajkumaar.
Ananya: Sia ab tum phirse shuroo mat hojao. Hum to sirf onkee taarif karahe hai or kuch nahi.
Sia: abhi onse milee bhi nahi or taarif bhi karne lagayee
Ananya goes red with embarrassment whilst both Sia and Sunaina tease her and they start giggling with each other. whilst Veer is talking he hears the sweet giggling voice and he turns around and a soft wind blows and he sees her. Ananya is laughing like a small child and her beauty is just shining. Her simplicity is reflecting and he is just enchanted by her. He had to know who she was.
Maharaj Dhanraj has left both the rajkumars alone now.
Veer: kitnee sundar jaga hai na yah Dharam or kitne sundar log bhi hai
he says that by staring at Ananya who still is laughing with the other two, oblivious of his gaze.
Dharam: Tum jaante ho Veer ke hum yaha pe sirf or sirf pitaji kee wajese aaye hai warna hum or yaha aaye, kabhi nahi. yeh log hamare barabar ke kabi ho hee nahi sakte
Veer: ab jab yaha aahegaye hai to phir sab se milne me kya harj hai
he is still staring at Ananya as if he can't see anything else.
Dharam: log humse milne aate hai Veer, hum onse milne nahi jaate
Veer: lekin abhi to hum milne jaarahe hai. Chalo Rajkumari Sunaina se to milsakte hai na
he just used that as an excuse as he wanted to meet who she was talking to.
Ananya and Sia realised both the rajkumars were walking their way so they became quite conscious and pretended to not know but it was hard. Ananya's heart beat was racing as Veer got closer and thats when Sia saw Dharam properly for the first time and realised that he was also very handsome.
Sunaina: aaye Rajkumar Veer or Rajkumar Dharam. Aapka yaha pe swagat hai
Veer: swagat to hame aapka karna chaheeye is haseen din pe phoolo ka tohfa deke per maaf kijyega ke hum khaalee haath aagaye
Ananya was floored by his charm as he was amazing. All the stuff she had heard about him was true.
Sunaina: Rajkumar Veer yeh Sumaina kee Rajkumari Ananya hai
Veer: or hamara naam Veer hai. Aapka naam bohat hee khoobsurat hai bilkul aapkee tarha
both keep staring at each other as if they haven't seen anything else more beautiful.
Sia keeps staring at Dharam but feels uncomfortable as he doesn't seem interested at all.
Sia: Or aap?
Dharam: hum? hum Aryanagar ke honewale maharaj, Dharam hai. Naam to suna hee hoga.
after saying that so arrogantly he walks off leaving Sia disappointed with his attitude. What did he think of himself?
Veer: wo darasal, mera bhai ziada tar logo se baat nahi karta. isiliye thora aisa hai. Khair Rajkumari Ananya kya aap hamare saath yaha per ghoomegee?
she automatically agrees and both of them walk off amongst the crowd whilst Sia can''t help but stare at Dharam who by now was standing in a corner looking over the crowd as if they were nothing in front of him. his arms were folded across his chest and he had this conceitful expression on his face which didn't please her at all.
Veer:aapko bura to nahi laga ke humne aapko yu apne saath...
Ananya: yeh aap kesee baate karahe hai? Yeh to hamara sobhagye hai ke hum aapke saath yahape hai warna hamaree aisee kismat kaha.
Veer: insaan chaahe to apni kismat khud likhsakta hai rajkumari Ananya. Or insaan achi or buree kismat yuhi leke nahi aata. oske peeche bhi ek waje hoti hai. Lekin aap jesee khoobsurat larki kee kabhi buree kismat hohee nahi sakti
Ananya: per aap Aryanagar ke rajkumar hai or hum ek chote se Sumaina kee rajkumari.
Veer: koi bhi insaan bara ya chota oskee pehchaanse nahi hota, balke oske sanskaaro or charitra se hota hai. or jaha tak hum aapko dekh rahe hai to aapto humse bhi kahi bari hai Rajkumari Ananya. Yeh hamara sobhaagye hai ke aap hamare saath yu aayee hai
she blushed at his comment and carried on walking around with him admiring him even more.
After some time they returned and Ananya went to talk with other people whilst Veer returned to Dharam.
Veer: Dharam tum yaha yu akele kyu khare ho? sab log tumhe hee dekhrahe hai or tum ho ke...
Dharam: hame logo kee kya pari ke wo kya karahe hai or kya nahi? humne tumse pehle bhi kaha tha Veer ke hame yaha aane me koi iccha nahi thi.
Veer: or maine bhi tumse kaha tha ke jab yaha aaheegaye hai to phir logo se milne me kya harj hai.
his gaze falls on Sia who is nearby talking to Sunaina.
Veer: dekho wo Rajkumari Sia yahi pe hai, tum jaake onse baat kyu nahi karte. Wo bhi apni behen kee tarha bohat hee sundar hai.
Dharam: theek hai wo per itnee bhi khoobsurat nahi ke hamare hosh hee urjaaye. Dekho Veer hum tumhe roke nahi rahe hai, tumhe jaana hai to jao per hame hamare haal pe chore do. Hum in logo ke saath baat karna tak pasand nahi karte or Sumaina ke waha ke log ka to sawaal hee paida nahi hota. tum apna waqt barbaad mat karo.
Veer: Dharam logo se itna dhoore bhaagna bhi acchi baat nahi hoti hai
Dharam: sahi or ghalat tum hame mat samjoa Veer. Yeh mat bhulo ke hum tumse pure ek saal bare hai or sahi ghalat kee pehchaan hame ziada hai. Tum jao or apna keemtee waqt kisee dusre ke saath bitao, or hame hamara waqt apni tarha se bitaane do
Veer helplessly just leaves Dharam and goes back to find Ananya. Sia was standing nearby and had heard everything Dharam said about her and her kingdom. Now she was really fumed with him as his attitude was disappointing. If he wanted he can just say something about her but why did he have to go and talk about her family and status? On purpose she walks off from in front of him so he is forced to look at her.
Even though he denied it he couldn't help but look at her as she went pass him and then he kept staring at her as she talked with others and then back with Sunaina. He did notice how she kept looking at him and laughing as if she was making fun of him. he should hate her but something was preventing him from doing so. Was it her infectious smile or her amazing big bold eyes which didn't allow him to take his eyes off her? he couldn't decide but it was there.
Soon the night was over and everyone went back to their kingdoms. When Veer came to drop Ananya off at her carriage both of them stared at each other with passion and affection as if telling each other how much they have begun liking each other. Both of them had mutual feelings and knew that from today they wont be the same. They said their heartfelt goodbyes and just as she was leaving she stared back at Veer until he was gone far away in the distance.
end of part
okay guys here was the first part where the two couples have met for the first time. I hope u all liked the characters and the way they are protrayed here. Would be waiting for ur lovely comments.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
nice fan fic dear pls do continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg...... it is sooooooooo good.... pls pls plssssss update soon..... cant w88888888
p.s. when will you update next??????????//
mwahhh
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow! wow! wow!
love from 1st part.
i will left others ffs and read urs...
ok, this post is reserved, i shall comment on part later.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lolzzzzzzzz loved ur ff because its different from wat others n me to wrote
when i was reading this ff it reminded me of bride n prejudice n veeer so cute starting day se hi love at 1st site with anaya just loved it

do continue
left all others update n read urs first its fantastic
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank you very much pretty_angel5, crazy_kiran, ashah03, Girl_2007, itemshera
I'm glad u all hace appreciated this fic and it was flattering to know u guys left other updates to read mine. I hope I can continue entertaining u guys and yeh I'll try and update everyday.
@itemshera - yeh it is inspired by Pride and Prejudice as I had wrote it in the intro. hmm Veer is just a lovable man.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ahhhh wooow wah a part 1...u startd it off wid a BANG! lol...awesome reali...loved da dia's...n da interaction btw da charas was good too! update soon hun x
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww loved their first meetings it was jus out standing and this dharam he go attitude ma8 btw it was gr8. loved veer ananya's meeting it was love at first sight cool do cont...
esha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lovely part. Just tell me who's Darcy here in this Pride
and Prejudice???😊
Waitin' for ur update

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