Shall We Dance- AK ff- part 15(end) pg 128(3/17) - Page 103

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: wintersunshine

di ur such a wonderful writer...i've read all your ff's and i really can't choose my fav. cuz they're all so amazing...and this one is too! so i can say ki all your ff's are a few of my favorites...absolutely enjoyed reading this...can't wait for you to continue with a new ff.

love,
heena



thanks Heena😊.....i appreciate u liking my work😊

[quote=namelesssr]Bheegi... that was an unexpectedly quick ending. Will be waiting for your next one. Which characters will it be based on?[/quote]

Thanks sup. I will just say 'poochi na kaise maine yeh kahani poori ki'😃 Next one preview is posted. It's called "pehchan'- it's a bold subject this time😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey
Great to see you back
Awesome ending
Angad got tricked!
But I liked Simone's change of heart
Aww the ending was sweeet
Ak are the best

Great writing!!
Dont have enough words to describe it
Hope to see you entertaining us with more of your marvellous stories in the near future

Jannat
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: NYPunjabii

Hey
Great to see you back
Awesome ending
Angad got tricked!
But I liked Simone's change of heart
Aww the ending was sweeet
Ak are the best

Great writing!!
Dont have enough words to describe it
Hope to see you entertaining us with more of your marvellous stories in the near future

Jannat



thanks jannat for your wonderful comments. I will be posting the first chapter of my new ff 'Pehchan' this weekend😊...thanks again
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Posted: 16 years ago
the endin was great
but it ended too sooon 😔
looks lyk i cant get enuf of ak
otherwise it was great
ak were finali together afta the simone reality shw
simone isnt tht bad after all
kripa got her own dnce studio

i have a question.....did kripa want to become a dancer or an actor?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sheetal00

the endin was great
but it ended too sooon 😔
looks lyk i cant get enuf of ak
otherwise it was great
ak were finali together afta the simone reality shw
simone isnt tht bad after all
kripa got her own dnce studio

i have a question.....did kripa want to become a dancer or an actor?



Thanks sheetal...yeah i had to end it as i was keen on starting my new one. I don't like to leave things incomplete😊
Kripa originally wanted to be an actress and she was always a skilled dancer but after meeting angad, she really only wanted him😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwww-- wat a cute ending !! them dancing of into the nite !!
loved the whole FF !!--
are u plannin to do an epilogue ??
newez-- cant wait for the nxt part of pehchaan !! =)
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Posted: 16 years ago

i finishd da entire FF in 1 go ....... i loved da chemistry between AK when thy were dancin n da bond dat Angad, Rhea n Kripa shared.

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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy that was another awesome ff i loved it all the parts were truly sweet u have put in a lot of effort
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks sweetoo, Sim and loyalkashian

No...no epilogue in this one...thanks again all of u
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Di..Im back with my comments on the end of this one...

I loved the way you connected all the pieces to the story together..Seriously, kudos to you! The finale of the fic was tooo good! Simone being selfish, Angad realizing that Kripa had lied, Angad asking him mom about what he should trust, the awkwardness with Kripa on stage...and then the finale...It was all very aptly portrayed with Kripa ending her contract with Josh's company...and Simone changing her character for the better....Everything is fair in love and war..and Im glad Simone changed herself...Forgetting past grudges and moving on in life and focusing on her present...

The last scene with Angad telling Kripa that he would build a dance studio for her was tooo sweet!!

Overall this fic was too good! How a ruthless man changed after falling in love...I loved it Di...and you are my favorite writer too!

Im gonna catch up on your latest fic too!

Love, Anita

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