~*The Way We Were *~ Pt 6 page 5! (A ReMiX FF)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ANYONE WHO EVER LOVED REMIX..PLEASE READ!
Hi everyone! This is my very first fanfic.. so I would be really grateful to anyone who reads and gives me feedback 😊

It's based on Remix... but set 4 years after they leave school. I know this show no longer plays in India... I don't know how the show actually finished (as its still playing in the UK), so Ive made up my version of how things ended at Maurya High...

This ff is essentially about Tia and Ranveer.. And the rest.. well if you read u'll find out!

INTRO

He's running, running, breathless yet desperate to find her before she leaves.

And then he spots her. She senses him and turns around. Their eyes meet. And in front of all the bystanders at the airport, he declares his undying love for her. She drops her bags and runs into his arms.

The movie ends. Tia Ahuja smiles wryly and switched off the tv. Funny, she thinks, how they always show the fairytale endings, but never what happens after the "happily-ever-after". You can't spend your whole life like that; at an airport in each other's arms.

The phone rings. It's the daily call from her Papa.

"I miss you Princess.. I hope you're taking care of yourself?"

"Papa I'm fine! Seriously!"

"Hmm well I don't believe you.. but there's only so much I can do to convince you to come back home. What's there in Dehli that you can't find in Bombay?"

"Everything Papa.."

"You know you can come back anytime. It would make me so happy. This house, this company, its all yours."

"I know Papa, but I think I just need to spend some time on my own right now... I've depended too much on others all my life. I wanted to start afresh, and for that I needed to get away....Anyway I really need to get some sleep now Papa.. Good night. Love you"

"I love you too my Princess"

Tia really did feel exhausted and sleep seemed like the sweetest gift these days. The long hours and hectic lifestyle of her job kept her busy, but also gave her a focus in life. As Tia got ready for bed, she pondered over her current lifestyle. Tia Ahuja, most popular girl in school. Tia Ahuja, beauty queen. Tia Ahuja, rich and spoilt.

But Tia Ahuja, hardworking investment banker, living all alone in Dehli.. who could have imagined that?

Tell me what you think, and if you like it I'll continue!😊

PART 1: PAGE 2
PART 2: PAGE 3
PART 3: PAGE 3
PART 4, 5, 6: PAGE 5
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Bhaggu! Ok i know my writing isnt amazing, but is it SO terrible that i didnt get a SINGLE reply?! :O

Plz someone say something, anything? Pretty plz? Even f u just need to tell me to never EVER write ffs agen! or to change the characters?
Cmon guys this is my first ff.. a little response would mean so much to me..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice intro!!
will love to read more😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing start
its way different cant wait 2 no how tia turned out 2 be a banker and how she started living alone
sounds really intresting
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks SO much guys for ur replies, means so much to me!
Ok now I know atleast someone is reading, i shall continue writing 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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And also yes, people are always predicting Tia and ranveer to be married, and Tia to be something in fashion... So i thought Id do something hatke, because lifes not always so perfect and predictable!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey hon. why don't u post this in the Remix forum. I know the T-R fans will love u to death. I'm a hardcore Remixer but an A-Y fan. But I'd love to check out ur FF. I'm from the Remix and DMG forum. Why don't u come and meet everyone. We're friendly. Promise.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

hey hon. why don't u post this in the Remix forum. I know the T-R fans will love u to death. I'm a hardcore Remixer but an A-Y fan. But I'd love to check out ur FF. I'm from the Remix and DMG forum. Why don't u come and meet everyone. We're friendly. Promise.

hi there! Thanks, and im sure u r friendly!😊 To be honest i was a little nervous about posting it there but I did anyways...And still no one replied! Maybe my timing was just all wrong!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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uh yeah. Actually, R-F is a bit slow. But you'll get comments. Not as many as u would here but a few.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yes u see i don't want comments just for the praise or whatever.. i just need to know that ppl are reading what im writing, and that they want me to continue.. otherwise whats the point?😊
thanks anyways!

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