Bandhan Pyar Ka(AR).....Part 4 uptd in pg 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Here is my part for today........
PART 1
Ammy: Wo???w o??stop it?.mein aap se nahi?meri gaadi se baat kar raha hoon..

Ridzy: Wat??????? Gaadi se?.mein yahan giri hoon?muje chot lagi hai aur tume gaadi ki padi hai??

Ammy: Hey?tum job hi?mein tumari jasi ladkiyon se moo nahi lagtha?dekha meri sweety kitni gayal huvi hai bechari?..fir ouf tak nahi kar rahi aur tum ho?zara si karshon ke liye?..itna chilla rahi ho?..

But ridhima was bleeding badly?she could hardly move her left leg??.By then Anji came in car and stopped to see her little sister?she came running?

Anji: Kya huva ridzy??????????

Ridzy: Bohot dard ho raha di?????

Anji: u r bleeding?.chalo?ise abhi dressing karthe hai?.

Anji is not able to balance ridzi alone so turns towards Armaan?

Anji: Hey handsome can u help take my sis inside ???..

Ammy: Ya sure miss?..

Anji: Anjali??Dr Anjali gupta?

Ammy: Myself?Mallik?Armaan Mallik??Dr Armaan Mallik

They both hold ridz?.by then Anji gets a call

Anji: Hello Papa?.hum pahoonch gaye lekin ridz ko cho aayi hai hum use andar la rahe hai?aap kisi doctor ko jaldi bejiye?..

Ridz is brought to the dressing room??they 3 wait for 2 min by then Dr Keerthi enters?.and see ridz status she starts shouting??

Keerthi: aapko first aid ke bare me tho patha hoga to aap dono ne abhi tak khoon bandh karne ke liye kuch kiya kyon nahi?..

Ammy and anji didn't know wat to say??.but anji somehow spoke?

Anji: Who papa ne kaha tha ki wo kisi doctor ko jaldi bejenge??aur?..

Keerthi: Muje?.saboob dene wale pasan nahi?

She starts treating Ridz???.Once she is done??

Keerthi: Ridhima aap aaram keejiye?..mein thidi der mein aathi hoon.

Ridzy: Teek hai doctor?.

Keerthi: Aap dono muje nurse station pe miliye in 5 min

Anji: Ridzy don't worry sab teek hoga?..She hugs her?.

Both leaves the room ?.

Ammy: Meine apni file wahi chod di? tum chlo mein aatha hoon?.He goes back to the room were ridz was?.Agar meri sweety kal tak teek nahi huvi na??????? tumara doosra taang bhi tod daloonga mein?.mechanic se baat hone do meri??He takes the file ?

Ridz: Kya?..tum..na?bikul pagal ho?

Ammy: Haan to?tume koi problem hai?..pehle apni tang pe kade hojao phir baath karma?langdi?

Ridzy: hey?..tum samajthe kya ho apne aap ko?.she takes kidney boul and throws at him?.

By then goes out and shut the door and makes faces at her from a small glass opening?..

I know its small but.....I was little busy sorry......So will try to update this 2 day once......

Plz do comment guys.......

Edited by Miss Wow - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys.....................no replies??????????????????😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I feel no one is interested in this or it not the happening one so i am stoping this........let me know if anyone still wants me to continue.......I would love to........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waoh👍🏼 its really a superb one⭐️ armaan is too much😉 dusre bhi toadh dunga omg😆😆😊 plz continue it soon😊😉

"pahonch hai humari chand tak,
ye taare bhi salam kiya karte hai ,
ye aasma bhi jhuk jata hai….
jab hum aapko yaad kiya karte hain."


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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice update but short pls try to make it longer
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its funny!!!!!!!!

Ammy behaved in a weird way!!!!!!
n rest all is soooooooooooo funny!!!!!!!!

waiting 4 next Part!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello…😊…… thanks for replying……Here is my next part…….

PART 2

Nurse Station………

Atul, Rahul and Muskaan are already there……. Ammy and Anji enter……Atul is just falling for Anji at first sight….

Atul: Hi mein atul …. Atul Joshi aapka naam???????????

Anji: Anjali gupta…….

Keerthi comes in ….

Kee: Interns….

All: Yes mam……

Kee: Aap logon ka aaj pehla din hai aur mein chahthi hoon ki aap log is poore internship ko pair banke katham kare……yani ek ladka aur ek ladki…….

Atu: Muje is anjali ke saat pair kare tho accha hoga…. (to himself)

Kee: Atul aap ne kuch bola….

Atu: Nahi mam………..

Kee: tho I have already made the list……here it goes……Muskaan aap Atul ke saat rahengi…..Anjali aap Rahul ke saat aur Armaan aap Ridhima ke saath….

Arm: What……???????? Ridhima???? Yani wo ladki jiski abhi tang tooti huvu hai??

Kee: Haan koi problem hai….?? (In a demanding tone)

Arm: Nah imam problem kaise ho Sakthi hai…

Kee: that's better….. So aaj aap apne parteners ke bare me jaan jaye gul mil jaye is liye…..koi duties nahi hongi …you may all leave now ……..hospitals ke formalities ke baad aap sab ek doose ko jaan jayiye…yeh mouka dubaara nahi milega….aur Armaan aap…kyonki aapki partner injured hai us case ko aap hi handle karenge……

Arm: Jee mam……

Keerthi leaves……..

Atu: Rahul tumhe apni parner change karni hai kya??????/

Rah: Nahi kyon….

Aty: Kyonki…….kuch nahi mein aise hi pooch raha tha….. (making a innocent face…)

Arm: Muje us nak chadi ka ilaj karma padega????? Bagwaan kaise jeelunga mein is eek saal tak…. Chalo teek hai guys muje apni partner ke paas jaani hai…..meet u during lunch time….bye…

All: Bye….cu…

Atul leaves with Muskaan and Anjali with Rahul………

Hey guys in this FF I will concentrate more on AR so there wil be very less of other characters hope you don't mind…… I know its short update but as I am getting very less response I am going in a slow pace…… Please do reply…………waiting for the feedbacks……

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey I absolutely luv your ff it's awesome
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heheheh dnt mind we surely no mind yaar we wnt mre arridz scenes wow nw armaan hv 2 tackle her fr 1yr wow cnt wait yaar cont soooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
oh ho!
Armaan has 2 handle her 4 a year now!!

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