Im back with my extremely delayed comment, sorry 😔
Okies without sulking too much for being a complete twirp and not commenting before... i love this story Taira 🤗
Kevin needs to be pushed off a cliff, Priya needs to get shocked to bring her back to her senses.. how can she trust Kevin over friends! I mean come on... Muskaan and Ridz were supposed to be her best friends and its not even like shes madly and truly in love with Armaan otherwise she wouldnt be hanging off another man's arm not to mention at the party where Armaan was upset and Ridz went to comfort him.. where was Priya???
Mollie is soo sweet, she may be famous but she still loves her daughter and it was soo heart warming to see her fly out almost immediately to check on her baby... now whats going to happen with her staying at their house with Shashank.. da da dum! 😆
Andy's camera breaking part was funny 😆😆 hehe the way two grown men ran around, one saving his life while the other trying to kill the first all over a broken camera, cho chweet hehe... you know for a second while you were writing your earlier parts i got the feeling maybe Andy had a thing for Ridz and more then Kevin being a threat to Armaan Andy was the trheat... but Andy and Ridz seemed to have more of a caring brother sister relationship which im sure is a huge relief for Armaan 😆😆 hehe how many guys is he supposed to fight before getting his dream woman 😉
All in all (i think i last commented upto part 7 or so.. again sorry for being such an a** and not commenting ) a brilliant story and your flow of writing and the way you show the emotions deserves a standing ovation 👏
I know this comment is a little short considering its supposed to be for around 10 parts, but promise i'll make extra efforts to comment for all your future parts 😳
Lubna😳
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