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juvz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1011

congratulationz....on the end of the

a lovely ff...

really nice...

ure a wonderful wriyer..

always look forward for ure fanfics...

best of luck..for beginning a few more since this has ended...

👏👏👏

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1012

Originally posted by: Sonalihutifan
A fab ending bheegi di..!!

thanks dear😊

[quote=janu1610]

Bheegi im a silent reader but great admirer of ur ff.

i read all ur ff till now n wann read more from ur treasure.

This ff was awesome .Specially end was amazing.I never expected

this all was planned.U gave twist n i was scared. Again u took

u turn n clean bold.All is well that ends well.

i wanna thanks to Muniza for beautifull vms.

plz start next ff soon.[/quote]

Thanks Janu. It's always great to hear from silent readers. Looks like ur an AR fan, so thanks again for reading this AK ff😊 Yes, Muniza is a great VM maker

[quote=sweet_mittal]hey di welcome back with the part

nice part thank god kripa realize her love for him and josh also supported him

i still wish u continued one more part and have some romance in it hehe

i like he acutally adopt rhea

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue ur new ff soon di

love ya

mittal[/quote]

Thanks Mittal. Sorry, i really wanted to end this ff as it had dragged on forever. I know i disappointed u with not much romance in the end but i'll try to make it up with my next ff😊

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1013

Originally posted by: -simi-
hey di!!! so great to read ur writing again!!! (btw my old username was musicdiva)
this part was totally unexpected!! also was the fact that u ended so quickly 😆

on the whole, i LOVED it as always 😳 it was nice to see simone and josh actually turn into good people at the end!

thanks for the lovely and cute ending, and the amazing fic 😊

will be waiting for ur next 😃

simi

thanks simi....looks like everyone is changing their IDs...what's up with that?😃 Thanks again for being a faithful reader😊

[quote=nidha1983]woah di🤗 ur back thanks😊 I Missed u so Much😭 and its really an awesome one⭐️ di so sweet update😍 like always u have di😍 U r the best Di😎🤗 Love u di😳😊

"Kbhi Agr Tm Dua Me Kisi Ko Mango,

Phr Wo Tm Ko Na Mile To,

Ye Jan Lo K Kahin Koi Or Tmhe Apne RUB Se Mang Rha Hy,

Or Uski Mhbt Mai Tm Se Zyada SHIDDAT Hai."

I Wrote On The Door
Of Heart
"Please Do Not Enter"
Love Came Smiling
And Said
" Sorry I Am Illiterate"

A "Friend" Is One
Special Person Who
Can Pull Out A
Happy Tear From
Your Eye ...
Even If You Don't
Have Tears To
Cry ...[/quote]

Thanks Nidha....i am glad i'm back too....and ur the best too😊😊😊 lovely poems as always

[quote=jodubai]

Awesome ending, Beeghi!!! completed unexpected, happy & yet all seemed right....

really enjoyed reading this FF.....[/quote]

thanks Jo...this was a halki phulki ff😃 and i didn't want to stretch it any further

[quote=nehasfan]AWESUM END!!!!!!!

wasn't expectin it so soon....

bt beautiful part....

n awesum vm....

wil b waitin 4 ur nxt ff...[/quote]

thanks nehasfan....i wanted to keep it short this time. Next ff will be long though

[quote=vallanki]worth waiting😳

wonderful ending.

loved the way Simone busted out her anger/hatred..poor girl saved that all the years..atlast now she is pure to accept Angad as friend.

Naina..chotasa role hai but valuable dialogues at the end.

Angad...felt like hug him and console😳 as you always say I cannot see him sulking/suffering./crying🤣

when read about box missing I guessed kripa in red saree...you did it..good😉

Nice gift kripa got at the end..Angad was really in love..he was always..he loved kripa from bottom of his heart unlike kripa who gave more importance to the people surrounded.

unconventional dance...good..romantic 😳

I just watched the vm two days ago..perect for the scene.

hope you come up with new ff soon and REGULAR😳[/quote]

Thanks vallu. I know u can see notrhing wrong in any angad in any ff😆 Love ur vall-munni creations...nice business style name😊 Yes, i'll try my best to be regular with my new ff. I still have to catch up on ur ff😊

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Rabiah Samiullah

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1014

Wow Bheegi Ji!!

Terrific Ending!!

Simply love it..

AK are the best couple & you did a great job protraying them in a new role!!

I am glad that thru Simone AK met & fell in love.... i was hurt to see Angad hurt

but u knw. he really kind of deserved it

im soo glad.. that..

Kripa realized how much she loves Angad and how much he loved her n Rhea..... her love made her let go off her dreams for him...

aww.how cute. ending witht he whole dance studio thing

...love surely makes you do things out of the usual.......

perfect video to end it off

i am a bit sad it ended but im sure u got another story even better up ur sleeves..

lol

tkcr

and hope to hear another beautifuly written love story coming soon

--rabiah

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...anshu...

@...anshu...

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1015

hey di

as always awesum

nd we dont mind delays we noe u were busy

i didnt expect it 2 end so soon

i will def miss it

di i read ur turtleneck girl 2

loved it

anshu

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1016

Originally posted by: QueenHinna12
bheegu what is this...how cud u end it all of a sudden???=S
i was so bored when u were away...tht i started reading tumhari amaanat again....n now u jus ended this ff all of a sudden...m so upset =((
poor angad...he has no idea of the shock waiting for him...infacthe has changed so much tht im feeling sorry for him just like the angad in tumhari amaanat!!!!
i hate simone...cnt she forgive him...itna bara khel kyun khel rahi just for revenge she shud just move on....she calls angad insensitive but what abt her???:@
is naina positive in this ff???
naina was so right...she has exactly the same beliefs as me...u shud believe ur heart!!!!
rhea is shoo shweeet!!!!
yeah i was right that ak wud adopt rhea!
haha loved the sony tv part!!!
wow dance studio!!!!
awesome songat the end!!!
start ur new ff soon!!!

sorry sorry sorry Hinnu. I know u wanted to read more, but this is the best i could do in the time i have right now. I will try to make up with my next ff. Hope u had a great birthday😊

[quote=teri_susan]U r really an amazing writer making ur readers excite with unexpected twists and awesome parts👏👏👏.Really an unexpected ending😉.Wonderfull twist.I didn't expect it.Loved the way AK united.So here everyone became good in the end😉.Rhea got a good family.All is well that ends well.Enjoyed ur fiction very much.I always learn some facts from ur fictions.Awesome fiction.Congrats to u on completing another fiction successfully👍🏼.All the best for ur next fiction👍🏼.I like long fictions like Turtleneckgirl.AK are the most passionate couple😳.I love all ur fictions regarding them.Continue ur journey well.All the best👍🏼[/quote]

Thanks susan. It's fans like u which keep us writers going. Hey, if i can teach u even a little bit thru my ffs, i feel i have achieved something. Yes, east or west, AK are still the best😃

Thanks Deeya123, sameira, Shafoo😊

[quote=sheldev]Hi Bheegi;

Finally an update & a great one too.....👏👏....

I am so glad it ended all well...but really sad it's ended.....😭😭..Another fantastic FF Sangeeta...excellent work....👏😊....

AK are the best couple & you did a great job on this one as well.....I am glad that thru Simone AK met & fell in love although it was to hurt Angad in the process..Well he kind of deserved it for what he did with the many women including Simone....

Kripa realized how much she loves her Angad & let go off her dreams for him...aww..how cute....love surely makes you do things....our AK are eternal....😳😳...

Thanks for another great FF on AK Sangeeta....thanks for keeping them alive in our hearts thru your writing....Awesome, mindblowing, superb work dear......👏👏

I am really sad this one ended but very happy & looking forward to your new FF Pehchan...I am so eager to read that one now...the storyline on that one is simply amazing...looking forward to it..Pls PM me when you do get that one started...hopefully really soon....😆😆

Thanks Dear........

Awesome Ending to this one....

Shel

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Thanks shel....i know this was a short ff but went on forever. I am glad u liked the story. I will definitely not rush the ending of my new ff as it is a sensitive topic. SWD was just a halki phulki story

[quote=abhilashasharma]oooo... at last 😆

its been a long time... how was ur vacation

? hope u enjoyed it... how come a visit in the middle of the year... i mean its middle of the school, right? anyways, hope u enjoyed it...

wow, josh is a complete surprise package... i dint expect it a bit. well, simone doesnt deserve him... he deserves someone better.. well, pyar mein sab kuch jayeez hai.

kripa at last came out and spoke her mind. i thought for a second, that angad would leave her and go, but josh hai na... 😆 rhea, angad and kripa, they are gonna make a rocking family...

P.S: Because of your title, i happened to recognize the movie, then realized i had already watched it. Richard Gere was a cutie pie... 😳 his charm hasnt gone with age. he is the same as we saw in Pretty Woman [/quote]

yes...at last i am here😆 we had gone to India for a family wedding. yeah, Richard Gere still holds the same charm as he did before. In fact, his new movie was bearable only because of him😆

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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Heena

@wintersunshine

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1017

di ur such a wonderful writer...i've read all your ff's and i really can't choose my fav. cuz they're all so amazing...and this one is too! so i can say ki all your ff's are a few of my favorites...absolutely enjoyed reading this...can't wait for you to continue with a new ff.

love,

heena

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namelesssr

@namelesssr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1018

Bheegi... that was an unexpectedly quick ending. Will be waiting for your next one. Which characters will it be based on?

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1019

Originally posted by: angullgrl91
wow! gr8 ending! loved the video =D
and im definitely going to miss this fan fic!

very cutee :-)

cant wait for you to start your next fan fic!

thanks angullgrl....i am glad u liked it. will come back with new ff soon😊

[quote=ttimpy]bheegi..........it was unexpected ending...............but iguess u had no intentions of prolonging the end.....it came as bolt from blue.esp..............the twist regarding mishti's character.......she ended up as a decent person...........

loooooooooooking forward for the next dazzler fron your side........

tc[/quote]

thanks ttimpy...ur right, i wanted to end this ff now as i am eager to start my new one😃

[quote=suhanasafar]

Med school's going okay...My mom's living with me now, so that makes life a bit easier. I don't know if I told you this already, but I think I've decided what field I want to go into. I'm strongly leaning towards Med-Peds with a Pediatric Oncology subspecialty...But of course, until I actually get clinical experience during 3rd and 4th year rotations, I can't be sure about that.

Yes, I have started a new FF. Actually the thing is, I was always very bad at planning on the stories of my fanfics. With Hazaaron Khwahishen Aisi, I wrote about 15 chapters before realizing that I didn't like the direction the story was going...but once parts are posted, there's no going back. In the case of Too Much At Stake, I like how it's going so far, but I have absolutely no idea where I will take it next. I don't want the same thing to happen with that one too. So now I've decided that I'll be completing a full outline of each story before I start posting the chapters. Since the HKA story was my first love, I decided to go with that first. Basically, I've abandoned HKA and I'm writing something similar, but better thought out. I'll try to do the same for Too Much At Stake soon. If you get a chance, please read the first chapter of the new FF and give me some feedback on the writing style. If you're not interested, I really wouldn't mind if you didn't continue reading...but I'd really appreciate your comments on the first chapter. Here's the link:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1144103/ill-be-there-for-you-mjht-ch-7-pg-19-7-16

Thanks in advance! Hope everything is going well with you. How was your vacation

? Where did you go?

[/quote]

That's great! Sounds like u have a career plan all chalked out👏👏 but ur right, things might change when u go thru ur clinicals
I know it is hard to complete a ff esp when there are long gaps like what happened with my SWD story. I'll def try to ckeck out ur new one as i love ur style of writing😊

Good luck to u in med school and i'm sure u will do well whatever field u select.

Thanks...i ha d agreat but hectic vacation😊 i was in India

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago

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bheegi

@bheegi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1020

Originally posted by: juvz
congratulationz....on the end of the

a lovely ff...

really nice...

ure a wonderful wriyer..

always look forward for ure fanfics...

best of luck..for beginning a few more since this has ended...

👏👏👏

thanks Juvz...yes i am looking forward to starting my new ff too😊

[quote=Rabiah]Wow Bheegi Ji!!

Terrific Ending!!

Simply love it..

AK are the best couple & you did a great job protraying them in a new role!!

I am glad that thru Simone AK met & fell in love.... i was hurt to see Angad hurt

but u knw. he really kind of deserved it

im soo glad.. that..

Kripa realized how much she loves Angad and how much he loved her n Rhea..... her love made her let go off her dreams for him...

aww.how cute. ending witht he whole dance studio thing

...love surely makes you do things out of the usual.......

perfect video to end it off

i am a bit sad it ended but im sure u got another story even better up ur sleeves..

lol

tkcr

and hope to hear another beautifuly written love story coming soon

--rabiah[/quote]

Thanks for being a faithful reader of my AK ffs Rabiah. Yes, AK are still the best and hopefully i'll start my new AK ff soon😊

[quote=someanshu]hey di

as always awesum

nd we dont mind delays we noe u were busy

i didnt expect it 2 end so soon

i will def miss it

di i read ur turtleneck girl 2

loved it

anshu[/quote]

Thanks anshu. I am glad u liked Turtleneck girl. Yeah, i'm sorry, i've not been as regular as before but will try to be back soon with a new one😃

Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago