Kahin pyar na ho jaye! last part pg 35 - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

tina yaar kya zaroorat ti itni zooor se chila

ne ki ab or kitna intezaar krana parega
plz plz plz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey just read your whole FF right now!
its going soo good
plzz update again soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Fantastic simply out of this world is all i can say. Cant wait for the confession
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
that was an awsome update....
brill
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
update soon
im a silent reader
but just couldnt stop my self from commenting
so please update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
Really good update!!!! Please update the rest soon!!!! I'll be waiting!!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: patel12345

update soon
im a silent reader
but just couldnt stop my self from commenting
so please update soon

Thank you sooo much for commenting reli appreciate it!😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88

Thank you soooo much for reading my FF, I really appreciate it and thanks alot to all that appreciated my work and commented:


@miss.sonia
@punjabi.princes
@matwamango
@KC294
@patel12345
@spate22

Thanks a million for the awesome comments, Will update soon!😛😳

xxMwahxx
Nadz😛😳
Edited by nadz_J - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry guys but I just had another idea in mind that?s why I stopped the confession, I want them to be more in love and then some twists and stuff. [starting to think like ekta just pulling and pulling. lol ] but hope u all like the longing, i know sumtimes it becomes a little boring but i just wanted to add some spice to it.

Continued...

They all go to the bus everyone sits down, kanya is really upset coz she was so ready to confess but now everything is ruined she has to get all that energy and guts to go up to ranbir and tell him.

Ranbir on the other side is also really angry on that stupid fool tina coz she spoilt it all for him and he cant any longer for kanya to be in his life.

R: oh god yeh stupid, idiot fool, tina ek chipkali ke liye chila ne ki kya zaroorat thi, lekin ab mujhe lagta hai mujhe hi kanya se kehna ho ga that how much I love her, because now I know she also loves me, lekin ab shayad woh confess na kar paye, I think il have to do it, par kaise, kab? I know humare play ke baad bohot acha moka hoga, ya I will propose her after the play, yes [looks at the diamond necklace and smiles].

Ranbir and kanya also go in the bus, everyone is seated so ran-kan sit together. The bus starts moving.

R; hey kanya, tum kuch kehna chahti thin a? what was it?

K: [embarrased] woh, kuch special nahin, bas play ke bare mein.

R: oh okay, aur woh dress, roses?

K: woh bhi play ke liye, the I thought jab play mein hum confession karenge to main who dress pehnoongi aur roses tum mujhe do ge,

R: oh k, good idea.

K: waise ranbir, tumne bhi to kuch haath mein pakra tha, aur who suit?

R: maine bhi humare confession ke liye hi soch rakha tha,

K: oh [disappointed] okay,

R: do weeks mein exams shuru ho rahe hain, aur phir humein play bhi karna hai, then holidays, gr8 na?

K: ya, kinda

R: kyun tumhe holidays pasand nahi?

K: pasand hai lekin mum phir se hazaron ladkon k epics leke behet jayengi, oh how I hate it when she does that.

R: oh [little upset] okay, to tum shadi kab karahi ho?

K: pehle ladka to miljaye!

R: kya tum ab bhi arrange marriage karna chahti ho? Ya irada badla hai?

K: [thinking] ummm woh actually, well agar mujhe aisa koi miljaye jisse main pyar kar sago, to I would like to do a love marriage but if mum says marry this guy I have to listen to her although I know she?ll be the happiest person to get me into a love marriage.

R: okay, to ab tak tumhe tumhara Mr. Right mila nahin?

K: Shayad, im not sure,

R; yeh kaisa jawab hai? I mean ya to milgaya ya to nahin

K: actually there is someone but Im not sure if he loves me,

R: but im sure he loves u, coz tum jaisi ladki ko kaun thokraye ga? U should tell him!

K: try kiya tha lekin, kehnahi payi, anyways college khatam hone se pehle use zaroor bata doongi,

R: okay that the spirit, but shayad usse pehle woh tumse kehde,

K: agar aisa ho ta I would be the happiest person on earth, anyways what about u, tum to hamesha se pyar ka intezaar kar rahe ho, tumhe ab tak woh nahin mili?

R: mil to gayi hai, bas ikraar baki hai, I just love her so much samajh nahin ata kaise kahoon!

K: kaun hai woh?

R: ummm? jab main use propose karoonga tumhe sabse pehle kahoonga ok!

K: okay,

They keep talking about they life, love and the play, then its night and kanya goes to sleep on ranbirs shoulder,

R; [he holds her hand and starts thinking about her and all their meeting] I have to tell you this, kanya that I love u and cannot wait to be with u, coz I LOVE UUUUUUU! And u will be mine!

K: [wakes up] leaves his hand ? are tum ne mujhe uthaya kyun nahi?

R: tum sote hue, itni masoom aur cute lag rahi thi ke mera dil hi nahi kiya tumhe uthane ka,

K: [blushing] Thanks!

R: you?re always welcome, [smiles]

K: [still blushing ]

They reach the college hostel and say bye to everyone and go to their own rooms.

Thats it guys for now just goto get some fun moments and love moments will try to update in a few days coz i got exams also and have to submit my assignments so just a lil busy but will definitely update this week, Thanks for reading and do comment, then maybe the update will be quicker lol.

Edited by nadz_J - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

great update

continue soon!

Will cont soon, thanx😉

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