*Falling for You* (AR) Part 5 (28/11) - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago
HI Richa,
Just read part 2, so thrilling I must say, they way he disappears from there & then she sees him only after a week , but after his statement of her living alone scares her......then again a gap of few days..hin saving her from the mean guy
Its like you are trying to show its ok to trust this guy, cos its just coniceidence that he met her again in the super market, & him telling her about hjer living alone, could be cos of her shopping, but the way the story line is going, I think he is a stalker, but will make Ridz think its all a conicidence, somehow this FF reminds me of the movie Ek Haseena Thi, where Urmila was stalked by Saif Ali khan
would love to read Aramn's justification on his statment...do continue further
am sorry, if my comments has offended to you in any way
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Jodubai

HI Richa,

Just read part 2, so thrilling I must say, they way he disappears from there & then she sees him only after a week , but after his statement of her living alone scares her......then again a gap of few days..hin saving her from the mean guy
Its like you are trying to show its ok to trust this guy, cos its just coniceidence that he met her again in the super market, & him telling her about hjer living alone, could be cos of her shopping, but the way the story line is going, I think he is a stalker, but will make Ridz think its all a conicidence, somehow this FF reminds me of the movie Ek Haseena Thi, where Urmila was stalked by Saif Ali khan
would love to read Aramn's justification on his statment...do continue further
am sorry, if my comments has offended to you in any way

Hi Jo, is it? Firstly, thanks a lot for commenting, really appreciate it. Now coming to your query, 😆 yes that situation is similar to the movie and I have to confess I did get the idea from that only as I do like that movie a lot but all I'd say for now is, wait for the story to unroll before coming to any conclusions hon. Its hardly part 2 and there are certain things which need to be shown in here, I wouldn't say its a pure coincidence coz I did want to bring in a certain things like that in the story but then the story has just started ya.
No offence taken whatsoever, in fact I liked that you posted whatever views you had about it. Hope you read in as the story progresses and like it too.
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Richa
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Richa1234

Hi Jo, is it? Firstly, thanks a lot for commenting, really appreciate it. Now coming to your query, 😆 yes that situation is similar to the movie and I have to confess I did get the idea from that only as I do like that movie a lot but all I'd say for now is, wait for the story to unroll before coming to any conclusions hon. Its hardly part 2 and there are certain things which need to be shown in here, I wouldn't say its a pure coincidence coz I did want to bring in a certain things like that in the story but then the story has just started ya.
No offence taken whatsoever, in fact I liked that you posted whatever views you had about it. Hope you read in as the story progresses and like it too.
Love
Richa

Great, I love surprises, there are so many talented writers on this FF, that I dare not to come to any conclusions myself, I am always wrong & am very happy about it too😊...yes, you are right, its just Part 2 & surely I am waiting for more excitment to happen....do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
he he Jo, I'll do as soon as I am able to. Thanks again for your comments.
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Richa
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey gr8 man cont soon am waitin n plzzzzzzzzzzz pm me d next update thanx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: NAFISA09

hey gr8 man cont soon am waitin n plzzzzzzzzzzz pm me d next update thanx

Thanks Nafisa. Will update soon. Your entry in the pm list is done hon (Trying my hands on rhyming). lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey juss read thru ur ff
OMG its amazing
plzzzz pm me wen u update
tnx
Richa1234 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks guys. Sorry for the delay. I'll be posting part 3 tonight.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Richa1234

Thanks guys. Sorry for the delay. I'll be posting part 3 tonight.

tonight kehkar 2 din hogeye bandarsariyaaa when is your 'tonight' coming yaar??? abh toh update karlo... aur kitna tarapane ki iradha hai?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Richa!
I finally found some time to read this amazing FF of yours...I had seen you post it but never found time to read it..I finally sat down today and had declared that I was going to read it once and for all!
ALL i have to say after reading those brilliant parts is that you are extremely talented..Your dialogues, the way you express the character's emotions, their thought processes, etc---everything was beautifully penned down...You deserve applaud!👏
OMG, I cn't believe Ridz died...Poor her...I love the way youre taking this FF in flashback mode though!
Hmm...Man is Armaan following her or what...I'm getting frightened by his behavior also..LOL!
Continue soon Richa..Please PM me of you can!
Love
Anita

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