AR Defeated in love 2 (updt part-26) - Page 10

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Haha it's okay about hte delay...trust me i understand. I had 4 lil cousins over this summer and they wouldn't leave me laptop alone for one sec so i kno how you feel lol.
This part was amazing..i loved the Armaan and Andy scene hha that was pretty funny. Oooo Mollies gonna have to face shashank now...nice lol. I can't wait till the next part.thanks sooo much for the pm!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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woww!!!!!!!!!! brilliant prt..
thnxx 4 d pm.. update soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank God Priya is out of the way. Ridzi actually threw her out, she doesnt forgive easy does she? Anyways, me not complaining.
Now Mollie is here, cant wait to see how that works out with Shashank and AR.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow Taira, seriously loved the part. Ridz was fantastic. I mean Priya totally deserves what she got. How dare she talk like that to Muskaan? 😡 The scene b/w Andy and Armaan was so cute😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok girl read ur fic.....omg i was like how did i ever miss it till now>?????? Its great...ur really talented girl!!! Brilliant brilliant brilliant....!!!! Loved the super model Ridz here....

And u really deserve an applause for painting Armaan's character so brilliantly!!!👏 The entire Flashback...and the twist with Priya and everything....Kevin....Andy....excellent way to shape up the story i must say!!

Ok the latest part.....haha i was really happy to have Priya out for good....now that beach scene was amazing.....👏 Andy running behind and all....😆 Now cant wait to see wat u hav up ur sleeve with Molly cuming in....and how u progress AR!!

Great story....👏 Had a ball reading it

love
Jia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice update! i lived it! tha fight btween Ridz n Priya waz awful do cont soon n thnx 4 tha PM/update!
❤️twinkle!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
Im back with my extremely delayed comment, sorry 😔
Okies without sulking too much for being a complete twirp and not commenting before... i love this story Taira 🤗
Kevin needs to be pushed off a cliff, Priya needs to get shocked to bring her back to her senses.. how can she trust Kevin over friends! I mean come on... Muskaan and Ridz were supposed to be her best friends and its not even like shes madly and truly in love with Armaan otherwise she wouldnt be hanging off another man's arm not to mention at the party where Armaan was upset and Ridz went to comfort him.. where was Priya???
Mollie is soo sweet, she may be famous but she still loves her daughter and it was soo heart warming to see her fly out almost immediately to check on her baby... now whats going to happen with her staying at their house with Shashank.. da da dum! 😆
Andy's camera breaking part was funny 😆😆 hehe the way two grown men ran around, one saving his life while the other trying to kill the first all over a broken camera, cho chweet hehe... you know for a second while you were writing your earlier parts i got the feeling maybe Andy had a thing for Ridz and more then Kevin being a threat to Armaan Andy was the trheat... but Andy and Ridz seemed to have more of a caring brother sister relationship which im sure is a huge relief for Armaan 😆😆 hehe how many guys is he supposed to fight before getting his dream woman 😉
All in all (i think i last commented upto part 7 or so.. again sorry for being such an a** and not commenting ) a brilliant story and your flow of writing and the way you show the emotions deserves a standing ovation 👏
I know this comment is a little short considering its supposed to be for around 10 parts, but promise i'll make extra efforts to comment for all your future parts 😳
Lubna😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98
rocking update Taira, really loved the whole shooting scene
lol at Armaan and Andy!!
looking forward to your next part
thanks for the PM
Sania
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Plz cont soon ..! . I love reading this ..!
N plzzz .. make the parts a bit longer cant relli get enuf of reading them!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry for replying so late
last part was amazing
loved it
do cont soon

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