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Posted: 14 years ago

#1121

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

As usual wonderful part?👏👏👏 . thanqqqq

still at same thread no problem ?hume update se matlab hai thread koi bhi ho?coming to part it was lovely 👏👏👏 ? do hi uds bache hai yaar...isiliye naya thread start nahi kiya...

& see I was right Raj ko bhi laga ki itne shock ke baad he will have by paas? loved Raj's smarty punishment?😛😛😛 u fast forwarded engagement ..good?😃😃😃 aur nahi toh kya...!!! engagement honi hai toh ho gayi...vaise bhi shadi honi hai toh ho jayegi...ab is me likhna kya tha...

Shalini-naina scene was nice..& rajveer's magic was working ?yeh baat alag hai ..use shalini ko dhikhane ka mauka nahi mila?😆😆😆 haan...kyoun ke magic dikhane se pahle naina achhi ladki ki tarah jo raj ki baat man rahi thi...

Alekh ko acha fasaya hai rajveer ne..he is too smart? & I didn't knew MBA se yeh fayda bhi hota hai ..we become so smart?😆😆😆😆 ab dekho na raj kitne kitne kaam karr raha hai...aur sab me use hi faida ho raha hai...

KKji rajveer always upto each other ek dusre ko tung karne ka mauka nahi chodte😆😆😆 kaise chodenge...baap-bete jo hain...

RN secret meeting pipeman?🤣. He is too good?👏👏👏👏 koi shaq...dear...

In end u left at cucial point what is naina upto?😛😛😛 shadi wale din rajveer ko kahan lekar ja rahi hai?I am as confused as raj?😕😕😕 batati hun na next part me...

Hum dono ki confusion jaldi door karo ?& continue soon.. & yes other ffs too ankahi, tere naina? I guess I even 4got what point u left them?shayad ek FF aur tha ? naam yaad nahi aa raha😕😕😕 ?shayad zindagi teri meri kahani?😕😕😕😕 I am not sure ..will check & let u know? 😆😆😆😆😆 Tn ko toh abhi thoda late hai...par ANKAHI ko ud kiya hai aur tum ne RES ka board bhi lagaya hai...!!! n haan😆...meri ek ur bhi fic hai jis ka naam Zindagi teri meri kahani hi hai...par abhi hum dono ke bich separation chal raha hai...!!! agar hum donno (means main n my fic) ek sath phir se chalne ko agree ho gaye toh start karungi...

As 4 this continue asap 😃😃😃

Thanxxxxxxxxx Puri...😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1122

Originally posted by: oliveya
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OMGGGGGG
awesome.......i loved ....the whole story .......

Thanxxxxxxx Dear...😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1123

Originally posted by: lallulal2010
update soon...........a very funny fic...................... yupe...thoda sa funny hai...
pehle mujhe laga kuch boring types hai.......fir padha to pata chala ki i was being so foolish!!

agar nahi padhati to hasne ka mouka kho deti. thanqqqq so much dear...tumhe is fic ne hassya

keep up the gud work....

Thanxxxxxxxx Vidushi...😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1124

Originally posted by: lallulal2010
ye hospital ka kya chakkar hai???

batati hun na next part me...😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1125

Originally posted by: oliveya
awesome ...ooomg i loved ...plz continue ...soon.....

Thanxxxxxxxx Dear...😃

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1126

Originally posted by: varshita
Both updates were awesome, Thanqqqqq😃
Raj ne kya solid logic diya hai M.B.A padhne ka fayda. ha ha ha...
But in your note you didn't mention ZTMK?
I miss that too, please try to update that too .kuch prob hai yaar ZTMK ko le kar...maine ek note post bhi kiya hai ZTMK me...!!! ho sake toh padh lena...😊
But Naina hospital kyoun jaa rahi hai Raj k saath? hmmm...next part me batati hun na...😃

Thanxxxxxxxx varsha...😃

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#1127

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
What should i say about this episode when u gave a note at last in which u didn't mention the name of one of my fav Fic ZTMK, u have stopped updating that but it's my humble request to u to pls start updating that fic for us, aage tumhari marzi. sorry yaar...par main try karungi ki use bhi aage cont karun...😊

Coming to the update, nice one. Raj gave a nice punishment to Naina. Really different from usual Raj. She expected kiss but he gave the punishment nicely. ab raj hai toh hamesha kuch alag sa hi karga na...

Now why is she so much irritated, and why is she denying to have juice? She should know that Raj loves her more than anything and he will never do anything which will point at her dignity in office. use bass darr hai thoda sa...aur kuch nahi...

But good tactics he used to make Naina have that glass of juice and at this point he can use her promise to respond. Lo ab to mam car me bhi naraj hain? bhav kha rahi hai...

But he knows very well how he can make the mood of his darling normal and he did that. But before entering in office he took his kiss from her. ab shaitani thode hi na us ke dimag se bahar jayegi...

She is missing Nandini now, it's obvious any girl would do that. And specially when her own dear sis died because of love. But Raj came there to support Naina and yes Naina is right he will never let her cry for any reason. ab raj jo us ke paas hai...toh phir voh kyoun roye...

Only a few days left and still K.K. jee is not leaving his son and so as he and as usual Sudha jee is laughing at Raj's comment over his dad, aakhir hai to un ka hi beta na? ab k.k jee use itna pareshan karte hain ke raj kare toh kya...

Alekh was worried about Raj's reaction but when he met Raj and he explained that how he made theen nishaanas in one arrow he was so surprised to react but i love this profit of doing M.B.A.. ha ha ha... ab voh alekh ko jhatka de raha tha...

But i am confused about end, where Naina has bought him with her?
And why hospital, is anyone admit there? batati hun na next ud me...

Try to consider my request pls, aage it's your wish. maine kaha na yaar...main try jarur karungi...ab plz tu naraz mat ho...

Thanxxxxxxxxxx Vertika...😃

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Today's episode dedicated to......Vidushi(lallulal2010) 😃

Episode:-36

Hospital me pahunchne ke baad...Naina reception par gayi kuch pucha aur Rajveer ke paas wapis aayi aur kaha:- "chalo...

Rajveer:- "lekin Naina yahn hum kar kya rahe hain...

Naina ruki...turn kiya Rajveer ki taraf aur kaha:- "meri best frnd...Pooja...yahan par hai...

Rajveer:- "kya hua hai use...

Naina:- "pahle chalo...phir main batati hun ke kya hua tha...

thoda aage chalne ke baad Naina kisi ko dekh kar ruki...voh Pooja ke parents the...aur Alekh bhi vohin kahda tha...

Naina ko dekh kar Pooja ki maa khud ko sambhal nahi payi un ke muh se bas itna nikla:- "Naina...voh...Pooja...

Naina:- "kuch nahi hoga aunty...Pooja ko kuch nahi hoga...!!! main ander ja kar us se mil lun...???"

Pooja's father:- "haan...jayo beta...

Maina ne Rajveer ki taraf ishara kar ke kaha:- "aunty yeh Rajveer hain...mere fiance...

Rajveer ne un ka ashrivaad liya...

Naina ander gayi...sath me Rajveer aur Alekh bhi the...!!! Pooja roof ki taraf dekh rahi thi...kisi ke aane ki aahat se us ne door ki taraf dekha...toh samne Naina aur Rajveer aur Alekh ko paya...

Alekh ne dhire se Rajveer ko kaha:- "mujhe dar hai Veer...pata nahi Naina kya karnewali hai...kyoun ki Nandini di ki bhi maut aise hi hui thi...aur Naina....

Naina...shant si aayi...baithi Pooja ke paas...!!! Pooja ke ankhon me anshun aaye us ne kuch kahna chaha...par Naina ne rok liya...

us ne kaha:- yun...hath ki nash kaat kar tu jaan dena chahti thi...tu sleeping pills try kyoun nahi karti...

Rajveer shocked khada tha...

Naina:-"use kha letI...puri ki puri bottle...tu shanti se mar jati...aur vaise bhi tu toh ek lauti aulad hain na...toh tere piche piche uncle aunty ki bhi maut ho jayegi...!!! ek sath sab khatam ho jata...na tere liye koi rone ko rahega...aur na hi uncle aunty ke liye...!!! kyoun...tu yehi chahti hai na...

pooja ne apni kaampti awaz me kaha:-"Naina...tu meri baat toh sun le...

Naina:- "ab bhi tujhe kuch kahna hai...

Pooja:- "haan...

Naina:- "tu yehi kahna chahti hai na...ke tu Rohit se kitna pyar karti thi...n us ne tujh se shadi ke liye inkaar kar diya...aur tu kisi aur se shaadi nahi karna chahti thi...aur isiliye tune yeh sab kiya...

Pooja:- "Naina....tu janti hai ke main Rohit se kitna pyar karti hun...!!! par pahle us ne mujhe ignore karne ki koshish ki...phir shaadi ka date badalta raha...ab kah raha hai ke voh mujh se shaadi nahi kar sakta...

Naina:-"Pooja meri ek baat ko dhyaan se sun...har baar hum jis se pyar karte hain na...voh sahi inshaan hoga is baat ka koi gurrenty nahi hota...!!! kabhi kabhi voh inshan galat bhi hota hai...aur zindagi bhar ke liye taklif de jata hai...!!! Rohit bhi vaisa hi hai... us ne kabhi bhi tujh se pyar nahi kiya...us ne hamesha uncle ke property par nazar thi...voh sirf tujhe ishtemal karta raha...ter sath tym pass karta raha...!!!"

Pooja:-"janti hun...aur usi galat inshan se pyar karne ke liye khud ko saza dena chahti thi main...!!!"

Naina:- "khud ko...ya uncle-aunty ko...!!! tujhe lagta hai ke jo tune kiya us ke baad uncle aunty jee pate...tere bina...!!!"

Pooja:-"par taklif toh hoti hai na...Naina...

Naina:-"nahi honi chahiye...bal ke apne is galati ke liye khud par gussa hona chahiye...aur khud se yeh vaada karna chahiye ke us jaise inshan ko tu kabhi maaf nahi karegi...!!!

Pooja:-"sorry yaar...

Naina:- "sorry uncle aunty ko ja kar bol...kyoun ke sab se jyada hurt tune unhe kiya hai...!!! samjha kar Pooja...pyar jeena sikhati hai...marna nahi...!!! aur teri wajah se...meri shadi ke ek din pahle main yahan par hun...hospital me...

Pooja:- "sorry na yaar...ab kya taang todegi mera...!!!"

Naina:- "nahi par punishment milegi...tujhe aaj hi thik hona hai...kal meri shadi hai yaar...!!! meri hi best frnd nahi rahegi... toh mujhe achha lagega kya...

Alekh ne dhire se Rajveer ko kaha:- "thanx Veer...

Rajveer:- "kyoun...maine kya kiya...!!! maine sach me Pooja ko nahi kaha tha suiside karne ke liye...main toh use janta bhi nahi hun...aaj hi pehlibaar dekha hai...aur voh is halat me...

Alekh:- "Nandini di ke maut ke baad Naina ko maine kabhi is tarah se nahi dekha tha...!!! teri hi wajah se voh badli...

Rajveer:-"maine use badla nahi hai...!!! maine hamesha jis Naina se pyar kiya tha...yeh vohi hai...bas...ise yeh pata chal gaya ke pyar jeena sikhati hai...marna nahi...

Rajveer aage aaya...Pooja ki taraf hath badhate hue kaha:-"hii...

Pooja ne hath mila kar thoda hairani se use dekha toh Rajveer ne kaha:- "hairan kyoun ho rahi ho...main voh bakra hun...jise tumhari dost kal halal karnewali hai...!!!"

Naina thodi si hasste hue kaha:- "Raj plz stop it...!!! kam se kam Pooja ke samne toh serious raho...

Rajveer:- "kyoun...yeh koun si meri frnd hai jo main is ke samne serious rahun...

Pooja kuch samajh nahi payi toh Rajveer ne kaha:-"meri dost kabhi aisa kaam nahi karti...bal ke dushron ko ulti duniya dikhati hai...!!! aur mujh se dosti karne ke liye...meri tarah bann na padega...

Pooja ne mushkurakar kaha:-"main bann ne ke liye taiyar hun...!!! jis ne meri frnd ko badal diya voh inshaan toh khaash hoga hi na...

Rajveer:- "of course khaash hun...!!! aur tumhe is khaash dost ki shadi me aane ke liye jaldi se thik bhi hona hai...!!!"

Pooja ne mushkura kar kaha:-"main kal jarur aayungi...n Naina... thanx...main vaada karti hun...aage se aisa kuch nahi karungi...

Naina:- "ab main chalti hun...kisi ko pata chal gaya ke main shadi ke ek din pahle yahan vahan ghum rahi hun toh meri khair nahi...!!! main chalti hun...aur tu kal aayegi na...

Pooja:-"pakka vaada...aayungi...!!!"

Naina ne halke se us ke fore head ko kiss kiya aur kaha:-"chal main chalti hun...kal milte hain...

Alekh...Naina ko sath le kar chala gaya...kuch socha aur wapas aa kar kaha Rajveer se:-"phir se ek baar thanx...!!! Naina ko jeena sikhane ke liye...

Rajveer hassa phir mahual ko thoda halka karne ke liye kaha:-"mujhe agar pahle se pata hota ki teri behn itni boring item hai toh main us se kabhi pyar karta nahi...par ek baar pair fishal gaya toh fishal gaya na...toh maine socha ki kyoun na Naina ko apne type ka bana dun...!!! tu bata ...tujhe teri yeh behn toh pasand hai na...

Alekh:-"pasand hai matlab...baht pasand hai...!!! isiliye is ke sath kuch aur tym spend karna chata hun...aur sirf isiliye teri aur Naina ki shadi 2 mahine ke liye postpond karane ki soch raha hun...!!! aur agar maine abhi yehi baat Naina se ja kar kahi ke... Veer kah raha hai ke tu boring hai...toh voh 4 mahine ke liye postpond kar degi...nahi...!!!"

yeh kah kar alekh chala gaya...!!! Raj ne toh khud ko bhav dene ke liye kaha tha...par Alekh ki baat sun kar voh thoda shocked hua...piche bhaga us ke..."abe Alekh...sun...meri baat...

Alekh bhaag gaya...

(shadi ke scenes likh kar main aap sab ko aur jyada bore nahi karne wali hun...!!! vaise bhi aap sab kafi bore ho chuke hain... aur thoda sa main aur karnewali hun...😆)

reception par Naina kafi khubshurat lag rahi thi...!!! par Rajveer ko us se baat karne ka mauka hi nahi mil raha tha...!!! kafi sare guests un ko gher ke khade the...

shadi ke baad se voh Naina se ek pal ke liye bhi thik se mil nahi paya...!!! use kuch yaad aaya...jo shaadi ke turant baad hua tha...

flashback...

shaadi me Pooja aayi thi...apne parents ke sath...aur Harshad bhi sath tha...jis se us ke parents us ki shadi karwana chahte the...!!! sab kuch jan kar bhi voh hamesha ki tarah is baar bhi Pooja ke sath hi khada tha...!!! Pooja ne Naina ke kanon me Harshad ko dikha kar sirf itna kaha ke...'sayad ise pyar kahte hai jo Harshad mujh se karta hai...!!! main ab ise nahi khyungi... mushkil hai...par waqt sab kuch badal dega...sayad thoda samay lage...lekin mujhe yakeen hai...mera kal tere aaj ki tarah hi khubshurat hoga...'

Pooja jaldi hi chali gayi thi...kyoun ke us ki tabiyat thik nahi thi...!!! shadi ke baad bidai ka tym aaya...

as usall Rajveer kafi xcited tha...!!! itna khush ki shadi me jab use sindur lagana pada ya phir mangal sutra pehnana tha ya phir phere lene the...tab bhi nahi hua tha...!!!

ab jyada khush isiliye hai kyoun ke finally ab se Naina un ke ghar hamesha ke liye sift ho rahi hai...ab use roz subah apne lucky charm ko dekhne ke liye...subah subah balcony me bhaagna nahi padega...kyoun k roz subah us ka lucky charm use us ke bahon me hogi...

bidai me Naina ke gharwale ro rahe the...Rajveer ke gharwale unhe samjhane ki koshish karr rahe the...!!! Rajveer badi si mushkurahat liye...kabhi us ki family ko toh kabhi Naina ki family ko dekh raha tha...

Alekh us ke kareeb aaya aur kaha:-"kuch toh sharam kar...!!! hum sab ro rahe hain aur tu hass raha hai...

Rajveer:-"Naina ke jane ka ghum tum sab ko hai...mujhe use ke jane ka ghum kyoun hoga...mujhe toh khushi hai...ke kam se kam Naina se milne ke liye ab tere ghar ke pipe par chadhna toh nahi padega...

Alekh hairani se use dekh raha tha...in fact aaj use ek aur sachhai jo pata chali thi...

khair Naina...sab ko hug karte hue rote rote aa rahi thi...lambi si ghunghat dal rakhi thi us ne...!!! Alekh ke kareeb aayi...use aur jyada rona aaya...voh rone lagi...zor se...!!! voh us ka twin bro bhi tha aur achha dost bhi...

voh bhi use thame rakha tha...jab Naina ko sab ke hassne ki awaz aayi...toh voh kuch samajh nahi payi...aur thoda ghughat upar uthaya toh dekha...toh voh jise Alekh samajh rahi thi voh Alekh nahi Rajveer tha...

Rajveer...Naina ka rona dekh dekh kar irritate ho gaya tha... jab Naina...Alekh ke kareeb aayi...toh us ne halke se Alekh ko vahan se hata kar khud khada ho gaya tha...!!! aur Naina ko laga ke voh Alekh hai...ghunghat ki wajah se voh jan hi nahi payi thi...

Rajveer:-"ab plz...rona bandh kijiye na...!!! aap toh aise ro rahe hain jaise main Naina ko le kar chaand par ja raha hun...!!! 15 min ki duri par hi toh hamara ghar hai...!!! aur phir aap sab Naina ke liye ro kyoun rahe hain...!!! main Naina se jhagda nahi karunga... kyoun karun...??? itne paas jo hai mera sasural... Naina roz subah sham dhamki deti rahegi mujhe...!!! aur phir saala police me hai...matlab Alekh...kabhi bhi dowry case me mujhe ander kar sakta hai...!!! main sach kahta hun...Naina ko hamesha DAD ke sar par bitha kar rakhuga...

sabhi ne use hairani se dekha...

Rajveer:-"actually hamare ghar me ...sab se jyada safe... majbut...aur tikau jagah vohi hai...

vohin par rone ka session khatam ho gaya...aur hassne ka session suru ho gaya...!!! Naina bhi rona bandh kar ke sharmane lagi thi...aur yeh obvious tha...

Naina ke ghar se Rajveer ka ghar jyada dur nahi tha...!!! ek hi socity me jo rahte the...!!! car me pahle Raj ja kar baitha...aur us ke kareeb Naina baithi...!!! Rajveer mushkura kar Naina ko kuch kahnewala tha ke...dekha ander k.k jee baithe hue the... driving seat par...aur use ghur rahe the...!!! unhe abhi tak Rajveer ki ki hui mazak ka gussa tha...

ghar aaye...aur aarti aur baki ka kaam khatam hua toh Naina ko Rajveer ke room me le jaya gaya...aur Rajveer ko guest room me...

Rajveer:- "mom....yeh kya hai...main apne room me kyoun nahi ja sakta...

Sudha jee:-"kyoun ke vahan Naina hai...

Rajveer:-"aur jahan tak mujhe pata hai Naina meri biwi hai... ryt...

Sudha jee:-"haan...par abhi tujhe yehin rahna padega... reception ke khatam hone tak...!!! aur usi ke baad tu Naina se mil sakta hai...tab tak yehin rah...aur jo kuch bhi chahiye kisi se mangwa lena...ya phir mujhe bol de...main le aati hun...

Rajveer ne thoda muh fula kar kaha:-"thik hai...mere room se meri biwi ko yahan le aayo...

Flashback over...

reception par log aa rahe the...mushkura rahe the...flowers de rahe the...gifts de rahe the...!!! Rajveer aur Naina ke sath photo khinchwa rahe the...!!!

par Rajveer ko in sab se kya...voh toh Naina ke sath tym spend karna chata tha...sirf Naina ke sath...!!! us se use dher sari batain karni thi...baht kuch sunn na tha...baht kuch batana tha...!!! yeh ehsaas karna tha ke Naina sirf us ki hai...aur use ab koi bhi us se alag nahi kar sakta...

raat badhti ja rahi thi...!!!dhire dhire sare guests jane lage the...aur akhiri me...Naina ke gharwale bhi janewale the...tabhi Rajveer bola sab ke samne...

Rajveer:-"Ankur...tu Shekhar se mila...

Ankur:-"koun Shekhar...???"

Rajveer:-"vohi Shekhar Kashyap...jise abhi abhi I.A.S mila hai...!!! voh Nupur se kafi impress lag raha tha...!!! mujhe se baton hi baton me us ke bare me bhi puch raha tha...

Nupur aur Alekh use ghure ja rahe the...!!! Rajveer ne un ki taraf bina dekhe...kahe ja raha tha:-"ladka achha hai...tu kahe toh main us se baat karun...

in fact Ankur bhi kuch kahna chah raha tha...par kah nahi pa raha tha...in fact Rajveer use bolne ka mauka hi nahi de raha tha...

k.k jee:-"agar itna hi achha ladka hai toh phir main baat karunga us ke family ke sath...

Nupur turant bol padi:-"main nahi karnewali us se shadi...!!!

phir gusse se Alekh ki taraf dekh kar boli:-"ab tum kuch kahoge ya...is ke liye bhi tumhe pahle file banana padega...

sabhi ne hairani se Alekh ki taraf dekha...

Alekh ko apna gala sukha hua lag raha tha us ne kaha:-"main actually pahle hi batana chahta tha...par kabhi mauka hi nahi mil paya...!!! baat actuaaly aisi hai ke...

voh aage kuch kah nahi pa raha tha...Nupur use gusse se dekh rahi thi...

Shalini ne thoda confuse ho kar kaha:-"tu yehi kahna chata hai ke tum dono ek dushre ko pasand karte ho ryt...

Alekh ne kuch nahi kaha...bass...shalini ko ghure ja raha tha...

shalini khud confused thi...

Alekh:-"haan...voh...actually...Nupur....aur main...

Ankur ne baat sambhali aur kaha:-"bass ho gaya...!!! tum log bhi na...

us ne hasste hue k.k jee ki ore dekhte hue kaha:-"uncle aap batayiye kya karna hai...in dono ka...!!! ghar ke bade aap hi hai...toh faishla bhi aap hi kariye...

Nupur sidha...k.k jee ke paas ja kar boli:-"uncle...Alekh achha ladka hai...sachhi...!!! ek hi kami hai...hassne se jyada gussa karta hai...baki sab thik hai...aur thoda sa ajeeb bhi hai par thik hai...

k.k jee ne use side hug karte hue kaha:-"meri beti ne kah diya hai toh mujhe koi aitraz nahi hai...aap batayiye Sharma jee kya karna hai...

Naina's father:-"humain toh khushi hi hogi...Nupur agar hamare ghar aayegi toh...

thodi si der tak aur batain chalti rahi...aur Alekh aur Nupur ki shadi final ho gayi...

(mujhe nahi khinchni hai is baat ko...😆 shadi final honi thi toh ho gayi na...😆)

tabhi achanak Ankur bol pada:-"ek min...Veer...tu kis shekhar ki baat karr raha tha...??? us ki toh shaadi thi na last month...in fact us ki reception me hum dono hi toh agye the na...

sabhi Rajveer ko hairani se dekh rahe the...

sabhi guest jate hue...aur sara kaam khatm hote hue...raat ke kareeb 12:30 bajj gaye the...!!!

Naina ko us ke room me pahunch diya gaya...!!! ya phir yun kaha ja sakta hai ke un dono ke room me pahuncha diya gaya...

shadi subah khatam ho gayi...aur reception bhi usi din sham ko thi...!!! naina din bhar busy rahi...sare rashmo rivaz aur bade buzurg ke pair chute hue...

abhi voh thoda relax mehsush karr rahi thi...phir bhi thakan thi...din bhar ki bhagam bhag se voh thak gayi thi...thodi der ke liye sona chati thi...!!! par use Rajveer ka bhi intezaar tha...

ek almari ke samne voh khadi thi...!!! pata nahi kyoun us ka dil kiya us almari ko kholne ki...!!! pahle toh us ne socha ke Rajveer ko puch ke kholegi...phir dil hi dil me socha ki 'kyoun puche...yeh kamra us ka hai...is me rahnewala us ka hai...aur yahan ki har chiz us ki hai...voh sab kuch kar sakti hai yahan par...

us ne hath badhaya...almari kholne ke liye...phir pata nahi kyoun...us ne apne hath rok liye...

achanak us ne mehshush kiya ke kisi ne us ke piche se use hug karte hue dhire se kaha:-"hath kyoun rok liya...

Naina:-"tum se pucha nahi tha...

Rajveer:-"mujh se puch kar kab se har kaam karne lagi ho...??? puch kar liya tha kya mera dil...

Naina ne mushkurate hue kaha:-"puchti toh dete...???"

Rajveer:-"vahan tak baat gayi hi nahi...!!! us din jab pahli baar tumhe dekha tha toh tabhi 'love at first sight' par yakeen aa gaya tha...!!! tum puchne se pahle hi maine apna dil de diya tha...

Naina:-"sorry...baht dard diya hai na tumhe...baht ghutan...

Rajveer:-"haan...par us dard me bhi ek sukun tha...ek yakeen tah ke kal tum meri hogi...!!! dekh lo...aaj mera yakeen jeet gaya...ab tum mrs Naina Rajveer Singh ban gayi ho...

Naina ko us ka yeh naya naam achha lag raha tha...us ne turn kiya...aur apna hath aage badhte hue kaha:-"mera gift...???"

end of d epi...

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Hiiiiieeeeeee all...

kaise hain aap sab...????

main bilkul bhi thik nahi hun...main phir se bimar pad gayi...!!! vohi purani bimari...sardi wala...

okay...kuch kahna tha...aur voh yeh hai ke...maine RN ke shadi ke scenes kyoun nahi likhe...???

toh jawab yeh ke... RN Ki shadi toh honi thi na toh ho gayi...!!! kaise hui... kya farq padta hai...!!! vaise bhi maine aap se pahle kaha tha...mujhe jyada kuch pata nahi hota...shadi ke bare me...main agar kabhi kisi czn ki shadi attend karne jati hun toh...bich me hi so jati hun...!!! last main apne aunty ke shadi me gayi thi...tabhi so gayi thi...jab un ka rone ka scene chalu hua tabhi main uthi thi...!!! aur socho...voh mujhe pakad kar ro rahi thi...n main itni neend me thi ke mujhe pata hi nahi chala kuch seconds ke liye ke aunty kyoun ro rahi hai...😆

khair point ki baat yeh hai ke...ek hi ud aur bacha hai...!!! isiliye jyada aur nahi khinchungi...

love u all

bye

Priya😃

PS*...mujhe pata hai ke POOJA ko le kar kuch doubts honge aap sab ko...!!! us ki entry maine fic ke starting me ki thi...!!!

'pooja ke parents us ki shaadi Harshad naam ke ek doc se karwana chahte hain...par voh Rohit se pyar karti hai...!!! aur rohit...us ke dad ke property ke piche pada tha...!!! n pooja naina ki best frnd thi...'

kafi hai na...aap sab ke doubts clear karne ke liye...😆

Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago