A RAHUL MUSKAAN STORY! - Page 26

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey aproova !!
nice update ........ i did nt get why jai want to marry .....just to ruin the life of two loverz :(
hope 2 c them together soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey very gud apoorva.....but really so sad of rahul wat was his fault???it was his parents fault na then y was muskaan angry with him???cont soon ......very interesting......waiting to read next....n do pm me....bye.....👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey apoorva.....wonderfull update !!!!! looking forward to u updating soon......and plz pm me wen u update next time....
thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow what a twist in the tale! real good update asap!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
vrrrrrrrrrry soooooooooooory for late comment iwas nt able read properly i was 2 busy so tere was no time soooorry yaaaaaaar😭
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it was greaaaaaat...👏
but 2 sad that thy 2 r nt tgether
plss make togther
plllllllllsssssssss cont fast
dnt frgt 2 pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
* Ridzi is shocked *
Muskaan - mein kya karu riddima ?? Kya main apne 5 mahino ke pyaar ke liye apne maa baap ko naaraz kar du ?
Riddima - nahi....lekin tumhe Rahul ko bhi dhoka nahi denaa chahiye na Muskaan.....orr waise bhi usse ne kya kiya ? galtii toh saari uski mummy papa ki thi na....toh phir tu usse kyu sazaa de rahi hai ? uskaa kya dosh hai ?
* Muskaan is silent....Ridzi continues *
Ridzi - yeh tum galat kar rahi ho Muskaan......apne saath bhi orr Rahul ke saath bhi....tu toh shaadi karke chaali jaayegii Muskaan lekin uss bichare Rahul ka kya hogaa Muskaan ?....Woh tumse pyaar kartaa hai Muskaan....orr usse khoke tum apni zindagii ki sabse badi bhool kar rahi hai....
Muskaan - yeh maine kya kar diya...??
Ridzi - dont worry Muskaan....abhi bhi time hai...Rahul ko phone kar !
*Ridzi gives Muskaan her mobile....Muskaan quickly dials Rahul's no *
Muskaan - uskaa mobile switch off aa rahaa hai !
Ridzi - de....main guesthouse call karti hu...
* Ridzi calls the guesthouse...Anjie picks up the phone...*
Anjie -hello ?
Ridzi - di ! Rahul kahaa hai ? usse jaldi bulaao !
Anjie - Rahul ? woh toh Railway station chalaa gaya....hume usse bahut rokne ki koshish ki...lekin usne hamari baat nahi maani...
Ridzi - to fir aap guesthouse main kya kar rahe ho ?
Anjie - Main aur atul , armaan ka wait kar rahe the...pataa nahi kahaa chalaa gaya...
Ridzi - ok bye !
Ridzi ( to Muskaan ) - Rahul railway station chalaa gaa...hame jaldi wahaa jaana hogaa Muskaan !
Muskaan - kaise ?
* Ridzi walks up on down the room.....she sees a window *
Ridzi ( pointing to the window ) - uss khidki se...
Muskaan - lekin....hum fit ho paayege wahan...
Ridzi - obviously yaar ! chalo jaldii !!!
* Muskaan and Ridzi escape through the window *
Muskaan ( in hushed tones ) - lekin hum yaha se station kaise jaayege ? orr yaha auto orr taxi bhi nahi miltii !
A voice behind Muskaan's houlder - Maybe I can help you woth that !
* Muskaan and Riddima turn around...It was Armaan....*
Ridzi ( giving him a hug ) - u r a lifesaver ! waise tum yahan kya kar rahe ho ?
Armaan - Mujhe Muskaan ke saath baat karni thi....isiliye main yahan chalaa aaya...abb jaldi chalo...warna train chut jaayegii !
Muskaan ( ginving Armaan a huge hug ) - Armaan ! I love you......as a frend ( she aads after seeing ridzi's face )
* Muskaan , Ridzi and Armaan get into the car *
* But before they could drive away.....someone sees Muskaan running away before her marraige...and the person turned out to be none other than Jai *
* But before Jai could do or say anything...they drive away *
* Meanwhile....Rahul was sitting on a bench....he was waiting for the train...*
* The train arrives...Rahul gets up and gets inside it *
* Muskaan, armaan and ridzi were still in the car *
Ridzi - Jaldi karo Armaan....warna Rahul chalaa jayegaa
Armaan - orr kitni tez chaalaau ? already 130 ki speed pe jaa raha hu !
* Rahul gets into the train ....The train would leave in 2 mins....*
* Armaan. ridzi and Muskaan reach the station.....Muskaan runs as fast as she can ans reached platform no.2 *
* Muskaan is running around like a mad person searching for a the train 2323 ( the train tht Rahul is supposed to go in ) ......she is running around asking people for directions....but none bothered to help her *
* Finally she spots train 2323...and in was just about to leave *
* Muskaan starts running behind the train ...screaming Rahul's name...*
* The train was was gaining speed and Muskaan could no longer keep pace with it....she stopped running...her eyes shone with the tears...she lost Rahul...lost him forever...*
* Riddima gave Muskaan a hug...ridzi dint know what to do or what to say to Muskaan to make her feel better *
* Riddima makes Muskaan sit on the bemch....suddenly Armaan taps Muskaan on the shoulder....she looks up at Armaan.....Armaan was pointing somewhere....Muskaan looked where his finger was pointing *
* There was someone standing on the far end of the station...RAHUL !!! *
Tht it guys ! how was it ???? sorry 4 the delay in updating.....I was busy !!!
P.s - plz excuse me 4 any spelling mistakes....I was in a hurry !
@p00rv@
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey it was awesome.......really very good.......i was shocked when i read she lost rahul forever...then wen i read d next i got relief.....finallly they come together......it was just mindblowing apoorva...hey cont soon....n dont 4get 2 pm me..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy....that was awesome!!! i can't wait till the next part!! such cliffhangers!! lol.....plz continue soon and pm me :))
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Posted: 16 years ago
AMAZING!!!...............loved it..............our Armaan will always come to save the day!!......that was a very nice part...............thank god Rahul didnt leave.......pls continue soon...........cant wait to read wat happens next!.......thank u very much for the pm...............n if u dont mind can u pls pm me?
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow wow wow.....gr8 update.....
lovely....thank u soo much 4 da pm...
continue soooooooonnnnn...
take care

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