Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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Saba

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Posted: 16 years ago

#541

loved the part

thnx for the PM

continue soon

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sameira

@AKForever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#542

hey bheegi

thanks for the pm..
wow amazing part..
loved all of it..
continue soon..

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Heena

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Posted: 16 years ago

#543

thanks for the pm di!

I really enjoyed reading the part....AK are being nice to each other datz sooo good to see! so kripz finally enters home cheerfully hmm looks lyk angad ka asar hone laga hai :D please continue soon

Heena

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bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: me_iq
heyy dii...
wao tht was awsome... i liked shabbirs expressions described lol...how he got suspicious tht angad has changed!!!😆

i mean wonderfull...how they were fighting a few hours bak...

then suddenly they were laughing like friends!!!

awwwwwwwwww rhea is very cute..i wish i hav a niece lyk her...*fingers crossed*

wow...shez perfect....i mean very intelligient...

just in a min she shouted n awl d crowds vanished!!!!

awwwwww poor angadz clothes got torn...poor him..

does it actually happen wid cricketers...lol

aww i feel sad seeing kripaz current position!!!!

tc

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thanks iqra...shabbir is suspecting something 4 sure😃 AK have a love hate relationship....if it were not for the car ride, they would still be fighting😆 Yes, in india cricketers are worshiped like God😕 so they are always sought after by public. Kripa is certainly burdened by a lot😕

[quote=saridena]hi bheegi di

thks for the pm di

mindblowing part

bechari kripa her family condition is very worst state

kripa also is attracted to angad

angad is changing slowly and all his team menbers r shocked

rhea is sweet

shabbir is going to become a detative

angad and kripa car jorney was fun

update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya[/quote]

Thanks soumya...yes kripa has a lot of burdens in her life😕 yes, she is attracted to angad but will she give in or keep resisting

[quote=sea_nyx]OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! bheegi yaar, truly today u outdid urself. that update was truly awsome and the way AK are coming closer to each other was heart-warming, poor kripa, i feel so sorry for her. she needs someone she can lean on for a change. question is is angad mature enough to be that someone?????????😔 well i guess we'll just have to wait and see.

the prob is bheegs, u scare me, ur ffs are never predictabe, espcially the AK ones, whenever we the readers think everything is fine, something happens to mess everything up[/quote]

thanks sea nyx....hey i am glad u liked this part. when i wrote it i was a bit sleepy and thought i was just rambling on and on😆 aimlessly. ur right, is angad mature enough? or will he change completely. well, unpredictability is what keeps readers coming back for more...isn't it?😉😆...thanks again sea nyx😊

[quote=spln]great part bheegi di....the chemistry is getting in to the swing mode now, awsome job...rhea still my fav lolzzz....and somehow somewhere i think hsabbir may become more than just a filler for ur fic!!!

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thanks NJ...AK and rhea are still the main characters. other characters come in and out depending on the need of the story😃

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Kiran

@Smilesx3

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Posted: 16 years ago

#545

hey
This is an awesome FF
Love the interactions between Angad-Kripa-Rhea
Wonder when Simone will enter the story
Misthi is good luck for Angad...Shes bringing AK closer
Kripa is loosening upto Angad
the Fan following was funny and Kripa saving him

I love AK jodi in dancing

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Rabia

@SuhanaSafar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: bheegi
thanks Rabia. Looks like u really like this mayank guy from MJHT.
Thanks for reading the parts and yes, angad is changing- slowly but surely

Did u vote already?😃

I do like him, but more than that I like the way that sig came out. 😊

Yup! Voted last week. Now keeping my fingers crossed. 😕

Will comment on your next chapter soon!

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Yamini

@yamnovbloom

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Posted: 16 years ago

#547

wow changing emotions let's see what does it have in store nice part poor Kripa, hope angad doesn't increase her miseries

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#548

YAY! This part was a special treat since the part was like extra long!!! Thanks for that Di! = D

Okay, so I love the way you made Angad-Kripa relationship grow in a better sense...They aren't fighting with each other with arrogance as usual, but are behaving as normal human beings...It's really nice to see that change and the relationship getting better! so YAY! They interaacted in a more free way--in those few last scenes--and they found out that they had something similar to each other..lol..

Yes Di, I love to dance...I'm a dancer when I have to be one..lol..I agree with Kripa's character in this FF...For me, another stress reliever other than writing is dancing...It lets loose of all the tensions in no time and your preoocupied mind seems less occupied..lol.....I always try to find a excuse to dance..lol...So I definitely agree with her thoughts on dance...

I loved the way you penned the scene with Kripa dancing in isolation in the dance studio...Made me remember that one scene from the movie "Mohabbatein"...lol...except Angad wasn't dancing with her, but admiring her from a distance..lol..Great job on that Di! I loved how you showed that Kripa turned to dance whenever she was stress out with her family problem and daily life...It's a passion for her!

Love? He chuckled as he climbed the stairs. " Naa! That's too heavy a term….let me just have fun with her…..take her up as a challenge…..see if I can melt her like the other women I have had in my life…..aakhir uske dil par jo itna badha lock lagaa hua hai….uski chaabhi kahin tho milegi mujhey."

Awesome dialogues..I loved those the most!!! LOL, but right when I read these two bolded lines, my mind went back to Angad's character in TEIH.. In TEIH, he got into her locker...and then found the key to her heart later on as the story progressed...Hopefully, this will happen too in this FF....Ahh how I miss TEIH!!! But nonetheless, I love this FF too!

Okay...got to go to bed..SAT's tommorow! Thanks for the best wishes in the PM! Let's see if all these prayers do the trick!!

So there was a blood drive today at school and I really wanted to donate blood, but sadly, they tested me and my Iron level was low by a few points...Hopefully, I can bring my iron level up by March--next time they do blood drive..lol...

Love, Anita

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Ankita.S.Mansharamani

@moda.vintage

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Posted: 16 years ago

#549

jeeeeeeeeez

its a wonderful fic i am wondering y didnt i keep an eye on this

di its osm

luved each nd every bit of it

i m so in awe

totally amazing

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

gosh i dont have any more words

and plz do pm me

luv ya

@nkit@

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teri_susan

@teri_susan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#550

Thnx for the PM.Everyone was disappointed about the Series cancellation,except Angad,now he is happy since he could enjoy his dance classes without any tension.Kripa heavy family burden is the reaosn she can't keep Rhea with her.Feel sorry for her.Why can't her brother understand her struggles?Kripa gets attracted to him against all odds.Nice conversation they had in the car.He would have better listened to her instead of getting lipsticks and nailmarks on him😆.Hope he realises his mistake soon and accepts it.Hope he makes Kripa's life happier by his good deeds.

Edited by teri_susan - 16 years ago

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