Kahin pyar na ho jaye! last part pg 35 - Page 12

awesome update as usual... dont u dare close this 1 down.. its z only thing i look forward these days!!!! n plz update soooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Firtly you can't shut down the ff is brilliant

omg that was awesome

hey everyone thanx alot for commenting, i would update now but im on the road and the update is saved on my office computer. but will definitely update on monday, Because of all the people that are commenting, Thanx once again, atleast i know my TRPs are not that bad. lol😳 Please keep commenting and il keep typing the updates. xxMwahxx

Yeah, don't you dare shut down this story!!!!😡😊 I do know you work hard and I appreciate it. This is very well-written and I don't want it to end.😭 Sorry I didn't comment earlier about the last update, I wasn't finished with it. I still haven't.😵 I only know the jist of it. I wondered why Kanya got scared and ran away but this update made it more clear. I hope the misunderstanding between Rankan gets cleared up soon. I hope Kanya realizes that Ranbir does love her and didn't mean any harm.😳 I can't wait for the next update. Thanks for updating.😃

hey just caught up with ur ff n must say i love it plz write the next part soon =)

Part 14

At college.

Ranbir sees kripa and goes up to her,

R: Hey, Kripa

Kr: just looks at him angrily

R: kripa, Kanya kaha hai?

Kr: Plz ranbir, Kanya ko akela chod do, usse na tumse milna hai nahi tumse koi baat karni hai, okay, so please just leave her alone!

R: kripa, plz I need to meet kanya, plz

Kr: kanya aaj college nahin ayi hai, and plz ranbir tumne use kafi ruladiya hai ab uska picha chod do, okay!

And walks away. Whole day ranbir cant study or do anything apart from thinking of kanya.

After college ranbir goes to his room, still only thinking of kanya, writing letters to her saying sorry, but he knows he cant give them to her, what should he do????

Kanya falls sick because of not eating so the plans for movies is cancelled.

Kr: kanya, tum uska ghusa khane pe kyun utar rahi ho, u have to eat u cant stay hungry, I don?t want to listen to anything you have to eat means you have to eat!

She forces her and makes her eat.

Two days have gone, Thursday. [The day all that happened was Monday]

Ranbir is going crazy he hasn?t seen kanya and kripa doesn?t want to talk to him either. He stopped eating also, he doesn?t feel hungry anymore, just eats a little to shut angads mouth, otherwise he has to listen to lectures.

At college.

He sees kanya,

R: [excited] shes here, oh my god shes here today!

He goes upto her.

R: Kanya,

K: looks at him and starts walking away,

R: kanya, Plz listen to me

K: Ranbir, I don?t wanna listen to u, okay, I think mera pehla opinion tumhare bare mein sahi tha, I don?t know why I changed it, but now we can never be friends okay!
R: kanya, plz

She walks away.

Ranbir tries everything sending roses to her with sorry cards, leaving chits in her books, saying sorry but she is still acting snobby although whenever she sees the things or the sorry chits she starts blushing.

R: Angad, Plz do sumthing I have to talk to kanya,

An: don?t worry ranbir, ill make a plan, okay!

Angad goes to kripa,

An: Kripa, I think Ranbir kanya have to talk but kanya wont listen, plz do something,

Kr: I know angad, u are ryt bcoz if kanya doesn?t clear it out with ranbir, she wont be able to have peace, we must do sumthing.

So they both decide to call kanya to the theatre, and also tell ranbir about it.

At the theatre.

Kanya, kripa and angad come to the theatre, because kanya promised kripa she couldn?t refuse.

An: main jaa ke tickets le ke ata hoon, tum dono yahi khade rehna okay.

K & Kr: Okay! Like children [laughing]

Kr: hey, kanya main jake popcorn leke ati hoon, tum yahin wait karo warna angad pareshan ho jayega,

K: okay, par jaldi ana!

She is standing their alone the sun is really boiling hot, and ranbir comes up to her.

R: kanya,

K: she looks up at him, Tum phir agaye, tumhe kuch samajh mein nahin ata???

R: kanya, im sorry!

K: I don?t care, I don?t want to listen.

R: you have to listen, Kanya I know you don?t love me, But I really love you, cant you see it in my eyes? I know whatever happened was really bad but I don?t know what had happened to me, I just wanted to confess my love but suddenly I was lost I don?t know what happened I didn?t know what I was doing, Im really sorry kanya, if you don?t love me, im not forcing you but cant we be friends??

K: [thinking] No, Ranbir? bcoz what happened that day was lust not love and how can I forgive you? HOW?
R: Kanya, cant you see in my eyes, do you think I would think like that? Don?t you know me by now?? Plz kanya, for once listen to your heart, you considered me as your friend, didn?t you ? cant you trust your friend?

Kanya turns away from him, looking the other side.

K: I don?t know, ranbir, I really don?t know, ive been thinking this from that day, but I just cant decide if I should forgive u,

Suddenly ranbir starts feeling dizzy, and he faints. Kanya turns to see him on the floor.

K: Ranbir! Ranbir tumhe kya hua? Ranbir ankhein kholo [tears rolling down her cheeks] Ranbir Plz, Kya hua tumhe?

Angad and kripa come and are shocked to see ranbir on the floor they all take him to the nearest hospital.

Dr: Inhe kuch nahi hua, its just that yeh zara upset the, aur I think khana pina bhi band kardiya hai, inho ne.

K: WHAT! Ranbir ne kuch khaya nahi hai?

Dr: Nahin, aisa lagta hai ke do-teen dino se inho ne ache se khaya nahi hai.

An: you are right doctor, woh bohot upset tha, aur jo thoda bohot khana khata tha wo bhi meri wajah se,

K: WHAT! Ranbir ne khana [tears rolling] band kar diya, aur tumne mujhe batay bhi nahi

An: Kanya, tumhe ranbir se baat karne mein interest hi nahin tha, to main kya bata ta tumhe? Tum to bas ranbir ke bare mein najaane kya kya sochti rahi, I know jo hua shayad sahi nahi tha lekin kanya tum is baat ko jhutla nahi sakhti ke ranbir tumse deewano ki tarha pyar karta hai, he loves you more then anything.

K: [starts crying] yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai, Shayad maine kuch zyada hi over react kar diya,

She goes by ranbirs side. Tears are still rolling down her cheeks, and one tears falls on ranbirs hand. He opens his eyes ;

R: Kanya, main kaha hoon?

K: [rubbing her tears] ranbir tum theekh to hona?

R: haan, kya hua mujhe? Aur tum ro kyun rahi ho? Kahi main mar to nahin gaya, [being funny and sarcastic]

K: ranbir, tum aisi baatein kaise kar sakhte ho? Stupid, ullu, idiot, monkey gorilla khana kyun chod diya? Apne aap ko kya samj te ho? Bilkul budhu ho tum!
R: okay, okay, sorry! Pehle kaho ke tumne mujhe maaf kiya!

K: acha baba kiya, maaf kiya, okay, ab chalo khalo.

R: okay!

Kripa and angad see this and decide to not become kabab mein hadi and go away.

Kanya bring the food and gives him

R: looks at the food, Kanya agar main yeh kahoonga to main aur bimar ho jaoonga, I cant eat this hospital food.

K: isshh, tumhare nakhre bohot hai, hospital mein ho phir bhi hospital ka khana nahin khaoge, Oh god!

She forces him and feeds him the hospital food.

R: Tumhare haat se to zeher bhi acha lagta hai, [grinning]

K: Oh really?

R: Kanya, ek baat poochoon

K: phoocho

R: kanya, maine tumhe apni feelings bata di lekin tumne yeh nahin bataya ke mere bimar hone pe, tum itni pareshan kyun thi? Kyun? Tumhari ankhon mein ansoon kyun? Tumne mujhe maf kyun kiya? Kanya please tell me!
K: doest know what to say, I don?t know ranbir, I don?t know, maybe because of our friendship, ab chalo dr. ne kaha tum ghar jaa sakte ho.

R: meri baat ko ignore mat karo kanya, Kya tum mujhse pyar nahin karti?

K: [blushing] Nahin karti,

Stands up to go, but he holds her hand and before turning to look at him she just runs away, because she knows if she looks at him she cant hide her feelings.

R: ab yakeen hogaya, that KANYA GODBOLE LOVES RANBIR NANDA. [really happy and excited]

Ranbir:

Chahein Tum Kuch Na Kaho
Maine Sun Liya
Ke Saathi Pyaar Ka Mujhe Chun Liya
Chun Liya
Maine Sun Liya

He gets up and starts dancing with the nurse and old ladies and stuff.

Pehla Nasha Pehla Khumaar
Nayaa Pyaar Hai Nayaa Intezaar
Kar Loon Main Kya Apna Haal
Ae Dil-E-Beqaraar
Mere Dil-E-Beqaraar
Tu Hi Bataa
Pehla Nasha Pehla Khumaar...

Goes to the hostel, he?s still dancing and telling all his friends about that someone special.

Udtaa Hi Phiroon
In Havaaoon Mein Kahin
Ya Main Jhool Jaoon
In Ghataoon Mein Kahin
Ya Main Jhool Jaoon
In Ghataoon Mein Kahin
Ek Kar Doon Aasmaan Aur Zameen
Kaho Yaaron Kya Karoon Kya Nahin
Pehla Nasha Pehla Khumaar


Pehla Nasha Pehla Khumaar
Nayaa Pyaar Hai Nayaa Intezaar
Kar Loon Main Kya Apna Haal
Ae Dil-E-Beqaraar
Mere Dil-E-Beqaraar
Tu Hi Bataa
Pehla Nasha Pehla Khumaar...


Kanya:

She goes to the hostel and starts telling all her friends, and dancing.

Usne Baat Ki
Kuch Aise Dhang Se
Sapne De Gaya
Woh Hazaroon Rang Ke

Usne Baat Ki
Kuch Aise Dhang Se
Sapne De Gaya
Woh Hazaroon Rang Ke
Rah Jaoon Jaise Main Haar Ke
Aur Choome Woh Mujhe Pyaar Se

Pehla Nasha Pehla Khumaar
Nayaa Pyaar Hai Naya Intezaar
Kar Loon Main Kya Apna Haal
Ae Dil-E-Beqaraar
Mere Dil-E-Beqaraar...

Kanya in her room

K: Kripa, Im so happy today, ab mujhe yakeen hogaya hai ke Ranbir mujhse bohot pyar karta hai, its such a great feeling na? I just love him sooo much!

Kr: that?s cool kanya, tum jaise dance kar rahi thi main to samajh gayi thi ke tumhare aur ranbir ke bich sab sort out hogaya hai.

K: haan, lekin kripa maine usse abhi tak bataya nahin hai,

Kr: kanya, ab kitna intezaar karogi? Ja ke usse bata do!
K: bataoongi, lekin pehle usse thoda aur pareshan karoongi, [smiling]

Kr: hmmm, ya waise bhi khoobsurat ladkion ka hak hota hai apne deewane ko thoda aur tarsayen, [laughing]

They both talk a little and then go to sleep.

Ranbirs room

An: hmmm, lagta hai ke haseena man gayi, hai na?

R: kuch aisa hi samajlo,

An: ab iska kya matlab hai?

R: well, ab tak usne confess to nahin kiya lekin mujhe yakeen hogaya hai ke woh bhi mujhse pyar karti hai, I just know it!
An: Im sooo happy for u,

R: Thanks, yeh sab sirf tumhari wajah se possible hua hai, Thank you sooo much

They hug.

Then ranbir talks to his dad, then goes to sleep.

That?s it for today, Hope you all enjoyed it, I want to see the TRPS rising before I can continue so plz everyone, do comment even if its bad atleast I know people are reading what they think about it so I can improve it! Plz plz plz plz plz COMMENT!!!

Awesome!!!! Fantastic!!!! Superb!!!! It was another fabulous update!!! Finally Rankan on the road to love!!!😃👏 I'm glad the misunderstandings are cleared now. Kanya is being evil by making Ranbir wait for her confession but Ranbir knows.😆 It's getting interesting!!!😃 I can't wait for the next update!!! Please continue soon. Thanks.