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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: iamsmart

So prithvi broke her heart.....and even her siblings hate her.....poor Kripa. Well, I hope Angad will soon come in her life and will give her all the love that she never got. wonderful part.

Sana

Yup prithvi broke her heart.....and yes her siblings hate her alottt...really poor kripa.Angad...Hmm let's see.you'll know what's Angad gonna bring in her life in this part.Thks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet honey

hey...great part...cont sooon

hey...thks..i am about to.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
Part 3 was amazing
i really liked the way the girls became friends with kripa
cant wait 2 read the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
hi
thks for the pm dear
nice parts 3 &4
angad's revenge should wait and see
update soooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
hey...tnx 4 da pm...cnt belivee josh wud do dah to his own sister...uuggh....n angad good does hi tink to much ov himelf.....cnt sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
waoh⭐️ really a touching one😭😭😭 and very gud angad deserves a slap😊😳 and whts about josh😡 how can he even🤢 if u dont like ur sis😭😭 can u see her kissing anyone😲 no one brother can see🤢 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
thanks for the pm
josh was indeed disgusting...i mean who does this to their own sister
i hope angad is not planning to give her a heart break
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
amazing part
josh is really disgusting telling his sister to snog in front of him.
cant wait 2 see what angad has planned 4 kripa.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
i love it all parts plzzzz contuied soon everyone hates kripa her own brothers our such a jerks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi guys this is nida. sorry for not continuing for so long but kinza's computer broke and i thought she'll post it...i met her yesterday and i learnt that her copmp's broken sorry once again.
Part 5

Dinnertime at KM

Kripa went to the KM to eat dinner.On the way to the dining room she bumped into

Kr:Tum?

Person:Tum?

Kr:Just what r u doing here?

P:And if I ask u the same question.

Kr:I am staying here.

P:and why r u staying in my house?

Kripa suddenly realises who that person is and where she had heard the name "Angad" before.

Kr:Oh my god!So you are Aaliyah's brother?

Ang:How do u know Aali?oh wait a minute.You're Josh's sister so u are Suryaban uncle's daughter?

Kr:Finally.

Ang:Uhmmm..kripa im sorry for what i said this morning.i realised that if someone said that to my sisters i would have punched them and how bad my sisters would have felt and im really sorry.(really nervous)

Kr:oh well...it's ok it happens sometimes(also nervous all of a sudden surprised by his apology)

Ang:Thanks so can we start over as friends?(putting his hand out)
Kr:ok(taking his hand)
Camera zooms in their joined hands

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Next day, Kripa has breakfast and leaves for uni with aaliyah, anjali and riddhima.(Guys, i'm gonna skip her classes cos they're just plain boring.)

after-uni

Kripa was going towards the car park when someone grabbed her from behind.She turned around and was pleasantly surprised to see...

Kr:Kashish!!!What r u doing here?

Kas:I believe I'm here to surprise u.

Kr:But u were suppose to come day after tomorrow.

Kas:Aren't you happy to see me here?

Kr:What kind of a question is that?of course I'm happy to see you here.smiles widely.It's just I'm surprised.

Kas:Oh ok.By the way, Kavya's over there.pointing in a direction

Kr:OMG!Bhai!Let's have some fun.She rubs her hands and there is a naughty smile on her face.She goes to Kavya and grabs his shoulders and shouts:Bhooooootttttttt!!

Kav:Ahhhhh!!!!!!!Kripa!!!! I hate you so much.

Kripa laughing:I love u too bro.

Kav:I'm not going to leave you sis.

Kr: First will you catch me.she starts running and he runs after her.He finally catches her starts tickling her.

Kripa laughing:Bhai Bhai bas bas plz bas.

Kavya also laughing:First say sorry.

Kr:Never.

He tickles her harder

Kr:oweee.Ok ok sorry bro.

Kav:Good!he leaves her.So how is my little sis?

Kr:She's fine.how r u?

Kav:I'm fine too.

Kas:Hey Kripa did u know at the airport,bro saw a girl and he was gawking at her so much that he bumped into this buff guy who would have beaten the c*** out of him if I had not saved him by flirting withthe guy long enough for Kavya to run.

Kav:Well she was beautiful.Not like other girls who put too much make-up.She was a natural beauty.going into a daze.

Kas:Oh hello, loverboy.Do you know there is only a one in a million chance you might see her again, got it?

Kav:There is a chance though.and i'm gonna meet my angel.

Kas:Uff!hitting her hand on her head.Talking to you is like talking to a blubbering idiot.

Kav:Hey!I'm not a blubbering idiot.

Kas:You are

Kav:not

Kas:You are

Kav:not

Kas:You are

Kav:not

Kas:You are

Kav:not

Kas:You are

Kav:not

Kr:stop it.You both are eating my brain.Kashish, kavya is not a blubbering idiot......

Kav:See! I tol......

Kr:But you are not smart too.

Kavya became quiet at once.

Kr:Let's go.

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End of Part 5

preview of the next few parts:

Kavya meets his "angel" who is not so angelic to him.

An outing and old memory for Kripa

A boy comes to see Aaliyah and a shock for Kripa, Kashish, Kavya, Naina and

Dillip

A wedding or maybe two

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so here's the next part and part 6 might be up by friday and guys plz comment.and me and kinza have decided the name :Aone so next time the title will be:Apne cont part ____

Edited by xxlibragurlxx - 16 years ago

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