Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17) - Page 56

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Posted: 16 years ago
mindblowing sangeeta thx for pm.

I love the way angad gone 😆

Kripa apne aap ko itna daba ke kyu rakh rhai hahi ? i wish angad ussko muskurana sikhaye 😊

I love the way angad become happy with match cancelled 😆 he love to dance with kripa 😳



Teacher jee i love this line soo sweet angad and naughty also 😆

Thx for great part sangeeta .

😆😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
very sorry for coming late
thanks for PM
love itttttttttttttttttttttt
there is a GR8 change in angad
can't wait to see more of them
awww how sweet of him to wait for kripa after her dance practice
he was very "geniune"lolz
haha that's what you get when you don't listen to kripa's advice
i love the dostana song, its fab!
can't wait to watch that movie
do cont soon when you can
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey di jst read d update finally after 8 updates angad mein sudhar dhik raha hai😉 hehe fancy angad d mr bossy arrogant no ears only his non stop ordering mouth falling in love😆 nd krips calling him wat was dat medium freak😉 ahha i jst loved d update a insight in krips family 2 do angad hav a family 2, i mean u never mentioned it di rhea ka agli baar plz bada part rakhna
love
anshu
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Posted: 16 years ago
sooooo cutteeeeeeee.........😉
loved d dance chemistry between ak.......both falling in love fr each other.....gr888!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!just ;loved it...
plzzz continue soon di....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awww di......its as justtttt great n sweet part...😉👏
Awwww i loved Angad changed...😉
n seems like a Angad melt for Angad...😳hope Angad doesnt hurt her...
n cant wait for next part...😉
n di thaxn for pm...🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow Bheegi what a great update....
Nice to see AK kind of softening towards each other. The conversation in the car was so nicely written. So now Angad is free for six weeks...wow...now he has ALL the time in the world to dance with Kripa...can't wait for the romance to bloom..😳😳
Pls continue soon...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part Beeghi!!!! they are slowly falling for each other...felt bad reading about Kripa's plight at home.....hope things change for her soon
after all with Angad by her side & he by him....they will be alright!!! I love that song!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tehreemmirza

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it was such a gr8 part i luved it AK are soo cute and sweet thanx god kripa is being a normal person not the 1 who is always angry and btw i luv tht jane kyun song its soo gud continue soon waiting 4 ur next part

thanks Tehreem. Yes, Kripa is a nice person but just has a lot of stressors in her life and of course she never had a gr8 impression of angad to start with😕 Even i love the Jaane kyun song😊
[quote=armaanridz4eva]awesome update!!
i guess the wall is slowly fading from Kripa to Angad!!
lol at the scene when Angad gets mobbed
and finally a smile on Kripa's face, i hope there will be
more smiles to come
looking forward to the next part
thanks for the PM
Sania[/quote]
Thanks sania....yes angad has given her a reason to smile now...hopefully we will see more of them😳
[quote=vallanki]I cdn't watch youtube..address is not right.
wonderful part as always. Thanks for writing lengthy one.
So Angad decided tohave her in his life!!! Interesting development and quick confession. Now kripa hs to wait for his arrival in next class!! She is unusually happy relaxing mood so she will also confess soon that she needs his presence in her life.
Hope they understand soon and confess openly.
Angad knew kripa will melt when the topic comes on to Rhea..Angad knew kripa has soft and tender heart unlike other women he used for his time pass.
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thanks vallanki....i have posted the correct link ...u already saw it i know. angad is realizing that even though he might not want to fall in love with kripa, he doesn't mind having her around all his life...😆😆 het buddy ur confused there😉. kripa's family burdens will feel less burdensome once she falls in love😳. yes, angad has to treat her as a person and not just as a woman he can lust on😕
[quote=sweet_honey]hey.gr8 part....happi dat angd finali strts to acutali like kripaa......hmmm feel swi 4 kripa...shes gt soo mani ppl tu tke care of...loved the last scne were angads on da floor n da hole neighbourhood on top of him....cont soon plz
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thanks sweet honey. yes, angad and kripa have totally different lives. angad has no responsibilities except himself and kripa has tons of them😕
[quote=deeya123]thanks for the pm di
awsum part
simply brilliant
i luved their car journey...releived to see them talking nicely instead of fighting.
felt bad for kripa but well angad is realisin that may be he is fallin in love with her.
fantastic di
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thanks deeya...i am glad u liked it. AK are def softening towards each other...let's see who admits their love first
thanks nishitta and abhilasha
[quote=richa1234]Thoroughly enjoyed the part Sangeeta di. Its good to see our hero heroine opening up to each other. The rain situation reminded me of that song "Pyar hua iqrar hua hai, pyar se phir kyun darta hai dil". Pyar to ho hi raha hai, ab bus iqrar karne ki der hai.

Have you resided in Delhi by any chance, I am originally from there. I remember you mentioned about DPS school previously and pitampura, that's so close to my suburb Rohini there.

I totally loved it as usual di, its always great to be reading your writeups.

Luv
Richa

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thanks richa....abhi pyaar poori tarah nahin hua hai....abhi sirf shuruaat hai😳. Yes, I am a Delhi-ite- born and raised there😊. U are from Rohini? wow...i remember when Rohini started coming up years ago...now it's a well established area.
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: coolpal

totally loved this part bheegi di, love the change in angad's character and how he is developing friendship w/ kripa. i also loved the part with the whole car ride as well as their conversation, very well written! u write so descriptively, i can imagine it all happening! U know i never watched KYPH but ur FF has made me really love AK jodi!!!

Thanks coolpal. yes, kripa needs a friend and just not another man lusting after her😡. Hey, i am honored that my ffs have made u an AK fan. Watch some of their youtube videos and u will know why so many are crazy about them😊
[quote=mahi4u]hey di

awwwwwwwwww.................................

dat was rellllllllllyyyyyyyyyy a LOVELYYYYYYYYYYYYY prt😳

hhhaaaaa!!!!

atlast dono kay bech mein kuch to sahi baat ui😆

grt prt

cont super soooooooonnnnnnnnnnn

luv ya n tak care

mahru
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thanks mahru....yes at least they talked like civilized people😆
thanks stars shine, sameira and Heena (wintersunshine)....yes both will soon see an effect of love on their personal lives😳
[quote=simelesx3]hey
This is an awesome FF
Love the interactions between Angad-Kripa-Rhea
Wonder when Simone will enter the story
Misthi is good luck for Angad...Shes bringing AK closer
Kripa is loosening upto Angad
the Fan following was funny and Kripa saving him

I love AK jodi in dancing [/quote]
Thanks smiles. Nice to hear from new readers😊. Simone will enter at some point...not yet😉 Yes Mishti has helped them get closer. Both AK will soon get closer thanks to dance lessons
thanks yamnovbloom
[quote=magicalgirlankita]

jeeeeeeeeez

its a wonderful fic i am wondering y didnt i keep an eye on this
di its osm
luved each nd every bit of it
i m so in awe
totally amazing
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
gosh i dont have any more words
and plz do pm me
luv ya
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Thanks ankita....i am glad u have liked the story so far. I will PM u next time
[quote=teri_susan]Thnx for the PM.Everyone was disappointed about the Series cancellation,except Angad,now he is happy since he could enjoy his dance classes without any tension.Kripa heavy family burden is the reaosn she can't keep Rhea with her.Feel sorry for her.Why can't her brother understand her struggles?Kripa gets attracted to him against all odds.Nice conversation they had in the car.He would have better listened to her instead of getting lipsticks and nailmarks on him😆.Hope he realises his mistake soon and accepts it.Hope he makes Kripa's life happier by his good deeds.

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Thanks susan...yes if the series was not cancelled, how would he spend so much time with her?😆 yes, kripa's majboori was her family burdens😕 Kripa's brother is selfish and only thinks about himself😕. yes, angad needs to listen to kripa more often😆
[quote=monikaseth]mindblowing sangeeta thx for pm.

I love the way angad gone 😆

Kripa apne aap ko itna daba ke kyu rakh rhai hahi ? i wish angad ussko muskurana sikhaye 😊

I love the way angad become happy with match cancelled 😆 he love to dance with kripa 😳



Teacher jee i love this line soo sweet angad and naughty also 😆

Thx for great part sangeeta .

😆😆😆
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Thanks Monu....yes angad has changed forever. kripa will soon get out of her shell too😳 angad has learnt that to get closer to kripa he has to first become her friend😊
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: anitamalik

YAY! This part was a special treat since the part was like extra long!!! Thanks for that Di! = D

thanks anita...hope ur SATs went well. I think i rambled more than i wrote in this last part😆
Okay, so I love the way you made Angad-Kripa relationship grow in a better sense...They aren't fighting with each other with arrogance as usual, but are behaving as normal human beings...It's really nice to see that change and the relationship getting better! so YAY! They interaacted in a more free way--in those few last scenes--and they found out that they had something similar to each other..lol..
yes, finally they are starting to become friends first...and then maybe lovers😳
Yes Di, I love to dance...I'm a dancer when I have to be one..lol..I agree with Kripa's character in this FF...For me, another stress reliever other than writing is dancing...It lets loose of all the tensions in no time and your preoocupied mind seems less occupied..lol.....I always try to find a excuse to dance..lol...So I definitely agree with her thoughts on dance...
ur right, dancing, singing, writing or painting can all be good stress busters....i am glad u love dancing. I love dancing too but i am just not a good one😆
I loved the way you penned the scene with Kripa dancing in isolation in the dance studio...Made me remember that one scene from the movie "Mohabbatein"...lol...except Angad wasn't dancing with her, but admiring her from a distance..lol..Great job on that Di! I loved how you showed that Kripa turned to dance whenever she was stress out with her family problem and daily life...It's a passion for her!
yeah...or the scene from DTPH actually...that's the one i imagined
Love? He chuckled as he climbed the stairs. ' Naa! That's too heavy a term'.let me just have fun with her'..take her up as a challenge'..see if I can melt her like the other women I have had in my life'..aakhir uske dil par jo itna badha lock lagaa hua hai'.uski chaabhi kahin tho milegi mujhey.'
Awesome dialogues..I loved those the most!!! LOL, but right when I read these two bolded lines, my mind went back to Angad's character in TEIH.. In TEIH, he got into her locker...and then found the key to her heart later on as the story progressed...Hopefully, this will happen too in this FF....Ahh how I miss TEIH!!! But nonetheless, I love this FF too!
me too...i miss TEIH...it was one of my favs...thanks for following both ffs😊
Okay...got to go to bed..SAT's tommorow! Thanks for the best wishes in the PM! Let's see if all these prayers do the trick!!
So there was a blood drive today at school and I really wanted to donate blood, but sadly, they tested me and my Iron level was low by a few points...Hopefully, I can bring my iron level up by March--next time they do blood drive..lol... OMG...that's so much like TEIH😕....except there kripa necer listened to anyone and still donated blood to save her love😳
Love, Anita

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