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mohini_agarwal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

please update soon, i'm waiting to see what happened to muskaan. your ff is very nice and interesting, keep up the good work. :]

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Apoorva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: monadarling2628
please update soon, i'm waiting to see what happened to muskaan. your ff is very nice and interesting, keep up the good work. :]

THANK U SO MUCH ! will try and update now !

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Apoorva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

* Rahul and Muskaan are sitting in the car...Muskaan is crying silently.....Rahul dint want to ask any questions right now....as she was already so upset *

* They reach Muskaan's aprtment...Muskaan quickly says thanks and runs away....Rahul is really concered but then he thought it was best 2 leave her alone for sometime *

* Rahul reaches his house.....he is really concered 4 Muskaan....he wanted to meet her....and he had a plan *

CHAPTER - 6

* Muskaan was unable to sleep that night....she was really depressed....how could Jai have done that?....He was flirting with her all day....and she actually thought that he might like her....how could she have been so stupid?.....He was a player....thts right a player and the biggest flirt she had ever met...*

* Let me tell u wht happend and wht muskaan is so unhappy with Jai *

FLASHBACK -

* Muskaan enters the Sanjeevani building...she goes straight upto ther locker.....she pulls out her handbag*

* there were hardly any doctors in the hospital...*

* Suddenly she hears voices from the empty canteen...she goes inside to see who they were...*

* IT WAS JAI with an another female doctor....their was an candle on the table and they were speaking soflty *

sorry guys...gotta go...will update l8ter

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Apoorva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

* Muskaan strained to hear what they were saying....*

Jai - tum kitni sudar ho....main Snajeevani ka sabse lucky ladka hu....jo maine tumhara pyaar payaa.

* The female doctor blushes...*

Female doctor - Tum aaj uss intern seh kya baat kar rahe the....maine suna ki tum dono kahin bahar jaa rahe the?

Jai - kaun ? muskaan? woh tho bustympass k liye tha....woh mere saath bahar jaana chahti thi....orr mujhe usse bahar le jaane k liye din raat pareshn kar rahi thi...isiliye le gaya....bahut pakaau type hai....

( BACK TO THE PRESENT )

* Muskaan started crying again....suddenly there was a hard rap on the balcony window.....and then again a hard rap......*

* Muskaan went and opened the window door an peeped out....and then suddenly she looked on the other side and there was sum1 standing on the other side.....rahul !

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

awesome!!......very swwet that Muskaan said she cant bear to see him with anyone else.....also very cute that Rahul is going to meet her at night.....hate that Jai.....but hopefully his dumbness could get Rahul n Muskaan together!!!.....hehe

thanks for the pm......this was a very nice part....pls update soon!!!

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MOONA

@luvingRM

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

👍🏼

i m on the edge ..😕

waitinggggg😍

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Apoorva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

CHAPTER - 7

Muskaan - RAHUL !!!!!!!!!!!!! tu yahan kya kar raha hai?

Rahul - bas tumse milne chala aaya......

Muskaan - tum darwaaze se bhi toh andar aa sakte the na?

Rahul - haah maine beel bajaayi thi....par tune darwaza nahi kholaa.....

Muskaan - woh beel kaam nahi kr rahi hai...

Rahul - mujhe aadar aane dogi ki nahi....yaa raat bar hum dono yehi baat kare?

Muskaan - andar aao......

* both of them go inside *

Rahul - aab tum yeh baatao ki tum ro kyun rahi thi...?

* Muskaan told him everything.....she dint feel as unhappy as she felt before...infact she felt happy that rahul came to her house...*

Rahul - woh saala...

* Muskaan shot him a look as Rahul was just about to use a swear word *

Rahul - ahem ....I mean woh saala Jai....kal uski bahut dhulaayi hogi...

* Muskaan laughed....*

* Suddenly......someone bangs on the door *

* Rahul goes and peeps through the peephole...then he rushes back to Muskaan and whispers *

Rahul - oh my god ! Jai hai !

Muskaan ( worried ) - KYA ???

Rahul - mazaak tha...pata nahi koi ladki hai...jaa..... jaake dekh

* Muskaan goes and peeps....*

Muskaan( whispering ) - Chup jaa Rahul ?

Rahul - kyu?

Muskaan - arrey woh ladki meri padason hai !!

Rahul - haah toh....wo mujhe kha jaayegi kya?

Muskaan - abbey oye ! iss tym pe koi ladka ek akle ladki ke hall mein hogaa toh sab kya sochenge ?

Rahul - good point...leking kaha chupu?

Muskaan - bed ke neeche chup jaa......jaldi !

* Rahul goes away and hides under the bed...Muskaan opens the door *

* PS - the neibours name is nandini *

Nandini - inta time kyu lagaaya ? kisse baat kar rahi thi ? yaha koi hai kya?

Muskaan - nahi.....ummm....koi bhi nahi hai... sivaye hum dono

Nandini - kuch gadbad lag raaha hai....tum mujse kuch chupaa rahi ho kya?

Muskaan( all worried now ) - nahi nahii !....tu yaha? intni raat ko?

Nandini - haah ! woh kya hua na....mujhhe need nahi aa rahi thi...orr tune kal mujhe bataya tha ki kal tujhe hospital nahi jaana hogaa....isiliye maine socha aaj hum derr raat tak baat karenge !

Muskaan - NAHI !

Nandini - oye...tu chilla kyu rahi hai...!

Muskaan - ummm...aaj nahi plz....kisi orr din...kyunki mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai * faking a ywn *

Nandini - neend- weend chod orr mere saath yeh movie dekh....bahut acchi hai

* She dargs muskaan to the bedroom( where the TV an dthe dvd player where there....and also the same place where Rahul was hiding *

will update more l8ter !