hi guys! we are nida and kinza.we read a lot of FF's and finally decided to write our own.this is our first FF so plz bear with the mistakes.all comments or critisism are welcome.
Character Sketch
The Sharma's (all live in Hong Kong except Josh)
Suryaban Sharma - A loving father to his sons and a rich businessman.He hates his daughter and doesn't pay a lot of attention to her because his wife gayatri sharma died after giving birth to her.Her family hates her.Best friend of Karan Nanda and Dillip Khanna and is still in contact with Dillip after he moved to UK 26 years ago.
Sujal Sharma - 25, Goodlooking, He helps his father in business.Is engaged to and in love with Kashish Nanda.Hates Kripa
Josh Sharma - 24, Handsome, He is in his last year at Oxford University, A big flirt , has feelings for Aaliyah Khanna but hasn't realized it yet. Bestfriend of Angad Khanna. Hates Kripa
Armaan Sharma - 23, Hot, Going to UK to study in Oxford with his big bro and Kripa. A Casanova(Angad has competition).Hates Kripa
Kripa Sharma - 22, Extremely gorgeous, no matter what kind of clothes she wears, she looks good. She loves her father and brothers a lot and wishes they also love her.She wants to make them proud of her but they always shout at her.She never tied them a single rakhi.She has saved all the rakhis she bought for them in different boxes so she knows which is for which brother of hers.She only tied a rakhi to Kavya.He and Kashish are like her siblings.Their parents also gave her the love Suryaban never gave her.If they hadn't been there for her together with Naina and Dillip when they came to visit, she would have started blaming herself for her mom's death and either would have killed herself or gone into severe depression. She no onger expects anything from life cos she doesn't want to be disappointed. She has no interest in boys and doesn't believe in love.She is beauty with brains but likes to hide her beautiful blue-green eyes with brown lenses.She used to have a lot of innocence in her eyes but now she is facing reality and is very cold towards people she doesn't know and only with a little respect to her father and brother.She hates her cousin Prithvi cos he once broke her heart to go out with his cousin Mishty Malhotra cos she was richer but now he broke Mishty's heart to go out with Kripa cos now she is richer.(She doesn't know Mishty was with Prithvi only cos of his wealth too.)
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The Nanda's (All live in Hk but Kashish has gone to visit her grandma in India and then will go to Uk for her studies in Oxford uni.)
Karan and Nandini Nanda - A loving couple and parents to Kavya, Kashish and Kripa. They treat Kripa like a daughter cos they didn't like the way her biological family treat her. They don't blame her for Gayatri's death cos they know when god wants something to happen, humans can do nothing to stop Him.
Kavya Nanda - 24, Handsome, flirt, believes in love but thinks you should have some fun before you meet the one meant for you. He loves Kripa a lot and doesn't treat her any different than Kashish.Maybe he does pamper her a lot more than Kashish but only becos she's smaller than Kashish.He helps his father in business.
Kashish Nanda - 22,Beautiful, sweet, caring and loving,loves her family, Kripa and Sujal a lot. She is kripa's best friend.She will also attend Oxford uni but will come from india where she is currently staying with her grandma.
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The Khanna's (The kids have not met either the Sharma or Nanda kids except Josh and have seen all kids pictures except kripa cos Josh showed them and he didn't mention her once)
Dillip and Naina Khanna - They are loving parents and love their children a lot. They spoilt Angad the most since he is the only boy.They have only one wish and that is to get them married to their best friends' children's.
Anjali Khanna - 22, She is a good daughter, sister and friend but if you get on her wrong side, only god can save you.She is a modern girl and sometimes dates but knows her limits.
Angad Khanna - 23,very arrogaant and has a lot of attitude,the casanova of jis college.For him,girls are a one-night stand.He canget very angry very fast.He thinks he can get anyone or anything he wants.
Aliyah and Riddhima Khanna - 21, fraternal twins they are very close to their siblings and can do anything for them.They love to play pranks on others and their teachers They are very sweet and caring.
Please comment.And if there are any mistakes plz tell us
Hi im nida.sorry guys for not continuing before.kinza's gonna post part 2 around tomorrow or the weekend.plz comment and tell us if u want us to pm u.
Part 1
(guys i'm changing the story a bit.Angad is now 23 and Anjali is 22 as Angad plays a good role as a big brother and Kripa has a past.she came to england a few months before but the khanna kids and Josh had gone on a camp so she didn't meet them.)
dear diary,
I'm scared to go to england again.After all, I went there for a month and fell in love but it all went wrong later.what now? I have a feeling something's gonna change my life but what?I hope that b****** doesn't come back in my life cos after what he did, I won't be to blamed if I kill him but I'm still scared of him.after all he tried to r*** me.but sometimes I wonder why he didn't love me and lusted my body?why don't my family just accept me?was being born such a big mistake?they knew this pregnancy was complicated so why didn't they just aborted me instead of making me live in hell?thank god for kashish, kavya bhai, Nandini Aunty, Karan Uncle, Dillip Uncle and Naina Aunty.even though I knew Dillip uncle and Naina aunty for 1 month, I feel really comfortable with them.Whenever I was with them, Inever felt the loneliness I felt with dad and my brothers.gotta go.the plane's landing.
Bye
Kripa
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Annoucement : we will be landing at the London Airport in a while.please fasten your seatbelts.
We see Kripa and Armaan sitting next to each other.
Ar: Thank god.ab main thodi hi dair is manoos ke saath bethoonga.
Kripa felt bad but hid it.
After a while,
Annoucement: We have now landed at the London airport.we hope youi enjoyed your flight.
Kripa: Chalo Armaan.
Armaan: Chal rah hoon.Main bacha nahin hoon jo tum mujhe batao kya karna hai aur kya nahin.I'm your big brother,understand.
Kripa(mumbled):but it never seemed like it.Always Kavya bhai fulilled the role of big brother in my life.
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this is the end for this part.please comment guys.I really like them.and guys it's sunday night in this FF.And please help us with the title cos we can't even think of the title.
hi guys this is kinza im gonna post the 2 part soon as fast as nida sends me.
happy that u all liked it
2 nd part coming soon
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Hi guys.this is nida.first, sorry kinza i didn't send u but i was too busy and as i know ur computer is brojken so u go to the library,i'll just post it but call me and tell when u want part 3.well here goes nothing.
Part 2
Kripa and Armaan are walking out of the London Airport.Kripa spots Naina and Dillip.(She met them only 2 years back when she came to Uk for a month.)
Kr: 'There they are.'She points towards them.
Ar: 'Pata hai.Miss-know-it-all'feeling annoyed she saw them
Kripa feels bad but bravely puts on a happy face and walks towards them.
Kr:'Namaste Aunty, Uncle.'
Ar:'Namaste aunty, uncle'
Na,Di:' Hello beta!'
Na:'Flight theek se pahaunch gayi?'
Ar:'yes'
Di:'baatein baad mein bhi ho jayengi.Ab chalo bohut raat hogayi hai.'
Kr, Ar:'Yeah lets go.'
They reach Khanna Mansion(KM).'
Na:' Kripa tumhara room outhouse mein kyunki KM mein sirf ek balcony wala room hai aur woh meri beti ka hai, ok?'
Kr:'ok aunty.'
Di:'Aur haan madam ka beta bhi wahin rehte hain.Raat ko daer se aatein hain aur subah agar college na ho toh ut the bhi lunchtime mein hain.'
Na:'Ab bas bhi kijiye.Har waqt becare ke piche pare rehte hain.'
Di:'Woh bechara nahin, awara hai,awara.Josh ko bhi bigad diya usne.ab dono flirts hain.'
Na:'Beta baap peh hi jaye ga.Aap bhi toh aapne zamane ke flirt teh.'
Di:'Lekin tab bhi tum peh mata tha aur aaj bhi tumhara hi deewana hoon, jaan-e-man.'
Naina justs blushes and runs inside KM.
Di:'Chalo Kripa Ab hum dono bhi chalta hain.'
Kripa goes to the outhouse and sets her bedroom.After she finishes, she picks her teddy and lies down on the bed talking to it.
Kr:' Teddy pata hai.Ab hum UK mein wapas aagaye hain.Uk jidar mein aapni zindigi ki sabsi haseen aur bayanak galti ki, pyar kiya.Uk, jaha mein usse mili jisne mujhe pyar ka matlab bataya aur mera dil bhi thoda.Usse mili jisni sirf nere jism ko chaham sirf mere jism ko.'She started crying.
'UK,jaha mein Prithvi Bose se mili.'Kyun? Mere saath hi kyun?Pehle Papa,Josh, Sujal and Armaan aur phir Prithvi. Maine unka kyabigada ke woh mujhse itni nafrat karte hai?Agar mere pehda hone se mama ki mauth hui toh mera abortion kyun nahin kiya?Kyun mujhe is duniya mein laya gaya jahan mujhe mera apne parrivaar hi na pyar kare?Kyun?Aur Prithvi, kitna pyar kiya th main aur usne kitni asaani sed mera r*** karne ke liye intezaam kar liya.Aaj bhi mujhe bure sapne aate hain us raat ke.Aaj bhi mujhe usse darr lagta hai.Agar Kashish aur Kavya bhai na hote toh =aaj mein kisi pagal khane mein prithvi ke darr ki vajah se hoti.Unhon ne mujhe yakeen dilwaya ke Prithvi ab mra kuch nahin bigad sakta lekin ab toh mein wapas idhar Uk mein hoon.Aur Kashish abhi tak nahin aayi hai.Woh toh teen din ke baad hi aayegi.Agar in teen dino mein mujhe Prithvi mil gaya toh? Nahin kripa aisa mat soch.woh tujhe nahin milega.'She wipes her tears and slowly slowly fell into a dreamless sleep after setting the alarm to 7:30 am because she had to go to uni the next day.She had decided to go to to uni to take her mind of Prithvi.
End of Part 2
I hope this is long enough for you.plz comment.
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my computer is working already
good
father fixed it send me part 3 fastly
I'll sen u part 4 cos im bored and its my comp lesson so i'll just post part 3.
thx
ur welcome...............not
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Guys this might be a short part as I'm in school.
Part 3
Kripa wakes up at &:30 am and has a bath.Then she goes to KM and sees Naina, Dillip and three girls she didn't recognise eating breakfast.
Kr:Morning aunty, uncle.taking their blessing.
Na, Di: Morning beta.Starting her breakfast
Kr:aunty yeh kaun hai? to the girls.'Sorry but i don't know you.'
Na:Kripa these are our daughters: Riddhima, Aaliyah and Anjali.girls this is Kripa, josh's sister.
Aa: Josh has a sister? He never told us.He always said my bros this and my bros that.That's why I thought two boys were coming instead of one boy one girl when you said Sharma kids mom.
Kr: Josh never likes to talk about me.(mumbling)Come to think of it no Sharma does.
Ri:Why?
NA:Beta, tum log uni ke liye late horahe ho na.
Anj:Oh s***.Thanks mom.Let's go girls.Aur Kripa tum bhi hamare saath chal rahi ho.
In the car they talk and become good friends.
Outside the college,
Anj:Sorry guys mujhe jaana hoga.mujhe meri presentation ki tayari karni hai apni friend ke saath.Bye
Aa, Ri, Kr: Bye. She leaves.
Ri:main bhi chalti hoon.Kirti ma'am mera ghala ghoop dein gi agar late hogayi.
Aa:Mujhe library jaana hai Kripa bye.Sorry.Main tumhe princy ke office ka raasta bata deti hoon.
Kr:Ok.Then they leave in different directions.
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Sorry people but the bell rang i have to go.
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hurry up plz waiting for a zillion years already
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Hi! it's nida.sorry for the very late updates but i've been so busy at school.our teachers have been giving us so much work and i've already had like 4 or 5 tests and quizzes.and every thurs,my chinese teachers gives us dict.man can they even give us a break.ok enough of my bakbak...
the updates...........
Part 4
Kripa was walking in the direction aaliyah had told her.She was looking for her birth certificate in her purse and bumped into two guys and her things fell.She bent to pick them up and muttered curses at the two guys who were just standing ther waiting fr her to finish.Theyhadn't seen her face since her hair was covering that.When she finally stood up, she ws shocked to see -
Kr:Josh?!!
Jo:Kripa?!! (at the same time)
Guy 2 was just looking confused.
Jo: well well well.So the princess has reached UK, hasn't she?God!Will you ever let me be in peace?
Kr: You know that as well as I do I came here only because of the schlorship and Kashish.
Josh was about to say something when the other guy interrupts...
Guy 2:I don't care why you came here and I see no reason Josh should care as he is looking really annoyed with you at the moment.All I care about is that you are new and you are hot so...
Jo:you are going to be ragged.
Kripa had heard about ragging but had hoped they wouldn't pick her.she had to be brave she told herself.
Kr:What do i have to do?
Jo:Kiss Angad.
Kr:and why would i kiss angad -whoever he is.
Guy 2:Cos angad is the hottest guy in this uni and that is me.So better kiss me now baby.Let's see if you taste as good as you look.
Kripa gets angry and slapped him and said: you both are disgusting especially you Josh.If someone talked about his sister liked that, he would have punched their guts out.(pointing at Angad)But you are so digusting you are actually talking about your own sister like that.
Jo:I have no sister.
Kr: I am'your biological sister whether you like it or not.
Jo:Why don't you just get lost.
Kr: don't want to talk to you.I'm leaving.
Jo:Get lost.
Kripa leaves
Ang:She slapped me? Me, Angad Khanna? She has to pay for it and bad.You're going to be in for a surprise miss-I-am-the-best.
Jo:What are you planning to do, man?
Ang:And why would I tell you that?
Jo:Cos I'm your best friend.
Ang:You are also her brother.
Jo: Only biologically.I have never been her brother cos when she was born,my mom died.I hate her.
Ang:Sorry, man.I'm gonna teach her a lesson that she'll remember for the rest of her life.
He tells something to Josh we can't hear.
Jo:Perfect plan.She won't know what hit her.(They smile evilly)
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Dear Diary,
Today started off good but once I got to the uni,it got bad to worse to worst.First, I met Josh.He is so disgusting asking his own sister to snog a guy she doesn't even know.Then he says he doesn't have a sister.Well of course, Armaan, Josh and Sujal never made me their sister.That's why, even though I'm 3 years younger than Sujal, I've never called him Bhai, bro or anyhting other than Sujal.My own family considers me to be a stranger. I feel like a burden on them.Sometimes I feel like dying but then I remember Kavya and Kashish and all thoughts of suicide get away from me faster than they come.it's strange how cloose they are to me cos thinking about my family makes me want to die but just one thought about them and I feel like I can live if I want to.But even then, the regret s still in me that my family doesn't condsider me family.But this is just the starting of my bad day.Next I'm late for the Principal's office and get a long lecture for that.Later, this b**** comes to me at lunch and throws coke on my shirt cos i had insulted her in class.Finally, I nearly lose my timetable.Thank god for Aaliyah or else I wonder what would have happened to me.Ok.the bell rang.That means uni's over and I'm going home.Yay.
Bye,
Kripa
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Guys, I'm really tired after all that typing plus before coming home I went to the dentist and he took out my tooth so I guess this is all for today.Sorry
Index List
part 1-4 pg 1
part 5 pg 7
part 6 pg 9
Kripa's diary entry pg 9
Part 7 pg 10
Part 8 pg 11
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