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Kiran--Madiha

@kiran--madi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Hey jst caught up wd ur FF....itz amazing.....please continue soon....n please PM me da nxt tym u continue:)

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

CHAPTER - 6

Just before evrone were leaving Sanjeevani......

* Armaan runs up to Rahul *

Armaan - " they are goin to The Taj this evening....best of luck..."

* Rahul thanks him and gets in his car.....there and drove straight upto Naina's huse...( to ask her out )

* Naina opens the door and is really surprised to see Rahul there.....*

Naina - hey !

Rahul -ummm...hey

Naina- come in.

Rahul - umm...no I just wanted to ask u sumthing..

Naina - yeah?

Rahul- * really fast * willyougooutwithme?

Naina - soory...I dint get what you just said....

Rahul - * slowly * will...u...go...out...with...me?

Nania - OF course !

Rahul - Ok then be ready by 7...I will pick you up...

At Muskaan's apartment -

*Muskaan is getting ready and admiring herself in the mirror.....she was looking really pretty....*

Muskaan( Thinking ) - If only Rahul can see me now......Hai ! yeh kyaa horaa hai? main Rahul ke baare mein intna kyun soch rahi hu...focus muskaan focus....jai....Jai hie tere sapno kaa rajkumar hai....Rahul nahi...

* then suddenly someone gives her a missed call...IT WAS JAI ! *

* Meanwhile Rahul picks up Naina from her house...Rahul really had to admit that Naina looked really stunning and if he was not in love with Muskaan he would have totally fallen for Naina...Naina flashed Rahul a big smile when she got in the car... and now both of them were sitting in the car and heading towards The Taj hotel *

Meaniwhile in the Taj hotel....

* Muskaan had already arrived with Jai and jai had gone oto the washroom so Muskaan was sitting alone looking around when suddenly she turns around and sees rahul entering with a pretty girl she dint know *

* Muskaan's insides were squirming qith Jealousy...She dint know why....but she suddenl y felt a Pang of hatred toward that pretty girl *

* Meanwhile Jai had come back and he also saw Rahul and naina *

Jai - wow ! Rhaul ke saath woh ladki kaun hai?

Muskaan - pataa nahi...ekdum bhais ki tarh lag rahi hai na?

Jai - nahi yaar...bahut kubsooorat hai ! orr dono ek dusre ke saath acche lag rahe hai !

Muskaan - KYA ? she is soo ugly...mujhe nahi maaloom tha ki Rahul ki taste inti buri thi...

Jai - ok ok .......chill maar ! par meri taste bahut acchi hai...kyunki mein yahah ki sabse kubsoorat ladki ke saath baithaa hu,,,,

* muskaan blushes *

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MOONA

@luvingRM

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#33

hi !ur FF is so gud ....! but i miss typical RM figthing style.....plz update ur FF ------- mOonA

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: luvingRM
hi !ur FF is so gud ....! but i miss typical RM figthing style.....plz update ur FF ------- mOonA

thakz u ...I am not actually good at writing the fighting parts...bcuz this is my first ff and I am more comfi in using english than hindi...but then thanks 4 ur suggestion...I will see wht I can do

thankz...

apoorva

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

sorry no update today...was really buzy !

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Veeki

@Veeki

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

continue soon...haha muskaan's jealous n jai is such a big flirt!

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bhavini

@bhavini570

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

can't wait. its realy good.

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

CHAPTER 5- ( cont )

@ The Taj -

* Rahul and naina were giving their table RIGHT NEXT 2 jai's and muskaan's.......ahul just came up to their table said hi 2 both of them...intoduced Naina..and went back to his table...*

* Muskaan kept looking over at thier table.....Rahul saw that and was really happy*

Jai - so.....wht elz?

muskaan- ummm...* looking at Rahul and naina * yum batao....

* just then she sees a waiter heading towards them ( ie...muskaan's and rhaul's table ) with a very large dish in his hands....and suddenly she had an idea *

CHAPTER - 6

* Muskaan sticks out her leg......the waiter slips and the dish falls on Naina......*

Muskaan ( thinking ) - Bullseye !

Naina - * screms * ( to the waiter ) Dekn tune kya kiya....GHADA !

( to rahul ) - Main washroom jaa rahi hu

Rahul ( giggling ) - ok....

Muskaan ( getting up ) - main tumhari help karti hu....

* both of them go to the wash room *

Naina - abb main isse saaf kaise karu ?

Muskaan - with soap...ruk...main karti hu

* ...Muskaan spreads the "daag" more when naina was nt looking *

Muskaan - aila ! yeh daag to sabun seh bhi nahi jaa raha hai....tomhe shayd ghar jaa chahiya.....warna sab tumpe hasenge *

Nania - haah ! mujhe ghar jaana chaiye *

* muskaan smiles 2 herself on the success of her plan *

* they both go out ofthe washroom *

* Rahul is laughing at Naina *

Rahul ( lauging ) - tumhari dress bahut acchi hai !!!

Nanina - Tum hass rahe ho? god...rahul how can u b so unsupportive?

*Naina storms out of the hotel *

* Muskaan is really happy now *

* suddenly Jai's pager rings *

Jai - oh ! mujhe Sanjeevani jaana padegaa....Rahul? tum Muskaan ko ghar drop kar sakte ho ka?Muskaan.....no probs na? if rahul drops u ???

* Both Rahul and Muskaan are hapy now *

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MOONA

@luvingRM

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

just it..........

thora sa tou lamba karo yar.....parhna start hi kiya they k end ho gaya😳

mo0na

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#40

just read ur ff......very sweet....love RM

....hope Naina will be okay....feel very sry for her.....Muskaan is too funny.....hope Rahul and Muskaan get together soon.......so pls continue soon....n if u dont mind....can u pls pm me.....thanks!

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