A RAHUL MUSKAAN STORY! - Page 25

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Posted: 16 years ago
I CANT WAIT TO READ T HE NEXT PART
IT WAS REALLY GOOD
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Posted: 16 years ago
GREAT!!!.........nice save......i seriously thought it would be someone else......nice cute scene between Rahul n Muskaan!......little kiss.........pls continue soon.....it just keeps on getting better!!.....thank u very much for the pm.......n if u dont mind can u pls pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyy it was cooool
nice savingpls pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
* Rahul walks upto Jai and Muskaan *
* He takes away the necklace from Jai's hands and lays it on the table *
Rahul ( to Jai ) - Only I have the right to put that necklace on Muskaan's neck...get it ?
* Jai laughs sarcastically at this *
Jai - toh tum yahan aa hi gaye....Main tumahra intezaar kar raha tha....ki kab tum aaoge orr mein tere samne hi Muskaan ke saath shaadi ki mandap per baitu...
Rahul - intna over confidence sehat ke liye theek nahi hai Jai....orr waise bhi pataa nahi kal kya ho saktaa hai....!
* Saying that Rahul plants a small kisson Muskaan's forehead ( in front of Jai ) and leaves...*
* Jai is all confused...he dint understand the meaning of Rahul's sentence.....*
* He drags Muskaan by the arm....opens the car door...pushes her inside....he sits in the drivers seat....and drives really fast *
* They reach home.....Jai storms into his bedroom....he was angry infact he was fuming...what did Rahul mean....??....was Rahul planning to elope with muskaan ?? as these questions were spinning in his mind...he decided that he should be on high alret and keep a check on Muskaan *
* Muskaan on the other hand was eavesdropping on her father' and mother's conversation in their room *
( MD- Muskaan's dad...MM - muskaan's mom )
MM - Muskaan Rahul se pyaar karti hain ?
MD - haah ! wo ek dusre se pyaar karte hain...
MM- Hame shayad Muskaan ko bataa denaa chahiye ki hamare orr Gerewal pariwaar ke beech kya hua tha !
Md - Nahi ! Main nahi chahta ki Muskaan yeh jaane....wo bahut duki ho jaayegii...
* Muskaan couldnt resist....she burst into thier room *
Muskaan - Papa....yeh aap dono kis baat ke baare mein baat kar rahe hai ?
MD - kuch nahi...kuch bhi toh nahi...
Muskaan - boliye naa papaji....boliye naa papa !
MM - main batati hu...
MD - nahi...mat batao..
MM - Usse jaane ka haq hai....ki kyun hum usse Rahul se door rehne ke liye keh rahe hai...
Muskaan - boliye mummyjii
MD - jab tu or Rahul Sanjeevani gaye the na upni internship ke liye....tab main orr tumhare papajii gaye the Rahul ke ghar tere rishtaa lekar...orr jab humne tumhari orr Rahul ki shaadi ke baare mein baat karna shuru kiya tha.....tab Rahul ke mummy papa humpe hasne lage orr hamari bahut bezaati ki...
Muskaan - KYA ?
MM - haah Mukaan ! un logon ne hame dhake maarke ghar se bahar nikal diya tha....
* Muskaan was shocked...she felt anger rise in in her....she felt a sudden pang of hatred towards thr grewal family...*
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( BACK TO THE PRESENT ) ( READ THE 1ST PART OF THE STORY )
* The next night *
* Muskaan sat fully dressed and alone in her room...it was her wedding night...she was getting married to Jai....but she was not happy....she was crying....she dint love Jai......and now she dint love Rahul either...*
* Normally whenever she thought of Rahul, she would start blushing and smiling to herself....but today she dint fing herself blushing or smilig...instead she felt hatred aganist him....*
( Suddenly Muskaan's cell rang...It was ridzi *
Ridzi ( in a hurry ) - Muskaan ...jaldi chath pe aa....Jaldi !
Muskaan - Ridzi ? kya hua ?
Ridzi - tu sawaal mat puch chath pe aa
* Muskaan goes to the terrace....there was nobody there....suddenly a figure is visible....and it turns out to be none other than Rahul *
Rahul - Muskaan....jaldi chalo...hum dono yaha se baagh chalte hain....Armaan ne train ki tickets book ar liye....jladi...chalo...
* Rahul grabs Muskaan hand and pulls her fprward *
Muskaan ( pulling her hand back ) - Nahi ....
Rahul - kya ?
Muskaan - nahi...main nahi chalungii....
Rahul - Muskaan....yeh tu kya bol rahi hai ?
Muskaan - mein tumhare saaath nahi calungii Rahul...orr main tumse baat bhi nahi karnaa chatii !
* Muskaan breaks down into tears *
* Rahul is shocked...he dint understand what was going on *
Rahul - Muskaan.....??
\Muskaan - tumse behter Jai hai.....main usse hi shaadi karungiii
* The moment she said this and another person comes to the terrace...Jai ! *
Jai - AHAA ! mujhe pataa tha ki tum dono kuch gabad karne waale the....
* Muskaan runs and jumps into Jai's arms....Jai is clealy surprised...but he returns the hug back and drags Muskaan away *
* Rahul is still standing on the terrace....he dint know what juz happened.....his phone rings *
Armaan - hello...Rahul ?
Rahul ( almost crying ) - Armaan...
Armaan - what happened Rahul ?
Rahul - muskaan mujhe pyaar nahi karti armaan...nahi karti....
Armaan - KYA? tu jaldi guest house aaja....abhi ke abhi
IN the guesthouse --
* Rahul enters the guesthouse...he is looking really sad *
* Armaan ridzi atul and anjie walk upto him and ask him what happened *
* Rahul explains what happened to them *
* Everone is just shocked with what muskaan did *
* Armaan was furious *
Armaan - Muskaan aise kaise kar sakti hai ? how could she toy with rahul like that....
Ridzi - I will go and talk to her.....
* Ridzi goes to Muskaan's house...she walks into Muskaan's room *
* Muskaan was crying silently...*
Ridzi - how could u do tht Muskaan ? tu Rahul ke saaath aisa kaise kar sekti hai ??
Muskaan - lemme explain...
* Muskaan tells Ridzi everthing...*
* Ridzi is shocked ....*
sorry guys...thats all 4 today ! PHEW ! wht a long update !!


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Posted: 16 years ago
aankho me aasu layyi tune to
kya YAAR ITNA KUSH TI ME OR EK HI DIN ME SAB GARBAR KARDI TUNE
AP JALDI SE UPDATE KAR AND BRING THEM
TOGETHER
Edited by miss.sonia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: miss.sonia

aankho me aasu layyi tune to

kya YAAR ITNA KUSH TI ME OR EK HI DIN ME SAB GARBAR KARDI TUNE
AP JALDI SE UPDATE KAR AND BRING THEM
TOGETHER

Lolz...dont worry...my next update will be SUPER romantic !
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy.......that was awesome!! but plz jaldi se in dono ko firse saath kardo!! lol.....plz update soon! :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
Please continue reallyyyyyyyyyyy Soonnnnnnnnnnn
I cant wait to read more
It was really goodddddddddddddddd
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Posted: 16 years ago
it waz really gud....👏
just put sum romance in it....
thanx 4 pm....take care n continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
AWESOME!!!......loved it......nice long part......cant belive that happened......it was very mean of Rahul's parents....hopefully Rahul n Muskaan come together soon.........pls continue soon....it was great..........thank u very much for the pm....n if u dont mind can u pls pm me next time

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