Kasauti - Part 5 - Pg 8 - 10-11-08

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Kasamm

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Prachi_Shah
fabulous...........

Prachi

Thanks... and I hope you like the next part even though it might be boring or out-dated...

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Kasamm

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: shweta_shreya
well please bring rajeev and ammna otherwise it was good

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Kasamm

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
👏toooo goooooodddddddddddddd.....

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Kasamm

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: halley
superb!the title song was enjoyable!

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Kasamm

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Radha...Shyaam
Indeed.... its great!

Please continue soon....

Sneha

Thanks Sneha... and I hope you like the next part...

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Kasamm

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sweetdreams4040
Hey thanks a gr8 update.. Kinjal you were superb'😊 Totally luved it'. I was shocked tht Yuvi n Aditi are married.. I thought he was always for Vidya.. But never mind they will get together since Additi luved Sagar and I think she still does.. And Vidya she has failed as a daughter, sister n many more relationships so uska aur Yuvi ka pehle jaroor kuch tha aisa mujhe lagta hai. And please also give info abt Sagar n Karan.. Overall a gr8 beginning.. Please update soon. Cant wait to read the next part'😊

Maybe... maybe not! Who knows if Vidya had a relationship with him or Yuvi is going to leave Additi his wife... Only god knows 😉 what is going to happen 😆... Also don't worry your question as been answered about Sagar and Karan...

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Kasamm

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Before I post today's chapter I would like to introduces Sagar, Karan and one more person...

Karan Sharma
Age26

Karan is Kaajal, Tanya, Vidya and Additi's cousin brother who was accursed of being "desh throdi" a traitor. Vidya is closer to him than anyone and depended on him a-lot even he depended on her. Anyways after his death his entire family lives in shame including the girls and their mother along with their step-father.

Sagar Pratap Singh
Age 23

Sagar is Additi's love interest who left her on their wedding day and now Additi is married to Captain Yuvraz Randhawa when he was accursed of being a traitor and Karan's partner in crime. And he knows that Additi has faith in him… but he doesn't have faith in himself anymore after loosing his family and seeing his own sister get rapped in-front of him.

Neev Shergil
Age 22

Neev is Additi's best friend after Sagar and they both are closer to each other like two lives but one body… Sometimes everyone thought that he and Additi were made for each other, but destiny had his own plans. And he is so happy for Additi who moved on in her life after Sagar left her on their wedding day… Also Captain Abhimanyu's friend in KMA and considers him as his brother…

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Chapter One
Part One

"Just tell me, Raj. Tell me how I can help you and I will," Yuvi begs him, "If I can do anything for my friend and his wife than I'll be greatful?"

Raj is silent for a moment, and when he answers it is something that Yuvi could never have expected to be asked by his friend.

"If you really mean it, Yuvi, then marry my sister-in-law Additi."

For the first time, Additi looks up, staring at her Juju in shocked expression. Yuvi is struck by how beautiful her eyes are, and he quickly looks away. "Juju…" Additi begins to protest, only to be shushed by her sister Tanya.

"Dude, how could I do that?" Yuvi asks him, "I'm not… I mean, you can find somebody better than me for your sister-in-law."

"Look, Man, in the past we have tried many times to get her married, but what happened after that day... nobody is willing to marry her. After what Sagar did to her..."

"But Raj, how can I?"

"Yuvi my friend I won't force you into doing something against your will, but I thought as a friend you won't turn me down but I understand your problems too"

With these words, Captain Yuvraz Randhawa realizes that he can't refuse. Glancing across at Additi, he finds her face completely blank of any emotion as she stares at her Juju than her sister.

"Dude, I can't refuse your request." Yuvi tells him quietly, "I'll do as you say. But at least once, Additi should agree to this."

Raj looked at Tanya and Tanya knew what she had to do...

Tanya takes Additi with her...

"Before you leave with her Bhabhi, please don't forces her into doing something she doesn't like..."

Tanya just gave him a nod...

Yuvraz sat down with Raj and feels a-little weird sitting with him because he never thought that his fiend would ask him to do something like this...

After awhile Tanya returned, but her sister wasn't with her.

"Additi has agreed." She told her husband, who nodded, a slight smile on his face.

"Raj, when would you like to hold the wedding?" Yuvi had asked him, "I'm only on leave until tomorrow morning, then I have to report to my duty again."

"Than we will keep the wedding tonight." Raj told him, "If its alright with you?"

Yuvi nods his head while Additi stared at him through the window from her room...

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Raj was helping his friend get dress and Tanya was helping Additi get dress.

Additi was wearing a fine white sari with red design on it... and Yuvi was wearing a nice white sherwani with blue design on it...

Tanya placed a tiny black dot behind her ear and told her "Gudiya, I know that you must be upset with me and your Juju but you know that whatever your Juju is doing. He is doing for your safety so you don't have marry that old man Mr. Bajaj have chose for you."

"I know Didi, whatever Juju is doing... he is doing for me and my better future and I have full faith on him"

Tanya smiled at her sister than hugged her... even Raj was shattered to see his Gudiya dressed as a dulhaan. He walks over to her and gives her a tiny peck on her forehead... afterwards he takes her out toward the car.

Yuvi drove his jeep and Raj drove his car with Tanya and Additi...

When they reached the temple they completed the ceremonies quickly, garlanding each other and then sitting through the mantras, completing the pheres and other rituals. Additi's Juju and sister had tears in their eyes as they watched, and Tanya could sense that her mother is proud of her and Raj. Even if her real father was alive than he would have been proud of them for making a good decision for Gudiya.

During the ceremony, Yuvi only caught Additi looking at him once, but as soon as she knew he had noticed, she looked away again. She seemed determined not to meet his eyes and he wondered why it was. Did she hate him, was she scared of him, or was she just shy?

After the ceremony they swapped rings which Additi's sister had bought the day before, and Yuvi was amazed by how small and delicate Additi's hands were when he held one in his, slipping the ring onto his finger. Afterwards they had gone to the registry office, where they had both signed the necessary papers, and then they all handed back home. Additi had disappeared to the kitchen, Raj wondered whether she was using the excuse of making tea to avoid his friend or something.

In the kitchen Additi cried to herself... while making the tea. Tanya who had notice got upset but she knew Additi needs time to forget what happened between her and Sagar but also she has faith in her... after-all she is Anurag's daughter. (only Tanya knows that Anurag Basu is their real father not Mr. Bajaj... sometimes she wanted to tell Additi but she was scared in how she will react so she never told her).

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"I would like Gudiya to stay with us until the end of this month" Raj told his friend - even Yuvi agreed with him...

"But, I don't agree?"

Everyone turns around and look at Additi who was carrying a tray with tea on it and aslo few snacks...

"Why? Gudiya"

"Because Juju, I don't want Mr. Bajaj to harm you guys after he finds out about this marriage so I will stay somewhere else and don't worry where I will stay... its closer to my college and plus no one will think that I'll be there..."

Tanya agreed with Additi but Raj didn't...

"Please Juju have faith in me and don't worry i'll be safe and sound and if there is any problem i'll give you guys a ring"

"Alright but promise me that you will give me a call twice a day"

"Yes Juju"

Raj hugged her and told Yuvi "to make sure that you drop Gudiya and give me a ring"

"Don't worry Raj" he told him while hugging him, "and have faith in me"

"I do" Raj told him

And now here is a sad moment that takes place in everyone's' life... mostly for girls and that is their bidaai...

Additi cried a-lot in her sister's arm and told her "please sis, take care of Mom and yourself... even you Juju"

Runs into her Juju's arm and cries a-lot... afterwards Raj drops her into the jeep... and Yuvi drove away.

It was a dead silent drive but on the way... Additi asked him to stop the car...

"Is everything alright Additi"

Before Additi could answer back she starts throwing up...

"Are you okay?"

Additi nods her head

"Are you sue?"

"Yes"

"Than why where you throwing up? Is there something you are hiding from me?"

Additi again nods her head and they begin to drive back...

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"I hope Gudiya will understand your friend and he will understand Gudiya?"

"Have faith in me... Tanya"

"I do" Tanya keeps her head on his shoulder

Yuvi drops Additi at the places where she was staying and before he leaves... she holds his arm "I want to tell you something?"

"Additi, I don't have that much time but I can spare few minutes for you"

"Thanks... and I assure you that I won't disappoint you"

"I have faith on you"

Additi takes him inside and offers him tea... He takes the tea from her than asked her "what did you want to tell me?"

Additi gave him a picture...

"Who is he?"

"He is Sagar... my first love who ditched me on our wedding day"

"Than, why are you giving me his picture?"

"You must be thinking why I am telling you all this... now but I want you to look for him cause I have faith that there must have been a reason why he didn't show up that day"

"If you have faith than i'll look for him and don't worry I won't let anyone know"

"Thanks"

He nods his head than leaves from there... Additi waved back with a smile... even he waved back.

And now after four years his wife is standing in-front of him....

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I hope you guys... liked this part and I'm sorry if its boring or out-dated...

Apnki Pyari
Kinjal

Edited by Kasamm - 17 years ago

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fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

WOW!!!!!!TOOOOO GOOD..............NICE CHARACHTERS INTRODUCED
DIS WILL MAKE IT MORE INTERESTING!!

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SamLuvsSaRun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

Hey wow!!! Gr8 UD... 😊No dear Kinjal it wasn't outdated at all. I totally enjoyed it...... Thnks for tht info on Sagar n Karan n very nice now Neev is also in.... Will be waiting for the next part...😊

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Prachi Shah

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Posted: 17 years ago

#20

Well done Kinjal 👏

No sweetly, it wasn't outdated or boring at all. I totally loved it and enjoyed it... Also I love the intro you gave on Sagar and Karan... and my favorite of all Neev...

I will be waiting for the next part...

Apnki

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