Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17)

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#991

an unexpected ending bheegi di....both for how soon it came, and for how it came....i missed a more descriptive elaborate end i guess....but your new fic is up....can hardly wait!!!...on the whole, SWD was a great read, thanks for the entertainer!

cheers,

nj

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ritu

@janu1610

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#992

Bheegi im a silent reader but great admirer of ur ff.

i read all ur ff till now n wann read more from ur treasure.

This ff was awesome .Specially end was amazing.I never expected

this all was planned.U gave twist n i was scared. Again u took

u turn n clean bold.All is well that ends well.

i wanna thanks to Muniza for beautifull vms.

plz start next ff soon.

Those friends thou hast, and their adoption tried,
Grapple them to thy soul with hoops of steel;
But do not dull thy palm with entertainment
Of each new-hatch'd, unfledg'd comrade."
- William Shakespeare
take care

ritu.

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Mittal Patel

@sweet_mittal

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#993

hey di welcome back with the part

nice part thank god kripa realize her love for him and josh also supported him

i still wish u continued one more part and have some romance in it hehe

i like he acutally adopt rhea

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue ur new ff soon di

love ya

mittal

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Simone

@-simi-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#994

hey di!!! so great to read ur writing again!!! (btw my old username was musicdiva)

this part was totally unexpected!! also was the fact that u ended so quickly 😆

on the whole, i LOVED it as always 😳 it was nice to see simone and josh actually turn into good people at the end!

thanks for the lovely and cute ending, and the amazing fic 😊

will be waiting for ur next 😃

simi

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#995

woah di🤗 ur back thanks😊 I Missed u so Much😭 and its really an awesome one⭐️ di so sweet update😍 like always u have di😍 U r the best Di😎🤗 Love u di😳😊

"Kbhi Agr Tm Dua Me Kisi Ko Mango,

Phr Wo Tm Ko Na Mile To,

Ye Jan Lo K Kahin Koi Or Tmhe Apne RUB Se Mang Rha Hy,

Or Uski Mhbt Mai Tm Se Zyada SHIDDAT Hai."

I Wrote On The Door
Of Heart
"Please Do Not Enter"
Love Came Smiling
And Said
" Sorry I Am Illiterate"

A "Friend" Is One
Special Person Who
Can Pull Out A
Happy Tear From
Your Eye ...
Even If You Don't
Have Tears To
Cry ...

Edited by nidha1983 - 16 years ago

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#996

Awesome ending, Beeghi!!! completed unexpected, happy & yet all seemed right....

really enjoyed reading this FF.....

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love_KYPH

@love_KYPH

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#997

AWESUM END!!!!!!!

wasn't expectin it so soon....

bt beautiful part....

n awesum vm....

wil b waitin 4 ur nxt ff.....

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Vijaya

@vallanki

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#998

worth waiting😳

wonderful ending.

loved the way Simone busted out her anger/hatred..poor girl saved that all the years..atlast now she is pure to accept Angad as friend.

Naina..chotasa role hai but valuable dialogues at the end.

Angad...felt like hug him and console😳 as you always say I cannot see him sulking/suffering./crying🤣

when read about box missing I guessed kripa in red saree...you did it..good😉

Nice gift kripa got at the end..Angad was really in love..he was always..he loved kripa from bottom of his heart unlike kripa who gave more importance to the people surrounded.

unconventional dance...good..romantic 😳

I just watched the vm two days ago..perect for the scene.

hope you come up with new ff soon and REGULAR😳

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MeethiMirchii

@heavenlybliss

Master

+ 61

Posted: 16 years ago

#999

bheegu what is this...how cud u end it all of a sudden???=S
i was so bored when u were away...tht i started reading tumhari amaanat again....n now u jus ended this ff all of a sudden...m so upset =((
poor angad...he has no idea of the shock waiting for him...infacthe has changed so much tht im feeling sorry for him just like the angad in tumhari amaanat!!!!
i hate simone...cnt she forgive him...itna bara khel kyun khel rahi just for revenge she shud just move on....she calls angad insensitive but what abt her???:@
is naina positive in this ff???
naina was so right...she has exactly the same beliefs as me...u shud believe ur heart!!!!
rhea is shoo shweeet!!!!
yeah i was right that ak wud adopt rhea!
haha loved the sony tv part!!!
wow dance studio!!!!
awesome songat the end!!!
start ur new ff soon!!!

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teri_susan

@teri_susan

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#1000

U r really an amazing writer making ur readers excite with unexpected twists and awesome parts👏👏👏.Really an unexpected ending😉.Wonderfull twist.I didn't expect it.Loved the way AK united.So here everyone became good in the end😉.Rhea got a good family.All is well that ends well.Enjoyed ur fiction very much.I always learn some facts from ur fictions.Awesome fiction.Congrats to u on completing another fiction successfully👍🏼.All the best for ur next fiction👍🏼.I like long fictions like Turtleneckgirl.AK are the most passionate couple😳.I love all ur fictions regarding them.Continue ur journey well.All the best👍🏼

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